(新高考)高考英语二轮专题复习课件 专题五 书面表达 (含解析)

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微专题01　深剖三年真题　把握命题动向
分析1 领悟命题思路 洞悉命题动向
2019~2021年体裁、主题、命题形式分析
◎高考数据
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1.体裁特点:体裁相对稳定。以书信/电子邮件形式的应用文为主,报道、发言稿、日记、书面或口头通知和网络发帖等以及记叙文、说明文、议论文为辅。2.命题形式:主要是提纲式,有文字提示,但开放性在增大,有些也可归类为半开放式。3.题材内容:贴近考生的日常生活,常涉及中学生的学习、生活以及他们所熟悉和关注的话题,特别是弘扬中国传统文化,突出中国传统价值观的相关题材。4.试题情境:在试题情境的设计上,命题需要考生发挥想象力和创造性,体现了应用性和创新性的考查要求。5.素养考查:中国的礼仪、传统美德、茶文化、中国绘画、书法、京剧、唐诗宋词等仍是考查的重点,这些话题的考查不仅弘扬了中国的传统文化,而且彰显了英语学科的核心素养。
◎命题规律
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1.预计2022年高考对书面表达的考查仍将是文字提示类作文,以书信类和记叙文为主,但为了使考生发挥出写作水平,试题将保持较大的开放性,给出的提纲会高度简洁、概括,给考生提供较大的发挥空间。2.新闻报道、发言稿、通知等联系实际的体裁越来越多,广大师生要引起注意。3.话题选材与考生的学习、生活、价值观等密切相关,包括学校生活、人际交往、社会活动、传统文化等,重在考查实际生活中的书面表达能力。
◎命题趋势
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分析2 熟悉解题流程 锁定考卷满分
历年高考书面表达题均属于材料小作文。从严格意义上说材料只有两种:一种是文字材料;另一种是文字说明加图画(表)的材料。无论哪种材料,都给考生提供了自由发挥的空间,并且能有效地区分不同考生运用语言的能力。 从表达的题材方面看,大部分题材都非常贴近考生的实际生活,突出考查考生用简短、通顺、得体的一小段文字与外界交流、解决实际问题的能力,同时也充分体现了《考试大纲》对“写”所提出的要求。
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主要考查考生以下几种能力:1.观察和概括能力:要求考生观察材料所提供的内容,分析、提炼要点,理顺要点,概括考题所要求表达的全部意思。2.运用能力:要求考生灵活运用词汇和句型,正确地遣词造句、连句成文,进行有效的信息表达与传递。3.逻辑思维能力:要求考生认真思考,选择正确的表达形式,正确使用连接词和过渡句,使表达的要点之间有很强的逻辑性。4.书写能力:要求考生认真工整地书写,良好的书写能给人美感。
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[全国Ⅰ卷改编]假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
◎真题回放
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◎考场思维
1.审要求:本篇作文的体裁属于应用文中的申请信,要求考生根据提示信息以李华的身份写一封信申请做志愿者。2.审内容:写作内容是申请做中国画展览会的志愿者。试题虽然对写作范围进行了限定,但仍然具有一定的开放性,这给考生留出了一定的自由发挥的空间,有利于考生充分展示自己的写作能力。3.审时态:文章主要是向伦敦当地美术馆写信申请做志愿者,因此主体时态应为一般现在时。
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◎考生作文
★五档作文
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★四档作文
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★三档作文
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◎阅卷者说
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　假定你是李华,为方便学生给偏远山区学校捐赠旧书、杂志等,校学生会决定设置旧书回收角。请你写一封信给生病休假的留学生Tom告知此事,内容包括:1.询问近况;2.告知他返校后捐赠书籍;3.祝愿早日康复。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
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Dear Tom,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua
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Dear Tom, How are you doing these days? Do you feel better? I miss you very much. I have some good news to tell you. A recycling corner for old books will be set in our school. If students have old books and magazines they don’t need, they can donate them to it. All the collected books and magazines will be given away to the remote poor mountain schools. Remember to bring some old books when you return. We can do our part to help those kids in need. Wish you get well soon. Looking forward to your early return to school.Yours,Li Hua
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微专题02　高分素材累积　题型分类突破
分类1 应用文之告知信&询问信&感谢信
应用文主要以书信和电子邮件为主。书信是很常见的应用文文体。通常由五部分组成:信头(Heading)、称呼 (Salutation)、正文 (Body)、结束语 (Complementary close)和签名 (Signature)。个人信件一般是向朋友、亲戚、公司领导写信,说明自己的近期状况、对某件事情的看法或者自己的建议等。在熟人之间写信,可以不要信头。称呼从左边顶格写。正文从称呼下一行写起,每段开头空出三到五个字母。结束语一般是礼貌的客套语。右下方是签名。应用文书信有感谢信、申请信、邀请信、建议信、道歉信、求助信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、 投诉信、劝慰信等。
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1.写作结构　　告知信分为两类:(1)告知某人有某事将发生;(2)回复某人关于某事的询问。其结构通常如下:
一、告知信
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)Here is a piece of good news!/ I have a piece of good news to tell you! 这里有一个好消息!/我有一个好消息要告诉你!(2)Our team is going to compete in an important volleyball match next week. I’m writing to share some details with you.我们队下周将参加一场重要的排球比赛。我写信是想和你分享一些细节。★正文佳句(1)In order to make full preparations for the volleyball match, I have made a specific training plan.为了充分准备排球比赛,我制订了具体的训练计划。
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(2)All the team members are supposed to take the training punctually as scheduled.所有的队员都应该按时参加培训。★经典结尾(1)If you want to know anything else, please don’t hesitate to contact me.如果你还想知道什么,请不要犹豫与我联系。(2)Hopefully, our efforts will pay off in the end.希望我们的努力最终会有回报。
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二、询问信1.写作结构　　询问信主要用于询问信息,其结构通常如下:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some detailed information about a one-month English course in your school during the summer vacation.如果您能给我提供一些关于暑假期间在贵校学习一个月英语课程的详细信息,我将不胜感激。(2)I’m writing to ask you some relevant information about the basketball match to be held next week.我写信是想问你一些关于下周将要举行的篮球赛的相关信息。★正文佳句(1)First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?首先,课程什么时候开始?每周有多少课时?
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(2)As for the money you charge, I’m wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed.至于你收取的费用,我想知道是否包括参观所列地点的门票。★经典结尾(1)I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.我期待着尽快收到你的来信。(2)Thank you for your kindness, and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated!感谢您的善意,如果您能及时关注这封信,我将不胜感激!
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三、感谢信1.写作结构　　感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。其结构通常如下:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I am Li Hua, a student of Senior 3.I am writing to express my gratitude for your kind help with my English all these years.我是李华,一个高三的学生。我写这封信是为了感谢你这么多年来对我(学习)英语的帮助。(2)I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation for your timely help with my English all these years.我想对你这些年来在我英语学习上给予的及时帮助表示衷心的感谢。★正文佳句(1)I made great progress with your help,without which I couldn’t have got the prize.在你的帮助下,我取得了很大的进步,没有你的帮助,我不可能得到这个奖。
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(2)Thanks to your generous help, I have made such great progress.多亏你的慷慨帮助,我取得了这么大的进步。★经典结尾(1)It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.你对我如此友好和慷慨,我真是感激不尽。(2)I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.我希望有比“谢谢”更好的词能表达我对你慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David写信询问你寒假的旅游体验,请你给他回信。内容包括:1.手机支付;2.人脸识别进入景区;3.邀请他来体验。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:手机支付mobile payment;人脸识别 facial recognition。
◎经典考例
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Dear David, I’m happy to hear from you. As for what I have experienced during the winter holiday, here’s something I’d like to share with you._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua
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本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封告知信。第一步:明确要求1.审题体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时、一般过去时2.写作内容(1)手机支付;(2)人脸识别景区;(3)邀请他来体验。
◎审题谋篇
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第二步:列关键词hear from　experience　winter holiday　artificial intelligence第三步:连词成句　　根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成文　　注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
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Dear David, I’m happy to hear from you. As for what I have experienced during the winter holiday, here’s something I’d like to share with you. When travelling with my parents on a customized tour, I’m amazed at the changes and convenience brought by artificial intelligence. Wherever and whenever we went, we could use mobile payment. More interestingly, unlike the previous years when we had to get into tourist attractions with the ID card, we did it through a facial recognition app, which really saved time. What an amazing experience! I do hope you can come to China and experience all of this when you have spare time. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua
◎满分范文
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本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,体现了作者较高的英语表达能力。如When travelling with my parents on a customized tour为非谓语动词的运用;“More interestingly, unlike the previous years when we had to get into tourist attractions with the ID card, we did it through a face recognition app, which really saved time.”中包含when引导的定语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句;“What an amazing experience!”为感叹句;“I do hope you can come to China and experience all of this when you have spare time.”中含有when引导的时间状语从句。
◎亮点分析
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假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry来信向你询问春节是怎么度过的。请你写封回信,内容包括:1.过节的方式;2.过节的过程;3.个人感受。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Terry, In your last letter, you asked me about the Spring Festival. Now let me tell you how I spent it._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua
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Dear Terry, In your last letter, you asked me about the Spring Festival. Now let me tell you how I spent it. Before the Spring Festival, we cleaned our house completely and bought many things, including different kinds of food and new clothing. During the Spring Festival, we had meals together and enjoyed fireworks in the open air. I couldn’t wait to visit our relatives with my parents during the festival, but unluckily, I fell ill. The reason was that I had eaten too much fatty food. The unhappy Spring Festival lets me know a balanced diet is necessary to keep fit. Above all, there must be enough vegetables and fruits. Besides, we should exercise regularly. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
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分类2 应用文之申请信&邀请信&建议信
一、申请信1.写作结构申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构如下:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I’m Li Hua,a student from Hongguang Middle School. I am writing to apply for the membership of the English tutorial.我是红光中学的学生李华。我写信申请上英语辅导班。(2)I’m more than glad to work as a volunteer for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games. I hold the firm belief that I’m fit for the job.我非常高兴做一名2024年巴黎奥运会的志愿者,我坚信我适合这项工作。★正文佳句(1)In addition,I think I can do the job well thanks to a good command of English.此外,由于我精通英语,我认为我能把这项工作做好。
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(2)With all these advantages,I hold the firm belief that I will be very qualified to be a volunteer.有这些优势条件,我坚信我将非常适合担任一名志愿者。★经典结尾(1)I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.如果你能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。(2)I would be very grateful if you could offer me a chance to be a volunteer.如果你能给我一次当志愿者的机会,我将不胜感激。
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二、邀请信1.写作结构　　邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。具体写作结构如下:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I’m Li Hua,chairman of the Students’ Union. Knowing that you are fond of classical music, I’m writing to invite you to take part in the music festival to be held in our school.我是学生会主席李华。得知你喜欢古典音乐,我写信邀请你参加将在我校举办的音乐节。(2)A Chinese classical music concert will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. It’s my great honour to invite you to join in the concert on behalf of our school.11月8日在我校音乐厅将举办一场中国古典音乐会。我非常荣幸代表学校邀请你参加音乐会。
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★正文佳句(1)Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.这次活动的一些细节如下。(2)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.我想在那里见到你,请尽快告诉我你的决定。★经典结尾(1)I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.盼望着早日收到你的来信。(2)I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
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三、建议信1.写作结构　　建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly、secondly、thirdly或to begin/start with、then、later、last but not least 等依次陈述建议。具体写作结构如下:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I’m writing to give you some tips/suggestions on how to spend gift money.我写这封信的目的是给你一些如何花压岁钱的建议。(2)I’m pleased to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,你向我征求如何与同学好好相处的建议。★正文佳句(1)First of all,you’d better buy some books to enrich yourself.首先,你最好买一些书来丰富自己。(2)What’s more,you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.此外,你不妨参加夏令营,这不但开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
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★经典结尾(1)I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I hope you will find these suggestions useful.我希望我的建议对你有益。/我希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。(2)Personally/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned,it would be wise to take these actions.在我看来,采取这些行动是明智的。
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假定你是李华,你的美国网友Peter知道越来越多的人在学汉语,他也想学,但他不了解汉语学习的情况,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.学习汉语的建议;2.你能提供的帮助。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Peter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua
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本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给想学汉语但不了解汉语学习情况的美国网友Peter,向他提供一些学习汉语的建议及帮助。第一步:明确要求1.审题 体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时2.写作内容(1)学习汉语的建议;(2)你能提供的帮助。第二步:列关键词be glad to do sth　be interested in sth　listen to　keep on　look forward to sth
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第三步:连词成句根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。1.I’m very glad to talk about Chinese with you.2.More and more people in the world are learning Chinese and you are interested in it too.3.And you can also watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs.4.You must keep on, which is important for success.5.I’m looking forward to your coming to China.第四步:连句成文1.添加合适的衔接词进行遣词造句first of all、besides、not only...but (also)、as a result 2.书写一定要规范清晰。
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Dear Peter, I’m very glad to talk about Chinese with you. As you know, more and more people in the world are learning Chinese and you are interested in it too. In my opinion, if you want to learn Chinese well, you would practice more spoken Chinese every day just like English. And you can also watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs. You must keep on, which is important for success. Besides, the best way to learn Chinese is to come to China, and we can chat in Chinese, and sometimes in English. I’m looking forward to your coming to China.Yours,Li Hua
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范文内容完整,要点全面,结构严谨,语言规范,语篇连贯,符合逻辑关系,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如“You must keep on, which is important for success.”这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如be interested in sth、keep on、look forward to sth等,为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了作者很高的英语水平。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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假定你是阳光中学学生李华,得知你校国际部正在招募志愿者,想通过云课堂(Cloud Classroom)用英语为学生上一堂健康课,请写信应聘,内容包括:1.自身优势;2.课堂计划,包括如何应对NCP (新型冠状肺炎)等;3.希望获准。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua
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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m writing to apply for being a volunteer to give a health lesson to students through Cloud Classroom. I think I am qualified for it. Having a good command of English, I can communicate well with the students. What’s more, so friendly am I that I can get along well with them. In view of the present situation, I’ll spread some information about NCP. More importantly, the effective suggestions on how to stay healthy will be offered, such as drinking more water, taking more rest and doing a proper amount of sports at home. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.Yours,Li Hua
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分类3 应用文之道歉信&求助信&倡议书
一、道歉信1.写作结构　　道歉信通常包括以下三个部分:(1)向对方表示歉意;(2)说明道歉的原因,对失误或错误进行解释(一般要求考生自由发挥);(3)提出补救措施,请求原谅。其结构通常为:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I’m writing to apologize to you because I’m unable to go to the bookstore with you as planned/at the appointed time.我写信是为了向你道歉,因为我不能按约定/在约定时间和你一起去书店。(2)I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.非常抱歉本周五不能教你制作中国结了。★正文佳句(1)The reason why I won’t be available at that time is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and my family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day.我那时没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了,我的家人正在医院轮流照顾他。所以那天我不得不陪着他。
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(2)I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这次变动不会给您带来太多麻烦。★经典结尾(1)Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.对我的缺席给您带来的不便,我再次表示歉意。(2)I’m awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan. And I’m wondering whether it is OK to go to the exhibition next Saturday morning.计划突然改变,我感到非常抱歉。我想知道下周五上午去看展览是否可行。
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二、求助信1.写作结构　　求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时,其结构通常为:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了,我现在需要你的帮助。(2)Would you please do me a favour?你能帮我一个忙吗?★正文佳句(1)I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I’m wondering if you could spare some precious time to go through them and make necessary changes.我刚刚完成了我的求职信和个人简历。然而,我对我使用的语言和格式不太有把握。我想知道您是否能抽出一些宝贵的时间过目,并做出必要的修改。
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(2)I’m wondering if you could give me some practical advice as I know you’ve organized similar activities.我想知道你是否能给我一些实用的建议,因为我知道你也组织过类似的活动。★经典结尾(1)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume.如果您能帮我一个忙,抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历,我将不胜感激。(2)I’m eager for your timely help./I’m eager to get your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
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三、倡议书1.写作结构　　倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构为:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.我认为通过努力工作来实现这个目标是每个公民的义务。(2)Nowadays, people in many big cities are always complaining about the heavy traffic.现在,许多大城市的人们总在抱怨拥挤的交通。★正文佳句(1)We are supposed/required/expected to choose a healthy and environmentally friendly way of traveling, that is, bicycle riding. 我们应该选择一个既健康又环保的旅游方式,那就是骑自行车。
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(2)In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.在我看来,我们应该努力培养健康的饮食习惯来增强我们的体质。只有用这样的方式我们才能有足够的精力来更好地学习。★经典结尾(1)If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.如果每个人都为我们学校做一件事情,我相信我们会把学校变成一个更好的学习和生活的地方。(2)As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.只要团结一致,我们就能把不可能变为可能。
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假定你是李华,原定周五去拜访以前的外籍教师Mr Smith,可是由于某种原因你不能前往了。请给他写一封电子邮件,向他说明取消此次拜访的情况,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.陈述原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr Smith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua
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本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封道歉信。写作时首先进行道歉,再详细说明无法赴约的理由,最后提出另约时间。注意语气和词汇的选用。第一步:明确要求1.审题体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时和一般将来时2.写作内容(1) 表示歉意;(2) 陈述原因;(3) 另约时间。第二步:列关键词excessively sorry　unable to visit　attending a lecture　garbage classification　on behalf of sb　can’t afford　absence　cancel　would appreciate it if　convenient
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第三步:连词成句1.I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you.2.I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class.3.So important is the lecture that I can’t afford my absence from it.4.I have to cancel my visit to you.5.I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology.6.I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you.第四步:连句成文1.添加合适的衔接词进行遣词造句because　consequently　what is more　however2.书写一定要规范清晰。
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Dear Mr Smith, I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you this Saturday afternoon because I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class at that time. So important is the lecture that I can’t afford my absence from it. Consequently, I have to cancel my visit to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,Li Hua
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文章条理清晰,理由描述恰当,态度诚恳,行文流畅。准确地使用了较多高级句式,如:because引导原因状语从句、so...that(太……以至于)的倒装句式引导结果状语从句、if引导条件状语从句。同时运用高级词汇,例如 excessively sorry、garbage classification、on behalf of sb、can’t afford、absence、consequently、convenient等。范文内容符合题目要求,过渡合理,运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范。
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假定你是李华,在地球日前夕,请你以“地球——我们共同的家园”为题写一份倡议书,倡议大家厉行节约、保护环境。内容包括:1.节约与环保的关系;2.举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约;3.倡导环保的优良传统。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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The Earth—Our Common Home To build a beautiful home, we should save our natural resources,for natural resources in our world may run out one day and saving can help us avoid producing waste, which will make our homeland more beautiful. As students, we should make our contributions. For example, we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books. In this way more trees would be saved. We Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame. Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. Your cooperation would be much appreciated.
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分类4 应用文之推荐信&通知
一、推荐信1.写作结构从推荐者的情况来分,可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。具体写作结构为:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)Learning that you are coming to Beijing for a vacation, I’m writing this letter to offer my recommendation.得知你将来北京度假,我写这封信给出我的推荐。(2)I’ve received your letter which says you’re going to take part in the Beauty of China Exhibition. Now it affords me much pleasure to recommend a special job to you.我已收到你的来信,信上说你将参加“美丽中国”艺术展。现在我很高兴向你推荐一项特别的工作。★正文佳句(1)The website possesses a number of advantages. Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs.这个网站有很多好处。首先,它为你提供各种在线课程,如汉语成语、对话和习俗。
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(2)I am convinced that the program will help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culture.我相信这个节目会帮助你更好地理解中国文化。★经典结尾(1)I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time.希望这个网站对你有吸引力并且有所帮助。祝你学习愉快。(2)In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to take my recommendation into consideration.总之,他是个不错的选择。如果您愿意考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
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二、通知1.写作结构通知(notice)是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作结构为:
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)A report will be given on English literature by Professor Yang from Hong Kong University.来自香港大学的杨教授将做英语文学报告。(2)In order to deepen our understanding of campus culture and stimulate the creativity and imagination of the students, our school will hold a thrilling event.为了加深我们对校园文化的理解并激发学生们的创造力和想象力,我们学校将举办一个激动人心的活动。★正文佳句(1)Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.我们将热烈欢迎那些对此感兴趣的人。
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(2)Any foreign student who is studying at our school and interested in Chinese poems is welcome to take this optional course.任何在我们学校学习并对中国诗歌感兴趣的外国留学生都欢迎选修这门课程。★经典结尾(1)Please take your notebook with you and turn up on time.请带着笔记本按时到场。(2)If you are interested in it, please go there on time.如果你们对此感兴趣,请按时到那里去。
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假定你是李华,从网上得知你市将举办国际智能机器人展览且正在招募英文解说员(commentator)。请你用英文写一份自荐信,内容包括:1.自我介绍及表明写信目的;2.简述个人优势;3.希望获准。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Sir/ Madam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply.Yours truly,Li Hua
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本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封自荐信,申请做一名本市举办的国际智能机器人展览的英文解说者。第一步:明确要求1.审题体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时,少量现在完成时2.写作内容(1)自我介绍及表明写信目的;(2)简述个人优势;(3)希望获准。第二步:列关键词a middle school student　from the Internet　an intelligent robot exhibition　need an English commentator be interested in it　apply for it　outgoing, energetic, and responsible　have a good command of English　communicate with others in English fluently　working experiences
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第三步:连词成句根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。1.I’m Li Hua, a middle school student.2.The other day I happened to know from the Internet that an intelligent robot exhibition will be held in our city and an English commentator is needed.3.I’m quite interested in it and writing to apply for it.4.As a teenager, I am outgoing, energetic, and responsible.5.Not only do I have great interest in robots, but also have such a good command of English that I can communicate with others in English fluently.6.What’s more, I have had some similar working experiences before.7.I do hope that I can be a volunteer in your exhibition.
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第四步:连句成文1.添加合适的衔接词进行遣词造句What is more　not only...but (also)2.书写一定要规范清晰。
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Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. The other day I happened to know from the Internet that an intelligent robot exhibition will be held in our city and an English commentator is needed. I’m quite interested in it and writing to apply for it. As a teenager, I am outgoing, energetic, and responsible. Not only do I have great interest in robots, but also have such a good command of English that I can communicate with others in English fluently. What’s more, I have had some similar working experiences before. I do hope that I can be a volunteer in your exhibition. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours truly,Li Hua
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内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在写作中运用了较多的高级表达,如宾语从句、一般将来时被动语态、倒装句、what’s more等。
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假定你是学生会主席李华,为让学生更好地了解儒家文化,你校将邀请李教授到学校做“儒学”讲座。请你给在你校就读的外国学生写份英文通知,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容安排;3.注意事项。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:儒家文化Confucian culture;孔子Confucius;儒学Confucianism
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Notice____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’ Union
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Notice In order to help students learn more about Confucian culture, our school will invite a distinguished expert, Professor Li, to give a lecture entitled “Confucianism” in our school hall on April 25th. The lecture will last about two hours from 2 pm to 4 pm covering three aspects. First comes the general introduction to Confucianism. Then Confucius and his anecdotes will also be included, which is good news for his admirers. The final part is the question and answer session, in which Professor Li will help the audience apply Confucianism to solve practical problems. All are welcome and please be punctual and disciplined.Students’ Union
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分类5 应用文之演讲稿&新闻报道
一、演讲稿1.写作结构演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。它可以用来交流思想、感情,表达主张、见解,也可以用来介绍自己的学习、工作情况和经验。演讲稿具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用。它可以把演讲者的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众,使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。演讲稿一般分为四部分,具体内容如下:称呼:最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen,也可根据不同情况,选用其他称呼。开头:点明主题、交代背景、提出问题等。正文:它是整篇演讲的主体,必须有重点、有层次。由于演讲材料是通过口头表达的,为了便于听众理解,各段落应上下连贯,段与段之间有适当的过渡和呼应。
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结尾:结尾的方法有归纳法、引文法、反问法等。归纳法是概括一篇演讲的中心思想,总结并强调主要观点;引文法则是引用名言警句,升华主题,留下思考;反问法是以问句引发听众思考和对演讲者观点的认同。此外,演讲稿的结尾也可以用感谢、展望、鼓舞等语句,使演讲能自然收束,给人留下深刻印象。
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)It is a great honor for me to deliver my speech here.我很荣幸在这里发表演讲。(2)I feel greatly honored to deliver my speech here, whose topic is about...我很荣幸在这里发表演讲,我演讲的主题是……(3)I will give some detailed information to support my idea as follows.我将提供如下一些详细的信息来支持我的观点。★正文佳句(1)As we know, music is through our life.正如我们所知,音乐贯穿我们的生活。(2)Arts is playing an important role in our life, which is an essential part of our life.艺术在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色,是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。
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(3)Whenever you listen to music, it’s a pleasure. Music makes everything around you look so beautiful.无论什么时候听音乐都是一种享受,音乐会让周围的一切看起来都那么美好。★经典结尾(1)Altogether, we can come to/draw a conclusion that we can’t be separated from arts.总之,我们可以得出一个结论: 我们离不开艺术。(2)Let’s continue to take music as our companion and enjoy the strength and enjoyment brought by music.让我们继续以音乐为伴,享受音乐带来的力量和快乐。
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二、新闻报道1.写作结构　　新闻报道的结构一般分为四个部分:标题、导语、主体以及结语。标题是新闻的题目,是对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。撰写标题是为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读,所以标题要简洁、高度概括,要醒目。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话,它扼要地揭示出新闻的核心内容(时间、地点、人物、事件等)。主体是新闻的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步展开和阐释。新闻报道的结语通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,或对新闻事件的发展趋势做出预测。有时,作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问题。
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一般来说,标题、导语和主体是构成新闻报道的必不可少的三部分。可根据新闻报道的内容而确定是否要结语或其他内容(如事件和历史背景等),有时还可将它们暗含在主体中。新闻报道通常使用平实客观的语言,考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。新闻报道要保证新闻的真实性,对所发生的事件要进行客观的报道。
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2.高分素材★精彩开头(1)On the morning of...,China successfully sent up...在……的上午,中国成功地把……(2)Many countries around the world sent their congratulations.世界上许多国家都表达了祝贺。★正文佳句(1)There are different opinions among people as to...Some people suggest that...人们对……有不同的看法。有些人认为……
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(2)...has been playing an important role in our daily life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.……在我们的日常生活中一直扮演着重要的角色。它给我们带来了很多好处,但也带来了一些严重的问题。(3)It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve...现在是有关当局采取适当措施解决……的时候了。(4)With the rapid increase of the population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.随着人口的快速增长,住房问题日益严重。
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★经典结尾(1)So people should help each other to build up a harmonious society.因此,人与人之间要互相帮助,构建和谐社会。(2)I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.我相信,在公众和政府的共同努力下,我们一定能够战胜灾难。
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假定你校将举行一个成人仪式,你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1.过去对成年的向往;2.现在的感受和认识;3.将来的目标及措施。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Good morning,everyone!The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming a grown-up”.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  Thank you for listening.
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本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写英文发言稿。第一步:明确要求1.审题体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时为主,一般过去时,一般将来时2.写作内容(1)过去对成年的向往;(2)现在的感受和认识;(3)将来的目标及措施。第二步:列关键词grow up　as soon as possible　at the same time　freedom　responsibility　meaningful　try one’s best
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第三步:连词成句注意好结构的使用,如非谓语动词、复合句;注意拼写和时态问题第四步:连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。first of all　what is more　therefore　as a result
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Good morning,everyone!The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming a grown-up”. As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whatever I wanted. Now I’m a grown-up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up means not only this,but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university. Thank you for listening.
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本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从复合句、状语从句、宾语从句、try one’s best to do sth等,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。
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假定你是李华,上周,你校学生会组织了“冬日暖衣 (Warm Clothes For Winter)”活动,为贫困山区儿童献爱心。请你为校英语报写一篇相关报道。内容如下:1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动意义。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Warm Clothes, Warm Heart_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Warm Clothes, Warm Heart Last week, the Student Union in our school organized an activity named “Warm Clothes for Winter” to show love and care to the children in the poverty-stricken mountainous areas. Nearly all the students donated clothes, gloves and so on to help the less fortunate through the freezing winter. The activity was welcomed by both the students and the poor children far away. Unquestionably, students find such an activity quite rewarding. Knowing that they have improved the lives of others, they feel a strong sense of fulfillment. It is giving that makes the difference.
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分类6 记叙文&说明文&议论文
一、记叙文1.命题特点记人叙事是高考书面表达常见的考查方式,侧重考查人物介绍、事物描述或事件的发展。2.两个注意点(1)记人类记叙文:①根据题干所给的提示信息来写,不得随意增添或遗漏要点;②根据写作主题突出人物的性格或经历等重要信息,切忌要点堆砌,中心不明。(2)叙事类记叙文:①理清事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果,确定表达要点:②注意表达的完整性,同时注意上下文的衔接。
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二、说明文1.命题特点说明文的主要命题形式为提纲式作文,兼顾考查图画式作文。2.四个注意点(1)准确把握说明对象。根据写作目的和要求,抓住人或事物的主要特点,写作时做到有的放矢。(2)说明过程要层次分明,条理清晰,内容连贯。(3)语言力求简洁贴切,通俗易懂。(4)通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
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三、议论文1.命题特点(1)内容贴近中学生的生活实际,话题主要涉及对常见问题的观点态度及解决方法。(2)强调“以理服人,以理取胜”,逻辑推理性强。(3)考查中学生的判断是非的能力、逻辑思维能力和解决问题的能力。2.四个“要点”(1)要理清题意。认真阅读题干,分清楚要写作的是说理议论型、说明利弊型还是解决问题型的议论文。(2)要提炼观点。根据试题要求,先表达自己的观点和态度。(3)要充分论证。根据自己的观点列出相关理由,要注意思维逻辑和行文逻辑,必要时举例说明。所举的例子要与观点和态度一致。在文章的最后要再次强调自己的观点。(4)要注意语言。语言要地道、丰富,根据需要可以运用凸显文章层次结构的表达。
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你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以你在某个方面取得进步的经历为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.经历的过程;2.你的感受。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.短文题目和首句已给出,不计入总词数。
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An Experience of Making Progress Dear teachers and fellow students, I’m here to share one of my experiences of making progress.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生以在某个方面取得进步的经历为题用英语写一篇短文参加作文比赛。第一步:明确要求1.审题体裁:提纲类作文时态:一般过去时、一般现在时2.写作内容(1)包含经历的过程;(2)你的感受。第二步:列关键词be good at　have difficulty in　lose heart　convey　catch up with
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第三步:连词成句1.When I entered high school, I found everybody else in my class was good at English except me.2.I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages.3.However, I didn’t lose heart.4.I went to my English teacher, who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.5.I worked harder, following the teacher’s advice.6.Gradually, I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting.7.Now I have already caught up with my classmates.
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8.This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying: Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.第四步:连句成文1.添加合适的衔接词进行遣词造句Firstly/First　In the end　Furthermore　However　Because2.书写一定要规范清晰。
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An Experience of Making Progress Dear teachers and fellow students, I’m here to share one of my experiences of making progress. When I entered high school, I found everybody else in my class was good at English except me. I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages. However, I didn’t lose heart. I went to my English teacher, who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me. Following the teacher’s advice, I gradually felt better while reading and began to find English interesting. Now I have already caught up with my classmates. This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying: Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
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文章结构合理,思路清晰,使用了一些高级表达,如catch up with、状语从句、定语从句、现在分词作状语等。
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你校英语节组织了“你最喜爱的卡通电影人物”英语征文评选。假定你最喜欢的人物是“花木兰”,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文参加评选:1.简述木兰代父从军的故事;2.你喜欢这一人物的理由。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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I wish to choose Mulan as my favourite cartoon movie character. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I wish to choose Mulan as my favourite cartoon movie character. Living in ancient times,Mulan was a young girl who decided to go to join the army. Because her brother was too young to enlist,she made sacrifices to stop the forced recruitment of her father. As only men could join the army,Mulan disguised herself as a man to trick the army officers. I really love this character because she is brave and caring. She fights with courage and determination and she makes a great contribution to the country. She is also a wonderful role model,showing that women needn’t feel limited when it comes to what they can achieve.