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2020-2021学年上海 初三英语二模汇编-作文汇编. （教师版）docx练习题
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这是一份2020-2021学年上海 初三英语二模汇编-作文汇编. （教师版）docx练习题，共17页。试卷主要包含了【奉贤区】，照抄阅读语篇不得分，【普陀区】，【青浦区】，【松江区】，【徐汇区】，【宝山区】，【长宁区】等内容，欢迎下载使用。
2020-2021学年初三英语二模汇编-作文
1.【奉贤区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一封信给他，你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。
(注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
【参考范文】
Dear Wang,
I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua. It is great honor to tell you the changes in our school.
There are lots of changes happened in our school, one of them is the sports changing. For example, now we can have more time to do some sports after class to relax ourselves. To be more concrete, time we have sports compared with past days that added for about one hour. Now we have ping pang,soccer and baseball games. That really made our students healthier and study better than before. It made our school spirited. And the relationship of students and teacher become better and better.
We are all looking forwarding to seeing you.
Best wishes for you!
给王老师的一封信-介绍学校生活
要点提示
好词好句
开头：介绍自己，然后引出话题，给王老师介绍学校的日常
It’s great honor to do 做某事是我的荣幸
正文：具体展开介绍校园的变化、开展的活动、关于校园生活的点滴，这些带来的好处优点
There be句型
To be more concrete 更具体地说
compare with 与什么比较
make sb./sth. adj. 使得某人/某事怎么样
more and more 越来越...
look forward to doing 期待....
结尾：诚挚的期待和祝愿
look forward to doing 期待....
Best wishes for you! 给您最好的祝愿！
2.【崇明区】
Writing （作文）(共20分)
Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three years’ time” （以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标定符合不占格。）
你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
【参考范文】
In three years’ time
There is no denying that the world is changing fast. I do believe that my life will be different in three years' time. On one hand, it will be more convenient, we can study at home. Whether we go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. Certainly, unlike the last special year, we had to study on line because of the virus . On the other hand, the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly, The number of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising. I hope the world will be more beautiful. To achieve this, I need to learn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Call on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.
三年以后
要点提示
好词好句
开头：点题，通过世界飞速发展引出三年后的生活
There is no denying that the world is changing fast.不可否认的是世界正在飞快地改变
正文：通过正反两个反面来介绍三年以后的生活
On one hand.在一方面
Whether....or nor...不论,是否
The number of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising.
喜欢到处扔垃圾的人的数量在不断增加
take part in doing sth 参加
fighting against 与....作斗争
结尾：点明主旨，总领全文
Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.通过倒装句强调一起努力让我们的未来在三年后变得更好
3.【普陀区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “_______ has won my respect”. （以“……赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：Aunt Sandy 用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合体事例谈谈自己的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）
【参考范文】
My father has won my respect
The people I respect the most is my father.
He is a doctor. He always busy with work. Since I could remember, he has never spent a whole weekend to stay with me. He goes to the hospital very early before I get up, and comes back home after I sleep. But I doesn’t matter at all. He is a hero to me. He devotes almost all the time to his patients, and many lives are saved.
He always said, a man should have dignity, integrity, honor, and most of all, be helpful to others. This affected me deeply, so I work hard so that someday I can be the man like my father.
我的父亲赢得了我的尊敬
要点提示
好词好句
开头：直接点明我最尊敬的人是我的父亲
The people I respect the most is my father. 我最尊敬的人是我的父亲
正文：介绍父亲的相关信息，以及我对父亲的看法
come back home 回家
not at all 一点也不，根本不
devote to 致力于...
结尾：借用父亲说的一句话，最后表达出自己的愿景
a man should have dignity, integrity, honor, and most of all, be helpful to others. 一个人应该有尊严、正直、荣誉，最重要的是，要乐于助人。
4.【青浦区】
Writing:(作文)(共20分)
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "A valuable lesson”(请以“宝贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
提示:在学习与生活中,我们会因为经历了一些事情,获得体验,增加阅历,吸取教训。请以“宝贵的一课”为题,结合你的经历,谈谈你的感受。
注意：
抄袭试卷中内容不得分。
文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
【范文参考】
A valuable lesson
During our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons, because they can taught something important about ourselves. As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.
During the summer vacation of my seventh grade, our class went to to an orphan home in our city to help the children there. At first, we gave away some meaningful story books and stationery to them. Then we talked about our school life to them. I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. And I even showed some children some skills which I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.
That volunteer work really taught me a lesson, which I will never forget. I felt the truth of those words, which I never understood before that: “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” That day, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others. More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.
宝贵的一课
要点提示
好词好句
开头：扣题，引出最宝贵的一课
During our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons...As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.
在我们生活中，有许多有意义的课给我们带来深刻的领悟...
对我来说，我最不能忘怀的是第一次的志愿者的经历。
正文：举出实例
During the summer vacation of my seventh grade
在我七年级的暑假期间
give away story books and stationery 分发故事书和文具
I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission.
我之前很害羞，令我惊讶的是，我不停歇地跟其他孩子交谈了将近一个小时
share effective study methods 分享高效学习方法
I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better.
我从体育老师那里学会怎样把羽毛球打好
teach sb a lesson 给某人上一课
“It is more blessed to give than to receive.” 授人以鱼不如授人以渔
I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others.
我不但得到了幸福，而且变得更自信外放去和其他人交流
结尾：点明主旨
More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.
总结连词和that宾语从句
5.【松江区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words according to the following information.
意大利爷爷Paterno的励志故事使它成为很多青少年的偶像。相信在生活学习中你也有一位想效仿或追随的榜样。请以“A model I want to follow”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
【参考范文】
A model I want to follow
I have a model in my heart in soccer field -- Messi, the model I want to follow. From my prospective, in the present soccer field, I do not think anyone else can match him. First of all, his great ball controlling skills brought a world of fans fantastic exclamation. He is not only fast but also can easily cross the defenders who intend to stop him. Moreover, it is his talent, which can even match the god of soccer -- Marodona, his diligence and precious quality that deeply attract me. Ultimately, he is the model with distinguished characteristic I want to follow because I am fond of soccer, the real artistic soccer. Therefore, I will study hard and try my best to promote my soccer skill to catch up with him in order to be an outstanding soccer player.
我想追随的一位偶像
要点提示
好词好句
开头：直接说明我在足球方面有一位追求的偶像
From my prospective. 在我看来
正文：通过正反两个反面来介绍三年以后的生活
First of all 首先
He is not only fast but also can easily cross the defenders who intend to stop him.
他不仅速度快，而且可以轻松越过打算阻止他的防守队员
Ultimately 最终
Be fond of 对...喜爱
Therefore 因此
结尾：表明理想和决心 点明主旨
in order to 为了
catch up with 追上
6.【徐汇区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Suppose you are interested in dearMars Project, and you send an e-mail to dearMarsproject@****.com based on one of the given situations.
Situation1: You want to be one of the crew members to the Mars. You write to apply for a seat in the rocket.
Situation2: You want to know more about the project, hoping to get more detailed information.
假设你对dear Mars 的项目感兴趣，你选择所给情景之一完成一封发送给 dearMarsproject@****.com的电子邮件（不少于60词）
(注意：邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
【参考范文】
Dear dear Marsproject,
When I was young, I always wondered what was in the sky. I wished that one day I could fly into space to find the secrets of the universe. Now I am more interested in space. Yang Liwei became the first Chinese astronaut to get into space and Zhai Zhigang became the first Chinese to walk in space. All the Chinese people are very proud of them and so am I. When I read the dear Mars Project plan, I was very excited. As a common youth, I want to get a chance to fly to the Mars. If I become a member of dear Mars project, I will do my best to support other crew member.
Best wishes for you!
一封电子邮件
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出我想去太空发现宇宙奥秘
Find the secrets of the universe 发现宇宙奥秘
正文：介绍对太空感兴趣的原因
be proud of them 以他们为骄傲
as a common youth 作为一名普通的青年
get a chance 得到一个机会
become a member of... 成为......的成员
结尾：点明主旨
do my best to support other crew member 尽我最大的努力支持其他成员
7.【宝山区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “______ made me a better person.” (请以“……使我成为更好的自己”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或者某个人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承担责任；使我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。
(注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)
An Experience in the Rain Made me a Better Person
In the passing days of my junior high school life, a remarkably impressive and unforgettable experience always lingers in my mind, making me a better person ever since.
One heavy raining Saturday afternoon, when I was on my way to the tutoring center near my home, I witnessed an elderly man stumbling behind his wheelchair on the main road without an umbrella in his hands. Hesitating and struggling, I didn’t have any courage to come close to the man at first, but 20 seconds (maybe more than that) later, a clear voice—always be ready to help others—drove me to extend my helping hand. In the end, I accompanied the elderly man with my umbrella to his home.
It was an experience that made me a better person and reminded me to take a share of social responsibility without any hesitation.
一次在雨中的经历使我成为更好的自己
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出经历话题，进行点题展开
In the passing days of my junior high school life, a remarkably impressive and unforgettable experience always lingers in my mind, making me a better person ever since. 在我初中生活的日子里，一段令人印象深刻和难忘的经历一直萦绕在我的脑海里，使我成为一个更好的人。
正文：叙述雨中经历
on one’s way to 到......去的途中
have courage to do 有勇气去做......
be ready to do 准备好做......
drive sb. to do 驱使某人去干某事
In the end 最后，最终
accompany with 伴随着，兼带着
结尾：点明主旨
It was an experience that made me a better person and reminded me to take a share of social responsibility without any hesitation. 这是一次使我成为更好的自己的经历，也让我毫不犹豫地承担起社会责任。
8.【长宁区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Keep patient when facing difficulties”(请以“面对困难保持耐心”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
阅读文章（C）篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心，还提出用2 种方式来帮助我们克服这样的缺点，在我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心，请你以一个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。
（注意：文中不得摘录试卷阅读原文，不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
Keep patient when facing difficulties
I still remember the first time I rode bicycle when I was seven. My sister pushed the bicycle to help me. Few minutes later, she let it go, and I fell in the ground. She asked me to try one more time, while I was extremely impatient after failing several times. The way she told didn’t suit me quite well. At last I took a deep breath, and tried my best to have the final time. Unbelievable, I succeed. When I am in trouble now, I always tell myself “keep patient and don’t give up.” Maybe just try another time, everyone will taste the fruits of victory.
Keep patient when facing difficulties
要点提示
好词好句
开头：我七岁时骑自行车的经历
Push the bicycle to help me 推自行车帮我
正文：耐心克服困难的经历
The way she told didn’t suit me quite well 她教我的方式不太适合我
Took a deep breath 深呼吸
Try my best to have the final time 全力以赴尝试最后一次
Be in trouble 处在困难中
Don’t give up 不言弃
结尾：点明主旨
Taste the fruits of victory 收获胜利的果实
9.【金山区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the topic“Keep your mind open.” (以“敞开心扉/心胸开阔”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在生活中，你对你的生活满意吗？不满意的话，是什么原因呢？如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物。从不同的角度去思考问题，可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺势逆境的）。
(注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)
Keep your mind open
In our daily life, we sometimes don’t feel satisfied with our life especially when we meet difficult situations, such as getting a low mark, losing a precious gift and so on. Once I got a low mark with my English paper. I really felt disappointed and wanted to give it up. But my parents encouraged me to keep my mind open. They told me failure is the key to success. I agreed with them. From then on , when I feel frustrated, I always think of my parents’ word. In a word, we should keep our mind open when we face the difficulties.
敞开心扉/心胸开阔
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出为什么要敞开心扉的原因
feel satisfied with 对...满意
正文：举出实例
get a low mark 得低分
feel disappointed 感到失望
encourage sb to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
failure is the key to success. 失败是成功的关键
feel frustrated 感到犹豫
face the difficulties 面对困难
结尾：提出解决方案，点明主旨
In a word, we should keep our mind open when we face the difficulties.
总结连词和when时间状语从句
10.【虹口区】
Writing (作文)：（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to get close to …”(以“我想要走近......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)（共20分）
人的一生会遇到很多美好的事物，人、物、景等各种美好的存在都会吸引我们走近。请写写你想走近什么？怎么走近？说说你的理由。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分）
I’d like to get close to history
I’m always interested in many history events which happened in the past. So I’d like to get close to history to find out the life of ancient people.
To get close to it, I will surf on the Internet when I have free time. In addition, I can read some interesting stories. Because in this way I will not only learn their wise thoughts ,but also realize the importance of life. History enables me to learn from the past and that is why I’d like to get close to history.
我想要走近历史
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出主题走近历史
be interested in many history events 对很多历史事件感兴趣
正文：介绍走近历史的方式
surf on the Internet 上网
have free time空闲时间
Read some interesting stories 读有趣的故事
in this way 以这种方式
Not only...but also...不仅......而且......
Enable me to learn from the past 使我能够从过往中学习
结尾：点明主旨
That’s why I’d like to get close to history. 这是我想要走近历史的原因
11.【杨浦区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given topic “________ has changed me”. (以“________ 改变了我”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化、都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Confidence has changed me
Recently I’ve had a change in my life. It makes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.
The story happened a year ago. At that time I was very poor at math and my maths score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some maths problems, I told myself “You should be confident and you can do it”. And out of my expectation, I got an A in my maths exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for maths and there is nothing that we cannot do if we are confident enough.
自信改变了我
要点提示
好词好句
开头：总的说在生活中有很多改变来引出话题自信改变了我
have a change in one’s life& make sth.adj.和运用感叹句作宾语从句
正文：叙述到底是怎样的一个故事让我得到启发，自信改变了我
At that time 在那时
be poor at 不擅长
be mad at sb. 对某人生气
tell sb.sth. 告诉某人某事
believe in oneself 相信某人自己
meet with 遇到...
Out of one’s expectation 出乎某人的意料
Not until 直到......时候才
结尾：点明主题
倒装句和there be句型的复合句结尾
12.【嘉定区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以“I chose to ”为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择?
（注意：请先将题目补充完整，短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
l choose to be/do
l make up my mind
l encourage me to
I chose to exercise everyday
As a student who is going to graduate from junior high school, though time is quite tight for me to study, I still choose to stick to exercise everyday.
Many people think that exercise makes them tired and they can’t find time to do this due to busy work and study. On the contrary, I believe exercise keeps me fit and energetic so that I rarely fall ill. Besides, every time I finish exercising, I feel a clear mind, so I can focus on my study better. Then, in my opinion, exercise won’t cost a person much time. On weekday, I usually spend 30 minutes running on our school’s playground after school. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends for an hour. Thus, it won’t take me a lot of time and the pressure accumulated during the week can completely vanish.
In conclusion, exercise is a good choice for both our body and mind. I will continue to be firm in my choice.
我选择每天锻炼
要点提示
好词好句
开头：通过对比其他人每天学习，引出自己锻炼话题的展开
As a student who is going to graduate from junior high school
作为一个即将从初中毕业的学生
正文：阐述选择锻炼的原因
On the contrary 正相反
due to 由于
focus on 关注于
in my opinion 在我看来
Thus 因此
the pressure accumulated during the week can completely vanish
一周内积累的压力可以完全消失
结尾：点明主旨
In conclusion 最后
be firm in 对...紧定不移
13.【黄浦区】Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation. (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在生活中，要取得成就，往往需要勇气。你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难，承认错误，拒绝他人，或者克服恐惧。你是如何理解勇气的呢？请以“I have the courage to...（我有勇气……）”为题，结合自己的经历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
I have the courage to face my fear
I used to be a coward, just like Jerry in his classmates eyes. I am afraid of getting a poor score, I am afraid of changes in my life, and I am ever afraid to go to bathroom alone at night. I don’t want to risk anything to see the world. So I hardly go out for a holiday. Once a classmate who I really liked came up to me and asked whether I’d like to have a trip to the nearby city with her. I agreed. When I came back, I still remembered the different things and delicious food in that city, which I had never met before.
Fear disappeared and I realized that I have the courage to face my fear.
I have the courage to face my fear
要点提示
好词好句
开头：介绍自己过去对事物的恐惧
be afraid of changes in my life 恐惧生活中的改变
正文：介绍自己直面恐惧的一件事
Ask whether I’d like to have a trip to the nearby city with her 问我是否想要和她一起去附近的城市旅行
Came back 回来
Remember the different things 记得不同的事物
Had never met before 以前从未遇见的
结尾：点明主旨
Fear disappeared 恐惧消失了
14.【闵行区】Writing(作文)(20 分)
Write at least 60 words on the topic“My funnest family memory”(根据提示，以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示:回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。)
My funnest family memory
There are countless interesting things in our family. Let me tell you one thing. It’s about eating.
I remember once again, when I was at my grandma’s house, it was going to a dinner. My stomach was hungry and sang "I want to eat". I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food.,feeling very spicy, asked her mother: "Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot?" Mom ran over and tasted vegetable pepper and said, "This is not vegetable pepper, it's pepper!" "Ah?, I asked in confusion. This is chili, no wonder it's so spicy." "Give me some water!" The family laughed when they heard it. In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
我最有趣的家庭回忆
要点提示
好词好句
开头：开头点题，提出最有趣的回忆是什么
There are countless interesting things in our family. Let me tell you one thing. It’s about...
在我们家庭里有数不胜数的有趣之事，今天让我给你们讲一件特别的事，它就是...
正文：举出实例
have a bite of the food 吃了一小口食物
in confusion 迷惑
no wonder 难怪
In fact 事实上
waiting for us to discover 等着我们去发现
结尾：提出解决方案，点明主旨
As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
as long as条件状语从句
15.【静安区】Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的映像。
请以“Making learning fun(乐中学)”为题，分享你的经历或感想。
(注意: 1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不子评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
【答案】
Making learning fun
I’ve joined in various after-class meaningful activities, of which the volunteer one in the local nursing house is the most impressive. Several classmates and I volunteered there every weekend last year. We did some cleaning, chatted with the old and read newspapers to them. After finishing the whole activity, I benefited a lot because I got meaningful lessons and fun. First, cleaning the nursing house develops my ability of doing chore, which prepares me for living independently in future. Second, talking with the old and reading newspapers to them improve my communication skills and bring me much fun. Therefore, this activity offers me so many benefits that it’s really impressive and unforgettable.
乐中学习
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出哪次活动对自己的深刻影响
I have joined in various ... activities, of which the ... is the most impressive.我已经参加了各种各样...的活动, 其中...的活动让我刻骨铭心。
正文：举出实例以及得到的收获
after doing sth.= after +句子 之后做某事。
benefit a lot. 收益许多
get meaningful lessons and fun. 得到有意义的课程和乐趣
develop the ability of doing chore 提升做家务的能力
live independently 独立生活
improve communication skills 提升沟通技巧
offer sb so many benefits 提供许多好处
结尾：点明主旨
Therefore, this activity offers me so many benefits that it’s really impressive and unforgettable.
总结连词和so that结果状语从句
16.【浦东新区】Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words about the topic“A (n) with love”
(请以“爱的 ”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。)
在上文中，祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱，我们一定收到过带有满满爱意的物品。请你分享一下关于这个物品的故事，并谈谈你的感受或它对你的影响。
(注意:短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
【参考范文】
A Letter with Love
Looking through my life, a special letter is always the first thing coming to my mind when I think of love.
It’s a summer night when I receive that letter from my teacher. She is an elegant lady with warm heart. She always teaches us to be kind and friendly. During the daytime I argued with another student simply because of a small issue which I couldn’t remember it now. I said some bad words that really hurt that student. When our teacher knew that, I was crying because I felt it’s difficult to control my emotion. Instead of blaming on me, she helped me to say sorry to that student and left. After a few minutes, she came back with a letter. I was so surprised to find there were only encouraging words in that letter. She said she was confident in me and fully trusted me. I felt deeply love from her. After that, I tried my best to be a nice person and love people around me just like what she has done.
That was a letter with love from a teacher to her students, I believe that it’s from this letter that I really learned how to love others as well.
爱的一封信
要点提示
好词好句
开头：点题，表明脑海中想到关于爱的事情就是一封特别的信
Looking through my life 纵观我的一生
come to my mind 涌入脑海
正文：举出实例以及得到的收获
because of a small issue which I couldn’t remember it now.
因为一个我现在记不起来了的小问题
Instead of doing sth 而不是 代替
Blame on ... 责怪...
I tried my best to be a nice person and love people around me just like what she has done
我尽我所能地去做一个好人，像她一样爱着身边的人
结尾：点明主旨
I believe that it’s from this letter that I really learned how to love others as well.
通过I believe that...的句型，点题且表明自己收获到了爱也会学会去爱其他人
2020-2021学年初三英语二模汇编-作文
1.【奉贤区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一封信给他，你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。
(注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
【参考范文】
Dear Wang,
I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua. It is great honor to tell you the changes in our school.
There are lots of changes happened in our school, one of them is the sports changing. For example, now we can have more time to do some sports after class to relax ourselves. To be more concrete, time we have sports compared with past days that added for about one hour. Now we have ping pang,soccer and baseball games. That really made our students healthier and study better than before. It made our school spirited. And the relationship of students and teacher become better and better.
We are all looking forwarding to seeing you.
Best wishes for you!
给王老师的一封信-介绍学校生活
要点提示
好词好句
开头：介绍自己，然后引出话题，给王老师介绍学校的日常
It’s great honor to do 做某事是我的荣幸
正文：具体展开介绍校园的变化、开展的活动、关于校园生活的点滴，这些带来的好处优点
There be句型
To be more concrete 更具体地说
compare with 与什么比较
make sb./sth. adj. 使得某人/某事怎么样
more and more 越来越...
look forward to doing 期待....
结尾：诚挚的期待和祝愿
look forward to doing 期待....
Best wishes for you! 给您最好的祝愿！
2.【崇明区】
Writing （作文）(共20分)
Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three years’ time” （以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标定符合不占格。）
你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
【参考范文】
In three years’ time
There is no denying that the world is changing fast. I do believe that my life will be different in three years' time. On one hand, it will be more convenient, we can study at home. Whether we go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. Certainly, unlike the last special year, we had to study on line because of the virus . On the other hand, the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly, The number of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising. I hope the world will be more beautiful. To achieve this, I need to learn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Call on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.
三年以后
要点提示
好词好句
开头：点题，通过世界飞速发展引出三年后的生活
There is no denying that the world is changing fast.不可否认的是世界正在飞快地改变
正文：通过正反两个反面来介绍三年以后的生活
On one hand.在一方面
Whether....or nor...不论,是否
The number of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising.
喜欢到处扔垃圾的人的数量在不断增加
take part in doing sth 参加
fighting against 与....作斗争
结尾：点明主旨，总领全文
Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.通过倒装句强调一起努力让我们的未来在三年后变得更好
3.【普陀区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “_______ has won my respect”. （以“……赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：Aunt Sandy 用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合体事例谈谈自己的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）
【参考范文】
My father has won my respect
The people I respect the most is my father.
He is a doctor. He always busy with work. Since I could remember, he has never spent a whole weekend to stay with me. He goes to the hospital very early before I get up, and comes back home after I sleep. But I doesn’t matter at all. He is a hero to me. He devotes almost all the time to his patients, and many lives are saved.
He always said, a man should have dignity, integrity, honor, and most of all, be helpful to others. This affected me deeply, so I work hard so that someday I can be the man like my father.
我的父亲赢得了我的尊敬
要点提示
好词好句
开头：直接点明我最尊敬的人是我的父亲
The people I respect the most is my father. 我最尊敬的人是我的父亲
正文：介绍父亲的相关信息，以及我对父亲的看法
come back home 回家
not at all 一点也不，根本不
devote to 致力于...
结尾：借用父亲说的一句话，最后表达出自己的愿景
a man should have dignity, integrity, honor, and most of all, be helpful to others. 一个人应该有尊严、正直、荣誉，最重要的是，要乐于助人。
4.【青浦区】
Writing:(作文)(共20分)
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "A valuable lesson”(请以“宝贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
提示:在学习与生活中,我们会因为经历了一些事情,获得体验,增加阅历,吸取教训。请以“宝贵的一课”为题,结合你的经历,谈谈你的感受。
注意：
抄袭试卷中内容不得分。
文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
【范文参考】
A valuable lesson
During our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons, because they can taught something important about ourselves. As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.
During the summer vacation of my seventh grade, our class went to to an orphan home in our city to help the children there. At first, we gave away some meaningful story books and stationery to them. Then we talked about our school life to them. I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. And I even showed some children some skills which I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.
That volunteer work really taught me a lesson, which I will never forget. I felt the truth of those words, which I never understood before that: “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” That day, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others. More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.
宝贵的一课
要点提示
好词好句
开头：扣题，引出最宝贵的一课
During our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons...As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.
在我们生活中，有许多有意义的课给我们带来深刻的领悟...
对我来说，我最不能忘怀的是第一次的志愿者的经历。
正文：举出实例
During the summer vacation of my seventh grade
在我七年级的暑假期间
give away story books and stationery 分发故事书和文具
I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission.
我之前很害羞，令我惊讶的是，我不停歇地跟其他孩子交谈了将近一个小时
share effective study methods 分享高效学习方法
I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better.
我从体育老师那里学会怎样把羽毛球打好
teach sb a lesson 给某人上一课
“It is more blessed to give than to receive.” 授人以鱼不如授人以渔
I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others.
我不但得到了幸福，而且变得更自信外放去和其他人交流
结尾：点明主旨
More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.
总结连词和that宾语从句
5.【松江区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words according to the following information.
意大利爷爷Paterno的励志故事使它成为很多青少年的偶像。相信在生活学习中你也有一位想效仿或追随的榜样。请以“A model I want to follow”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
【参考范文】
A model I want to follow
I have a model in my heart in soccer field -- Messi, the model I want to follow. From my prospective, in the present soccer field, I do not think anyone else can match him. First of all, his great ball controlling skills brought a world of fans fantastic exclamation. He is not only fast but also can easily cross the defenders who intend to stop him. Moreover, it is his talent, which can even match the god of soccer -- Marodona, his diligence and precious quality that deeply attract me. Ultimately, he is the model with distinguished characteristic I want to follow because I am fond of soccer, the real artistic soccer. Therefore, I will study hard and try my best to promote my soccer skill to catch up with him in order to be an outstanding soccer player.
我想追随的一位偶像
要点提示
好词好句
开头：直接说明我在足球方面有一位追求的偶像
From my prospective. 在我看来
正文：通过正反两个反面来介绍三年以后的生活
First of all 首先
He is not only fast but also can easily cross the defenders who intend to stop him.
他不仅速度快，而且可以轻松越过打算阻止他的防守队员
Ultimately 最终
Be fond of 对...喜爱
Therefore 因此
结尾：表明理想和决心 点明主旨
in order to 为了
catch up with 追上
6.【徐汇区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Suppose you are interested in dearMars Project, and you send an e-mail to dearMarsproject@****.com based on one of the given situations.
Situation1: You want to be one of the crew members to the Mars. You write to apply for a seat in the rocket.
Situation2: You want to know more about the project, hoping to get more detailed information.
假设你对dear Mars 的项目感兴趣，你选择所给情景之一完成一封发送给 dearMarsproject@****.com的电子邮件（不少于60词）
(注意：邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
【参考范文】
Dear dear Marsproject,
When I was young, I always wondered what was in the sky. I wished that one day I could fly into space to find the secrets of the universe. Now I am more interested in space. Yang Liwei became the first Chinese astronaut to get into space and Zhai Zhigang became the first Chinese to walk in space. All the Chinese people are very proud of them and so am I. When I read the dear Mars Project plan, I was very excited. As a common youth, I want to get a chance to fly to the Mars. If I become a member of dear Mars project, I will do my best to support other crew member.
Best wishes for you!
一封电子邮件
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出我想去太空发现宇宙奥秘
Find the secrets of the universe 发现宇宙奥秘
正文：介绍对太空感兴趣的原因
be proud of them 以他们为骄傲
as a common youth 作为一名普通的青年
get a chance 得到一个机会
become a member of... 成为......的成员
结尾：点明主旨
do my best to support other crew member 尽我最大的努力支持其他成员
7.【宝山区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “______ made me a better person.” (请以“……使我成为更好的自己”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或者某个人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承担责任；使我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。
(注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)
An Experience in the Rain Made me a Better Person
In the passing days of my junior high school life, a remarkably impressive and unforgettable experience always lingers in my mind, making me a better person ever since.
One heavy raining Saturday afternoon, when I was on my way to the tutoring center near my home, I witnessed an elderly man stumbling behind his wheelchair on the main road without an umbrella in his hands. Hesitating and struggling, I didn’t have any courage to come close to the man at first, but 20 seconds (maybe more than that) later, a clear voice—always be ready to help others—drove me to extend my helping hand. In the end, I accompanied the elderly man with my umbrella to his home.
It was an experience that made me a better person and reminded me to take a share of social responsibility without any hesitation.
一次在雨中的经历使我成为更好的自己
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出经历话题，进行点题展开
In the passing days of my junior high school life, a remarkably impressive and unforgettable experience always lingers in my mind, making me a better person ever since. 在我初中生活的日子里，一段令人印象深刻和难忘的经历一直萦绕在我的脑海里，使我成为一个更好的人。
正文：叙述雨中经历
on one’s way to 到......去的途中
have courage to do 有勇气去做......
be ready to do 准备好做......
drive sb. to do 驱使某人去干某事
In the end 最后，最终
accompany with 伴随着，兼带着
结尾：点明主旨
It was an experience that made me a better person and reminded me to take a share of social responsibility without any hesitation. 这是一次使我成为更好的自己的经历，也让我毫不犹豫地承担起社会责任。
8.【长宁区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Keep patient when facing difficulties”(请以“面对困难保持耐心”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
阅读文章（C）篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心，还提出用2 种方式来帮助我们克服这样的缺点，在我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心，请你以一个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。
（注意：文中不得摘录试卷阅读原文，不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
Keep patient when facing difficulties
I still remember the first time I rode bicycle when I was seven. My sister pushed the bicycle to help me. Few minutes later, she let it go, and I fell in the ground. She asked me to try one more time, while I was extremely impatient after failing several times. The way she told didn’t suit me quite well. At last I took a deep breath, and tried my best to have the final time. Unbelievable, I succeed. When I am in trouble now, I always tell myself “keep patient and don’t give up.” Maybe just try another time, everyone will taste the fruits of victory.
Keep patient when facing difficulties
要点提示
好词好句
开头：我七岁时骑自行车的经历
Push the bicycle to help me 推自行车帮我
正文：耐心克服困难的经历
The way she told didn’t suit me quite well 她教我的方式不太适合我
Took a deep breath 深呼吸
Try my best to have the final time 全力以赴尝试最后一次
Be in trouble 处在困难中
Don’t give up 不言弃
结尾：点明主旨
Taste the fruits of victory 收获胜利的果实
9.【金山区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the topic“Keep your mind open.” (以“敞开心扉/心胸开阔”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在生活中，你对你的生活满意吗？不满意的话，是什么原因呢？如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物。从不同的角度去思考问题，可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺势逆境的）。
(注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)
Keep your mind open
In our daily life, we sometimes don’t feel satisfied with our life especially when we meet difficult situations, such as getting a low mark, losing a precious gift and so on. Once I got a low mark with my English paper. I really felt disappointed and wanted to give it up. But my parents encouraged me to keep my mind open. They told me failure is the key to success. I agreed with them. From then on , when I feel frustrated, I always think of my parents’ word. In a word, we should keep our mind open when we face the difficulties.
敞开心扉/心胸开阔
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出为什么要敞开心扉的原因
feel satisfied with 对...满意
正文：举出实例
get a low mark 得低分
feel disappointed 感到失望
encourage sb to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
failure is the key to success. 失败是成功的关键
feel frustrated 感到犹豫
face the difficulties 面对困难
结尾：提出解决方案，点明主旨
In a word, we should keep our mind open when we face the difficulties.
总结连词和when时间状语从句
10.【虹口区】
Writing (作文)：（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to get close to …”(以“我想要走近......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)（共20分）
人的一生会遇到很多美好的事物，人、物、景等各种美好的存在都会吸引我们走近。请写写你想走近什么？怎么走近？说说你的理由。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分）
I’d like to get close to history
I’m always interested in many history events which happened in the past. So I’d like to get close to history to find out the life of ancient people.
To get close to it, I will surf on the Internet when I have free time. In addition, I can read some interesting stories. Because in this way I will not only learn their wise thoughts ,but also realize the importance of life. History enables me to learn from the past and that is why I’d like to get close to history.
我想要走近历史
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出主题走近历史
be interested in many history events 对很多历史事件感兴趣
正文：介绍走近历史的方式
surf on the Internet 上网
have free time空闲时间
Read some interesting stories 读有趣的故事
in this way 以这种方式
Not only...but also...不仅......而且......
Enable me to learn from the past 使我能够从过往中学习
结尾：点明主旨
That’s why I’d like to get close to history. 这是我想要走近历史的原因
11.【杨浦区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given topic “________ has changed me”. (以“________ 改变了我”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化、都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Confidence has changed me
Recently I’ve had a change in my life. It makes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.
The story happened a year ago. At that time I was very poor at math and my maths score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some maths problems, I told myself “You should be confident and you can do it”. And out of my expectation, I got an A in my maths exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for maths and there is nothing that we cannot do if we are confident enough.
自信改变了我
要点提示
好词好句
开头：总的说在生活中有很多改变来引出话题自信改变了我
have a change in one’s life& make sth.adj.和运用感叹句作宾语从句
正文：叙述到底是怎样的一个故事让我得到启发，自信改变了我
At that time 在那时
be poor at 不擅长
be mad at sb. 对某人生气
tell sb.sth. 告诉某人某事
believe in oneself 相信某人自己
meet with 遇到...
Out of one’s expectation 出乎某人的意料
Not until 直到......时候才
结尾：点明主题
倒装句和there be句型的复合句结尾
12.【嘉定区】
Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以“I chose to ”为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择?
（注意：请先将题目补充完整，短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
l choose to be/do
l make up my mind
l encourage me to
I chose to exercise everyday
As a student who is going to graduate from junior high school, though time is quite tight for me to study, I still choose to stick to exercise everyday.
Many people think that exercise makes them tired and they can’t find time to do this due to busy work and study. On the contrary, I believe exercise keeps me fit and energetic so that I rarely fall ill. Besides, every time I finish exercising, I feel a clear mind, so I can focus on my study better. Then, in my opinion, exercise won’t cost a person much time. On weekday, I usually spend 30 minutes running on our school’s playground after school. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends for an hour. Thus, it won’t take me a lot of time and the pressure accumulated during the week can completely vanish.
In conclusion, exercise is a good choice for both our body and mind. I will continue to be firm in my choice.
我选择每天锻炼
要点提示
好词好句
开头：通过对比其他人每天学习，引出自己锻炼话题的展开
As a student who is going to graduate from junior high school
作为一个即将从初中毕业的学生
正文：阐述选择锻炼的原因
On the contrary 正相反
due to 由于
focus on 关注于
in my opinion 在我看来
Thus 因此
the pressure accumulated during the week can completely vanish
一周内积累的压力可以完全消失
结尾：点明主旨
In conclusion 最后
be firm in 对...紧定不移
13.【黄浦区】Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation. (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在生活中，要取得成就，往往需要勇气。你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难，承认错误，拒绝他人，或者克服恐惧。你是如何理解勇气的呢？请以“I have the courage to...（我有勇气……）”为题，结合自己的经历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
I have the courage to face my fear
I used to be a coward, just like Jerry in his classmates eyes. I am afraid of getting a poor score, I am afraid of changes in my life, and I am ever afraid to go to bathroom alone at night. I don’t want to risk anything to see the world. So I hardly go out for a holiday. Once a classmate who I really liked came up to me and asked whether I’d like to have a trip to the nearby city with her. I agreed. When I came back, I still remembered the different things and delicious food in that city, which I had never met before.
Fear disappeared and I realized that I have the courage to face my fear.
I have the courage to face my fear
要点提示
好词好句
开头：介绍自己过去对事物的恐惧
be afraid of changes in my life 恐惧生活中的改变
正文：介绍自己直面恐惧的一件事
Ask whether I’d like to have a trip to the nearby city with her 问我是否想要和她一起去附近的城市旅行
Came back 回来
Remember the different things 记得不同的事物
Had never met before 以前从未遇见的
结尾：点明主旨
Fear disappeared 恐惧消失了
14.【闵行区】Writing(作文)(20 分)
Write at least 60 words on the topic“My funnest family memory”(根据提示，以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示:回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。)
My funnest family memory
There are countless interesting things in our family. Let me tell you one thing. It’s about eating.
I remember once again, when I was at my grandma’s house, it was going to a dinner. My stomach was hungry and sang "I want to eat". I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food.,feeling very spicy, asked her mother: "Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot?" Mom ran over and tasted vegetable pepper and said, "This is not vegetable pepper, it's pepper!" "Ah?, I asked in confusion. This is chili, no wonder it's so spicy." "Give me some water!" The family laughed when they heard it. In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
我最有趣的家庭回忆
要点提示
好词好句
开头：开头点题，提出最有趣的回忆是什么
There are countless interesting things in our family. Let me tell you one thing. It’s about...
在我们家庭里有数不胜数的有趣之事，今天让我给你们讲一件特别的事，它就是...
正文：举出实例
have a bite of the food 吃了一小口食物
in confusion 迷惑
no wonder 难怪
In fact 事实上
waiting for us to discover 等着我们去发现
结尾：提出解决方案，点明主旨
As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
as long as条件状语从句
15.【静安区】Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的映像。
请以“Making learning fun(乐中学)”为题，分享你的经历或感想。
(注意: 1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不子评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
【答案】
Making learning fun
I’ve joined in various after-class meaningful activities, of which the volunteer one in the local nursing house is the most impressive. Several classmates and I volunteered there every weekend last year. We did some cleaning, chatted with the old and read newspapers to them. After finishing the whole activity, I benefited a lot because I got meaningful lessons and fun. First, cleaning the nursing house develops my ability of doing chore, which prepares me for living independently in future. Second, talking with the old and reading newspapers to them improve my communication skills and bring me much fun. Therefore, this activity offers me so many benefits that it’s really impressive and unforgettable.
乐中学习
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出哪次活动对自己的深刻影响
I have joined in various ... activities, of which the ... is the most impressive.我已经参加了各种各样...的活动, 其中...的活动让我刻骨铭心。
正文：举出实例以及得到的收获
after doing sth.= after +句子 之后做某事。
benefit a lot. 收益许多
get meaningful lessons and fun. 得到有意义的课程和乐趣
develop the ability of doing chore 提升做家务的能力
live independently 独立生活
improve communication skills 提升沟通技巧
offer sb so many benefits 提供许多好处
结尾：点明主旨
Therefore, this activity offers me so many benefits that it’s really impressive and unforgettable.
总结连词和so that结果状语从句
16.【浦东新区】Writing（作文）（共20分）
Write at least 60 words about the topic“A (n) with love”
(请以“爱的 ”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。)
在上文中，祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱，我们一定收到过带有满满爱意的物品。请你分享一下关于这个物品的故事，并谈谈你的感受或它对你的影响。
(注意:短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
【参考范文】
A Letter with Love
Looking through my life, a special letter is always the first thing coming to my mind when I think of love.
It’s a summer night when I receive that letter from my teacher. She is an elegant lady with warm heart. She always teaches us to be kind and friendly. During the daytime I argued with another student simply because of a small issue which I couldn’t remember it now. I said some bad words that really hurt that student. When our teacher knew that, I was crying because I felt it’s difficult to control my emotion. Instead of blaming on me, she helped me to say sorry to that student and left. After a few minutes, she came back with a letter. I was so surprised to find there were only encouraging words in that letter. She said she was confident in me and fully trusted me. I felt deeply love from her. After that, I tried my best to be a nice person and love people around me just like what she has done.
That was a letter with love from a teacher to her students, I believe that it’s from this letter that I really learned how to love others as well.
爱的一封信
要点提示
好词好句
开头：点题，表明脑海中想到关于爱的事情就是一封特别的信
Looking through my life 纵观我的一生
come to my mind 涌入脑海
正文：举出实例以及得到的收获
because of a small issue which I couldn’t remember it now.
因为一个我现在记不起来了的小问题
Instead of doing sth 而不是 代替
Blame on ... 责怪...
I tried my best to be a nice person and love people around me just like what she has done
我尽我所能地去做一个好人，像她一样爱着身边的人
结尾：点明主旨
I believe that it’s from this letter that I really learned how to love others as well.
通过I believe that...的句型，点题且表明自己收获到了爱也会学会去爱其他人
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