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2020版高考新创新一轮复习英语译林版学案：写作第五编建模板——9类书信文体·考场“据题选衣
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好作文是“仿”出来的。针对全国卷近几年一直稳定考查书信文体这一命题实际，我们对每一体裁精心架构写作模板，循模板写作，确保像模像样、文正体范；迅速打开思路，缩短考场构思时间。
写作模板(一) 良药“甜”口，忠言“顺”耳——建议信
[题型技法]
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
(2018·北京高考书面表达)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐他上哪所大学；
3．建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
满分范文
Dear Jim，
I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)范文首段交代写信目的并表示欢迎；第二段阐述建议他上北京大学的原因及需要做的准备工作；最后一段表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章一气呵成、要点齐全且衔接流畅自然。
(2)文中运用了如“unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for”等高级词汇；句式方面的高级表达有：I would like to express my warmest welcome ...恰当运用了不定式作宾语；Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰当运用了现在分词作状语；one of the best universities in China作同位语；where you can be completely soaked in恰当运用了定语从句； it's my pleasure to show ...中it用作形式主语。
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1．表达建议信写信目的常用语
①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
②I am writing to express my views concerning ...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
③You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2．表达建议常用语
①I think the most suitable ...for you is ...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
②I would like to suggest that ...
我想建议……
③You'd better .../It's better to ...
你最好……/最好是……
④As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
⑤For one thing ...; for another ...
一方面……，另一方面……
⑥If I were you, I would ...
如果我是你，我会……
⑦I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3．表达希望常用语
①I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
[热点押题]
(2019·长沙模拟)假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Wang Fang，
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you don't want to do that. I think you don't need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions.
First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents，who just want the best for you.Second，I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third，you should arrange your time properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not object to it.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(二) 自信申请，心诚则灵——申请信
[题型技法]
申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
(2018·浙江高考应用文写作)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
1．口语能力；
2．相关经验；
3．应聘目的。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners. Secondly, I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开门见山说明自己写信的目的；然后详述自己的优势以及目的，简洁明了，不拖泥带水；最后表达感谢和期盼。
(2)运用了firstly ...secondly 等语序标志词，运用了一些较为地道的搭配，in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth....; have a better understanding of ...等，这些都使得这篇短文读起来层次分明、连贯、顺畅。
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1．表达申请信写信目的常用语
①I'm writing to apply for the position of ...
我写信申请……的职位。
②I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...
我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。
③I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.
我对……感兴趣，希望加入到这个重要项目中。
④I learned on your website that ...
我从你们的网站上得知……
2．表达个人优势的常用语
①I won the first prize in ...competition.
我获得了……比赛的一等奖。
②As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates.
作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。
③For one thing, I can help ...For another thing, I can improve ...一方面，我能帮助……另一方面，我能提高……
④My main specialty is ...
我的特长是……
3．表达感谢，期盼回复的常用语
①If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ...
如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电……
②I will be grateful/I'd appreciate it if you could ...
如果你能……我将感激不尽。
③Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
感谢你考虑我的申请，期待与你见面。
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校将接待一批来自美国的交换生，学校现在征集寄宿家庭。你想申请成为寄宿家庭，请根据下面的写作提纲，写一封申请信。内容包括：
1．个人情况(年龄、性别、性格和爱好)；
2．英语水平；
3．家庭条件；
4．相关经历。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Senior Three.I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to become a host family.
The following are my advantages.First, I'm openminded and like to make new friends.Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty communicating with native speakers.Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest.More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience.
I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(三) 以诚相邀，以礼相约——邀请信
[题型技法]
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时，要注意邀请信的交际性，语气要真挚，避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高，只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式、语气要热情有礼，态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
(2018·天津高考书面表达)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点；
(2)邀请他的原因；
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris，
I have good news to tell you.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Jin
满分范文
Dear Chris，
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July, which interests me greatly.
On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it. We are desperately in need of your help. So as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us. I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results. What's more, I will email you our training plan soon, hoping you can offer some constructive suggestions regarding it.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Jin
范文赏析
(1)文章开门见山交代比赛的时间和地点，随后说明自己和同学组成团队参赛并邀请Chris加入，并希望Chris对计划提出建议，言简意赅。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇，如interest作动词， form a group, participate in, accumulate, desperately in need of, joint efforts, undoubtedly等。在句式方面，既有which引导的定语从句又有名词性从句I am convinced that ...和现在分词作状语 hoping you ...等。
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1．发出邀请常用语
①I am writing to invite you to .../I'm writing to tell you that there will be a ...
我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你有一个(场)……
②I am very pleased to invite you to participate in ...to be held in ...
我很高兴邀请你参加在……举行的……
③I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...
我想你要是能来参加……那就太好了。
2．表达活动内容常用语
①Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
本次活动的一些细节内容如下。
②During the ...we will have lots of activities which you will be interested in.First ...Second ...In addition ...
在……期间我们将有很多你会感兴趣的活动。第一……第二……另外……
③I am sure that you must be very interested in the activities at the party.For one thing ...For another ...
我相信你一定对聚会上的活动很感兴趣。一方面……另一方面……
3．结尾部分常用语
①Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to ...?
请写信告诉我是否你能来……好吗？
②If you are interested in it, please let me know and I'll send you more information.
如果你感兴趣，请告诉我，我给你发送更多的信息。
③My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来，我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
④I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里见到你，请尽快告诉我你的决定。
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，是学校英语俱乐部的负责人。请你根据下列要点给学校的外教Steve写一封邀请信。
1．邀请Steve参加于周一晚上7点钟在学校礼堂举行的英语角活动；
2．请Steve介绍“美国梦(American Dream)”；
3．请Steve根据自己学汉语的经验谈谈如何提高英语口语。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Steve，
On behalf of the English Club, I am writing to invite you to join our English Corner next Monday.It will begin at seven o'clock in the evening at the school hall.
In many films “American Dream” is mentioned, but we still don't have any knowledge about it.So would you please give us a lecture on American Dream? By the way, you have made great progress in your Chinese.Could you share with us some experience on how to improve our oral English?
We are all looking forward to seeing you then.Please inform us in advance if you cannot come.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作模板(四) 真诚道谢，友谊长存——感谢信
[题型技法]
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后，被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
假定你是李华。最近，你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交流学习。学习期间，你和房东Mr.Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲，给Mr.Wilson写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．回顾他对你的照顾和帮助；
3．邀请他来中国游览。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Mr.Wilson，
How is everything going? I've been back home now.I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.
While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.How I miss the days we spent together! Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon.I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me.By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improved my spoken English.
I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future.It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇问候，真诚地表达感谢。随后说明感谢的原因以及对方给予的具体帮助。最后表达希望，并邀请他来中国旅游。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇和句型，如gratitude是高级词汇，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了感叹句和定语从句，大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。高级短语keep in touch with和communicate with的正确使用为文章锦上添花；在It would be a great honor ...句中it作形式主语，so that ...引导目的状语从句，都显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力，增加了文章得分的亮点。
[增分佳句]
1．感谢信开头部分常用语
①I am writing to express my thanks for ...
我写信是为了表达我对……的谢意。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
③On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ...
我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激。
④I am extremely grateful to you for ...
我非常感谢你……
⑤Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ...非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。
2．感谢信结尾常用语
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
②Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you！/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。
③I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ...
如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
[热点押题]
假设你是李华，上周日不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品，本校外教Mr. Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It's such a great kindness that I'm extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板(五) 诚恳致歉，你我欢颜——道歉信
[题型技法]
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．说明原因；
3．另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Bob，
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇表明写作意图，表达歉意。随后说明道歉的原因并解释不能赴约的原因。“再次相约”部分，情节适当发挥，情真意切。
(2)范文中使用了convenient, available等高级词汇，并运用了较多的语法结构，如宾语从句that I cannot go to the bookstore ...和that I have to attend ...; so that ...引导的目的状语从句； If it's convenient for you ...为if引导的条件状语从句； If not ...状语从句的省略等。这展示了作者对复杂句式较强的运用能力，增加了文章得分的亮点。
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1．道歉信开头常用语
①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ...
我写这封信是因……向你道歉。
②I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing ...
因为没能……我向你表达最真诚的歉意/悔意。
③I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.为此事可能给你带来的任何不便，我深表歉意。
④I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ...
我必须为……真诚地向你道歉。
⑤I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ...
我遗憾地告知你我不能……
2．道歉信结尾常用语
①Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次道歉。
②Will you please accept my apology?
请你接受我的道歉，好吗？
③Please accept my sincere apology for ...once more.
请再次为……接受我真诚的道歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。
⑤Once again, I'm sorry for my inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，你从朋友Mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写一封道歉信，请求原谅。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头与结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to tell you that I've lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now I'm expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.
Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However, I promise that I'll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.
Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(六) 礼貌求助，成功首步——求助信
[题型技法]
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I'm not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇自我介绍并表明写信意图。随后说明求助的具体内容(请对方帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式)。最后表达希望和感激。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇和句型，如therefore关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯通，而且突出了写信目的。Would you please do ...？是请求别人帮助的句型，用得恰到好处，符合说话者的身份；过去分词attached作定语，使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表达了相同的意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也展示了作者较高的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1．求助信开头常用语
①My name is ...I'm writing to you for some help.
我叫……，我写信是向你寻求一些帮助。
②I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.
我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面对如此多的困难，我不得不向你求助。
2．寻求帮助常用语
①I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
②I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解决这个问题。
3．求助信结尾常用语
①I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
②I will appreciate any of your help.
我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。
③I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
我将非常感激你及时的帮助。
[热点押题]
假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在3月10日举办英语配音比赛(dubbing contest)。你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友Peter写一封邮件，请他给你推荐一部电影。内容包括：
1．主题是关于友谊；
2．时间限定在4到5分钟；
3．每个节目最多6个角色。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I am writing to you, hoping to seek for help.
Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a try.However, I don't know which film is suitable.As a movie fan, would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship.And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.What's more, there should not be more than six characters in each video.
I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(七) 书信往来，快乐分享——普通书信与电子邮件
[题型技法]
英文email和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，其开头和结尾常常都会给出，正文根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习唐诗；
3．课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Leslie，
I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now I'm writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People's Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8：00 am to 10：00 am.Besides, I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.
If you have any questions, please let me know.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开门见山告知写邮件的目的，随后表述具体内容(学习时间、地点；学习唐诗；提前了解唐朝的历史)，最后表达希望并期盼回复。
(2)范文中使用了较高级的词汇，如be fond of, are to meet, in advance等，增加了文章的得分点。另外，范文中也应用了较多的语法结构，如where引导的定语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，提高了文章的写作档次，也显示了作者较高的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1．开头部分常用语
①Thank you for your letter of December 15th.
谢谢你12月15号的来信。
②I'm very glad/pleased to tell you that ...
我很高兴告诉你……
③I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。
④Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.
谢谢你邀请我参加圣诞晚会。
⑤How are you getting along with your study?
你近来学习进展怎样？
2．话题引入常用语
①I'm very glad to tell you something about ...
我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。
②As far as I know/am concerned/can see ...
据我所知……
3．结尾部分常用语
①Please write to me soon and tell me about your ...
请马上写信给我，告诉我关于你的……
②I'm looking forward to your reply.
我盼望着你的回复。
③If so, please email me in response ...
如果这样，请给我回复邮件……
④With kind/best regards/wishes!
最美好的问候/祝福！
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣，希望你能教他几首中国古诗词。请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．乐于帮助；
2．确定见面相关事宜(如时间、地点等等)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on with you recently？
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on with you recently？I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help.As a matter of fact, it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you.The following are my arrangements for it.
Firstly, let's fix a time when both of us are available.What about this Saturday afternoon? In addition, there is no doubt that the People's Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry, which is not far away from my home nor yours.If it is not convenient for you, please tell me to make necessary adjustments.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作模板(八) 热情洋溢，展现自我——演讲稿
[题型技法]
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，是人们在工作和学习生活中经常使用的一种文体，该文体语言通常极富感染力。演讲稿写作首先要明确发言的对象，对不同听众的发言，内容自然就不一样。演讲稿的句子要求短小精悍，铿锵有力。立场要明确，观点要鲜明。赞成什么、反对什么要旗帜鲜明，不能模棱两可。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2016·天津高考书面表达)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1．回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；
2．谈谈收获或感想；
3．表达祝愿与期望。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends，
How time flies！
Thank you.
满分范文
Dear friends，
How time flies！I am Li Jin, president of the Students' Union of Chenguang Middle School.It's my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.During the twoweek activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.After the twoweek exchange activities，we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever.Wish you all the best!
Thank you.
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇自我介绍并引入话题。随后表述演讲具体内容(回顾双方的交流活动；谈谈收获或感想)。最后感谢倾听并表达希望。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点句型，如sharing this moment with ...是现在分词作状语； where we competed with each other ...是where引导的定语从句； The past two weeks witnessed ...运用了无灵主语句； It is not only ... but also ...运用了not only ... but also ...并列结构等。这些都是提升文章档次的句子，也显示了作者较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的采分点。
[增分佳句]
1．开头部分常用语
①My name is ...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about ...
我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
②Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on ...
大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。
③It's my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about ...
很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下关于……
2．主体部分常用语
①The topic of my speech is ...
我演讲的主题是……
②I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我将分五个主要方面谈论这个主题。
③I would like to concentrate on the problem of ...
我想把重点集中在……问题上。
3．结尾部分常用语
①I hope I have made myself understood.
希望我说的大家都能理解。
②That's all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点，我就讲这些。
③By way of conclusion, I'd like to quote what Newton once said.
我想借用牛顿曾经说过的话来结束我今天的发言。
④Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个演讲的机会。
[热点押题]
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，你的母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语演讲稿。
1．学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2．学会做人：真诚、友善等；
3．其他方面：考生自拟。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
Thank you!
参考范文：
Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently.Developing a good habit is of great importance.It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others.In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently.They are really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
写作模板(九) 及时通知，做好准备——通知
[题型技法]
通知是应用文中较为常见的一种形式，分为书面通知和口头通知。英语书面通知主要由4部分组成：标题、通知正文、发通知单位、发通知的日期等。标题(NOTICE)写在正文上方居中，发通知的单位一般写在正文右下角，发通知的日期一般写在正文右下角发通知单位的下方。口头通知所使用的语言具有明显的口语特征，通俗易懂。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1．短片内容：学校的发展；
2．放映时间、地点；
3．欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
NOTICE
Boys and girls，
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2：00 to 4：00 in the afternoon on June 9th.What's more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time then.
The Students' Union
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇提醒并引入话题。随后表述短片的内容和放映的时间、地点，并欢迎对短片提出意见。最后号召大家观看短片。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点句型，如．..which is about ...是which引导的非限制性定语从句； ...enjoying the movie, having ... and giving your own comments运用了现在分词作状语； Hopefully, you would make it to our activity.等。这些都是提升文章档次的表达，也展示了作者较强的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1．提醒和引入话题常用语
①May I have/call your attention, please?
请大家注意一下，好吗？
②Attention, please, everybody!
请大家注意！
③I have an announcement to make.
我有一件事情要宣布。
④I have something to tell you.
我要告诉大家一些事情。
2．通知具体事项部分常用语
①There will be a talk this afternoon.
今天下午将有一场讨论会。
②The Student Union has decided that ...
学生会已决定……
③We shall have a lecture on ...
我们将举行关于……的研讨会。
④It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ...
已经决定我们将参观……
3．结尾部分常用语
①Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时到场，不要迟到。
②I hope you can have a good time.
我希望你们玩得开心。
③Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
④That's all.Thank you.
就这些，谢谢。
[热点押题]
假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英语以短文的形式写一篇通知，将周末农家采摘活动安排传达给住户。内容包括：
时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00
内容：采摘苹果
报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前
提示：戴帽子、手套
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：社区 community
参考范文：
NOTICE
Dear neighbors，
We are very happy to announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we are going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8：00 a．m.at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we'll be back at about 11 o'clock.
If you are interested，please sign up at the office before 5：00 p．m.next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.
We are looking forward to your joining us.
The Community Committee
好作文是“仿”出来的。针对全国卷近几年一直稳定考查书信文体这一命题实际，我们对每一体裁精心架构写作模板，循模板写作，确保像模像样、文正体范；迅速打开思路，缩短考场构思时间。
写作模板(一) 良药“甜”口，忠言“顺”耳——建议信
[题型技法]
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
(2018·北京高考书面表达)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐他上哪所大学；
3．建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
满分范文
Dear Jim，
I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)范文首段交代写信目的并表示欢迎；第二段阐述建议他上北京大学的原因及需要做的准备工作；最后一段表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章一气呵成、要点齐全且衔接流畅自然。
(2)文中运用了如“unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for”等高级词汇；句式方面的高级表达有：I would like to express my warmest welcome ...恰当运用了不定式作宾语；Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰当运用了现在分词作状语；one of the best universities in China作同位语；where you can be completely soaked in恰当运用了定语从句； it's my pleasure to show ...中it用作形式主语。
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1．表达建议信写信目的常用语
①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
②I am writing to express my views concerning ...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
③You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2．表达建议常用语
①I think the most suitable ...for you is ...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
②I would like to suggest that ...
我想建议……
③You'd better .../It's better to ...
你最好……/最好是……
④As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
⑤For one thing ...; for another ...
一方面……，另一方面……
⑥If I were you, I would ...
如果我是你，我会……
⑦I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3．表达希望常用语
①I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
[热点押题]
(2019·长沙模拟)假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Wang Fang，
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you don't want to do that. I think you don't need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions.
First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents，who just want the best for you.Second，I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third，you should arrange your time properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not object to it.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(二) 自信申请，心诚则灵——申请信
[题型技法]
申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
(2018·浙江高考应用文写作)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
1．口语能力；
2．相关经验；
3．应聘目的。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners. Secondly, I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开门见山说明自己写信的目的；然后详述自己的优势以及目的，简洁明了，不拖泥带水；最后表达感谢和期盼。
(2)运用了firstly ...secondly 等语序标志词，运用了一些较为地道的搭配，in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth....; have a better understanding of ...等，这些都使得这篇短文读起来层次分明、连贯、顺畅。
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1．表达申请信写信目的常用语
①I'm writing to apply for the position of ...
我写信申请……的职位。
②I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...
我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。
③I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.
我对……感兴趣，希望加入到这个重要项目中。
④I learned on your website that ...
我从你们的网站上得知……
2．表达个人优势的常用语
①I won the first prize in ...competition.
我获得了……比赛的一等奖。
②As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates.
作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。
③For one thing, I can help ...For another thing, I can improve ...一方面，我能帮助……另一方面，我能提高……
④My main specialty is ...
我的特长是……
3．表达感谢，期盼回复的常用语
①If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ...
如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电……
②I will be grateful/I'd appreciate it if you could ...
如果你能……我将感激不尽。
③Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
感谢你考虑我的申请，期待与你见面。
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校将接待一批来自美国的交换生，学校现在征集寄宿家庭。你想申请成为寄宿家庭，请根据下面的写作提纲，写一封申请信。内容包括：
1．个人情况(年龄、性别、性格和爱好)；
2．英语水平；
3．家庭条件；
4．相关经历。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Senior Three.I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to become a host family.
The following are my advantages.First, I'm openminded and like to make new friends.Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty communicating with native speakers.Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest.More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience.
I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(三) 以诚相邀，以礼相约——邀请信
[题型技法]
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时，要注意邀请信的交际性，语气要真挚，避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高，只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式、语气要热情有礼，态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
(2018·天津高考书面表达)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点；
(2)邀请他的原因；
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris，
I have good news to tell you.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Jin
满分范文
Dear Chris，
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July, which interests me greatly.
On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it. We are desperately in need of your help. So as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us. I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results. What's more, I will email you our training plan soon, hoping you can offer some constructive suggestions regarding it.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Jin
范文赏析
(1)文章开门见山交代比赛的时间和地点，随后说明自己和同学组成团队参赛并邀请Chris加入，并希望Chris对计划提出建议，言简意赅。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇，如interest作动词， form a group, participate in, accumulate, desperately in need of, joint efforts, undoubtedly等。在句式方面，既有which引导的定语从句又有名词性从句I am convinced that ...和现在分词作状语 hoping you ...等。
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1．发出邀请常用语
①I am writing to invite you to .../I'm writing to tell you that there will be a ...
我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你有一个(场)……
②I am very pleased to invite you to participate in ...to be held in ...
我很高兴邀请你参加在……举行的……
③I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...
我想你要是能来参加……那就太好了。
2．表达活动内容常用语
①Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
本次活动的一些细节内容如下。
②During the ...we will have lots of activities which you will be interested in.First ...Second ...In addition ...
在……期间我们将有很多你会感兴趣的活动。第一……第二……另外……
③I am sure that you must be very interested in the activities at the party.For one thing ...For another ...
我相信你一定对聚会上的活动很感兴趣。一方面……另一方面……
3．结尾部分常用语
①Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to ...?
请写信告诉我是否你能来……好吗？
②If you are interested in it, please let me know and I'll send you more information.
如果你感兴趣，请告诉我，我给你发送更多的信息。
③My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来，我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
④I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里见到你，请尽快告诉我你的决定。
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，是学校英语俱乐部的负责人。请你根据下列要点给学校的外教Steve写一封邀请信。
1．邀请Steve参加于周一晚上7点钟在学校礼堂举行的英语角活动；
2．请Steve介绍“美国梦(American Dream)”；
3．请Steve根据自己学汉语的经验谈谈如何提高英语口语。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Steve，
On behalf of the English Club, I am writing to invite you to join our English Corner next Monday.It will begin at seven o'clock in the evening at the school hall.
In many films “American Dream” is mentioned, but we still don't have any knowledge about it.So would you please give us a lecture on American Dream? By the way, you have made great progress in your Chinese.Could you share with us some experience on how to improve our oral English?
We are all looking forward to seeing you then.Please inform us in advance if you cannot come.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作模板(四) 真诚道谢，友谊长存——感谢信
[题型技法]
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后，被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构为：
[典例悟法]
假定你是李华。最近，你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交流学习。学习期间，你和房东Mr.Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲，给Mr.Wilson写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．回顾他对你的照顾和帮助；
3．邀请他来中国游览。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Mr.Wilson，
How is everything going? I've been back home now.I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.
While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.How I miss the days we spent together! Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon.I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me.By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improved my spoken English.
I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future.It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇问候，真诚地表达感谢。随后说明感谢的原因以及对方给予的具体帮助。最后表达希望，并邀请他来中国旅游。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇和句型，如gratitude是高级词汇，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了感叹句和定语从句，大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。高级短语keep in touch with和communicate with的正确使用为文章锦上添花；在It would be a great honor ...句中it作形式主语，so that ...引导目的状语从句，都显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力，增加了文章得分的亮点。
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1．感谢信开头部分常用语
①I am writing to express my thanks for ...
我写信是为了表达我对……的谢意。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
③On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ...
我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激。
④I am extremely grateful to you for ...
我非常感谢你……
⑤Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ...非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。
2．感谢信结尾常用语
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
②Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you！/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。
③I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ...
如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
[热点押题]
假设你是李华，上周日不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品，本校外教Mr. Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It's such a great kindness that I'm extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板(五) 诚恳致歉，你我欢颜——道歉信
[题型技法]
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．说明原因；
3．另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Bob，
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇表明写作意图，表达歉意。随后说明道歉的原因并解释不能赴约的原因。“再次相约”部分，情节适当发挥，情真意切。
(2)范文中使用了convenient, available等高级词汇，并运用了较多的语法结构，如宾语从句that I cannot go to the bookstore ...和that I have to attend ...; so that ...引导的目的状语从句； If it's convenient for you ...为if引导的条件状语从句； If not ...状语从句的省略等。这展示了作者对复杂句式较强的运用能力，增加了文章得分的亮点。
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1．道歉信开头常用语
①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ...
我写这封信是因……向你道歉。
②I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing ...
因为没能……我向你表达最真诚的歉意/悔意。
③I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.为此事可能给你带来的任何不便，我深表歉意。
④I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ...
我必须为……真诚地向你道歉。
⑤I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ...
我遗憾地告知你我不能……
2．道歉信结尾常用语
①Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次道歉。
②Will you please accept my apology?
请你接受我的道歉，好吗？
③Please accept my sincere apology for ...once more.
请再次为……接受我真诚的道歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。
⑤Once again, I'm sorry for my inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，你从朋友Mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写一封道歉信，请求原谅。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头与结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to tell you that I've lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now I'm expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.
Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However, I promise that I'll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.
Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(六) 礼貌求助，成功首步——求助信
[题型技法]
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I'm not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇自我介绍并表明写信意图。随后说明求助的具体内容(请对方帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式)。最后表达希望和感激。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇和句型，如therefore关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯通，而且突出了写信目的。Would you please do ...？是请求别人帮助的句型，用得恰到好处，符合说话者的身份；过去分词attached作定语，使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表达了相同的意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也展示了作者较高的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1．求助信开头常用语
①My name is ...I'm writing to you for some help.
我叫……，我写信是向你寻求一些帮助。
②I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.
我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面对如此多的困难，我不得不向你求助。
2．寻求帮助常用语
①I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
②I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解决这个问题。
3．求助信结尾常用语
①I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
②I will appreciate any of your help.
我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。
③I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
我将非常感激你及时的帮助。
[热点押题]
假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在3月10日举办英语配音比赛(dubbing contest)。你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友Peter写一封邮件，请他给你推荐一部电影。内容包括：
1．主题是关于友谊；
2．时间限定在4到5分钟；
3．每个节目最多6个角色。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I am writing to you, hoping to seek for help.
Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a try.However, I don't know which film is suitable.As a movie fan, would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship.And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.What's more, there should not be more than six characters in each video.
I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板(七) 书信往来，快乐分享——普通书信与电子邮件
[题型技法]
英文email和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，其开头和结尾常常都会给出，正文根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习唐诗；
3．课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Leslie，
I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now I'm writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People's Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8：00 am to 10：00 am.Besides, I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.
If you have any questions, please let me know.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开门见山告知写邮件的目的，随后表述具体内容(学习时间、地点；学习唐诗；提前了解唐朝的历史)，最后表达希望并期盼回复。
(2)范文中使用了较高级的词汇，如be fond of, are to meet, in advance等，增加了文章的得分点。另外，范文中也应用了较多的语法结构，如where引导的定语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，提高了文章的写作档次，也显示了作者较高的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1．开头部分常用语
①Thank you for your letter of December 15th.
谢谢你12月15号的来信。
②I'm very glad/pleased to tell you that ...
我很高兴告诉你……
③I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。
④Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.
谢谢你邀请我参加圣诞晚会。
⑤How are you getting along with your study?
你近来学习进展怎样？
2．话题引入常用语
①I'm very glad to tell you something about ...
我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。
②As far as I know/am concerned/can see ...
据我所知……
3．结尾部分常用语
①Please write to me soon and tell me about your ...
请马上写信给我，告诉我关于你的……
②I'm looking forward to your reply.
我盼望着你的回复。
③If so, please email me in response ...
如果这样，请给我回复邮件……
④With kind/best regards/wishes!
最美好的问候/祝福！
[热点押题]
假定你是李华，上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣，希望你能教他几首中国古诗词。请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．乐于帮助；
2．确定见面相关事宜(如时间、地点等等)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on with you recently？
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on with you recently？I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help.As a matter of fact, it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you.The following are my arrangements for it.
Firstly, let's fix a time when both of us are available.What about this Saturday afternoon? In addition, there is no doubt that the People's Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry, which is not far away from my home nor yours.If it is not convenient for you, please tell me to make necessary adjustments.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作模板(八) 热情洋溢，展现自我——演讲稿
[题型技法]
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，是人们在工作和学习生活中经常使用的一种文体，该文体语言通常极富感染力。演讲稿写作首先要明确发言的对象，对不同听众的发言，内容自然就不一样。演讲稿的句子要求短小精悍，铿锵有力。立场要明确，观点要鲜明。赞成什么、反对什么要旗帜鲜明，不能模棱两可。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2016·天津高考书面表达)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1．回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；
2．谈谈收获或感想；
3．表达祝愿与期望。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends，
How time flies！
Thank you.
满分范文
Dear friends，
How time flies！I am Li Jin, president of the Students' Union of Chenguang Middle School.It's my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.During the twoweek activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.After the twoweek exchange activities，we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever.Wish you all the best!
Thank you.
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇自我介绍并引入话题。随后表述演讲具体内容(回顾双方的交流活动；谈谈收获或感想)。最后感谢倾听并表达希望。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点句型，如sharing this moment with ...是现在分词作状语； where we competed with each other ...是where引导的定语从句； The past two weeks witnessed ...运用了无灵主语句； It is not only ... but also ...运用了not only ... but also ...并列结构等。这些都是提升文章档次的句子，也显示了作者较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的采分点。
[增分佳句]
1．开头部分常用语
①My name is ...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about ...
我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
②Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on ...
大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。
③It's my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about ...
很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下关于……
2．主体部分常用语
①The topic of my speech is ...
我演讲的主题是……
②I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我将分五个主要方面谈论这个主题。
③I would like to concentrate on the problem of ...
我想把重点集中在……问题上。
3．结尾部分常用语
①I hope I have made myself understood.
希望我说的大家都能理解。
②That's all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点，我就讲这些。
③By way of conclusion, I'd like to quote what Newton once said.
我想借用牛顿曾经说过的话来结束我今天的发言。
④Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个演讲的机会。
[热点押题]
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，你的母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语演讲稿。
1．学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2．学会做人：真诚、友善等；
3．其他方面：考生自拟。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
Thank you!
参考范文：
Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently.Developing a good habit is of great importance.It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others.In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently.They are really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
写作模板(九) 及时通知，做好准备——通知
[题型技法]
通知是应用文中较为常见的一种形式，分为书面通知和口头通知。英语书面通知主要由4部分组成：标题、通知正文、发通知单位、发通知的日期等。标题(NOTICE)写在正文上方居中，发通知的单位一般写在正文右下角，发通知的日期一般写在正文右下角发通知单位的下方。口头通知所使用的语言具有明显的口语特征，通俗易懂。具体写作结构如下：
[典例悟法]
(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1．短片内容：学校的发展；
2．放映时间、地点；
3．欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分范文
NOTICE
Boys and girls，
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2：00 to 4：00 in the afternoon on June 9th.What's more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time then.
The Students' Union
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇提醒并引入话题。随后表述短片的内容和放映的时间、地点，并欢迎对短片提出意见。最后号召大家观看短片。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点句型，如．..which is about ...是which引导的非限制性定语从句； ...enjoying the movie, having ... and giving your own comments运用了现在分词作状语； Hopefully, you would make it to our activity.等。这些都是提升文章档次的表达，也展示了作者较强的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1．提醒和引入话题常用语
①May I have/call your attention, please?
请大家注意一下，好吗？
②Attention, please, everybody!
请大家注意！
③I have an announcement to make.
我有一件事情要宣布。
④I have something to tell you.
我要告诉大家一些事情。
2．通知具体事项部分常用语
①There will be a talk this afternoon.
今天下午将有一场讨论会。
②The Student Union has decided that ...
学生会已决定……
③We shall have a lecture on ...
我们将举行关于……的研讨会。
④It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ...
已经决定我们将参观……
3．结尾部分常用语
①Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时到场，不要迟到。
②I hope you can have a good time.
我希望你们玩得开心。
③Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
④That's all.Thank you.
就这些，谢谢。
[热点押题]
假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英语以短文的形式写一篇通知，将周末农家采摘活动安排传达给住户。内容包括：
时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00
内容：采摘苹果
报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前
提示：戴帽子、手套
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：社区 community
参考范文：
NOTICE
Dear neighbors，
We are very happy to announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we are going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8：00 a．m.at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we'll be back at about 11 o'clock.
If you are interested，please sign up at the office before 5：00 p．m.next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.
We are looking forward to your joining us.
The Community Committee
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