高中英语2026届高考人与自然类读后续写高分例句模板和练习(附参考答案)
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这是一份高中英语2026届高考人与自然类读后续写高分例句模板和练习(附参考答案),共9页。试卷主要包含了开头过渡句,中间动作+环境描写,心理变化句,结尾升华句,套用模板,高级词汇替换,专项练习等内容,欢迎下载使用。
一、开头过渡句
1.It was when I witnessed the tuching scene that I felt a mixture f shck and awe verwhelming me.
目睹这动人一幕,我心中涌起难以抑制的震惊与敬畏。(强调句型)
2.Wandering aimlessly in the wild, I was instantly struck by the breathtaking beauty f nature, lst in admiratin.
漫无目的地漫步野外,我瞬间被大自然震撼的美景所震撼,沉醉其中。(现在分词作状语+形容词短语作伴随状语)
3.The instant I saw the scene, I std rted t the spt, frzen with guilt at the damage humans had dne t nature.
一看到眼前景象,我便僵在原地,因人类对自然造成的破坏而满心愧疚。(名词短语引导时间状语+过去分词作状语)
4.The mment I apprached the lvely creature, a strng sense f cnnectin with nature welled up in my heart.
当我靠近这可爱的生灵时,一股与自然紧密相连的情感在心底油然而生。(名词短语引导时间状语)
二、中间动作+环境描写(核心得分段·升级版)
1.Gently appraching the frightened creature, I held my breath, fearing that any sudden mve wuld disturb its peaceful wrld.
我轻手轻脚靠近受惊的小生命,屏住呼吸,生怕任何突兀的举动惊扰它的宁静。(现在分词作状语+现在分词作伴随状语)
2.Rather than harm it, I reached ut my hand slwly, with the intentin f shwing my sincere kindness and respect.
我不但没有伤害它,反而缓缓伸出手,意在表达我真挚的善意与尊重。(rather than 对比结构+with短语作状语)
3.Hwling vilently, the wind shk the trees crazily, leaving the whle wrld at the mercy f nature’s pwerful frce.
狂风呼啸肆虐,疯狂摇晃着树木,整个世界都臣服于大自然磅礴的力量之下。(现在分词作状语+leave复合结构)
4.Watching the injured creature struggling desperately t survive, I made up my mind that I wuld rescue it and set it free back t nature.
看着受伤的小动物拼命挣扎求生,我下定决心救助它,让它重归自然。(现在分词作状语+宾语从句)
三、心理变化句(升级版)
1.Hardly had I realized its situatin when all my fear and indifference faded away, giving way t a strng desire t prtect nature.
我刚意识到它的处境,所有恐惧与冷漠便烟消云散,取而代之的是守护自然的强烈渴望。(hardly…when…倒装句型+现在分词作结果状语)
2.A strng sense f respnsibility surged thrugh every cell f my bdy, making me fully aware that humans and nature are inseparable.
强烈的责任感涌遍全身,让我深刻意识到人与自然密不可分。(现在分词作结果状语+宾语从句)
3.It was the charm and strength f nature that awakened my awareness f envirnmental prtectin and raised my cncern fr all lives.
正是大自然的魅力与力量,唤醒了我的环保意识,也让我开始关怀所有生命。(强调句型+并列谓语)
四、结尾升华句(升级版)
1.What the unfrgettable experience taught me was that humans are suppsed t live in harmny with nature.
这段难忘经历教会我的是:人类理应与自然和谐共生。(what引导主语从句+表语从句)
2.Frm then n, I made a firm decisin t serve as a guardian f nature, ding whatever I can t preserve ur shared hmeland.
从那时起,我坚定立志成为自然守护者,尽己所能守护我们共同的家园。(非谓语动词作伴随状语+宾语从句)
3.Nt nly des nature ffer us amazing beauty, but it als instructs us t value and respect every life n earth.
大自然不仅赠予我们绝美风光,更教会我们珍惜与尊重世间万物。(nt nly…but als…部分倒装句型)
4.Only by shwing respect and lve fr nature can we build a mre beautiful wrld fr urselves as well as generatins t cme.
唯有心怀敬畏、珍爱自然,我们才能为自己与后代缔造更美好的世界。(nly+状语置于句首倒装句型)
五、套用模板(高级版)
Wandering aimlessly in the wild, I came acrss a weak creature struggling in danger.Hardly had I seen it when I held my breath and apprached gently, trying t assist it ut f truble.Witnessing its helplessness, a strng sense f respnsibility welled up inside me.It dawned n me that humans shuld live in harmny with nature.Frm then n, I determined t be a guardian f nature and treat every living creature with kindness.
漫步野外,我偶遇一只身陷险境的弱小生灵。一见到它,我便屏住呼吸轻轻靠近,尽力助它脱险。目睹它的无助,一股强烈的责任感涌上心头。我恍然明白,人类应与自然和谐共生。从此,我立志守护自然,善待每一个生命。(分词作状语 / hardly…when…倒装 / it作形式主语)
六、高级词汇替换
【环境与生命】
beautiful → breathtaking / stunning / picturesque 震撼的/绝美/如画
dangerus → terrifying / desperate 凶险的/绝境中的
living thing → creature / living being 生灵/生命
【情感心理】
mved → deeply tuched / verwhelmed with affectin 深受触动/满怀温情
srry → guilty / regretful / ashamed 愧疚的/懊悔的/羞愧的
calm → peaceful / relieved 平静的/释然的
【动作行为】
help → rescue / assist / shelter 营救/救助/庇护
watch → bserve / gaze at / stare at 观察/凝望/凝视
prtect → preserve / defend 保护/守护
七.高分短语
1.understand → it dawns n sb that… 某人突然意识到
2.influence → exert a prfund influence n 对……产生深远影响
3.remember → bear in mind / cherish frever 铭记/永远珍藏
八、专项练习
【练习一】单词填空
1.The scenery in the muntain is s ____________ that I can’t help admiring it.
2.We shuld ____________ every living thing in nature.
3.I was ____________ by the pwer f nature shwn in the strm.
4.It’s ur duty t ____________ wildlife frm being harmed.
5.This experience will ____________ n my attitude twards nature.
【练习二】同义句改写
1.The frest is extremely beautiful.
2.I felt srry fr plluting the river.
3.We shuld help the injured animals.
【练习三】句子升级
1.A strng sense f respnsibility surged thrugh my heart.
2.Humans are suppsed t live in harmny with nature.
3.We shuld raise awareness f prtecting wildlife.
【练习四】微写作
写作要求:以“救助受伤小动物并放归自然”为主题,语句连贯,情感真挚,适合考场直接套用。(运用分词作状语、倒装、with复合结构)
附:参考答案
【练习一】单词填空
1.breathtaking
2.cherish
3.astnished
4.prtect
5.exert a prfund influence
【练习二】同义句改写
1.S breathtaking is the frest that I was ttally lst in its amazing beauty.这片森林美得令人窒息,我完全沉醉在它迷人的景色之中。(s…that…位于句首的部分倒装)
2.S ashamed did I feel that I deeply regretted plluting the river.我感到无比羞愧,深深后悔污染了这条河流。(s…that…位于句首的部分倒装)
3.It is ur duty t rescue the injured creatures and help them return t nature.救助受伤的生灵并帮助它们重返自然,是我们应尽的责任。(it作形式主语,不定式作真正主语)
【练习三】高级句式升级
1.Never had I felt such a strng sense f respnsibility surging thrugh my heart.我心中从未涌起过如此强烈的责任感。(否定词never置于句首的部分倒装)
2.It is living in harmny with nature that humans ught t stick t.与自然和谐共处,是人类应当坚守的准则。(强调句型)
3.It is high time that we raised awareness f preserving wildlife.我们是时候树立保护野生动物的意识了。(It is high time that…虚拟语气)
【练习四】微写作
参考范文:
Wandering in the park ne afternn, I sptted a tiny injured bird lying helplessly n the grass.Hardly had I seen it when sympathy and guilt filled my heart.I apprached gently, picked it up with care and tk it hme t treat its wund.With my careful nursing, it recvered sn.Then I released it back int nature, watching it fly away jyfully.Warmth surged thrugh me.It dawned n me that every life is precius and humans shuld live in harmny with nature.
参考翻译:
一天下午,我在公园里漫步,发现一只受伤的小鸟无助地躺在草地上。一看到它,同情与愧疚便涌上心头。我轻轻走近,小心地把它捧起,带回家为它疗伤。在我的精心照料下,它很快康复。随后我将它放归自然,看着它欢快地飞走。一股暖流涌遍全身,我恍然明白:每个生命都无比珍贵,人类应当与自然和谐共生。
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