2021届高考英语通用版一轮复习考点专讲：考点59书面表达感谢信学案
展开考点59 书面表达感谢信
高考频度：★★★★☆
模板一
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
_______
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。
感谢信一般分为三个部分：
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
感谢信的写作指导
1.有序组织要点
首先，应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；其次，应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢；然后，应肯定对方的帮助恰当好处；最后，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。
2.灵活把握时态
感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常，在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时，应用过去时态；在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可以使用现在完成时态；在涉及到现状时，应用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或希望时，使用一般将来时态。
3.运用规范的语言
感谢信有其自身的特色语言，在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方的帮助中获益时，可以从多种句型表达，要让句式灵活多样，这样更能增强表达效果。
4.表达感激之情
感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢，因此语言要诚挚，友善；在信的开头和结尾部分一般会使用Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concern或 Thanks again and wish you all the best之类的语言表达感激之情。
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
常用句式
I am writing this letter to thank you for …
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…
I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
常用句式
It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…
It was your kind help that … (强调句型)
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
常用句式
Thanks again for your generous help.
I appreciate it more than I can say.
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
题组一
Writing 1（2019年浙江卷）
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 2
假定你是李华，你校外教Marry回美国度假即将返回，给你发来e-mail，询问是否需要她帮你从美国买些礼物。请给她回复—封电子邮件。要点如下：
1. 询问度假情况；
2. 表达感谢；
3. 希望买一本英语词典和几本美国畅销小说。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Marry,
I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing3
假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际，请你给任教期满已回国的外教Peter写一封感谢信。要点如下：
1.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助；
2.表达感激之情及祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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题组二（名校模拟题）
Writing 1（2020届安徽高三开学考试）
假设你是高三学生李华,你需要设计一份英语俱乐部招收新成员的海报。你想请外籍教帅 Mr. Brown帮助策划。请根据提示,用英语给Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件,向他寻求帮助,要点如下：
1. 设计海报的目的；
2. 为何要求助 请Mr. Brown帮助设计海报；
3. 为何希望得到他的指导—— Mr. Brown按长设计海报,并且有这方面的经验；
4. 感谢他的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 2（2020届四川省南充高级中学高三月考）
假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上以书信形式表达出来。
主要内容如下：
1. 感谢父母的关心、鼓励；
2. 对父母的期望；
3. 学习打算。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：100左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
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Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 3（2020届广东佛山一中高三月考）
假定你是育才中学的学生会主席李华，受美国亚特兰大ELCA高中(Eagle’s Landing Christian Academy) 学生会主席Peter邀请，计划下个月带领10位学生会成员赴该校进行为期一周的交流，请你给对方写一封邮件咨询相关准备工作。内容包括：
1. 感谢对方的邀请；
2. 询问相关事宜（最佳到达时间、具体日程安排、需要携带的物品）;
3. 期盼尽早得到答复。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题组一
Writing 1
【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA. How is your holiday? You must have had great fun together with your family back in your motherland after working so long in China. I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us afterwards.
It is very kind of you to offer to buy gifts for me. I would quite appreciate it if you could buy me an English dictionary and several popular novels which/that sell well in your country. I am sure they will help improve my English. I will also prepare a gift for you in return.
Thanks again for your kindness. We are all looking forward to seeing you soon. Welcome back to our school!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing3
Dear Peter,
Thanksgiving is drawing near! I am writing to express my thanks to you.
Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.
Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题组二
Writing1
【范文】
Dear Mr Brown,
I’m writing to ask you for help in the hope that you will be kind to help me.
To enrich our school life and improve our English level, every year we hold an activity, appealing to new members to join our English club. For a long time, I have been longing to organize English clubs and throw English parties if possible. What I should do is put up attractive posters.
I’ve heard you are expert at designing posters and have some experience in the field, so I’d like you to help create a poster. If you agree, I will come to your house at the time most convenient to you.
I’d be grateful if you’d like to give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【范文】
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I’m under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you could have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contribute to my staying in a good state. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 3
【范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. Thank you so much for inviting us to have a one-week communication activity at your school and I am writing to enquire about further details.
I am planning to take 10 members of our Student Union to go to your school next month, hoping to make good use of this opportunity to communicate and learn from each other. So I’d like to know what the best date of our arrival is. Above all, could you possibly send me a specific daily schedule of the activity in advance so that I can prepare better for the trip? Last but not least, this being our first experience to go to America, would you be kind enough to offer some suggestions on what necessities we specially need to take with us?
We are really excited and looking forward to the activity. I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
