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    这是一份专题17 话题写作-传统文化-2021高考英语写作复习大全,共49页。试卷主要包含了 活动的主题及意义;2等内容,欢迎下载使用。
    专题17话题写作-传统文化-2021高考英语写作复习大全
    应用文写作|发言稿-“中国文化”
    假定你是李华。为弘扬中国文化,学生会将举办主题为“中国文化”的英语演讲比赛。 作为国际学校学生会主席,你将在比赛开始前发言。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
    1. 活动的主题及意义;2. 中国文化博大精深;3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。注意:1. 词数 100 词左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3. 短文开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
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    翻译小练习:
    1.下午好!欢迎参加今年的英语演讲比赛。
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    2. 作为学生会主席,我非常荣幸地向大家介绍一下有关学生会的情况:
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    3. 首先,本次演讲比赛的主题是中国文化,主要向外国人介绍。
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    4. 不用说,举办这个活动对我们来说是非常有意义的。
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    5. 这样做,不仅可以弘扬中华文化,而且可以增强文化自信。
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    6. 此外,我们还应该介绍中国文化博大精深。
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    7. 首先,我们有独特的语言,我们的民族艺术是丰富多彩的。另一方面,中国的传统节日有着悠久的历史。
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    8. 最后,我衷心希望今年的活动能够成功举办。感谢您的积极参与。
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    参考答案:
    1.下午好!欢迎参加今年的英语演讲比赛。
    Good afternoon! Welcome to this year's English speech competition.

    2. 作为学生会主席,我非常荣幸地向大家介绍一下有关学生会的情况:
    As the chairman of the Student Union, I am greatly honored to share aspects about it with you as follows:

    3. 首先,本次演讲比赛的主题是中国文化,主要向外国人介绍。
    Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chinese culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners.
    4. 不用说,举办这个活动对我们来说是非常有意义的。
    And it goes without saying that holding this activity is very meaningful to us.

    5. 这样做,不仅可以弘扬中华文化,而且可以增强文化自信。
    By doing so, not only can we carry forward Chinese culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.

    6. 此外,我们还应该介绍中国文化博大精深。
    In addition, we are supposed to introduce that Chinese culture is extensive and profound.

    7. 首先,我们有独特的语言,我们的民族艺术是丰富多彩的。另一方面,中国的传统节日有着悠久的历史。
    For one thing, we have unique language and our national arts are colorful. For another, Chinese traditional festivals have a long history.

    8. 最后,我衷心希望今年的活动能够成功举办。感谢您的积极参与。
    In the end, I sincerely hope that this year's activity will be held very successfully. And thank you for your active participation.

    【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
    Good afternoon! Welcome to this year's English speech competition. As the chairman of the Student Union, I am greatly honored to share aspects about it with you as follows:
      Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chinese culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners. And it goes without saying that holding this activity is very meaningful to us. By doing so, not only can we carry forward Chinese culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.
    In addition, we are supposed to introduce that Chinese culture is extensive and profound. For one thing, we have unique language and our national arts are colorful. For another, Chinese traditional festivals have a long history.
    In the end, I sincerely hope that this year's activity will be held very successfully. And thank you for your active participation.
    That's all! Thank you!
    应用文写作|建议信-中国文化日活动建议
    假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike所在的华盛顿中学将在7月举行中国文化日活动,他给你来信寻求活动的相关建议,请给他回信,内容包括:
    1.活动的内容和形式;
    2.说明推荐理由。
    注意:
    1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
    参考词汇:paper-cutting剪纸 calligraphy书法
    Dear Mike,
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    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    请翻译
    1. 我很高兴得知贵校将举办中国文化日活动。
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    2. 这是一个很好的机会,让你更多地了解中国文化。
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    3. 首先,剪纸展是个不错的选择。
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    4. 剪纸作为中国传统艺术,涵盖了植物、动物、传说等多种题材,是中国民间文化的生动反映。
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    5. 此外,举办中国书法比赛似乎是另一个明智的选择,因为它可以引起人们的兴趣,这对促进中美交流具有重要意义。
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    6. 此外,有关中国历史、建筑、诗歌甚至食物的讲座肯定会吸引那些热衷于中国文化的人的注意力。
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    参考答案:
    1. 我很高兴得知贵校将举办中国文化日活动。
    I’m more than glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Day activity will be held in your school.

    2. 这是一个很好的机会,让你更多地了解中国文化。
    It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.

    3. 首先,剪纸展是个不错的选择。
    First, a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice.

    4. 剪纸作为中国传统艺术,涵盖了植物、动物、传说等多种题材,是中国民间文化的生动反映。
    As a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk culture.

    5. 此外,举办中国书法比赛似乎是另一个明智的选择,因为它可以引起人们的兴趣,这对促进中美交流具有重要意义。
    Besides, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition seems to be another wise option, for it can arouse people’s interest, which is of significance in promoting the communication between Chinese and Americans.

    6. 此外,有关中国历史、建筑、诗歌甚至食物的讲座肯定会吸引那些热衷于中国文化的人的注意力。
    Additionally, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food are sure to arrest the attention of those keen on Chinese culture.

    【答案】Dear Mike,
    I’m more than glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Day activity will be held in your school. It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
    First, a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice. As a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk culture. Besides, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition seems to be another wise option, for it can arouse people’s interest, which is of significance in promoting the communication between Chinese and Americans. Additionally, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food are sure to arrest the attention of those keen on Chinese culture.
    I hope my advice will be of great help to you.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    这是一篇提纲类写作。
    第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike所在的华盛顿中学将在7月举行中国文化日活动,他给你来信寻求活动的相关建议,请给他回信,内容包括:1.活动的内容和形式;2.说明推荐理由。
    第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):more than glad,varieties of,a vivid reflection,arouse people’s interest,be of significance,be sure to,keen on等。
    第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
    第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.是固定句型;As a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk culture.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。






























    应用文写作|邀请信-邀请参加中国丝绸文化节
    假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda很喜欢中国文化,特别是丝绸。正巧你市于1月20 日至26日举行“中国丝绸文化节”,你想邀请她同去,请你给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
    1. 写信目的;
    2. 介绍文化节;
    3. 约定见面时间、地点。
    注意:1. 词数100左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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    请翻译:
    1. 我有好消息要告诉你。我知道您对中国文化特别是中国丝绸很感兴趣,特写信邀请您参加1月20日至26日在市政厅举行的中国丝绸文化节。
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    2. 中国丝绸文化节的主题是“中国用灿烂的丝绸惊艳世界”。丝绸是中国最珍贵的宝藏之一,享誉世界。
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    3. 在这个节日里,除了对丝绸历史的了解外,还展示了各种精美的丝绸产品,其中包括一些优雅的丝绸礼服。
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    4. 如果我们1月20日上午9点在市政厅门口见面,您方便吗?
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    5. 如果您能在方便的时候尽早确认您的到来,我将不胜感激。希望你能接受我的邀请。
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    参考答案
    1. 我有好消息要告诉你。我知道您对中国文化特别是中国丝绸很感兴趣,特写信邀请您参加1月20日至26日在市政厅举行的中国丝绸文化节。
    I have good news for you. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from Jan 20th to 26th in the City Hall.

    2. 中国丝绸文化节的主题是“中国用灿烂的丝绸惊艳世界”。丝绸是中国最珍贵的宝藏之一,享誉世界。
    The theme of the Chinese Silk Culture Festival is “China surprises the world with splendid silk”. Silk is one of China’s greatest treasures enjoying worldwide reputation.

    3. 在这个节日里,除了对丝绸历史的了解外,还展示了各种精美的丝绸产品,其中包括一些优雅的丝绸礼服。
    At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products are shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.

    4. 如果我们1月20日上午9点在市政厅门口见面,您方便吗?
    Would it be convenient for you if we meet at 9am on Jan 20th at the entrance of the City Hall?

    5. 如果您能在方便的时候尽早确认您的到来,我将不胜感激。希望你能接受我的邀请。
    I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience. Hopefully, you’ll accept my invitation.

    【答案】Dear Linda,
    I have good news for you. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from Jan 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
    The theme of the Chinese Silk Culture Festival is “China surprises the world with splendid silk”. Silk is one of China’s greatest treasures enjoying worldwide reputation. At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products are shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.
    Would it be convenient for you if we meet at 9am on Jan 20th at the entrance of the City Hall? I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience. Hopefully, you’ll accept my invitation.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
    第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封电子邮件:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda很喜欢中国文化,特别是丝绸。正巧你市于1月20 日至26日举行“中国丝绸文化节”,你想邀请她同去,请你给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 介绍文化节;3. 约定见面时间、地点。时态应为一般现在时。
    第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; Chinese Silk Culture Festival(中国丝绸文化节),splendid(灿烂的、极好的),especially(特别、尤其),reputation(声望), delicate(精美的)及invitation(邀请)等。
    第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
    范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有be interested in(对……感兴趣),invite sb to somewhere(邀请某人去某地),from…to…(从……到……)以及at sb's earliest convenience(在某人方便的时候),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products are shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.”,if引导条件句“Would it be convenient for you if we meet at 9am on Jan 20th at the entrance of the City Hall?”,形式宾语“I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.”,非谓语动词“Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from Jan 20th to 26th in the City Hall.”及“Silk is one of China’s greatest treasures enjoying worldwide reputation.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。


































    应用文写作|如何理解孝顺
    假如你是李华,从你的美国朋友John发给你的邮件中得知,他对中国的“孝顺”一词不理解,请你用英语给他写封邮件,谈谈你的看法。
    内容包括:1.你对“孝顺”的理解;
    2.你是如何做的。
    注意:1.词数:100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
    参考词汇:孝顺 filial piety
    Dear John,
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    Yours,
    Li Hua
    请翻译:
    1. 我很高兴收到你的邮件,知道你想知道什么是孝道。现在让我给你解释一下。
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    2. 在中国,孝道是一种重要的美德,这一点是普遍接受的。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 在我看来,这意味着尊重你的父母和老人。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 我通常花很多时间和父母聊天,陪他们散步,为他们做美味的食物。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 此外,我还和父母一起锻炼身体,努力学习以取悦他们。
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    6. 我会尽我所能让我的父母过上幸福的生活。
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    7. 总之,孝道是中国悠久的传统,将永远传承下去。
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    参考答案
    1. 我很高兴收到你的邮件,知道你想知道什么是孝道。现在让我给你解释一下。
    I’m so glad to receive your email, learning that you’d like to know what filial piety means. Now let me explain it to you.

    2. 在中国,孝道是一种重要的美德,这一点是普遍接受的。
    It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China.

    3. 在我看来,这意味着尊重你的父母和老人。
    In my opinion, it means respecting your parents and the elderly.

    4. 我通常花很多时间和父母聊天,陪他们散步,为他们做美味的食物。
    I usually spend much time chatting with my parents, accompanying them on walks and cooking delicious food for them.

    5. 此外,我还和父母一起锻炼身体,努力学习以取悦他们。
    Besides,I also take exercise with my parents and study hard to please them.

    6. 我会尽我所能让我的父母过上幸福的生活。
    I’ll do whatever I can to make my parents live a happy life.

    7. 总之,孝道是中国悠久的传统,将永远传承下去。
    In a word, filial piety is a long-standing tradition in China and will be kept and passed on forever.

    【答案】Dear John,
    I’m so glad to receive your email, learning that you’d like to know what filial piety means. Now let me explain it to you.
    It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. In my opinion, it means respecting your parents and the elderly. I usually spend much time chatting with my parents, accompanying them on walks and cooking delicious food for them. Besides,I also take exercise with my parents and study hard to please them. I’ll do whatever I can to make my parents live a happy life.
    In a word, filial piety is a long-standing tradition in China and will be kept and passed on forever.
    Yours.
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达属于提纲类书信,内容是中国传统文化的一部分。主要是要求学生向好友John解释“孝顺”一词的含义以及自己平时生活中是如何做到孝顺的。
    第1步:审题。确定时态。根据提示:你给John现在写一封邮件,解释“孝顺”一词的含义以及自己是如何做的。时态应为一般现在时。
    第2步:确定文章框架和内容。信件内容分为三段:首段表示自己很开心能回答问题,第二段说明自己对孝顺的理解以及自己的行为,第三段对自己的理解做个总结。
    第3步:确定关键词(组)。如:what filial piety means(孝顺意味着什么),be universally accepted(被普遍接受),an important virtue (一个重要的美德),accompanying them on walks(陪他们散步),a long-standing tradition(长久以来的传统)等。
    第4步:对写作要点遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第5步: 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
    本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。符合英语表达习惯,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
    范文内容完整,段落清晰,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。文章第一段第一句宾语从句使用地很巧妙,简单明了地复述了朋友想知道的问题。第二段首句使用了主语从句,第三句使用了三个并列的动名词短语,最后一句使用了主语从句和不定式。使用五句话,将信息表达的很全面很丰富。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。且全文语句间过渡自然,为文章增色添彩。






















    应用文写作|介绍信-介绍国画培训班
    假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim打算暑假期间来中国学习中国画,希望你帮他联系一个国画培训班。请你给他回信,内容如下:
    1. 表示欢迎;
    2. 内容和时间;
    3. 学费及食宿。
    注意:1. 词数80左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    请翻译:
    1. 我很高兴知道你对中国画很感兴趣,并计划今年暑假在中国修一门短期课程。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 国画培训班很多,其中以国家画院举办的夏令营最为精彩。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 在这个夏令营里,你将通过讲座、观察和练习,在五十天内学会中国画的基本功。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 这个项目收费相对适中,每周500元。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5.夏令营在学院举行,所以在校园内吃住非常方便和便宜。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 我很高兴知道你对中国画很感兴趣,并计划今年暑假在中国修一门短期课程。
    I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese painting and planning to take a short course in China this summer vacation.

    2. 国画培训班很多,其中以国家画院举办的夏令营最为精彩。
    There are many training courses on traditional Chinese painting, among which the summer camp held by the National Academy of Fine Arts is the best.

    3. 在这个夏令营里,你将通过讲座、观察和练习,在五十天内学会中国画的基本功。
    In this camp, you will learn basic skills of traditional Chinese painting in fifty days with lectures, observation and practice.
    4. 这个项目收费相对适中,每周500元。
    The program charges a relatively modest fee—500 yuan a week.

    5.夏令营在学院举行,所以在校园内吃住非常方便和便宜。
    The camp is held in the Academy, so it is very convenient and cheap to eat and live on campus.

    【答案】Dear Jim,
    I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese painting and planning to take a short course in China this summer vacation.
    There are many training courses on traditional Chinese painting, among which the summer camp held by the National Academy of Fine Arts is the best.
    In this camp, you will learn basic skills of traditional Chinese painting in fifty days with lectures, observation and practice. The program charges a relatively modest fee—500 yuan a week. The camp is held in the Academy, so it is very convenient and cheap to eat and live on campus.
    Hoping to see you soon!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给朋友Jim介绍国画班的情况。
    第一步:审题。
    体裁:信件应用文。
    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主。
    要点:1 欢迎Jim暑假期间来中国学习中国画;
    2 国画培训班信息:内容,时间,学费,食宿等
    结构布局:
    第一段:欢迎Jim暑假期间来中国学习中国画;
    第二段:国画班培训信息: 1一个月的国画基础班,学习绘画的基本技能,鉴赏国画;2 费用总共2000元;3 国画班在学校开办,学员食宿由学校提供。
    第三段: 期待相见。
    第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)

    如:keen interest, participate in, customize, last from, have a good eye, in charge of等
    第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)

    如:I am glad to hear that you have a keen interest in Chinese painting and want to participate in a training course in China during this summer vacation.等
    第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)

    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
    3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
    第五步:润色修改。
    【点睛】
    本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句,如“I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese painting and planning to take a short course in China this summer vacation.”使用的是宾语从句,“There are many training courses on traditional Chinese painting, among which the summer camp held by the National Academy of Fine Arts is the best.”使用的是which引导的非限制性定语从句,“The camp is held in the Academy, so it is very convenient and cheap to eat and live on campus.”使用的是so引导的并列句。主从复合句的使用,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。















    应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中国茶馆
    假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack看到中国很多地方都有茶馆,非常好奇,特写信向你咨询。请给Jack写封回信,介绍中国的茶馆。内容包括:
    1. 茶馆的作用;
    2. 茶馆的历史;
    3. 希望能够邀请Jack到茶馆品茶。
    注意:
    1. 词数80词左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    Dear Jack,
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    请翻译:
    1. 很高兴知道你对中国茶馆如此感兴趣,我写信给你一些有关它的情况。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 茶馆完美地反映了中国茶文化和人们的休闲生活。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 正如你所见,我们中国人聚在茶馆里不仅是为了喝茶,而且是为了和朋友们交往。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 茶馆起源于西晋,到了宋代成为风靡全国的社会风尚。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 今天,在西方文化的影响下,它呈现出新的面貌。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 为什么不来和我一起去茶馆尝尝呢?期待你的到来。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 很高兴知道你对中国茶馆如此感兴趣,我写信给你一些有关它的情况。
    Glad to know that you are so keen on the Chinese teahouse, I am writing to give you some relevant information about it.

    2. 茶馆完美地反映了中国茶文化和人们的休闲生活。
    Teahouses perfectly reflect our Chinese tea culture and people’s leisure lives.

    3. 正如你所见,我们中国人聚在茶馆里不仅是为了喝茶,而且是为了和朋友们交往。
    As you can see, we Chinese gather in teahouses not only to enjoy tea but to socialize with our friends.

    4. 茶馆起源于西晋,到了宋代成为风靡全国的社会风尚。
    Originating from the Western Jin Dynasty, the teahouse became in the Song Dynasty a fashionable social event spreading all over the country.

    5. 今天,在西方文化的影响下,它呈现出新的面貌。
    Today it takes on a new look under the influence of the western culture.

    6. 为什么不来和我一起去茶馆尝尝呢?期待你的到来。
    So why not come to join me and have a taste in a teahouse? Looking forward to your coming.

    【答案】参考范文
    Dear Jack,
    Glad to know that you are so keen on the Chinese teahouse, I am writing to give you some relevant information about it.
    Teahouses perfectly reflect our Chinese tea culture and people’s leisure lives. As you can see, we Chinese gather in teahouses not only to enjoy tea but to socialize with our friends. Originating from the Western Jin Dynasty, the teahouse became in the Song Dynasty a fashionable social event spreading all over the country. Today it takes on a new look under the influence of the western culture.
    So why not come to join me and have a taste in a teahouse? Looking forward to your coming.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua.
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英语给Jack写封回信,介绍中国的茶馆。
    第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
    结构:总分法
       总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:作文应包括以下要点:1. 茶馆的作用;2. 茶馆的历史;3. 希望能够邀请Jack到茶馆品茶。
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    be keen on; leisure lives; not only…but also…; socialize with; originate from; take on ; under the influence of; look forward to
    第三步:连词成句
    1.Glad to know that you are so keen on the Chinese teahouse, I am writing to give you some relevant information about it.
    2.Teahouses perfectly reflect our Chinese tea culture and people’s leisure lives.
    3.As you can see, we Chinese gather in teahouses not only to enjoy tea but to socialize with our friends.
    4.Originating from the Western Jin Dynasty, the teahouse became in the Song Dynasty a fashionable social event spreading all over the country.
    5.Today it takes on a new look under the influence of the western culture.
    6.So why not come to join me and have a taste in a teahouse?
    7.Looking forward to your coming.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
    第五步:润色修改
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:Glad to know that you are so keen on the Chinese teahouse, I am writing to give you some relevant information about it.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句;文章也使用了一些固定词组,如originate from; take on ; under the influence of; look forward to 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。








    应用文写作|介绍信-中国文化艺术节
    假定你是李华,下个月你校将举办“中国文化艺术节”。你校英国友好学校将派代表参加,请你代表学生会发邮件告知英方团长Mr. Smith有关细节,内容包括:
    1.自我介绍;
    2.活动安排;
    3.表达期待。
    注意:
    1.词数100字左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.参考词汇:代表团delegation
    Dear Mr. Smith,
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    请翻译:
    1. 我叫李华。我谨代表我校学生会,诚邀您和代表团参加“中国文化艺术节”。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 文化节是弘扬传统文化,促进文化交流的节日。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 它将为你提供一个舞台,让你可以体验不同形式的中国传统文化。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 本次文化节将展出相关书籍、图片、视频和实物,让您不仅能更好地了解中国传统文化,更能感受到中国传统文化的独特之美。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 当然,我们也为我们可爱的朋友准备了一些精彩的活动,比如包饺子、做汤圆、做月饼、学京剧。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 我们所有人都会为你和你的学生的到来感到高兴。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 我叫李华。我谨代表我校学生会,诚邀您和代表团参加“中国文化艺术节”。
    My name is Li Hua. On behalf of the Student Union of our school, I sincerely invite you and the delegation to participate in the “Chinese Culture and Art Festival”.

    2. 文化节是弘扬传统文化,促进文化交流的节日。
    The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange.

    3. 它将为你提供一个舞台,让你可以体验不同形式的中国传统文化。
    And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese cultures.

    4. 本次文化节将展出相关书籍、图片、视频和实物,让您不仅能更好地了解中国传统文化,更能感受到中国传统文化的独特之美。
    At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it.

    5. 当然,我们也为我们可爱的朋友准备了一些精彩的活动,比如包饺子、做汤圆、做月饼、学京剧。
    Of course, we also prepare some wonderful activities for our lovely friends, such as making dumplings and glutinous rice balls, making mooncakes, and learning Beijing Opera.

    6. 我们所有人都会为你和你的学生的到来感到高兴。
    All of us will feel pleased with the presence of you and your students.

    【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
    My name is Li Hua. On behalf of the Student Union of our school, I sincerely invite you and the delegation to participate in the “Chinese Culture and Art Festival”.
    The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange. And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese cultures. At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it. Of course, we also prepare some wonderful activities for our lovely friends, such as making dumplings and glutinous rice balls, making mooncakes, and learning Beijing Opera.
    All of us will feel pleased with the presence of you and your students.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件给英国友好学校代表团团长Mr. Smith,告知有关“中国文化艺术节”的细节。第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般将来时为主。
    结构:三段式结构。第一段自我介绍并表达邀请;第二段介绍活动安排;第三段表达期待。
    要求:1. 自我介绍并表达邀请(name; invite)
    2. 介绍活动安排
    1)艺术节目的(carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange)
    2)艺术节活动安排
    ①展品(related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited)
    ②体验活动(making dumplings and glutinous rice balls; making mooncakes; learning Beijing Opera)
    3. 表达期待(All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your students.)
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    on behalf of; invite sb. to; participate in; carry forward; provide sb. with sth; be exhibited; not only…but also; experience activities; such as; feel graced
    第三步:连词成句
    1. On behalf of the Student Union of our school, I sincerely invite you and the delegation to participate in the “Chinese Culture and Art Festival”.
    2. The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange.
    3. And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese.
    4. At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it.
    5. Of course, we also prepare some wonderful activities for our lovely friends, such as making dumplings and glutinous rice balls, making moon cakes, and learning Beijing Opera.
    6. All of us will feel pleased with the presence of you and your students.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
    第五步:润色修改
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
    1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:
    And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese.(它将为你提供一个舞台,在那里你可以尝试不同形式的繁体中文。)这句话运用了where引导的定语从句。
    At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it.(在文化节上,相关的书籍、图片、视频和物品将会被展出,通过展览,你不仅会更好的了解中国传统文化,而且肯定会感受到它的独特之美。)这句话中使用了“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句,且从句中使用了“not only…but also”句式。
    2.使用了一些固定词组,如on behalf of; invite sb. to; participate in; carry forward; provide sb. with sth; be exhibited; not only…but also; wonderful activities; such as; feel graced等。
    全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。


















    应用文写作|邀请信-邀请参加校园文化节
    假设你是红星中学的李华,你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节”(Campus Culture Festival)系列活动。请给你班留学生 Jim 写封邮件,邀请他参加其中一个活动。邮件的内容包括: 1.介绍你推荐的一个活动;2.说明你推荐这个活动的理由。
    注意:
    1. 词数 80 左右;
    2. 开头和结尾已经给出;
    3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Jim,
    How’s everything going?
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours
    Li Hua
    请翻译:
    1.一切都好吗?我写信是想邀请你参加下周五的校园文化节。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 我强烈推荐书法体验角。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 活动是为热爱书法的学生量身定做的。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 它将包括一位来自大学的专家为我们讲解书法的历史和杰作。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 既然你对中国书法很感兴趣,
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 我打赌你一定会抓住这个机会和那些和你有共同爱好的人交流思想。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    7. 你觉得怎么样?期待你的答复。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1.一切都好吗?我写信是想邀请你参加下周五的校园文化节。
    How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to our Campus Culture Festival next Friday.

    2. 我强烈推荐书法体验角。
    I highly recommend the Calligraphy Experience Corner.

    3. 活动是为热爱书法的学生量身定做的。
    The activity is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for calligraphy.

    4. 它将包括一位来自大学的专家为我们讲解书法的历史和杰作。
    It will include a lecture delivered by an expert from college informing us of the history and masterpieces of calligraphy.

    5. 既然你对中国书法很感兴趣,
    Since you have such a keen interest in Chinese calligraphy,

    6. 我打赌你一定会抓住这个机会和那些和你有共同爱好的人交流思想。
    I bet you will definitely seize the opportunity to exchange ideas with people who share your passion.

    7. 你觉得怎么样?期待你的答复。
    What do you think of it? I’m looking forward to your reply.

    【答案】Dear Jim,
    How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to our Campus Culture Festival next Friday.
    I highly recommend the Calligraphy Experience Corner. The activity is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for calligraphy. It will include a lecture delivered by an expert from college informing us of the history and masterpieces of calligraphy. Since you have such a keen interest in Chinese calligraphy, I bet you will definitely seize the opportunity to exchange ideas with people who share your passion.
    What do you think of it? I’m looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。
    第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是红星中学的李华,你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节”(Campus Culture Festival)系列活动。请给你班留学生 Jim 写封邮件,邀请他参加其中一个活动。邮件的内容包括: 1.介绍你推荐的一个活动;2.说明你推荐这个活动的理由。
    第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事);Campus Culture Festival(校园文化节);highly recommend(强烈推荐);tailor-made(量身订做的);have a burning passion for(非常喜爱);calligraphy(书法);inform sb of sth.(告知某人某事);masterpieces(杰作);have a keen interest in(对……有强烈兴趣)等。
    第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。
    第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如The activity is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for calligraphy.运用定语从句;Since you have such a keen interest in Chinese calligraphy, I bet you will definitely seize the opportunity to exchange ideas with people who share your passion.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。















    应用文写作|介绍信-介绍绿茶
    假定你是李华,给你开网店的英国朋友peter寄去了一包自家产的有机(organic)绿茶,并附有一份该茶的说明。请你给peter发封邮件,要点如下:
    1)请他品茶;
    2)说明该茶的特点(有机、绿色等);
    3)请他帮忙代卖该茶。
    注意:1)词数100左右;
    2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3)开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
    Dear Peter,
    How are you?
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours,
    Li Hua

    请翻译:
    1. 你好吗?我希望你和你的家人都很好。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 昨天我给你贴了一包茶,里面有对它的描述。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 我们家种茶,我们自己做茶制品。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 绿茶绿色有机,富含维生素等营养成分。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 你可以尝一尝,会发现它有多好吃。同时,我想请你帮个忙。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 我不知道你能不能在你们店里帮我卖茶。谢谢你的帮助!
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 你好吗?我希望你和你的家人都很好。
    How are you? I hope you and your family are quite well.

    2. 昨天我给你贴了一包茶,里面有对它的描述。
    Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you, inside which is a description for it.

    3. 我们家种茶,我们自己做茶制品。
    Our family plant tea and we make the tea product by ourselves.

    4. 绿茶绿色有机,富含维生素等营养成分。
    Green and organic, the tea is rich in nutrition like vitamins.

    5. 你可以尝一尝,会发现它有多好吃。同时,我想请你帮个忙。
    You can taste it and will find how nice it is. Meanwhile, I'd like to ask you a favor.

    6. 我不知道你能不能在你们店里帮我卖茶。谢谢你的帮助!
    I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop. Thank you for your help!

    【答案】
    Dear Peter,
        How are you? I hope you and your family are quite well.
        Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you, inside which is a description for it. Our family plant tea and we make the tea product by ourselves. Green and organic, the tea is rich in nutrition like vitamins. You can taste it and will find how nice it is. Meanwhile, I'd like to ask you a favor. I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop. Thank you for your help!
        Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
    【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份给peter发封邮件。写作背景:给你开网店的英国朋友peter寄去了一包自家产的有机绿茶,并附有一份该茶的说明。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)请他品茶;2)说明该茶的特点(有机、绿色等);3)请他帮忙代卖该茶。考生在写作过程中,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合题目所给出的信息,不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。
    【点评】本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如:I hope you and your family are quite well.运用了宾语从句;   Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you, inside which is a description for it. 运用了非限制性定语从句; You can taste it and will find how nice it is. 运用了并列句; I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop. 运用了宾语从句;Thank you for your help!运用了祈使句。


























    应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中国文化中颜色代表的含义
    假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Penny为了完成一篇题为 The meanings of colors in different cultures的论文,写信询问你中国文化中颜色代表的含义。请你写信回复她的问题,并提供具体的例子。
    注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已写好,不计人总数;
    3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    Dear Penny,
    How is everything going these days?
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    请翻译:
    1. 最近一切怎么样?在回答您的问题时,我非常高兴地介绍中国最具象征意义的两种颜色。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 毫无疑问,第一个是红色,象征着欢乐和庆祝。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 因此,中国新娘穿红色婚纱是传统。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 此外,白色通常与悲伤联系在一起,通常在葬礼上出现。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 然而,随着时间的变化,白色也可以代表纯洁。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 这就是为什么许多新娘在他们的婚礼上穿白色的衣服,就像在你们国家经常发生的那样。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    7. 希望我对中国色彩的介绍对你的文章有很大的帮助。祝你一切顺利。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 最近一切怎么样?在回答您的问题时,我非常高兴地介绍中国最具象征意义的两种颜色。
    How is everything going these days? In response to your questions, I am more than delighted to introduce two of the most symbolic colors in China.

    2. 毫无疑问,第一个是红色,象征着欢乐和庆祝。
    Without doubt, the first one is red, a symbol of joy and celebration.

    3. 因此,中国新娘穿红色婚纱是传统。
    Therefore, it is traditional for Chinese brides to wear a red wedding dress.

    4. 此外,白色通常与悲伤联系在一起,通常在葬礼上出现。
    In addition, white is conventionally associated with sadness, usually seen at the funerals.

    5. 然而,随着时间的变化,白色也可以代表纯洁。
    However, as time changes, white can also signify purity.

    6. 这就是为什么许多新娘在他们的婚礼上穿白色的衣服,就像在你们国家经常发生的那样。
    That's why many brides wear white in their wedding ceremonies, as is often the case in your country.

    7. 希望我对中国色彩的介绍对你的文章有很大的帮助。祝你一切顺利。
    Hopefully my introduction to colors in China is of great value for your essay. Wish you all the best.

    【答案】Dear Penny,
    How is everything going these days? In response to your questions, I am more than delighted to introduce two of the most symbolic colors in China. Without doubt, the first one is red, a symbol of joy and celebration. Therefore, it is traditional for Chinese brides to wear a red wedding dress. In addition, white is conventionally associated with sadness, usually seen at the funerals. However, as time changes, white can also signify purity. That's why many brides wear white in their wedding ceremonies, as is often the case in your country.
    Hopefully my introduction to colors in China is of great value for your essay. Wish you all the best.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给向你询问中国文化中颜色代表含义的英国笔友Penny,回复她的问题,并提供具体的例子。
    第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
    结构:总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:1. 中国文化中红白两种颜色的含义;
    2. 红白两种颜色的例子;
    3. 祝Penny一切都好。
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    in response to sth.;be delighted to do sth.;a symbol of sth.;be associated with sth.;wedding ceremony
    第三步:连词成句
    1. In response to your questions, I am more than delighted to introduce two of the most symbolic colors in China.
    2. the first one is red, a symbol of joy and celebration.
    3. white is conventionally associated with sadness,
    4. That's why many brides wear white in their wedding ceremonies,
    (根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
    5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say
    6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
    7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
    8.表选择:either…or…,or
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
    第五步:润色修改
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如That's why many brides wear white in their wedding ceremonies, as is often the case in your country.这句话中用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的表语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如in response to sth.,be delighted to do sth.,be associated with sth.等,为文章增色不少;并注意了句子的衔接,如 Therefore,In addition,However。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

















    应用文写作|邀请信-邀请过重阳节
    假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。请给外教 Johnson 写封邮件,邀请他一同前往。主要内容:
    1、出发及返回的时间;
    2、活动内容:包饺子,表演节目等。
    注意:1、字数 100 左右;
    2、开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    参考单词:敬老院:nursing home;重阳节 the Double Ninth Festival
    Dear Johnson,
    How is everything going these days?
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    请翻译:
    1. 最近一切怎么样?
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的疗养院参加重阳节。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 在我们的文化中,这是老年人的节日。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 我们要去和那里的老人一起包饺子和做蛋糕。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 我们还会一起唱歌、跳舞和玩游戏,希望能让他们开心。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 我们应该下午4点左右回来。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    7. 如果你能和我们一起去,请告诉我们,我们会在早上9点在学校门口等你。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 最近一切怎么样?
    How is everything going these days?

    2. 我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的疗养院参加重阳节。
    I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.

    3. 在我们的文化中,这是老年人的节日。
    It is the day for the elderly in our culture.

    4. 我们要去和那里的老人一起包饺子和做蛋糕。
    We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.

    5. 我们还会一起唱歌、跳舞和玩游戏,希望能让他们开心。
    We'll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.

    6. 我们应该下午4点左右回来。
    We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.

    7. 如果你能和我们一起去,请告诉我们,我们会在早上9点在学校门口等你。
    If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

    【答案】Dear Johnson,
    How is everything going these days?
    I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
    第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。请给外教 Johnson 写封邮件,邀请他一同前往。主要内容:1、出发及返回的时间;2、活动内容:包饺子,表演节目等。
    第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事);nursing home(敬老院);the Double Ninth Festival(重阳节);the elderly(老人);make dumplings(包饺子);be able to(能够);come with(与……一起);wait for sb.(等待某人)等。
    第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
    第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如We'll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.运用非限制性定语从句;If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。



















    应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中国人三世同堂
    假定你是李华,英国高中生Peter在中国研学时曾暂住你家。他回国后给你写信感谢你的招待,并在信中委婉表示对你家三世同堂感到惊讶。请你写一封回信,简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。
    注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________

    请翻译:
    1. 很高兴听到你的消息,知道你平安回来了。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    2. 你似乎很惊讶我的祖父母、父母和我——三代人——生活在一起。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    3. 其实这在中国是很普遍的做法。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    4. 正如中国传统伦理所显示的,我们中国人从小就被培养成“尊老爱幼”
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    5. 大家庭经常住在一起,这样我们就可以互相支持和照顾。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    6. 这样,家庭成员可以培养归属感,也可以加强我们的家庭关系。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    7. 我很乐意再次在中国接待你们。让我们保持联系。期待您的答复。
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    参考答案
    1. 很高兴听到你的消息,知道你平安回来了。
    I’m delighted to hear from you and know you are safe back.

    2. 你似乎很惊讶我的祖父母、父母和我——三代人——生活在一起。
    You seem to be surprised that my grandparents, my parents and I---all three generations--- live together.

    3. 其实这在中国是很普遍的做法。
    Actually this is common practice in China.

    4. 正如中国传统伦理所显示的,我们中国人从小就被培养成“尊老爱幼”
    As the traditional Chinese ethic shows, we Chinese are brought up to “Respect the elderly and care for the young.”

    5. 大家庭经常住在一起,这样我们就可以互相支持和照顾。
    Extended families often live together so we can support and take care of each other.

    6. 这样,家庭成员可以培养归属感,也可以加强我们的家庭关系。
    This way, family members can develop a sense of belonging, as well as strengthen our family ties.

    7. 我很乐意再次在中国接待你们。让我们保持联系。期待您的答复。
    I would be more than happy to host you in China again. Let’s keep in touch. Looking forward to your reply.

    【答案】Dear Peter,
    I’m delighted to hear from you and know you are safe back.
    You seem to be surprised that my grandparents, my parents and I---all three generations--- live together. Actually this is common practice in China. As the traditional Chinese ethic shows, we Chinese are brought up to “Respect the elderly and care for the young.” Extended families often live together so we can support and take care of each other. This way, family members can develop a sense of belonging, as well as strengthen our family ties.
    I would be more than happy to host you in China again. Let’s keep in touch. Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【解析】
    本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国高中生Peter写封邮件,简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。
    第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
    结构:总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:
    简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    be delighted to do; all three generations; live together; common practice; respect the elderly; care for the young; support and take care of each other; develop a sense of belonging; strengthen our family ties
    第三步:连词成句
    1. I’m delighted to hear from you and know you are safe back.
    2. You seem to be surprised that my grandparents, my parents and I---all three generations--- live together.
    3. Actually this is common practice in China.
    4. As the traditional Chinese ethic shows, we Chinese are brought up to “Respect the elderly and care for the young.”
    5. Extended families often live together so we can support and take care of each other.
    6. This way, family members can develop a sense of belonging, as well as strengthen our family ties.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    1.表并列补充关系:As well as
    2.表因果关系:So
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
    【点睛】
    [高分句型1].As the traditional Chinese ethic shows, we Chinese are brought up to “Respect the elderly and care for the young.”(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
    [高分句型2]I’m delighted to hear from you and know you are safe back.(省略that的宾语从句)

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