专题11 诚信-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背

这是一份专题11 诚信-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背，共9页。试卷主要包含了 说说你对诚实的认识，倡议同学们做个诚实的人， Hnesty is gld等内容，欢迎下载使用。

请你以“T Be an Hnest Man”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 说说你对诚实的认识。
2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。
3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。
提示词：traditinal virtue（传统美德）, wlves（狼）, tell lies（撒谎）
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【答案】
T Be an Hnest Man
As we knw, hnesty is ne f the Chinese traditinal virtues, s I think it is necessary fr everyne t be an hnest man.
I have heard f the stry “Wlves are cming”. The little by lst all his sheep at last because he tld lies t the villagers twice. Frm the stry, I knw that if smene is nt hnest, he r she will lst gd friends.
Remember that hnesty is invaluable. Each f us shuld try t be an hnest man nt nly in ur study but als in ur daily life frm nw n.
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作文要求：
例：1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信的现象…
2、举一例说明(如，有毒奶粉、考试作弊等)…
3、讲求诚信的意义…
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【参考范文】
Hnesty is a virtue
Almst all f us heard the stry “ Here Cmes the Wlf “ when we were little kids. What we can learn frm the stry is that we must be hnest. Hwever, there are lts f phenmena f dishnesty nwadays.
Being dishnest des great harm nt nly t ther peple but als t yurself. Take the case f fake milk pwder fr example. After drinking this kind f milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health. T ur great relief, the prducers gt accused and punished fr all the serius cnsequences in the end.
Having the reputatin f being hnest and reliable will make ther peple trust yu, which will prvide yu many benefits and give yu pprtunities that thers may nt get. Being hnest, yu will find it easier t cperate with thers and peple will be friendly t yu and supprt yu. In a sense, if life is a lng jurney, hnesty will be the backpack that shuld be taken alng all the way.
Let’s pick up ur “ backpack“ —hnesty, and start the wnderful jurney!
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英语课上，同学们就“诚信”这一话题展开了讨论。请你以李华的名义，根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文，谈谈生活中你是如何做到诚实守信的以及这样做的意义。
提示：(1) What is yur idea abut being hnest?
( 2) What d yu d in yur daily life t be hnest?
( 3) Why d yu d s?
要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：prmise, virtue(美德)
It's ne f ur traditinal virtues t be hnest.
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【参考范文】
It's ne f ur traditinal virtues t be hnest. Hnesty is a great virtue which is traditinally encuraged by Chinese peple. It's really imprtant fr us t be hnest in ur life.
As fr me, I cnsider hnesty t be ne f the mst imprtant rules that shuld be fllwed. I never tell a lie t thers, n matter what happens. If I d smething wrng in life, I usually chse t tell the truth even if it brings me sme truble. Once I make a prmise, I will try my best t keep it.
Being hnest helps us win mre respect frm peple arund. All in all, hnesty makes the wrld mre trust wrthy and a better place t live in.
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据“诚信”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：tell a lie；tell the truth；make a prmise；All in all等。
句型：Hnesty is a great virtue which is traditinally encuraged by Chinese peple. 使用了which引导的定语从句。I never tell a lie t thers, n matter what happens.使用了n matter what引导的让步状语从句。
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目前，许多学校都存在部分学生抄袭作业的现象，请根据以下要点，以“Dn’t Cpy thers’ hmewrk”为题，谈谈你对这一现象的看法和态度，并劝诫同学们不要抄作业。
要点提示：
1.抄作业的原因 (作业量大，懒惰，……) ；
2.你对抄作业的认识（违反校规，不诚信，……）；
3.你的态度和建议 (反对并劝诫) 。
要求：
1. 适当发挥，补全要点提示；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数：80-100词左右。
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【参考范文】
Dn’t Cpy thers’ hmewrk
It is knwn t us all that sme students cpy thers' hmewrk. As student ,we ften d ur hmewrk at schl , but smetimes we have t many hmewrk ,which are t difficult fr us . On the ther hand , sme f us are lazy and dn't wrk hard at their lessns .S when ding hmewrk ,they smetimes cpy thers hmewrk in rder t cmplete the task f teacher t please their parents and teachers .
In my pinin , it is wrng t cpy thers hmewrk because it breaks the rules f schl . We shuld be hnest and try t cmpleted the task by studying hard instead f cpying thers hmewrk . what's mre ,we shuld imprve ur study methds and get help frm ur teacher an classmates.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。要我们就学生抄袭作业的现象谈谈看法，内容包括学生们抄袭作业的原因，对抄作业的认识并发表自己的看法和态度。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：n the ther hand“另一方面”；in rdert“为了”；try t d sth“尽力做某事”；instead f“代替”；what’s mre“另外”以及复合句和不定式的使用。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
有用的表达：
1. Hnesty is a great virtue which is traditinally encuraged by Chinese peple.
2. It’s really imprtant fr us t be hnest in ur life.
3. I never tell a lie t thers, n matter the difficulty.
4. If I d smething wrng in life, I usually chse t tell the truth, even if it brings me sme truble.
5. Once I make a prmise, I will try my best t keep it.
6. Being hnest helps us have mre cnfidence in peple arund us.
7. All in all, hnesty makes the wrld mre trustwrthy and a better place t live in.
8. Hnesty is gld. It means telling the truth and being fair.
9. By ding s, ur wrld will becme mre and mre beautiful.
10. we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in ur daily life, and s n.
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民无信不立。诚信是一个道德范畴，是公民的第二个“身份证”，是日常行为中诚实和正式交流的信用的统称。
某英文网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你自己讲诚信的一次经历和感受，主要内容包括：你经历了一件什么事情体现出了你的诚信，你有何收获及感受。
提示词语：realize, hnesty, vilate the principle（违背原则）, virtue（美德）, lse
提示问题：1. What’s yur experience abut hnesty?
2. What can yu learn frm it?
Hnesty is gld. It means telling the truth and being fair.
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【答案】
Hnesty is gld. It means telling the truth and being fair.
Last year, when I tk the math exam, I had difficulty wrking ut a prblem with a high scre, which culd influence my ranking in class. Feeling anxius, I fund the paper f the student in frnt f me culd be seen clearly. I was excited and abut t cpy it. Hwever, I realized it was shameful t cheat in exams. It vilated the principle f hnesty, s I stpped.
Althugh I had the thught t cpy the student’s answers, I am still an upright student. Hnesty, which is the traditinal virtue f Chinese peple, can make ur life easier and mre harmnius. Never lse it and be an hnest persn.
【解析】
1.题干解读：
细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：
（1）本文要求讲述讲诚信的一次经历并说明感受，属于夹叙夹说明的文体；
（2）讲述自身的经历时用一般过去时，说明感受时用一般现在时；
（3）文中阐述自己的行为时用第一人称，讲述别人的行为时可用第三人称；
（4）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；不得出现真实校名和姓名，词数不少于50。
2.例文解读：
诚信
要点提示
素材串联
开头：开门见山，引出话题
诚信的内涵（已给出）
正文：讲述经历
1.参加考试，有一道题解答不出来（have difficulty wrking ut a prblem）
2.焦急万分，突然发现可以抄袭（anxius, be abut t cpy）
3.抄袭他人的试卷是违背原则的，及时停止了此行为，意识到自己的错误（vilate the principle f hnesty, stp）
结尾：表达自己的感受
1.依然是一名正直的学生（an upright student）
2.诚信是中华民族的传统美德，保证了社会的和谐（traditinal virtue f the Chinese peple）
3.高分亮点：
短语：wrk ut，in frnt f，make sth. adj.。
句型：
（1）Last year, when I tk the math exam, I had difficulty wrking ut a prblem with a high scre, which culd influence my ranking in class.（have difficulty (in) ding sth.句型、非限制性定语从句）
（2）Hwever, I realized it was shameful t cheat in exams.（宾语从句、it作形式主语）
（3）Althugh I had the thught t cpy the student's answers, I am still an upright student.（Althugh引导让步状语从句）
（六）
习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
. 提示：
1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科技世界领先；…
2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提高能力，将来成为一名…
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80—100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
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That's all. Thank yu!
【答案】
Hell, everyne! As a Chinese, I am s prud f it. In the past, ur great traditinal culture made a difference t the wrld, such as sailing, cmmunicating and s n. Nwadays, ur cuntry is becming strnger and strnger by wrking hard f all Chinese. A lt f science and technlgy lead the wrld, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hng Kng-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and s n.
As a teenager, we shuld d as fllws t achieve ur Chinese dream. First f all, we are suppsed t thank all the peple wh devte themselves t making ur cuntry wnderful. What’s mre, we need fllw the rules. In schl we shuld bey the schl rules. Only by ding these dimple things can we becme a persn that the cuntry needs. In additin, we’d better nt lie and be a hnest man in rder that all peple can trust us. Last but nt least, we shuld try ur best t wrk hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am ging t be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will d mre researches and let ther cuntries admire us.
That's all. Thank yu!
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be prud f, make a difference t, such as, and s n, 比较级and比较级, devte neself t ding, in rder that, try ne’s best以及first f all, what’s mre, in additin和last but nt least等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
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诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Da ming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Ling ling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Ling ling很生气，并且不愿接受Da ming的道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Imprtance f Prmise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Da ming一些建议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Imprtance f Prmise
Dear editr,
Peple always emphasize（强调） the imprtance f the prmise, and they hate peple wh break their prmise.
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Prmise is very imprtant. Everyne shuld keep it.
Yurs,
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【答案】
The Imprtance f Prmise
Dear editr,
Peple always emphasize（强调）the imprtance f the prmise, and they hate peple wh break their prmise.
Recently, a thing happened t my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Ling ling t watch a mvie. But he ttally frgt it that day because f his review fr his exam. S Ling ling gt t angry t frgive him. In my pinin, it was really his fault. Frgetting the date nt nly led t Ling ling’s anger, but als made her lse trust in him. Keeping prmises is always the traditinal virtue f the Chinese natin. What Da ming shuld d nw is t ask fr frgiveness and prmise that he will never d that again.
Prmise is very imprtant. Everyne shuld keep it.
Yurs,
Tny
【解析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。
首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。