专题22 应用文写作-五年(2017-2021)高考英语真题分项详解(新高考专用) 解析版
展开1.(2021·全国高考新高考Ⅰ卷)你校英文报Yuth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Yuth and Me
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【答案】Yuth and Me
It has been 10 years since Yuth was funded. In my memry, it is Yuth that accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl. When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn. Besides, I even submitted my wn fictin t Yuth. Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer.
I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Yuth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
建立:fund→establish
沮丧的:upset→depressed
得到:receive→btain
赏析:enjy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn.
拓展句:Nt nly can these stries relieve my stress, but als they can braden my hrizn.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(2021·6月浙江卷)
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传,内容包括:
1. 展览时间、地点;
2. 观展感受;
3. 推荐观展。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
ln rder t enrich students’ after-schl life ,an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl , which sparks a grwing lve fr traditinal art .The exhibitin is held n the first flr f the schl library. Mst f the students think highly f this exhibitin,which prvides a platfrm fr them t explre the beauty f China and experience the charm f Chinese art.
Thrugh the exhibitin, nt nly can yu admire wnderful pictures, but als enable yu understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better. The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks, every student is welcme t visit.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
绘画:drawing→ painting
激发:spirit→spark
欣赏:appreciate→admire
欢迎:greet→welcme
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:
The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks,every student is welcme t visit.
合并句:
The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks,during which every student is welcme t visit.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl , which sparks a grwing lve fr traditinal art .本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型2】
Mst f the students think highly f this exhibitin,which prvides a platfrm fr them t explre the beauty f China and experience the charm f Chinese art.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型 3】
Thrugh the exhibitin, nt nly can yu admire wnderful pictures,but als enable yu understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better. nt als连接的并列句。
3.(2021·浙江1月卷)
假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍活动安排;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf f ur schl, I wuld like t cnvey my sincere welcme fr yur visiting.
At first, it is f significance t fully understand the schl. As scheduled, all f yu will visit the museum, which cntains the splendid histry f ur schl. Furthermre, ur classes are wrthy f being attended, because yu can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methds. After that, it is at canteen that yu can have a special lunch with ur students.
As mentined abve, I extremely expect yur cming. May yu have an unfrgettable experience.
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
n behalf f; wuld like t; cnvey; sincere welcme; be f significance; splendid; be wrthy f; appreciate; teaching methds; canteen; extremely expect; unfrgettable
第三步:连词成句
1. On behalf f ur schl, I wuld like t cnvey my sincere welcme fr yur visiting.
2. At first, it is f significance t fully understand the schl.
3. As scheduled, all f yu will visit the museum, which cntains the splendid histry f ur schl.
4. Furthermre, ur classes are wrthy f being attended, because yu can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methds.
5. After that, it is at canteen that yu can have a special lunch with ur students.
6. As mentined abve, I extremely expect yur cming.
7. May yu have an unfrgettable experience.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:at first
2.表并列补充关系:Furthermre
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As scheduled, all f yu will visit the museum, which cntains the splendid histry f ur schl. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] After that, it is at canteen that yu can have a special lunch with ur students. (运用了强调句型)
【2020年】
1.(2020年6月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 询问近况;2. 分享班级最新消息;3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am srry t hear that yu have gne back hme n sick leave. Hw are yu feeling nw?
I hpe my gd news fr yu will sweep away the shadw f disease. Last mnth, an English festival was held in ur schl, and ur class perfrmed a sng which yu taught us at the festival. As sn as we finished the sng, all the audience gave us warm applause. If nly yu had been there.
We all miss yu very much and wish yu a quick and cmplete recvery.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况,分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构:三段式结构。第一段询问近况;第二段告知班级消息;第三段表达祝愿。
要求:1.询问近况(Hw are yu feeling nw?)
2.告知班级消息(my gd news; perfrmed a sng which yu taught us)
3.表达祝愿(wish yu a quick and cmplete recvery)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be srry t d; n sick leave; sweep away; as sn as; give sb. warm applause; recvery
第三步:连词成句
1. I am srry t hear that yu have gne back hme n sick leave.
2. I hpe my gd news fr yu will sweep away the shadw f disease.
3. As sn as we finished the sng, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss yu very much and wish yu a quick and cmplete recvery.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
2.(2020年1月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友Gerge写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Gerge,
I'm writing t invite yu t jin us in the “Chinese speech cntest fr freigners” t be held in ur schl. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. n January 20th in the lecture hall.
The theme f the speech cntest is “differences between eastern and western custms”, thrugh which the freign students are bund t gain a better understanding f Chinese splendid traditinal culture and meanwhile strengthen their lve f China.
Immensely fascinated by its mysterius culture and age-ld histry, yu can, undubtedly give us a wnderful and impressive perfrmance. Yu are expected t sign up fr the cntest at www. Chinesespeechcntestfrfreigners.cm. I'd appreciate it if yu culd accept ur invitatin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。
第1步:根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友Gerge写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。
第2步:根据写作要求, 确定关键词(组) :Chinese speech cntest(中文演讲比赛);be scheduled(安排);be bund t(必然);gain a better understanding f(更好地了解)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【2019年】
1.(2019年6月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that yu’re leaving fr the United States sn, I’m eagerly writing t express my heartfelt gratitude t yu fr yur help.
Hnestly speaking, it’s s nice f yu t ffer me a class f practical learning skills. Under yur prfessinal guidance, I have made such unbelievable prgress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise fr me t even rank first in a recent English speech cntest. Whenever I encunter difficulties, yu always cheer me up and help me ut, which fuels my enthusiasm fr English and prmtes me t regain tremendus cnfidence. N wrds are strng enugh t cnvey hw grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish yu a pleasant jurney hme.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是应用文写作任务,要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助;最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有:leaving fr the United States sn,express my heartfelt gratitude,unbelievable prgress,cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】
本文开门见山,表达了写信的目的;之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助,详略得当,内容完整,同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇:eagerly,heartfelt gratitude,Hnestly speaking,prfessinal guidance等;高级句式:Whenever I encunter difficulties, yu always cheer me up and help me ut, which fuels my enthusiasm fr English and prmtes me t regain tremendus cnfidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次
【2018年】
1.(2018年11月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:
1. 行程信息;
2. 钱包特征;
3. 联系方式。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I barded the plane. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne with arund 200 dllars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Alng with the items mentined abve, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.
Has anybdy happened t find it? Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信
【详解】
第一步:根据提示可知,本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失,要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:1.行程信息;2. 钱包特征;3. 联系方式。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. barded the plane, n arrival…, I fund it gne. it must have……Has anybdy happened t find it? Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
What’s wrse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是,里面有我的现金,身份证和两张信用卡。What’s wrse意为“更糟糕的是”,连接并列两个坏的东西,且后面一个更严重。
【高分句型2】
I’d appreciate it if yu culd help me t get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来,我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。
2.(2018年6月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
(1) 口语能力:
(2) 相关经验;
(3) 应聘目的。
注意:
(1) 词数80左右;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Sir r Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing t apply fr being a vlunteer f ur schl English assciatin.
I have a gd cmmand f English and have been t the USA twice. S I can cmmunicate well with native speakers f English. What’s mre, I am kind and friendly t ther peple. S I can easily get alng with freign students.
I’m particularly interested in this jb because I want t further imprve my ral English capabilities and interpersnal cmmunicatin skills.
Hpefully I can receive yur acceptance.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封申请信。
第一步:根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信,内容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子:I’m writing t apply fr…,a gd cmmand f English,cmmunicate with,get alng with等。
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,本文时态应以现在时为主,人称为第一人称。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【2017年】
1.(2017年11月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.时间
2.一同过节的家人
3.活动
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Hall,
I’m writing t invite yu t cme t my hme t celebrate the Spring Festival n January 19. It’s traditinally a time fr family reunin, s my parents and my brther will all be there. We’ll make dumplings tgether and have a big dinner. We’ll als play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala n TV. Yu may even get a gift frm my parents. If yu’re able t cme, I’ll g and pick yu up at yur place.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇书信类作文。围绕写信人找收信人有什么事或要求、传达什么讯息等内容展开的,所以在书信的开头考生要说清楚写信目的I’m writing t invite yu t cme …;其次考生要根据题目给出的内容提示扩充题干或提纲,本文想邀请外教Mr. Hall到你家过春节celebrate the Spring Festival n January 19 …需要扩展过春节可以做的事情;最后要表明自己期待对方同意等If yu’re able t cme, I’ll g and pick yu up at yur place.。这样一篇结构完整的书信作文就轻松完成了。考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,使文章的表达自然,丰满。注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。范文中使用了大量高中生熟悉的词汇traditinally, family reunin,have a big dinner,are able t, pick yu up和句型,以提高文章的准确描述;恰当使用一些连词、插入语s 、als 、may even,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意次数:90—110之间。
【范文亮点】①It’s traditinally a time fr family reunin.②If yu’re able t cme, I’ll g and pick yu up at yur place.运用了主将从现的句型。
1.(2017年6月,浙江卷)
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者;
2. 时间、地点;
3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hw are yu ding? I am writing t invite yu t a tur t the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the schl gate. Abut tw hurs will be spent climbing the muntain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the ft f the muntain.
Up till nw, 3 bys and 4 girls have jined the team. I d hpe that yu culd jin us because Green Hill is such a fun place t relax and surely we will have a great time. Hwever, if yu dn’t have spare time fr this trip, it is fine. It’s just up t yu.
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。
【详解】
本应用文贴近学生实际生活,虽然是命题作文,但还是保持一定的开放程度,形式是邮件,符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求,本文要涵盖以下三点内容,1. 参加者;2. 时间、地点;3. 活动:登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇,紧扣提示,准确全面地表达所要求的内容,在合适的地方拓展细节,使行文连贯。作为邀请信,要求语言得体,邀请的语气诚恳,有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅。
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
I’m very hnred t invite yu t jin us turing t the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。I’m very hnred t...非常荣幸做某事
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I hpe yu can take my advice int cnsideratin. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句,take…int cnsideratin顾及;考虑到……
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