北京中考英语作文范文及解析(10篇)
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这是一份北京中考英语作文范文及解析(10篇),共18页。学案主要包含了高分句型1,高分句型2,高分句型3等内容,欢迎下载使用。
1.假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封邀请信。注意:词数100左右。Dear Ms. Smith,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With best wishes,Li Hua2.假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你校高三年级将举行纪念高中毕业的植树活动。请给你校外籍教师Jim写邮件,内容包括:1. 介绍活动:2. 发出邀请。注意:1. 词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 3.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将开展每天锻炼一小时的活动。请你给交换生 Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:1.邀请理由:2.锻炼的具体安排。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hu4.假设你是红星中学的学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim准备参加学校举办的“美丽中国”诗歌朗诵比赛,来信向你咨询。请给Jim写封回信,为他推荐一个参展作品。信的内容包括:1. 推荐一个作品;2. 简单介绍该作品;3. 说明推荐的理由。注意: 1. 词数100字左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 5.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。近日你听说国外某网络学校将于7月底到8月底开课,目前正在招生。课程将由国外顶尖大学教授全英文授课,学生们需要组队进行课程学习并完成一份调查报告。你对此很感兴趣,请给主办方写一封邮件,咨询更多信息,内容包括: 1.课程内容;2.组队方式;3.其他想要询问的内容;注意:1.词数100左右;2. 信的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best Regards, Li Hua 6.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将在暑期举办英语夏令营活动,正在招募外籍志愿者担任助教。请给你的英国朋友Jim写封邮件,希望他参加招募,内容包括:1. 夏令营相关信息;2. 外籍助教的职责。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7.假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校将在五月举办一次英文演讲比赛,主题是介绍一位对你产生影响的人物,请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:1. 该人物是谁;2. 该人物的主要事迹;3. 该人物对你的影响。注意: 1. 词数100左右;2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。Hello, everyone. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他将来的生活,也想了解你的职业设想,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 你想从事的职业;2. 选择该职业的原因;3. 实现该目标的方法。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 9.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动,届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加,现正在招募志愿服务人员,请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信,内容包括:1. 申请理由;2. 个人优势;3. 希望批准。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua10.假如你是红星中学高二学生李华,你校学生会将于下个月举办“英美文学鉴赏周”活动。现面向全校公开招募“英美文学英语宣讲员”。请根据以下提示写一封邮件,向组织方提出申请。内容包括:1. 自我介绍;2. 个人优势;3. 表达期待。注意:1. 词数100字左右,2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。提示词:宣讲员 commentatorDear Organiser, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua参考答案:1.Dear Ms. Smith,I’m Li Hua, chairman of Students’ Union from Yucai Middle School. I’m more than honored to invite you to be our judge of the English Speech Competition to be held in our school.The theme of this competition is Human and Nature. As you know, with the development of science and technology, our environment has been polluted very seriously. So we want our students to form a sense and awareness of protecting it. We will throw the activity from 2:00pm. to 5:00pm. on 15th June at Room 501. There are 10 students competing in the speech competition. Whenever you have any problem, you can just call me at 44876655. I will appreciate it if you could spare some time to be our judge. Looking forward to your early reply. With best wishes, Li Hua【解析】【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士写一封信,邀请她来做学校举办的英语演讲比赛的评委。【详解】1.词汇积累非常:more than→very主题:theme→topic形成:form→develop举办:throw→hold2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:I’m Li Hua, chairman of Students’ Union from Yucai Middle School.拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is chairman of Students’ Union from Yucai Middle School.【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, with the development of science and technology, our environment has been polluted very seriously.(由as引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Whenever you have any problem, you can just call me at 44876655.(由Whenever引导的让步状语从句)【高分句型3】I will appreciate it if you could spare some time to be our judge.(由if引导的条件状语从句)2.Dear Jim,On behalf of Senior 3 students, I’m writing to invite you to take part in a tree-planting activity in the suburb next Saturday.The activity aims to celebrate our graduation. It might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life. We will plant trees and in the meantime plant seeds of hope for the future! We believe the young trees will grow up, healthy and strong, just like us.Since you have been with us for 3 years and witnessed our growth, we do hope you can come. So would you like to join us?Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校外籍教师Jim写邮件,邀请他参加你校高三年级即将举行的纪念高中毕业的植树活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参加:take part in→attend目的是:aim to→be designed to享受:enjoy→appreciate同时:in the meantime→meanwhile2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:The activity aims to celebrate our graduation. It might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life.拓展句:The activity aims to celebrate our graduation, which might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life.【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you have been with us for 3 years and witnessed our growth, we do hope you can come. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2] We believe the young trees will grow up, healthy and strong, just like us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)3.Dear Jim,How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, One-hour Workout Every Day.I know you’re really into sports, and the workout is just perfect for you. It’s a good chance to build up your body and sweat away your stress.The workout is scheduled on every weekday from 5 pm to 6 pm. We will first gather at the school field for a 10-minute warmup. After that, you can choose either to exercise indoors or outdoors. Sports like swimming, basketball and badminton are all available in our indoor stadium. If you prefer to exercise in the open air, you can run laps or play football to burn your calories.I’m looking forward to your participation.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加你校将开展每天锻炼一小时的活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参加:join in →take part in喜欢:be into → be fond of机会:chance →opportunity期望:look forward to →expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, One-hour Workout Every Day.拓展句:I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, which is called One-hour Workout Every Day.【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s a good chance to build up your body and sweat away your stress. (运用了it作形式主语,真正主语为不定式的结构)[高分句型2] If you prefer to exercise in the open air, you can run laps or play football to burn your calories. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)4.Dear Jim,I’ve received your letter and known you’re going to take part in the Poetry Reading Contest themed “Beauty of China”. Now I’m writing to recommend a special poem for you.The poem that I would like to recommend to you is Jing Ye Si, which is translated into A Silent Night’s Thought. It is written by Li Bai, one of the well-known poets from the Tang Dynasty. The poem talks about how the poet gets reminded of his hometown by the bright moonlight. For centuries, this poem has been read and recited by millions of Chinese people. I am sure the poem will help you build connections with the audience when you are reciting it.I wish you best of the luck for the contest. If you need any help, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封回信,为他参加“美丽中国”诗歌朗诵比赛推荐一个参赛作品。【详解】1.词汇积累参加:take part in→join in比赛:contest→competition著名的:well-known→famous帮助:help→assisstance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:It is written by Li Bai, one of the well-known poets from the Tang Dynasty.拓展句:It is written by Li Bai, who is one of the well-known poets from the Tang Dynasty.【点睛】【高分句型1】The poem that I would like to recommend to you is Jing Ye Si, which is translated into A Silent Night’s Thought. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】The poem talks about how the poet gets reminded of his hometown by the bright moonlight. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)【高分句型3】I am sure the poem will help you build connections with the audience when you are reciting it. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)5.I’m Li Hua, a senior one student in Hongxing Middle School. Recently I heard that an online school will open from the end of July to the end of August. The course will be taught entirely in English by professors from top foreign universities. At the same time students will need to work in teams to take the course and complete a research report. I am interested in it. Therefore, I am writing an email to you for more information.First of all, I am eager to know what the course content is. In addition, how do we form a team in class? Finally, I also want to learn where it will be held.I would be grateful if you could answer these questions. Looking forward to your reply!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给主办方写一封邮件,咨询课程内容、组队方式以及更多信息。【详解】1.词汇积累听说:hear→learn此外:In addition → besides/what’s more因此:therefore→thus/hence感激: grateful → appreciative2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:The course will be taught entirely in English by professors from top foreign universities.拓展句:The course will be taught entirely in English by professors who are from top foreign universities。【点睛】.【高分句型1】First of all,I am eager to know what the course content is.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】I would be grateful if you could answer these questions.(运用了if引导状语从句)6.Dear Jim, I hope you’re having a great week. I’m writing to ask if you have time during the summer holiday to do some volunteer work.This coming summer, my school is going to hold an English Debate Camp, which will last for three weeks starting from July 18. The purpose of the camp is to teach students how to debate in English. The school plans to invite some foreigners to work as teaching assistants at the camp. Their responsibilities will include helping students with language skills and debate techniques.If you are interested and available during that time, my school would greatly appreciate your assistance. For further information, you can log on to the school website.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将在暑期举办英语夏令营活动,正在招募外籍志愿者担任助教。请给你的英国朋友Jim写封邮件,希望他参加招募。【详解】1.词汇积累询问:ask→inquire举行:hold→host目标:purpose→goal担任:work as→serve as2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:The school plans to invite some foreigners to work as teaching assistants at the camp. Their responsibilities will include helping students with language skills and debate techniques.拓展句:The school plans to invite some foreigners to work as teaching assistants at the camp, whose responsibilities will include helping students with language skills and debate techniques.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to ask if you have time during the summer holiday to do some volunteer work. (运用了if引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] This coming summer, my school is going to hold an English Debate Camp, which will last for three weeks starting from July 18. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)7.Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to give you a speech on the person who has a great influence on me. He is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating virus.He is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of COVID 19 epidemic. Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID 19. With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control. Influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future.That’s all. Thanks for your listening!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇演讲稿,介绍一位对他产生影响的人物。【详解】1.词汇积累影响:influence → impact 人物:figure → person显著的:remarkable → outstanding决定:make up one’s mind → determine2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future.拓展句:As I am influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future.【点睛】【高分句型1】Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. (运用了every time引导的时间状语从句、介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句以及短语cannot help doing)【高分句型2】Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID -19. (运用了让步状语从句的倒装,过去分词短语作后置定语)8.Dear Jim,Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.Becoming a journalist has always been my dream. When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel. Over time, I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive. In my opinion, writing ability is very important for a journalist, so I practise it almost every day. In addition, I plan to study journalism at Communication University of Beijing and currently I am preparing for the entrance exam.How’s your life now? Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信,告诉他自己想从事的职业、选择该职业的原因和实现的方法。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的:delighted→happy机会:opportunity→chance有吸引力的:appealing→attractive现在:at present→currently2.句型拓展变强调句原句:I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive. 拓展句:I have come to feel that it is the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories that make the job more meaningful and attractive. 【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.(运用了现在分词的完成式作状语)9.Dear Mr. Smith,I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity to be held next week. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers because I love Chinese traditional culture so much that I can devote myself to serving the participants.First of all, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Besides, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是属于申请信。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动,届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加,现正在招募志愿服务人员,请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信。【详解】1.词汇积累热爱:love→be fond of致力于:devote→contribute同时:meanwhile→at the same time感激:appreciate→grateful考虑:consider→think over2.句式拓展变换句式原句:I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity to be held next week. 拓展句:I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity, which will be held next week.【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.( not only…but also引导的倒装句,现在分词作结果状语)10.Dear Organiser,Knowing that the Student Union of our school is going to hold an English and American Literature Appreciation Week next month, I’m writing to apply for the position of commentator in this activity. My name is Li Hua, a student of Senior Grade Two, Hongxing Middle school. I recommend myself as a qualified commentator for the following reasons.To begin with, interested in English and American Literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature of works and have a good knowledge of literature. Besides, I am fluent in my oral English so I can communicate with foreign students well. Finally, I am outgoing and willing to help others, which makes me more competent.I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给学生会写信,申请成为一名英美文学英语宣讲员。【详解】1.词汇积累推荐:recommend→suggest首先:to begin with=first of all精通:have a good knowledge of=have a good command of最终:finally→eventually2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:To begin with, interested in English and American Literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature of works and have a good knowledge of literature.拓展句:To begin with, since I am interested in English and American Literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature of works and have a good knowledge of literature.【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that the Student Union of our school is going to hold an English and American Literature Appreciation Week next month, I’m writing to apply for the position of commentator in this activity.(that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Finally, I am outgoing and willing to help others, which makes me more competent.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
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