写作强化2 内容 学案 2022届上海高考英语二轮专题复习

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写作（内容）审题1. 明确文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，看图作文及图表写作等。2. 定人称、时态：一般说来，说明文、议论文多用一般现在时，记日记多用一般过去时，记叙文多用一般过去时和过去进行时。但很多时候同一篇文章含有几种不同的时态，如看图作文，描图用现在进行时，论述时用一般现在时。3. 列要点：弄清题目设置的情景或提供的要点，便能紧扣题意，确定写什么不写什么，做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。 谋篇布局1. 注意篇章结构，合理布局开始部分 (Opening paragraph ) ----说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分 (Body paragraphs) ---- 围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。结尾部分 (Concluding paragraph) ----对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。2. 确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点：(1)归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点(2)提炼出一句具有概括性的话(3)主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 【课堂精讲】(A)你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛 (group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：1.你是否会参加比赛2.你做出该决定的具体理由 【思路点拨】审题1. 文体：议论文2. 人称与时态：第一人称、一般现在时3. 要点：确定参加还是不参加；决定的理由 谋篇布局Version 1Paragraph 1: describe the activity and state your opinion: take part in the competitionParagraph 2: state the reasons for your decision           (1) a good opportunity to relax            (2) a good opportunity to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class           (3) a way to strengthen class cohesivenessParagraph 3: conclusion Version 2Paragraph 1: describe the activity and state your opinion: not take part in the competitionParagraph 2: state the reasons for your decision(1) a poor dancer           (2) feel nervous in front of a large audience           (3) can't afford to spend so much time on training and rehearsal.Paragraph 3: conclusionOne possible versionA group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition. 【随堂检测】 Directions: Write an English composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively in 120 -150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1. 有人认为读书要有选择；2. 有人认为应当博览群书；3. 我的看法。 【思路点拨】审题1. 文体：议论文2. 人称与时态：第一、三人称、一般现在时3. 要点：人们对于读书的不同观点；我的看法 谋篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the phenomenon of reading: heated discussion about how to read Paragraph 2: people’s opinion 1: read selectively: time is limited; not all books are of good quality  Paragraph 3: people’s opinion 2: read extensively: enrich knowledge; expand horizonParagraph 4: my opinion and conclusion: read both selectively and extensively: learn to judge and choose One possible versionPeople all know that reading is very important. But when it comes to how to read, a heated discussion has arisen as to whether we should read selectively or extensively.People who are in favor of the idea of reading selectively believe that it is not how much one reads but what he reads that really counts. For one thing, living in an age when much time has to be taken up by work and other activities, people have no enough time to read extensively even if they intend to. For another, some books are harmful, such as pornographic books and magazines sold at the street book vendors. Lack of intelligent discrimination in this matter may cultivate one’s bad taste. Therefore, the choice of books can never be overlooked.However, those who insist on reading extensively argue that it is through reading extensively that we obtain most of our knowledge. Only when one goes beyond his own field and experience and reads widely can he really make remarkable achievements in his study. Thus a man reading extensively has rich lives while a man with reading only a selected number of books walks this earth with a blindfold.In my opinion, we should read both selectively and extensively. That is to say, upon reading, we have to exercise extreme care in distinguishing good books from indecent books, but the significance of good reading cannot be overvalued. Whatever the purpose in reading, our contact with good books should never fail to give us enjoyment and satisfaction and there is no such thing as “too many” in reading good books. 【课堂精讲】 (B)请根据下列图表及文字说明用英语写一篇短文， 内容应包括中美高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例、差异及原因，并发表自己的观点和看法。要求：1.120词左右；2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节， 使行文连贯。           【思路点拨】审题1. 文体：图表说明文2. 人称与时态：第一、三人称、一般现在时3. 要点：描述图表并分析美高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例；分析差异产生的原因；自己的看法 谋篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the rate, difference of the pocket money between American and Chinese students Paragraph 2: state the reason            (1) American students have more opportunity to gain scholarship and take part-time job             (2) American students are less dependent on their parentsParagraph 3: my opinion and conclusion: we should learn to be more independent One possible versionPocket Money Sources for High School StudentsThe pocket money sources for the American and Chinese high students come almost the same way: money from their parents, income from part-time jobs and scholarships they can get, but the percentage of each is quite different. As can be seen from the picture, half of the American students’ pocket money is from their parents, 35% from part-time jobs and 15% from scholarships. By contrast, the Chinese students get most of their pocket money from their parents, up to 90%. And at the same time the other sources, including part-time jobs and scholarships, only accounts for 10%.It seems that there are two reasons for this difference. There seems to be various causes for this difference, two of which, I think are more obvious. One is that the American students have more opportunities to do part-time jobs and are offered scholarships than the Chinese students. The other is that American families attach more importance to individual independence so the American students rely less on their parents than the Chinese students.As far as I am concerned, we high school students should depend more on ourselves rather than parents. For instance, we can grasp the opportunity to do part-time jobs, which not only reduces the burden of our parents, but also broadens our view. 【随堂检测】最近在成年人中展开了一项关于影响孩子成功因素的调查。请结合下面的调查结果，谈谈你自己的观点与想法。                 【思路点拨】审题1. 文体：图表说明文2. 人称与时态：第一、三人称、一般现在时3. 要点：描述图表中的调查结果；自己的看法 谋篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the result of the survey Paragraph 2: state your opinion: teamwork is essential            (1) reason 1: help us learn ourselves better and achieve success            (2) reason 2: enhance communicating skills and promote friendshipParagraph 3: my opinion and conclusion: we should develop the spirit of teamwork One possible versionRecently, a poll on skills for success among adults shows that teamwork, chosen by 90% of the adults, is the most important for kids to succeed, which is followed by reading skills. By contrast, writing skills are considered to be the least important among the five skills.As far as I am concerned, I share the same opinion with most of the adults that teamwork is the most powerful skills for us to achieve success. Teamwork, a type of group activity, requires unity and cooperation. Teamwork can not only help children know their own merits and demerits so that they can get well along with others; but also it is beneficial to enhance children’s ability to communicate with others and improve the efficiency of study. Therefore, teamwork plays an important part in children’s success.That is why I emphasize the importance of teamwork despite the necessity of the other four skills. If we want to be successful, we should develop and cherish our ability to work with others. 【课堂精讲】(C)请以“Misunderstanding”为主题写一篇短文，内容包括：1.简要描述右图内容2.结合生活谈谈你的感想          【思路点拨】审题1. 文体：漫画类作文，描述+议论2. 人称与时态：第一、三人称、现在进行时与一般现在时3. 要点：描述图片；结合生活谈感想 谋篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the picture Paragraph 2: some examples like this in daily life and their effectsParagraph 3: my understanding: lack of communication and different background & culture lead to misunderstanding Paragraph 4: my suggestion and conclusion: express our requirement clearly and try to look at the problems from others’ position One possible versionEveryone hopes that when Christmas comes Santa Clause will give us a prepared gift which may bring us happiness. But if what is shown in the picture actually happens, do we really need the gift? In this picture, a person is almost drowned and asking for help with one hand stretching out of the water. Just at this moment, a Father Christmas with a large pack on his shoulder comes near the bank and presents a gift to him, at which we must be shocked for we know that there is a misunderstanding between them. The former wants someone to save his life, while the latter takes it for granted that anyone extending their hands to him just wants a gift. Misunderstanding there is like poisons, deadly. In our daily life exist so many misunderstandings which may not be as serious as the one described above, but can still result in many terrible consequences, such as the friendship break-up; couples’ divorce; cooperation unreached among companies and so on. Why are there so many misunderstandings? As far as I am concerned, lack of communication mainly leads to misunderstanding. Sometimes people have no time or no opportunities to express their feelings or meanings clearly. Meanwhile the same expressions may have different meanings under different circumstances, just as the hand appearing in the picture above: it’s for life not for gift.So, in order to reduce misunderstanding and achieve an environment where the information can be exchanged efficiently and accurately, people need to express their meanings clearly by words, by gesturing, by writing, even by a smile or by an eye contact. 【随堂检测】请认真观察下面的漫画，然后简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，谈谈自己的思考和看法。 参考词汇：缸：vat；  漏出来：leak out；  漏洞：loophole          【思路点拨】审题1. 文体：漫画类作文，描述+议论2. 人称与时态：第一、三人称、现在进行时与一般现在时3. 要点：描述图片；自己的想法 谋篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the picture Paragraph 2: my understanding: loopholes are like the problems and shortcomings in our work and lifeParagraph 3: conclusion: find out the problems and correct the mistakes in time One possible versionIn the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However, with so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, they’ll never store any water, because no one tries to mend the holes.It reminds me of the problems in our study. While studying, we always try to read more books and do more exercises. However, we seldom pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made, nor do we try to correct them. Therefore, “holes” are left. Day by day, the “holes”, or rather the shortages, become more and more. No matter how many books we’ve read, we have never mastered any knowledge. They have leaked out because of the hole.So we should pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made and the holes we have in our study. Only in this way can we learn much knowledge and fill up our mind with it.