专题05 模范人物-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背

这是一份专题05 模范人物-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背，共6页。试卷主要包含了 你心中年度人物的标准是什么？， 你为什么选择他或她？， 钟南山建议等内容，欢迎下载使用。

感动中国2020年度人物已经揭晓，他们或护卫祖国，或造福民生，或推广传统文化，或传递市井温暖，都让人忍不住热泪盈眶。在你心中，年度人物有什么样的特征？请以“2020 Persn f the Year in my heart”为题写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1. 你心中年度人物的标准是什么？
2. 你心中的2020年度人物是谁？
3. 你为什么选择他或她？
2020 Persn f the Year in my heart
In my heart, the Persn f the Year is smene wh imprves ther peple's lives. Wang Yng, a curier (快递员) in Wuhan, made me feel mved.
Wang vlunteered t transprt medical wrkers during the COVID-19 pandemic. Thugh he was wrried abut the virus, he still came frward when medical wrkers needed help. He als called n mre peple t jin him. The team helped t buy fd and medical supplies.
As an rdinary peple, he devted himself t imprving ther's lives, leaving a great influence n me. We shuld learn frm him, as a small act f kindness can make a big difference.
（二）抗疫英雄人物
2020年在新冠疫情的防控阻击战中，全国人民齐心协力，坚守岗位、默默付出，共克时艰，期间发生了许多让人感动的人和事。
某英文网站举办了以“感动”为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈抗疫期间，谁是最让你感动的人，他（她）做了什么，以及你从他（她）身上学到了什么？
提示词语：help, serve, respnsible, make cntributin t
提示问题：
1. Wh mved yu the mst?
2. What did he / she d?
3. What did yu learn frm him / her?
The past year was quite mving in many ways. A security guard wh wrks in my cmmunity did smething that was especially meaningful t me.
During the epidemic, he wrked hard t prtect residents frm the virus. He guarded the entrance t ur cmmunity day and night, taking the temperature f thse wh entered t avid any pssible infectins. He als helped deliver mail and ther things t sme husehlds. This was really cnvenient fr many f us.
Frm his selfless devtin, I learned that it's imprtant t be dedicated and respnsible, even just as an rdinary citizen. Even regular peple like me and yu can cntribute in the battle against the virus.
三、杰出奉献人物
英语课上即将进行“中国伟人”为主题的小组分享活动。请你根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文介绍三位中国伟人，并谈谈你们小组的感受。
要求：
1. 参考词汇：疟疾 malaria
2. 词数 80 左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Tday, ur grup is hnured t intrduce 3 great Chinese t yu. They are
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范文：
Tday, ur grup is hnured t intrduce three great Chinese t yu. They are Zhan Tianyu, Tu Yuyu and Zhng Nanshan. Zhan Tianyu is the father f Chinese Railway. He built China’s first railway——the Beijing Zhangjiaku Railway. Tu Yuyu is a great scientist and she fund new drugs t fight malaria, her spirit f never giving up is wrth peple’s learning. Zhng Nanshan is a respiratry specialist in China. Seventeen years ag, he did his best t “fight against SARS”. In early 2020, a disease called Nvel crnavirus pneumnia hit Wuhan. As sn as Zhng Nanshan heard the news, he rushed t Wuhan in persn in January 2020. He led the medical staff t cntain the epidemic and encuraged the peple f the cuntry t build cnfidence t vercme the difficulties. As students, we shuld learn frm them.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时根据思维导图提示的内容，介绍三位中国伟人：詹天佑、屠呦呦和钟南山，并谈谈感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
在危难时刻，总是会有人挺身而出，给人们带来希望和信心。钟南山院士就是这样的人。请你根据下面的要点提示，以The man I admire mst为题, 用英语写一篇短文。
1. 1936年10月出生于南京，是21世纪最出名的医学家(medical scientist)之一。
2. 1960年，毕业于北京医学院。毕业后留校做了一名大学教师。这位普通却伟大的老人已经从医60多年了……
3. 2020年，COVID-19疫情爆发后，他立刻带领医护人员赶赴武汉，抗击疾病……
4. 钟南山建议：居家、少外出、外出时戴口罩、勤洗手、多锻炼……
注意：
1. 要点齐全，语言通顺。
2. 词数100左右。
The man I admire mst
Dr. Zhng Nanshan was brn in Octber 1936 in Nanjing.
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He graduated frm Beijing Medical Cllege in 1960. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In 2020, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
He is the persn I admire mst.
例文：
Dr. Zhng Nanshan was brn in Octber 1936 in Nanjing. He is ne f the mst famus medical scientists in the 21st century.
He graduated frm Beijing Medical Cllege in 1960. After graduatin, he became a cllege teacher in his schl. This rdinary but great ld man has wrked as a dctr fr ver 60 years. He has made great achievements.
In 2020, when COVID-19 brke ut, he led the dctrs and nurses t rush t Wuhan at nce. They wrked day and night t fight the disease. They have saved thusands f peple.
He’s ffered us sme safety suggestins. First, we had better stay at hme and avid ging ut. Secnd, we must wear masks when ging ut. Third, wash ur hands and d exercise as ften as pssible.
He is the persn I admire mst.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。以“The man I admire mst”为主题展开描写，主要写钟南山院士的过去以及从医的职业过程以及在2020疫情期间的表现，要把题目中给出的每一个要点都要写清楚写具体，要突出让人钦佩的地方，要注意语言的连贯性和逻辑性。
2. 例文点评：文章分五段描写。第一段主要描写钟南山院士的基本情况，引出他是最著名的医学科学家之一；第二段描写他之前的情况，包括他之前的学习情况以及工作情况；第三段写了2020疫情期间他的表现；第四段写了在疫情期间给人们的建议；第五段总结他是我最钦佩的人。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当意思表达明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：ne f；graduate frm；rush t；at nce；day and night；thusands f；avid ding；as ften as pssible。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；动词原形开头的祈使句；省略关系词whm/ that/ wh的定语从句。
2020 年伊始，新型冠状病毒肺炎（COVID-19）在我国蔓延。在这期间，每天都会涌现出许多令我们感动的人。请你写一篇英语短文介绍让你最感动的人， 内容包括：
1.你觉得最令你感动的人是谁；
2.他/她让你感动的事迹；
3.你最想对他/她说的话。作文要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The fight against COVID-19 has lasted fr several weeks. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
The fight against COVID-19 has lasted fr several weeks. There are many peple wh mve us every day. The ne wh mves me the mst is Zhang Dingyu, the directr f Wuhan Jinyintan Hspital.
As Zhang led ver 600 dctrs and nurses fighting the disease, his strange way f walking shcked his clleagues. He finally admitted that he had been ill with ALS since Octber 2018 after cnstant researches. While wrking with handicapped legs, his wife was cnfirmed t get infected with the virus after wrking in anther hspital. This was adding insult t injury. But he went n ffering medical services alng with medical teams.
I respect him a lt and I want t say smething t the her. Life is shrt but yu need t take gd care f yurself and then yu can d mre t realize yur wn dreams.
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态综合运用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：wrk with；add…t…；g n；alng with；take gd care f等。
句型：The ne wh mves me the mst is Zhang Dingyu, the directr f Wuhan Jinyintan Hspital.
He finally admitted that he had been ill with ALS since Octber 2018 after cnstant researches.
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。