专题02 备战2022高考英语写作专题复习之建议信

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2022高考英语写作专题复习之建议信目录内容Part A题目呈现Part B谋篇布局短语句式罗列解析题目内容；确定行文要点罗列关键词以及必备表达话题词汇写作储备句式升级美化Part C写作模板总结Part D学生作文点评范文赏析学生习作点评学生习作美化升级Part E课后练笔巩固提升Part A  题目呈现假如你是李明；你想要写信给你们学校图书馆管理员关于图书馆目前存在的问题已经改进措施.1：内容包括自我介绍；写信目的2：提出2-3条改进建议        Part B  谋篇布局以及短语句式罗列1：解析题目内容；确定行文要点题目信息解读指令关键词要点归纳规定应用文类型为书信Write a letter1.题目要求写一封信，书信格式需完整;2.收信人为图书馆管理员,用词需要正式;3.信的内容必须包括:自我介绍；写信目的；提出建议；注意提建议时的礼貌；在分析现存问题时不能一味抱怨；需要考虑读者感受 揭示收信人身份为校图书馆管理员To your school library规定信件内容:自我介绍；写信目的；提出建议Self-introductionThe purpose of writing the letterMake some suggestions提供内容线索:建议需要改善图书馆相关服务For improving its service2：罗列关键词以及必备表达       
1. valuable service有价值的服务2. information search查找信息3. spare time闲暇时光(替换表达free time)4. outdated materials过时的资料5.absorb knowledge吸收知识(替换表达acquire knowledge)6. be of little value几乎没有价值7. opening time开馆时间8. put forward提出[替换表达:come up with]8. in these regards在这些方面[替换表达:in these respects]9. an urgent need急需[替换表达:a crying need]10. powerful computer强大的计算机
3：写作储备1.开头语I am writing this letter to raise some suggestions for. ..我写信就...提出几点建议。As a frequent user of ...，I am writing this letter in purpose of offering some recommendations for...作为经常使用....的人，我写信希望....提出几点建议。I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信表达关.....的观点。2.结束语I will be grateful if my suggestions receive your deep consideration, and I firmly believe that ... would be improved significantly in the near future.如果您能仔细考虑我的建议，我将非常感激。我坚......会在不久的将来获得极大改善。I hope you would find the above proposals practical. Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.我希望您能发现上述建议实用。非常感激对我建议的及时关注。I think it would be immensely rewarding if you could adopt my suggestions offered above.我认为如果您能采纳我提出的上述建议,将会非常有益。4：句式升级美化句子成形步骤:①写出简单句There is a need for computers.我们需要使用计算机Computers can help us a lot in our study.计算机对我们的学习有很多帮助。②利用衔接词将简单句整合There is a need for computers which can help us a lot in our study.我们需要一种可以对我们有很大帮助的计算机。③增加表达精确性和美感There is an urgent need for more powerful computers which can greatly facilitate our information search and learning process.我们迫切需要更强大的计算机，可以大大促进我们的信息搜索和学习过程。④增加衔接成分，连接上下文Firstly, there is an urgent need for ...首先，迫切需要....课堂练习句子成形步骤:①写出简单句I am a freshman in our university.我是我们大学的一名新生。I appreciate the service provided in the library.我很欣赏图书馆所提供的服务。1 spend most of my spare time learning knowledge in the library.我把大部分业余时间花在图书馆学习知识。②利用衔接词将简单句整合As a freshman in our university, I appreciate the service provided in the library where I spend most of my spare time learning knowledge.作为我们大学的一名新生，我感谢图书馆提供的服务，我花了大部分业余时间学习知识。③增加表达的精确性和美感As a freshman in our university, I do appreciate the service provided in the library where I spend most of my spare time absorbing knowledge.作为我们大学的一名新生，我非常感谢图书馆提供的服务，我花大部分业余时间吸收知识。Part C  写作模板总结Dear        ，As a   表明身份  ，I do appreciate             .To help improve                     .I would like to put forward some practical suggestions.Firstly, there is an urgent need for                     .Secondly, it would be considerate if                     . Lastly, as简述原因     ，I wish                 .I will be more than happy to see improvements in these regards.Sincerely yours,Li Ming Part D  学生作文点评与范文赏析作文一学生作文赏析  (9分)点评意见 Dear librarian,I am a student of our school and I usually go to library to review my lessons or to research1 some books which I want.2 The library gives me great help and I like it very much.However, I hope that the library can getBetter 3and I have some advices to her.4 To start with the first5， I hope the library could offer us more available machines in computer classroom.6 I always spend quite a long time waiting for a seat7. In addition, I hope that there would be more books on education. Recently, I am writing my paper these days8， but I can not find enough documents from the library. Anyway, I wish the library will9 be more popular with 10students and teachers.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 修改思路:1.research使用不符合语境。2.从句内容较短,省略从句引导词使句式更紧凑。3. 将分句改为不定式，逻辑更加清晰;修改表述使其符合英语习惯。4.5.使其符合英语表述习惯。6. 使表述简洁、准确。7.将独立单句改成so that引导的从句，使语意逻辑清晰,并根据句式需要调整表述，将独立单句改成since引导的从句,使语意逻辑清晰。9. these days和recently重复。10.wish后面应该用虚拟语气。 作文修改作文润色中文翻译Dear librarian,I am a student of our school and I usually go to library to review my lessons or to search some books I want.The library gives me great help and I like it very much.However, to make the library provide better service, I'd like to give some advice. To start with，I hope the library could offer us more available computers so that I don't need to spend quite a long time waiting for a seat. In addition, I hope that there would be more books on education, since I can not find enough related documents from the library when writing my papers recently.Anyway, I wish the library would be more and more popular among students and teachers.Yours sincerely,Li Ming   亲爱的图书管理员，我是我们学校的一名学生，我通常去图书馆复习我的课程或搜索一些我想要的书。图书馆给了我很大的帮助，我非常喜欢它。但是，为了让图书馆提供更好的服务，我想给我一些建议。首先，我希望图书馆能为我们提供更多的电脑，这样我就不需要花很长时间等座位了。此外，我希望能有更多关于教育的书，因为我最近在写论文的时候从图书馆找不到足够的相关文件。无论如何，我希望图书馆能越来越受学生和教师的欢迎。真诚地，李明 范文及译文范文译文Dear Sir or Madam,As a student in our school, I do appreciate the valuable service provided in the library where I spend most of my spare time absorbing knowledge. To help improve the service, I would like to put forward some practical suggestions.Firstly, there is an urgent need for more powerful computers which can greatly facilitate our information search and learning process. Secondly, it would be considerate if the library could purchase more recently published books, since the outdated materials are of little value to students' study and research, Lastly, as we'd like to borrow books on Saturdays as well, I wish the opening time could be adjustedI will be more than happy to see improvements in these regards.Sincerely  yours，Li Ming 亲爱的先生或女士，作为我们学校的一名学生，我非常欣赏图书馆提供的宝贵服务，我在图书馆花大部分业余时间吸收知识。为了帮助改善服务，我想提出一些实用的建议。首先，迫切需要更强大的计算机，可以极大地促进我们的信息搜索和学习过程。其次，如果图书馆能买到最近出版的书，那就考虑一下，因为过时的材料对学生的研究没有什么价值，最后，因为我们也想在周六借书，我希望开放时间能调整我将非常高兴地看到在这些方面的改善。  真诚的，李明 Part E  课后练笔巩固（A）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他准备参加学校组织的“青少年健康生活论坛”，正在收集相关资料。他很想了解你对健康生活的看法，请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 健康生活的益处；2. 如何保持健康生活。注意：1. 词数不少于90；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：论坛 forumDear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely，Li Hua（B）假如你是李华，你收到正在学习汉语的英国笔友Tom的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信，并提出建议，帮他解决这方面的困难。1．不要担心，要相信自己；2．抓住练习汉语的机会；3．让自己融入汉语的环境中。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：（A）Dear Jim,How is it going? In your email, you mentioned you wanted to participate in the “Adolescents’ Healthy Living Forum”. I’m very delighted to share my opinions with you.I believe keeping a healthy life is beneficial to the adolescents. We are young and are growing up, so keeping a healthy life is good to build up our body. Besides, it can make us energetic and cheerful so that we can do better in all subjects learning.When it comes to how to live a healthy life, I think we should develop a good living habit and try to keep it. Firstly, we should do more physical exercise, which will make us strong. There are many sports fit for us, such as jogging, swimming, climbing mountains and so on. Secondly, we shouldn’t eat more food rich in oil and sugar. Although some fried food or sweet drinks are tasty, we’d better stay away from them. In addition, regular schedule is necessary. Getting up early and not staying up late are helpful to us.I hope my ideas are useful to you. Looking forward to your good news.（B）Dear Tom，I’m sorry to learn that you are going through a hard time in learning Chinese.Now I’d like to offer you some suggestions.In the first place，don’t be anxious and trust yourself.Since Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world，it’s normal for a beginner to have some trouble.In the second place，seize every opportunity to practice using the language．After all，the more you practice，the more fluent you will become．Last but not least，involve yourself in a Chinese environment.Make sure you are surrounded by books and TV programmes in Chinese，which is of importance to the learning of any language．Looking forward to your improvement soon.Yours truly，Li Hua