全国统考2021高考英语一轮复习第3编写作攻略攻略二三议论文学案含解析
展开三、议论文
一 正反观点对比类议论文
1.技法点拨
2．句式积累
(1)段首常用语
We have had a heated discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged by parks.
关于公园是否该收门票的问题，我们进行了热烈的讨论。
We have had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to school.
我们展开了一个调查，是关于学生是否可以带手机到学校的问题。
Opinions vary from one person to another.
每个人意见不一。
(2)正文常用语
However, every coin has two sides.
然而，任何事情都有两面性。
60% of the students are for the idea, while 40% of them think otherwise.
60%的学生赞成这个主意，然而，40%的人持相反的看法。
However, people who are against it don't think so.
然而，反对它的人们认为并非如此。
(3)段尾常用语
As far as I'm concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that it's beneficial to carry mobile phones to school.
依我之见，在某种程度上我赞同后者，我认为带手机到学校是有益处的。
Only in this way can we enjoy a greener world.
只有这样我们才能享有一个更加绿色的世界。
3．经典例文
(2019·江苏高考)请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1．用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；
2．在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
[精彩范文1]
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the socalled inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.
[精彩范文2]
Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students. Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What's more, the traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.
4．写作模板
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) ________ (作文题目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in ________ (题目议题). Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ________ (优点一). And secondly ________ (优点二).
Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” ________ (讨论议题) is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ________ (缺点一). In addition, ________ (缺点二).
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of ________ (讨论议题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ________ (讨论议题)．
5．仿写演练
最近有关“体育老师能不能当班主任”的话题出现在新浪微博的热搜上。假定你是晨光中学的李华，学校校报针对此话题进行征文，要通过书信方式来征求对此话题的看法。请你根据以下信息写一封书信来表达自己的观点。内容包括：
1．阐述人们对此话题的不同意见；
2．结合自身经历谈谈自己的观点。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name is Li Hua.
[精彩范文]
Dear_Sir_or_Madam，
My_name_is_Li_Hua. Recently, there is a debate that “Should PE teachers be head teachers at school？” There are two sides of opinions about it.
Some parents worried that the PE teacher may not be familiar with most of the main subjects. They think this will influence students' study. Others expressed their support for the PE teacher. In their opinion, with less pressure in teaching, a head teacher from PE would pay more attention to the class and be more patient with students.
As far as I am concerned, there's no bad for students to have a PE head teacher. In our first year of high school, our head teacher was a PE teacher, but he was stricter with us than any of the other head teachers. Our score in every test was higher than that in other classes.
In short, I am in favor of PE teacher as a head teacher.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
二 谚语、警句或概括类议论文
1.技法点拨
2．句式积累
Last week, an incident really enabled me to have a better understanding of the famous saying, “Honesty is the best policy.”
上周的事件使我对“诚实为上策”这句名言有了更进一步的理解。
It's well known that the proverb “Practice makes perfect.” plays an important role in inspiring people to work hard.
众所周知，谚语“熟能生巧”在鼓励人们努力工作方面起了重要作用。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
不用说早睡早起是值得的。
Only then did I realize that integrity and responsibility are good virtues we Chinese citizens should cherish.
只有在那时，我才意识到，诚信和责任是我们中华子孙应该珍视的优秀品德。
3．经典例文
(2018·江苏高考)请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny
Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the Internet. But the information I got was rich and varied，or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.
Su Hua 6 July, Sunny
This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；
2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
[精彩范文1]
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
[精彩范文2]
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others' judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
4．写作模板
The good old proverb ________ (名言或谚语) reminds us that ________ (释义). Indeed, we can learn many things from it.
First of all, ________ (理由一). For example, ________ (举例说明). Secondly, ________ (理由二). Another case is that ________ (举例说明). Furthermore, ________ (理由三)．
In my opinion, ________ (我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying ________ (再次引用名言警句). If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
5．仿写演练
一次英语课上，老师要求每人就自己喜欢的一句名人名言用英语谈谈自己的体会。假如你喜欢的名言是“The good seaman is known in bad weather.”请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。
1．说出该名言的基本含义；
2．举例谈谈自己的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[精彩范文]
Among so many famous sayings, my favorite one is “The good seaman is known in bad weather.”， which means that only after fighting with all kinds of bad weather may an ordinary seaman become a good one.
My uncle Alan, born in an extremely poor family, once had a great dream of writing. Because of poverty, he was forced to drop out of school at an early age. But he never gave up his dream. While working in a factory, however tired he was, he always tried to find time to read books borrowed from others and practice writing some articles about life. He experienced lots of unbelievable difficulties. After ten years' effort, now he is an amateur writer for a magazine.
Whoever wants to succeed has to go through many difficulties or challenges. As long as you are determined, your dream will come true sooner or later.
