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目录0102030405060708Time to RelaxGrowing UpNature's TemperStay HealthyA Good ReadThe Wonders of NatureCrossing CulturesMaking a DifferenceUnit 2人教版英语八年级下册写作writing示例一示例二写作导引本单元以“谈论如何保持健康和安全”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①描述生病或不适时的症状;②描述意外事故对人体造成的伤害;③不同场景的急救知识;④治疗和康复措施及建议。写作任务假设你是李华,最近有很多人得了流感,请你以“How to prevent the flu”为题目,写一篇80词左右的文章。提示词:wash hands, do sports, eat healthy food, have enough sleep, go to see a doctor, prevent(预防)1. 开篇引出话题I’m sorry to hear that... (听到……我很遗憾)例:I’m sorry to hear that many people have the flu these days.2. 描述事物特点...is very common in...and...get it easily.(……在……很常见,且……很容易染上)例:The flu is very common in winter and people get it easily.3. 提出建议的疑问句式What should we do to...?(我们应该做什么来……?)例:What should we do to prevent the flu?4. 建议类祈使句(表措施)We should... (我们应该……)例:First, we should wash our hands and change clothes often.5. “做某事有必要”句型Doing sth. is necessary for sb. (做某事对某人来说是必要的)例:Doing some sports is necessary for us.6. “做某事很重要”句型(it作形式主语)It’s important for sb. to do sth. (对某人来说做某事很重要)例:It’s important for us to eat healthy food every day.,精彩范文How to prevent the fluI’m sorry to hear that many people have the flu these days. The flu is very common in winter and people get it easily. What should we do to prevent the flu?First, we should wash our hands and change clothes often. Second, doing some sports is necessary for us, such as running and cycling on Sundays. They are good ways to make us healthy. Third, it’s important for us to eat healthy food every day. Fourth, we need to have enough sleep.It helps us keep active and we can study better. Finally, we’d better go to see a doctor at once when we have the flu. We’ll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor’s advice.We don’t need to be afraid of the flu. Do you think so?跟踪演练秋季天气渐凉,呼吸道疾病感染人群剧增,为了向全校师生普及呼吸道疾病的相关知识,校园英语广播站向同学们征稿。假如你是李华,请你根据下列图示内容写一份英文稿件。要求:1. 阐述图示内容,并提出3-4点预防建议;2. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。图示相关文字:示例三Symptoms(症状)• 易感染人群:Children and the old people catch it easily.(儿童和老人易感染):Autumn Respiratory Disease(秋季呼吸道疾病)Autumn Respiratory DiseaseAs the weather gets cooler in autumn, respiratory diseases are becoming more common. Who is easily affected? Children and the old people catch these illnesses most easily. What symptoms do patients usually have? According to statistics, 45% of people get a sore throat, 35% have a cough, 13% develop a fever, and 7% face breathing problems.To stay healthy, we can take some simple steps. First, keep the room well-ventilated to let in fresh air. Second, wear proper clothes—don’t get too cold or too hot. Third, drink enough water and eat more fruits and vegetables. Finally, avoid crowded places if possible.Let’s take good care of ourselves and stay away from autumn respiratory diseases!一、实用短语1. respiratory diseases含义:呼吸道疾病(话题核心词汇)2. get cooler含义:变得凉爽(描述天气变化的常用表达)3. becoming more common含义:变得更常见(描述现象扩散的自然表达)4. be easily affected含义:易被感染(描述易感人群的常用搭配)5. according to statistics含义:根据统计(引出数据的衔接短语)6. well-ventilated含义:通风良好的(描述环境的实用形容词)7. let in fresh air含义:通入新鲜空气(描述通风的具体动作)8. wear proper clothes含义:穿合适的衣服(日常健康建议的常用表达)9. avoid crowded places含义:避免拥挤场所(防疫/健康建议的高频短语)10. take good care of ourselves含义:照顾好自己(结尾呼吁的常用表达)11. stay away from含义:远离(描述规避风险的短语)二、优质句型1. 描述现象+设问引出细节原句:As the weather gets cooler in autumn, respiratory diseases are becoming more common. Who is easily affected?用法:先描述背景现象,再用设问自然引出下一个信息点,使行文更有互动性。2. 数据类信息的衔接句式原句:According to statistics, 45% of people get a sore throat, 35% have a cough, 13% develop a fever, and 7% face breathing problems.用法:用“According to statistics”引出数据,后用并列结构清晰罗列不同症状的占比,逻辑严谨且信息直观。3. 建议类段落的开篇过渡句原句:To stay healthy, we can take some simple steps.用法:用“To + 目的”引出建议,“take some simple steps”(采取简单措施)使建议更显实操性,降低距离感。4. 建议的分点表述(“First/Second...”)原句:First, keep the room well-ventilated... Second, wear proper clothes... Third, drink enough water... Finally, avoid crowded places...用法:用序数词分点给出建议,结构清晰,读者易梳理重点。 (一)健康的饮食习惯对我们的成长至关重要。请介绍一下你的日常饮食习惯,以及对于保持健康的饮食习惯你有哪些建议。提示词语:beneficial,be good for,keep away from提示问题:1. What kind of food and drinks do you like?典例剖析2. What are healthy food and drinks?3. What’s your advice on keeping healthy eating habits?◆思路点拨1. 确定文章时态:一般现在时。2. 内容要点: (1)介绍你喜欢何种食物和饮品; (2)介绍哪些是健康的食物和饮品; (3)提出保持健康的饮食习惯的建议。◆写作模板◆范文点评[范文] It’s important for us to have a good eating habit in our daily life.I like fresh fruit and vegetables,because they are healthy food. Apples are my favorite fruit. An apple a day can keep the doctor away. I also like meat but I don’t eat it too much. I think water and milk are healthy drinks. But I usually drink soda water. It is bad for our health. We should stay away from it.Keeping healthy eating habits is beneficial to our health. Here are my suggestions on keeping healthy eating habits. First of all,we should have a lot of fresh fruit and vegetables. They’re good for our health. Meat and eggs are also healthy but we can’t eat them too much a day. In addition,we’d better drink much water every day. Last but not least,don’t eat junk food or fast food. We should try our best to keep away from unhealthy food. Let’s keep a healthy eating habit together to enjoy our life. [点评] 1. 文章分为四段,结构清晰。首尾段相呼应,首段表明健康的饮食习惯的重要性,尾段倡导要保持健康的饮食习惯。第二段根据提示问题分别介绍作者的日常饮食习惯(喜欢的食物及饮品)及哪些是健康的食物和饮品。第三段对于如何保持健康的饮食习惯提出三点建议。 2. 文章使用了常用的短语,如 be bad for,stay away from,be beneficial to,以及常用的表示建议的句型,如 sb. should do sth.,sb. had better do sth.,为文章增色不少。 3. 第三段使用了 first of all,in addition,last but not least 等短语,使文章条理清晰,有逻辑性。 (二)假设你叫李华,你校英文广播站现就“如何保持健康的生活方式”对你校的学生进行调查。请你用英文写一篇短文向其投稿,谈谈健康的生活方式会给我们带来哪些益处,以及对于保持健康的生活方式你有哪些建议。提示词语:healthy diet,do sports,get enough sleep,necessary提示问题:1. What benefits does a healthy lifestyle bring you?2. How to keep a healthy lifestyle?◆思路点拨1. 确定文章时态:一般现在时。2. 内容要点: (1)健康的生活方式带来的益处; (2)提出保持健康的生活方式的建议。◆写作模板◆范文点评[范文] It’s important and necessary for us to have a healthy lifestyle in our daily life. Here are some suggestions for you to keep a healthy lifestyle.To begin with,exercise is the most important factor. Doing exercise can not only make your body stronger and stronger but also relax yourself. You should play sports after school once or twice a week. You can choose different kinds of sports,such as running,walking and swimming. What’s more,it’s necessary to keep a good diet. Healthy eating habits are good for your body. You’d better eat less meat andmore fruit and vegetables. Why not drink plenty of water instead of soda water? In addition,make your schedule regular to get enough sleep. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise,as the old saying goes. Last but not least,always keeping a good mood can make half the work with double results. A good mood is essential to live a happy life. So please smile at your life and don’t get angry easily. To sum up,if you want to live a happy life,you should exercise every day,have a good eating habit,sleep well and keep a good mood. Let’s keep a healthy lifestyle together and enjoy our life.[点评] 1. 文章分为三段,结构清晰。首尾段相呼应,首段表明健康的生活方式的重要性,尾段倡导要保持健康的生活方式。第二段根据提示问题分别从健康的生活方式的四个方面(体育健身、合理膳食、规律作息、心态平和)说明健康的生活方式的益处并提出保持健康的生活方式的建议。2. 文章使用了常用的短语,如 be necessary/essential to do,make...stronger and stronger,以及常用的表示建 议的句型,如 sb. should do sth.,you’d better do sth.,why not...,为文章增色不少。同时使用了 to begin with,what’s more,last but not least 使文章条理清晰,有逻辑性。◆写作任务每年 8 月 8 日为“全民健身日”。为了让“全民健身 日”活动更加深入人心,某英文报纸举办了一场征文比赛。现在请你以“Let’s Do Sports”为题写一篇短文,向该报投稿。提示问题:1. Do you think it is important for everyone to do sports?写作训练2. What sports do you like?3. Why do you like it/them?4. Do you often do sports with your friends or parents?要求:1. 80 词左右;2. 必须包括上述提示内容,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥;3. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。◆写作指导1. 确定文章时态:一般现在时。2. 内容要点: (1)对于体育健身是否重要表达自己的观点; (2)你喜欢哪类运动及原因; (3)你是否经常和你的父母或朋友一起健身。◆写作展示 Let’s Do SportsI think it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also helpful for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free,I will go for a swim with my friends or my parents in the swimming pool. After swimming,I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more,I can put more energy into my study. So let’s do sports,and we will become stronger and stronger.主题训练----健康休闲【名师点拨】健康和休闲是人们永恒的话题,也是英语作文常考的话题之一,其中包括健康的重要性,体育运动和休闲的方式。在这个主题训练中,我们讨论如何让学生的压力得以缓解,并以积极的形态去面对压力,主动投入到体育运动中法;并寻找到适合自己的休闲方式。【主题词汇】different kinds of, bring me joy, benefit a lot (获益很多), be in a good mood(保持一种好心情 ), spend much time, keep doing exercise. feel active and energetic, have enough nutrition(有足够的营养 ), have a walk after supper, chat with. a healthy diet, have a strong body,release pressure(释放压力),avoid eating junk food(避免吃垃圾食品), take part in some outdoor activities, live a regular life (过着有规律的生活 ), a scientific diet (科学的饮食习惯),the most important thing 【常用句型】1. The more.., the more... 2... is the best way to keep... 3... in order to keep fit. 4. It is common knowledge that... 5. If we keep doing exercise, we will... 6. It is good to be able to breathe some fresh air instead of sitting in the classroom. 7. I am sure that... 8. Using the proper way to relax, we will absolutely be full of vigor every day. 9. Health is a kind of treasure. It is the base of life.10. Health plays an important role in our daily life. 11. Everyone knows,"Life is movement." 12. We should keep fit so as to live a better life. 【模拟试题】How can we relax!a. How do you feel as a Grade 8 student? b. Write at least two ways we can relax. C. What is your favourite way to relax? And tell us your reason (s). 【要点分析】1.本篇作文要点包括三个部分作方九。年级学生你的感受是什么?写出至少两种休闲娱乐方式最后写出最适合一障自己的休闲娱乐方式,并阐述理由。2.仔细节题,第三条可适当展开(详写)。3.时态;一般现在时。4.切记不要偏题(如大谈运动的好处和健康的重要性,或写保持健康的因素)。S.保持健康的侧重点——介绍健康的重要性——影响健康酌因素睡眠、饮食,运动等右面——呼吁和号召大家保持健康。【写作思路】①八年级学生的感受1. Now we are Ln Grade 8. We have a lot of pressure, 2. Every day, we have a lot of homework to do, so we hove no time to relax. We should stop to relax when we feel tired. Otherwise we can’t focus on studying. 3. We are busy with our study every day. So relaxing is very important to us. 4. As a Grade 8 student, I always feel I’m very tired. Sometimes I even feel that my head fell down on the desk in class. But in order to get good marks, I should study efficiently. So learning how to relax is very important. 5. Nowadays we can see many students return from school at night : Some are wearing glasses and others are busy at weekends with extra classes. But few know that it is not good for them. It will cause some health problems and lower their grades. 6. 1 will graduate from my junior school next year. I know, as a Grade 9 student, we should put our study in the first place. But also we should get rid of the pressure and relax ourselves. ②写出至少两种休闲娱乐的方式1, I think proper ways to relax are listening to music and having sports. 2. Different students have different ways to relax. Most of students often watch TV. Some students like to play computer games. 3. The most popular ways to relax are reading and taking part in sports. 4. In my spare time, I like to go shopping with my mum. The other way to relax is to go cycling which is so relaxing and interesting. 5.My useful way to relax is having a shower after doing my homework for a long time and singing songs which I like when I feel bored and sad. Sometimes I take a walk with my lovely dog after supper.③最适合你自己的休闲娱乐方式1.My favourite way to relax is having sports. Having sports can help us build a stronger body and make us keep fit. More importantly,it is always true that the more you sweat,the more relaxed you'll feel.2.Listening to music is my proper way to relax.It can help me release the pressure and make me happy.Music is also a kind of art which can show us the feeling of the musician.We can not only relax by listening to it, but we can also share our feelings with the musician.3.My own way to relax is spending much of my spare time playing team sports like football,tennis or basketball,or practising individual sports like running and swimming. I don't prefer to be spectators. After I have sports,I can go back to study and work with more energy.4. The best way to let us achieve better results is to relax often. After we've finished homework of each subject,we can take a rest by just closing our eyes or listening to some music.5.My favourite way of relaxing is to breathe deeply for many times and tell myself to calm down when I am bored with so much homework. Sometimes when I feel annoyed or angry with the wrong thing,I throw some soft things, such as pillows,toy s and so on.But at that time,I remind myself not to hurt other people.6.Reading is my favourite way to relax myself. Among all of my books,I prefer science fiction. These boo ks have such wild and surprising information that I can't help being tempted to keep reading without a stop. I think reading is an exchange of ideas between writers and readers. Through reading,I know a lot about the world. It is reading that helps me a lot with my study as well as my life.7. Travelling is my suitable way to relax. It is not only, because I can visit many famous or interesting places, but also I can expand my vision and enrich my knowledge. During summer holidays and winter holidays,I usually go travelling with my relatives. We take photos,climb mountains and so on.Through travelling,I find I grow up quickly and learn a lot from nature and society.I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 9 at No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.There are 35 students in my class. Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV, Twelve like to play computer games while eight enjoy listening to music. Five students think doing sports is good way and another five are too busy to relax. As we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides,it can help improve our health. It's really helpful to both our health and studies.范文Thanks for watching.
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