江苏省镇江市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-08作文

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一、材料作文
1．（2022·江苏镇江）假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
2．（2021·江苏镇江）时光荏苒，毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一，并根据提示写一篇短文。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。Hw time flies! It’s time t say gdbye t my dear schl. I wuld like t say smething abut ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2020·江苏镇江）技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息；
2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。With the develpment f mdern technlgy, the way f leaning is changing. I think__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Schl life in the past three years
Schl life in the cming three years
· yur hbby r interest
· activities yu tk part in and yur prgress
· yur friends and teachers
· yur dream r plan
· activities yu hpe t jin in and the reasns
· teachers and classmates yu hpe t meet
Traditinal learning in a classrm
● fixed timetable
a plan made by a schl
● face-t-face cmmunicatin
● clrful class activities
● team spirit
Mdern learning n the Internet
● flexible(灵活的) timetable
a plan made by neself
● nline cmmunicatin
● rich learning resurces
● any place with the Internet
参考答案：
1．Pssible versin 1:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be f great value t my later life.
The living skills training will be n a farm. There, I can live with lcal peple wh will help me learn mre abut their custms and lifestyles. Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities n the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I als have sme advice fr yu. I hpe there will be mre activities like grwing plants and vegetables. I hpe I will enjy myself n the farm.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。
2．Pssible versin l:
Hw time flies! It’s time t say gdbye t my dear schl. I wuld like t say smething abut my schl life in the past three years.
I lve reading. What impressed me mst is the Reading Club. One day, I saw sme students talking abut bks n the grass. I felt excited and jined in their discussin. Later, I became a member f the club. I read the fur great classical Chinese nvels and sme histry bks. Reading has changed me far mre than I expected, I am nt as shy as I used t be and willing t try new things.
I was s lucky t meet a lt f friends wh shared the same interest with me. My teachers encuraged me t make up sme stries. As far as I’m cncerned, reading pens up a new wrld t me. I will remember the three-year schl life frever.
Pssible versin 2:
Hw time flies! It’s time t say gdbye t my dear schl. I wuld like t say smething abut my schl ftball life in the cming three years.
I am patient and like playing with kids, and I am gd at Maths, s I hpe t be a Maths teacher in the future. Besides Maths, I plan t learn ther subjects well. They are very imprtant fr my dream jb. I’m interested in ftball. I want t jin the schl ftball team because I’m expecting t play with my friends in the field t imprve my team spirit.
I hpe that teachers will be strict in my studies s that I can make great prgress, because I’m shrt f self-management smetimes. I als hpe t meet friendly and hard-wrking classmates. I’m lking frward t the cming high schl life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。
2.写作指导：回望过去的事情用一般过去时，畅想未来的事情用一般将来时。回望过去可分为三段：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍让自己喜欢的爱好，让自己感触最深的事情；最后一段介绍自己的朋友和老师。畅想未来三年的校园生活时也分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段自己的梦想，希望参加的活动以及元音；最后一段表达自己希望遇见的老师和同学。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
3．例文：
With the develpment f mdern technlgy, the way f learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditinal learning in a classrm. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is ften made by a schl, s I dn't need t think abut hw t arrange when t learn different subjects. Secnd, we can have the face-t-face cmmunicatin with bth teachers and classmates. Third, there are clrful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knwledge happily. What's mre, learning in the classrm can help me develp a sense f team spirit, s I can learn hw t get alng with thers.
Hwever, when I study in the classrm, smetimes I can't fllw my teacher. And learning in the classrm can't prvide enugh resurces fr me t chse frm.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以李华的名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式，一是传统的在教室学习，二是现代化的网上学习，要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析，谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等，以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题。
2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，层次清晰。第一段介绍了自己喜欢的学习方式以及自己为什么喜欢的理由；第二段介绍了传统学习方式的不足。文章要点齐全，逻辑清晰，使读者一目了然。另本文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。
3.高分亮点：
短语：with the develpment f；think abut；in this way；what's mre；get alng with。
句型：there be句型；疑问词+动词不定式；when引导的时间状语从句。