2022-2023学年江苏地区五年级上学期期末备考--作文真题汇编一

2022-2023学年江苏地区五年级上学期期末备考--作文真题汇编一

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一、命题作文

1．（2022·江苏泰州）请根据所给思维导图，以“My e-friend”为题写一篇短文介绍Anna的情况(不少于5句话)。

要求：语句通顺，标点正确。

My e-friend

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2．（2020·江苏苏州）请从下面的题目中任选一个题目，根据提示，写一段话，不少于五句话。

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3．（2021·江苏南京）你通常是怎样度过周末的？请你把周末的活动记录下来，不要忘记用上First, ... Next, ...Then, ... Finally, ...不少于六句话。

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4．（2022·江苏·仪征市谢集乡中心小学五年级期末）Wang Bing 认识了一位新网友，他迫不及待地想向同学们介绍这位新朋友。请你根据下列提示，帮他完成关于Lucy的介绍，不少于5句话。

My e-friend

I have a new e-friend. She is Lucy.________________________________________________

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5．（2020·江苏苏州）以“After school”为题，写一篇关于你课后生活的短文，不少于五句话。要求：

1. 不得出现真实学校、姓名等个人信息；

2. 使用“First/Next/Then/Finally”等表示时间先后顺序的连词；

3. 注意书写规范和正确使用标点符号。

参考词汇：do homework, play table tennis, watch TV, have dinner, read a storybook, go to bed (也可根据自己的实际情况使用其他词汇)

After school

I always have a lot of things to do after school.

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Do you think my after-school life is busy?

二、提纲作文

6．（2022·江苏常州）Liu Tao交了一个新网友David，他迫不及待地想跟同学们介绍这个新朋友，你能根据表格里的信息，帮他完成关于David的介绍稿吗？(不少于6句)

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7．（2022·江苏徐州）请你根据以下思维导图，来介绍一下你们的新朋友 Jack 吧。用上导图中的相关资料，不少于6句话。

My new friend

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三、图画作文

8．（2022·江苏徐州）请根据以下思维导图，介绍一位你的朋友。要求语句通顺，语法表达正确，不少于6句话。

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参考答案：

1．范文：

My e-friend

Anna is my e-friend. She is 11 years old. She lives in the UK. She can speak Chinese and English. She studies Chinese after school. She is good at Maths and Art. She likes skating.

【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求以“My e-friend”为题写一篇短文介绍Anna的情况。根据思维导图，可以从年龄，来自哪里，说的语言，学习的科目及爱好几方面来介绍。注意文章为一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。

2.参考词汇与句型

参考词汇：the UK英国；speak Chinese and English说中文和英语；Maths and Art数学和美术；skate滑冰；study Chinese after school放学后学习中文；

参考句型：She is...years old.；She lives...；She can...；She likes...；She is good at...；

2．范文：

My Animal Friend

I have an animal friend. It is a rabbit. It is white. It has red eyes and long ears. It has a small nose and a small mouth. It has four legs and a short tail. It can run fast. It can also jump. It is cute and fat. It likes eating carrots very much.

【详解】1. 题目解读：该题给出了两个题目，要求任选一个题目写一段话。以“My Animal Friend”为例，根据提示句型描写自己的动物朋友，包括是什么动物，有什么样的特征，会做什么以及喜欢吃什么等等。以第三人称为主，时态为一般现在时，要求语句通顺，不少于五句话。

2. 参考词汇和参考句型：

参考词汇；rabbit兔子，white白色的，eyes眼睛，ears耳朵，nose鼻子，mouth嘴巴，tail尾巴，jump跳，carrots胡萝卜

参考句型：I have…；It is…；It has…；It can…；It likes…

3．范文：

My Weekends

First, I usually get up at 7 o’clock. After breakfast, I clean my room. Next, I go shopping with my parents, and I always buy some vegetables and bananas. Then, I play sports with my friends in the afternoon. Finally, I go to bed at 9 o’clock in the evening. I love my weekend.

【详解】1.题干解读∶文章要求以“My weekends”为题描写自己的周末安排，包括做了什么事情，和谁一起等。注意文章以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时态，且要符合词数要求。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考词汇∶get up起床，clean my room打扫房间，go shopping购物，play sports做运动，go to bed上床。

参考句型∶First, I usually…；Next, I …；I always…；Then, I play sports …；Finally, I …；I love...

4．范文：

My e-friend

I have a new e-friend. She is Lucy. She’s 12 years old. She lives in Canada. Lucy likes English and Chinese.

At weekends, she often visits her friends and goes on a picnic. She likes playing the piano and drawing.

【详解】1. 题干分析：该题目要求根据表格提示，想同学介绍一下新网友Lucy。根据表格内容，可以从姓名，年龄，国家，喜欢的学科，爱好，周末活动几方面进行介绍。文章为一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型

参考词汇：Chinese语文；English英语；draw画画；play the piano弹钢琴；visit her friends拜访朋友；go on a picnic去野餐；

参考句型：She is...years old.；She lives in...；She likes...；At weekends, she often...；She likes...；

5．例文

After school

I always have a lot of things to do after school.

First, I always do my homework. Next, I play table tennis with my friend. Then, I have dinner. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. Sometimes, I read a storybook. Finally, I go to bed at about nine.

Do you think my after-school life is busy?

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是以“After school”为题，使用“First/Next/Then/Finally”等表示时间先后顺序的连词，写一篇关于你课后生活的短文，时态是一般现在时。要求书写规范和正确使用标点符号，不少于五句话。

2.参考词汇及参考句型：

参考词汇：do homework做作业，play table tennis打乒乓球，watch TV看电视，have dinner吃晚餐，read a storybook读故事书，go to bed上床睡觉

参考句型：I always…；I often…；I play…

6．范文：

I have an e-friend. He’s David. He lives in the UK. He is 12 years old. He speaks English. He likes PE and Art best. He likes swimming and dancing.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格信息介绍新网友。然后再阐述姓名，住在哪里，年龄，说的语言，最喜欢的科目以及兴趣爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：live in住在，the UK英国，speak讲，best最，

参考句型：He’s …； He lives in …；He speaks …； He likes …；

7．范文

Jack is my new friend. He is twelve years old. He is from the US. His favorite subjects are Music and Art. He can speak Chinese and English. After school, he often plays football on the playground. He sometimes draws in the park on weekends.

【详解】1. 题干分析：要求根据思维导图，介绍一下新朋友Jack，要介绍他的年龄、国籍，能力和爱好以及经常做的活动等。要用第三人称的角度描述，主要用一般现在时，要满足句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇和参考句型：

参考词汇：twelve years old十二岁，the US美国，Music and Art音乐和美术，speak Chinese讲汉语。

参考句型：He is…；His favorite subjects…；He can…；He sometimes…。

8．                                                                                      My good friend

I have a good friend. His name is Mike. He has big eyes, small nose and mouth. He is tall. He is a police officer. He works in the police station. He likes playing basketball. He often plays basketball with me on the weekend.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图介绍一位朋友。然后再阐述家人或朋友的姓名，外貌特征，工作地点，爱好，及周末的活动。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2.参考词汇与句型∶

参考单词∶friend朋友，police office警察，police station警察局，play basketball打篮球，on the weekend在周末

参考句型∶I have……；His name is …；He has…；He is …；He is …He works…；He likes …；He often …；