中考英语复习话题十一教学课件

这是一份中考英语复习话题十一教学课件，共25页。PPT课件主要包含了注意事项，中间段，中间段 ，优秀范文等内容，欢迎下载使用。
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2017 福建］你的美国朋友Jhn 计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ ① 中给他留言，介绍② 并推荐你的家乡福建③ ，词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
④定要点：位置、省会、人口、环境、名胜、其他。
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Hi, Jhn. I’m glad t hear that yu’re planning t travel arund China during the summer vacatin. I’d like t invite yu t my hmetwn Fujian fr a visit.Fujian lies _____________________________________________________________________________________I’m lking frward t meeting yu!
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：发出邀请: 我想邀请你来我的家乡福建游玩（已给出）。中间段：全方位介绍福建：地理位置、省会城市、人口、环境、名胜和美食等。结尾：表达期望（已给出）。
介绍地理位置、省会城市【易错句】 Fujian lies t the sutheast f China. Fuzhu is capital city.【一般句子】 Fujian lies in the sutheast f China. Fuzhu is its capital city.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
【美化句子】 1. ________________________________________________________________________________________
Fujian lies in the sutheast f China with Fuzhu as its capital city.
介绍人口、环境【易错句】 It has ver 38 millin ppulatin. It has als fresh air and beautiful muntain.【一般句子】 It has a ppulatin f ver 38 millin. It als has fresh air and beautiful muntains.
【美化句子】2. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
It has a ppulatin f ver 38 millin. Because f the nice envirnment, it's knwn as Refreshing Fujian.
介绍名胜和美食【易错句】 Yu can visit many place f interests like Munt Wuyi. Yu can taste many delicius fd.【一般句子】 Yu can visit many places f interest like Munt Wuyi. Yu can taste many kinds f delicius fd.
【美化句子】 3.__________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
Many famus places f interest like Munt Wuyi and Gulang Island are well wrth visiting. Besides, yu can taste varius kinds f delicius fd.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
Hi, Jhn. I’m glad t hear that yu’re planning t travel arund China during the summer vacatin. I’d like t invite yu t my hmetwn Fujian fr a visit.
Fujian lies in the sutheast f China with Fuzhu as its capital city. It has a ppulatin f ver 38 millin. Because f the nice envirnment, it’s knwn as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millins f turists frm hme and abrad. If yu cme, yu can enjy fresh air, the blue sky as well as beautiful muntains and clear rivers. Many famus places f interest like Munt Wuyi and Gulang Island are well wrth visiting. Besides, yu can taste varius kinds f delicius fd.
I’m lking frward t meeting yu!亮点点评：通过which 引导的定语从句和if 引导的条件状语从句，展示了福建优美的环境，吸引了游客。同时从句的使用，使句式丰富多样。衔接词besides 承上启下，表示除了上文提到的相关介绍之外还有其他的介绍，使文章语义紧凑，层次分明。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
改革开放以来，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化。某英文网站正在开展以“家乡的巨变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李洪，请你根据以下表格提示用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你家乡的变化，至少要有一条自己的观点。
1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；2. 词数：80 左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。Great Changes in My HmetwnSince the refrm and pening-up plicy was carried ut, great changes have taken place in my hmetwn.
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Great Changes in My HmetwnSince the refrm and pening-­up plicy was carried ut, great changes have taken place in my hmetwn. In the ld days, peple used t live in small and ld huses. But nw mst peple live in apartments in tall buildings. Peple went t wrk r schl n ft r by bike in the past, but nw subways, high­-speed trains and planes are very cnvenient t take yu anywhere.
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In the past, students tk desks and chairs frm their hmes t the schl and the windws f the classrms were brken, s the classrms were ld and dark. But nw the classrms are wide and bright. There didn't use t be any hspitals in the cuntryside, and peple had t g a lng way t see a dctr.