高考英语二轮专题-读后续写之2020-2025高考真题（知识清单）（教师版）

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02读后续写六年高考话题解读
03读后续写题型深度指导
一、故事主题
从表格中，我们不难找出该题型选题上的一些共性:故事主题主要倾向于选择家庭趣事或温馨小事，或者惊险刺激、充满悬念的野外遇险故事、善举助人、难忘回忆:故事主要角色的属性较为固定;故事主要场景一般是家中或者野外。由此可见，在对所给文章进行续写时，动作、语言、神态和心理的描写是四大基本要素。备考时，考生需重点积果这四大要素的常用及出彩表达，并不断进行相应主题的练习。此外，考生也应注意积累环境描写以及动物描写相关的表达，并对一些节日风俗有基本了解。
二、能力要求
读后续写是创造性地将“阅读”与“写作”融为一体的新题型，难度较大。能够更加有效地考查考生的语言综合运用能力、思维能力、学习能力和书面表达能力。反映考生在面对生活实践或学习探索情境中，运用正确的思维方法，有效结合英语语言学科知识，认识问题、分析问题和解决问题的综合素质。读后续写所提供的材料一般都是故事性较强的文章。文章通俗易懂，故事线索的逻辑性较强，要求考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。情节曲折跌宕，线索性和逻辑性较强。
1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；
2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；
3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度等都将让故事更加立体饱满。
三、评分标准
四、734原则
七个不要：
1.不要盲目增加人物：续写内容应聚焦原文已有的人物，新增人物会使故事失去平衡，分散情节焦点，让故事难以围绕原有的核心人物和主线发展。
2.不要增加旁支情节：续写情节必须紧扣原文主线，旁支情节易导致故事偏离主题，使整体结构松散，无法有效推动故事朝着合理的方向发展。
3.不要用过多小对话：对话可丰富故事，但过多会使文本冗长繁杂，影响叙事节奏和流畅性，应合理控制对话比例，以更好地展现故事发展。
4.不要用负能量结局：故事结尾需传递正能量，体现勇气、善良、正义、团结等积极价值观，给读者带来希望和鼓舞，避免消极、悲观或不良导向的结局。
5.不要在文末设悬念：续写要给读者完整的结束感，避免在文末留下无法解答的悬念，否则会使故事显得不完整，不符合续写任务要求。
6.不要偏离原文主题：续写始终要围绕原文主题展开，深入挖掘和升华主题，使新内容与原文自然融合，共同传达一个明确且连贯的主题思想。
7.不要违背逻辑常理：人物行为和情节发展必须符合现实逻辑和生活常理，不能出现与人物性格、背景以及现实情况相悖的不合理情节。
三个原则：
1.文本一致性原则：续写内容在人称、时态、事件等方面要与原文保持高度统一。使用与原文一致的人称视角，保证叙述连贯；遵循原文时态，维持故事时间线的一致性；事件发展要基于原文情节，符合其内在逻辑。
2.情节曲折性原则：为增强故事的可读性和吸引力，续写时可适当设置冲突与矛盾，如人物之间的意见分歧、目标受阻、意外情况等，但冲突要合理且最终能得到妥善解决。
3.结尾正能量原则：整个故事，包括续写部分，要传递积极向上的价值观，展现人性美好、困难克服、成长进步等正面内容。
四个衔接：
1.续写第一段第二句：衔接（给出的）第一段首句：第一段第二句要紧密承接第一段首句的情节和话题，自然延续故事发展，通过合理的动作、心理、环境等描写，将首句所开启的情节进一步展开。
2.续写第一段尾句：衔接（给出的）第二段首句：第一段尾句要巧妙设置悬念或过渡，为第二段首句的出现做好铺垫，使两段之间在情节和逻辑上无缝衔接，读者能自然地从第一段过渡到第二段。
3.续写第二段第二句：衔接（给出的）第二段首句：同理，第二段第二句要依据第二段首句的内容继续推进故事，深入挖掘首句所蕴含的情节发展可能性，保持故事的连贯性。
4.续写第二段尾句：衔接前文并升华原文主旨：第二段尾句不仅要总结整个续写故事，与前文情节呼应，还要对原文主旨进行升华，从故事中的具体事件提炼出更具普遍意义和深度的主题思想，使文章更具内涵。
五个步骤：
1.精读原文：仔细研读给定材料，梳理出故事的“5W1H”，即时间（When）、地点（Where）、人物（Wh）、事件起因（Why）、经过（What）和结果（Hw）。明确故事的核心冲突、人物性格特点和情感变化，把握文章的主旨和写作意图，为续写奠定坚实基础。
2.分析首句：认真分析所给的两段开头语，理解其在情节发展中的作用和方向指引。思考如何从首句出发，自然地展开故事，确保续写内容与开头语紧密衔接，符合逻辑。
3.构思情节：基于对原文和首句的理解，结合“7 - 3 - 4” 原则，构思合理且富有创意的情节。考虑故事的发展方向、冲突解决方式以及人物的成长变化等，设计出完整的故事框架，包括主要情节的起承转合。同时，要注意情节的合理性和可行性，避免出现荒诞离奇或不符合逻辑的情节。
4.丰富细节：在构思好情节的基础上，通过细节描写使故事更加生动、具体、充实。运用人物的动作、语言、神态、心理描写，以及环境描写等，增强故事的真实感和感染力，让读者能够更好地融入故事之中。例如，通过细腻的心理描写展现人物在面对困难时的挣扎与抉择，通过生动的环境描写烘托氛围，推动情节发展。5.检查修改：完成续写后，仔细检查文章的语法错误、词汇拼写错误、语句通顺度以及逻辑连贯性。检查是否遵循了“7 - 3 - 4” 原则，内容是否与原文紧密衔接，情节是否合理完整，语言表达是否准确恰当等。对发现的问题及时进行修改和完善，确保提交的作文质量较高。
04读后续写六年高考真题再现
考点01 人与自我类读后续写
【2025全国二卷】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“What is yur name? ” is a questin mst frequently asked when peple meet fr the first time. But fr me, it was the first challenge I encuntered as an internatinal student in Ireland.
The prnunciatin system f the Chinese language is quite different frm that f English. Fr native speakers f English, sme Chinese wrds are rather difficult t prnunce. My given name Qiuyu (秋雨), fr instance, happened t be a great challenge fr many f them. Every time I gave a self-intrductin, I had t explain hw t prnunce my name at least five times, yet they still culd nt say it the way I did.
Once in a lecture, the prfessr tried repeating my name after me ver and ver in frnt f thirty classmates. I really did nt knw whether I shuld cntinue crrecting him r simply drp the matter. I feared that my classmates might grw tired f my effrts r even lse patience with me. After all, I did care abut hw thers wuld think f me. I realized that if I didn’t stp, the entire lecture wuld be ruined. “It’s kay, prfessr,” I shrugged (耸肩). The awkward mment ended with the class erupting int laughter. I frced a smile, unsure hw t respnd further.
After that incident, I stpped acting as a “Chinese teacher.” Instead f crrecting thers when they were struggling t prnunce my name, I just smiled and ndded apprvingly. This apprach spared me the discmfrt f having t ver-explain. Hwever, I sn fund that by ding s, I might be lsing smething mre imprtant: the pprtunity t share a small part f my cultural identity.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In a class discussin I was invited t explain the meaning f my name.
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Many f my classmates gt interested and came up t me after class.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
In a class discussin, I was invited t explain the meaning f my name. Standing up, I felt a mix f nervusness and excitement. “My name, Qiuyu, cmbines the characters fr autumn and rain in Chinese,” I began, my vice steady. “Autumn represents harvest and maturity, while rain symblizes nurishment and grwth. Tgether, they embdy a time f abundance and renewal.” As I spke, I nticed the rapt attentin f my classmates, their eyes reflecting curisity and respect. It was a mment f cnnectin, a bridge built between cultures thrugh the simple act f sharing my name.
Many f my classmates gt interested and came up t me after class. They surrunded me, their questins puring ut like a stream. “What ther names have beautiful meanings in Chinese?” “Can yu teach us hw t write ur names in Chinese characters?” I smiled, feeling a warmth spread thrugh me. I tk ut a piece f paper and began t sketch ut characters, explaining each strke and its significance. Thrugh this interactin, I realized that by embracing my cultural identity, I was nt nly preserving my heritage but als enriching the lives f thse arund me. It was a small yet meaningful step twards fstering cultural understanding and appreciatin.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者作为国际学生在爱尔兰因中文名字发音难而遭遇挑战，之后在一次课堂讨论中分享名字含义，意识到分享文化身份重要性，并借此与同学增进文化理解的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在课堂讨论中，我被邀请解释我名字的含义。”可知，第一段可描写作者在课堂讨论中解释自己名字的含义，并感受到同学们的专注和尊重，意识到这是一个文化交流的契机。
②由第二段首句内容“我的许多同学都很感兴趣，下课后都来找我。”可知，第二段可描写课后同学们对作者名字背后的文化产生浓厚兴趣，纷纷提问，作者通过教他们写中文名字，进一步加深了彼此的文化理解和欣赏。
2.续写线索：课堂受邀请解释名字的含义——作者阐释名字的寓意——同学们专注倾听——同学们对名字背后的文化感兴趣——作者教他们写中文名字——感悟文化桥接
3.词汇激活
行为类
①代表：represent/stand fr
②解释：explain/illustrate
③保护：preserve/prtect
情绪类
①紧张：nervusness/tensin
②兴奋：excitement/thrill
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I spke, I nticed the rapt attentin f my classmates, their eyes reflecting curisity and respect.(运用了as引导的状语从句以及独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】Thrugh this interactin, I realized that by embracing my cultural identity, I was nt nly preserving my heritage but als enriching the lives f thse arund me.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和“nt als...”连接两个并列结构)
【2025浙江1月卷】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bred. His mther was at wrk, and his father had been away n business. Therefre, he was left in the care f Mrs. Hill, an ld lady wh lived next dr. His parents had raised the 12-year-ld t be a gd by. He never gt int truble, thugh smetimes he wanted t d risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hped smething exciting wuld happen. Suddenly, a mvement utside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s frnt windw faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s huse acrss the street. The cuple had bth gne t wrk, s it was strange that smene was ver there. Kevin stared at the man at their frnt dr. Suddenly, the man jumped thrugh an pen windw int the huse. With his heart in his muth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s hme phne and called the plice.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted befre the plice arrived, Kevin decided t d smething. He rushed ut f Mrs. Hill’s huse and crssed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch frm a cut-dwn tree, he jumped in thrugh the windw. “Stp right there! Yu must leave right nw!” he called ut, hlding the branch with bth hands.
The man frze fr a secnd, but when he saw the skinny by he breathed a sigh f relief. “Hey, kid, put that dwn. It was my hme. My parents used t live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying t lift a flrbard.
At that mment, the sunds f a plice car eched (回响) in the air. The man std up in a panic, then ran thrugh the huse tward the windw and jumped ut. Kevin fllwed ut and tld the arriving plice fficers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back t Mrs. Hill’s huse. Smehw he wasn’t sure he had dne the right thing. “What if he has tld the truth?” he thught t himself. The man’s wrds sunded pretty cnvincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
When Mr. and Mrs. Green gt hme, Kevin went t talk t them.
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Kevin and Mr. Green tk the watch they had fund t the plice statin.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
When Mr. and Mrs. Green gt hme, Kevin went t talk t them. He explained hw he had witnessed the strange man entering their huse and hw he was arrested. Mr. and Mrs. Green listened attentively, with a mixture f surprise and gratitude n their faces. Mrs. Green hugged Kevin, thanking him fr his bravery. Mr. Green, hwever, lked thughtful. He asked Kevin t describe the man in detail and then revealed that the man was indeed his yunger brther, wh had cme t retrieve a watch their father had left behind. Kevin's eyes widened in shck.
Kevin and Mr. Green tk the watch they had fund t the plice statin. On the way, Mr. Green explained that the watch was a family heirlm, passed dwn frm generatin t generatin. At the plice statin, they explained the situatin t the fficers, wh were surprised but understanding. The man, wh had been released after his identity was verified, was waiting utside. He smiled weakly at Kevin, wh felt a mix f embarrassment and relief. Mr. Green handed ver the watch t his brther with a pat n the back, and they all agreed t keep in tuch. Kevin learned an imprtant lessn that day: always verify the facts befre taking actin, but never hesitate t help thse in need.
【导语】本文人物为线索展开，讲述Kevin在父母不在家时，看到一男子闯入格林夫妇家，他报警并阻止男子，男子被捕后他怀疑自己是否做对。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当格林夫妇回到家时，凯文去和他们交谈。”可知，第一段可描述Kevin向格林夫妇解释他所做的事情，以及格林夫妇的反应和真相的揭露。
②由第二段首句内容“凯文和格林先生带着他们找到的手表去了警察局。”可知，第二段可描述第二段可描写Kevin和Mr. Green去警察局解释情况，以及事情解决后他们的感受和Kevin学到的教训。
2. 续写线索：Kevin向Green夫妇解释——Green夫妇的反应——真相揭露——Kevin和Green去警察局——事情解决——Kevin的感受和教训
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①进入：enter/cme int
②拥抱：hug/embrace
③找回：retrieve/get back
④核实：verify/cnfirm
情绪类
①吃惊：surprise/astnishment
②感激：gratitude/appreciatin
③宽慰：relief/cmfrt
【点睛】[高分句型1]Mrs. Green hugged Kevin, thanking him fr his bravery. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] At the plice statin, they explained the situatin t the fficers, wh were surprised but understanding. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
【2024浙江1月卷】
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eva spent the first week f high schl trying t keep her head abve water. One f the majr headaches fr her was finding her way in the huge schl building. It was a six-stry building. On each flr, hallways stretched in fur directins, leading t classrms, labratries, and teachers’ ffices. Smewhere in the building, there was als a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.
Having a pr sense f directin, Eva fund it impssible t get arund in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rms were t much t think abut, let alne cmmit t memry. She decided that she wuld memrize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest f the place didn’t exist.
In her first PE class, Eva was shcked when Cach Pitt annunced that everyne had t run ne mile arund the track utside. She searched the faces f her classmates fr signs f panic. There was nthing she feared mre than having t run a whle mile. T Eva, “a mile” was used t describe lng distances. It was ten miles frm her hme t her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a lng way, even in a car!
When Cach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she wuld be left in the dust. Hwever, while sme f her classmates edged ahead, thers actually fell behind. ” It’s just the beginning, “she thught. “I’ll cme in last fr sure. ”
Sn Eva began t breathe hard, with her heart punding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick n herself. She stpped thinking abut the wrd” mile. “Instead, she fcused n reaching the shadw cast n the track by an ak tree up ahead. Then she cncentrated n jgging t the spt where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried t see if she culd cmplete her first lap. One lap turned int tw, then three, then fur.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.
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Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building.
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【答案】
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. In the vast expanse f her schl, a girl with pr directinal skills struggled t navigate and ften gt lst. One day, during gym class, she bserved a unique way t find her way - fllwing the shadws f trees. As the sun cast its rays, the girl nticed hw the shadws created patterns n the grund, guiding her path. She tk a leap f faith and fllwed the shadws, surprising herself with each turn and stretch. Her effrts were nticed by the teacher, wh praised her innvative thinking.
Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building. She used the shadws t navigate the schl hallways, find her classes, and even lcate the schl's varius facilities. This newfund skill nt nly helped the girl navigate her schl but als instilled in her a sense f cnfidence and adventure. She learned excitedly that with a little creativity and bservatin, any challenge culd be vercme. And with each step she tk, she left behind a legacy f inspiratin fr thse wh fllwed in her ftsteps, knwing that even withut a clear sense f directin, there's always a way t find ne's way.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了高中生Eva因为方向感不强，经常在学校里迷路，在一次体育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候Eva发现跟着树的影子能找到方向，她通过这个方法重新认识到了校园。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当Pitt教练在终点线对她说:“干得好!”，伊娃很惊讶。”可知，第一段可描写Eva通过自己追随影子的方法找到方向，并且受到了教练的称赞。
②由第二段首句内容“Eva决定用同样的手段来记住学校大楼。”可知，第二段可描写Eva通过记住影子的方法来记住学校大楼并且通过这件事之后的感悟。
2.续写线索：方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置——体育课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向——害怕最后一名心里非常紧张——跟随影子找到方向——受到教练的赞赏——获得感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①努力做某事：struggle t d sth./strive t d sth.
②导航：navigate/guide
③了解：learn/knw/acknwledge
情绪类
①使某人惊讶：surprise sb./astnish sb.
②激动地：excitedly/in excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]Her effrts were nticed by the teacher, wh praised her innvative thinking.（wh引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]She learned that with a little creativity and bservatin, any challenge culd be vercme. （that引导的宾语从句）
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When I was in middle schl, my scial studies teacher asked me t enter a writing cntest. I said n withut thinking. I did nt lve writing. My family came frm Brazil, s English was nly my secnd language. Writing was s difficult and painful fr me that my teacher had allwed me t present my paper n the sinking f the Titanic by acting ut a play, where I played all the parts. N ne laughed harder than he did.
S, why did he suddenly frce me t d smething at which I was sure t fail? His reply: “Because I lve yur stries. If yu’re willing t apply yurself, I think yu have a gd sht at this.” Encuraged by his wrds, I agreed t give it a try.
I chse Paul Revere’s hrse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Bstn wh rde a hrse at night n April 18, 1775 t Lexingtn t warn peple that British sldiers were cming. My stry wuld cme straight frm the hrse’s muth. Nt a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely t be anyne else’s chice.
What did the hrse think, as he sped thrugh the night? Did he get tired? Have dubts? Did he want t quit? I sympathized immediately. I gt tired. I had dubts. I wanted t quit. But, like Revere’s hrse, I kept ging. I wrked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my lder sister t crrect my grammar. I checked ut a half dzen bks n Paul Revere frm the library. I even read a few f them.
When I handed in the essay t my teacher, he read it, laughed ut lud, and said, “Great. Nw, write it again.” I wrte it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thught f winning had given way t the enjyment f writing. If I didn’t win, I wuldn’t care.
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A few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news.
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I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin.
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【答案】
A few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news. I was infrmed that I wn the first prize in the writing cntest and that there wuld be an award presentatin in tw days. I was s happy t hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew yu’d win! I am prud f yu. Yu made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited t the stage t receive the award, I expressed my thanks t my teacher. I said, “It’s yu wh make me fall in lve with writing, my scial studies teacher. Withut yur recgnitin and guidance, I culdn’t have written this article. Again thank yu very much!”
I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin. My teacher was waiting fr me. Hlding my hands, he said “Cngratulatins! Yu are a gd writer, s keep writing.” “Yu knw I didn’t like writing befre, but nw I am crazy abut it! I will try my best t create gd wrks.” I said seriusly. Since then, I have written many gd wrks and nw I am a famus writer. I we my success t my scial teacher wh is a beacn in my life n the rad t writing.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输赢了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖，在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感激。
②由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作，自此作者坚持写作取得了成功，作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。
2.续写线索：比赛消息传来——作者获奖——高兴——颁奖典礼感谢老师——颁奖后来到老师办公室——老师告诉作者坚持写作——作者表达了对写作的喜爱——作者写作取得了成功——感激老师
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告知：infrm/tell
②成功做到：make it/succeed
③表达：express/cnvey
情绪类
①高兴的：happy/glad
②激动地：excitedly/with excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was infrmed that I wn the first prize in the writing cntest and that there wuld be an award presentatin in tw days. （运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] It’s yu wh make me fall in lve with writing, my scial studies teacher.（运用了强调句）
[高分句型3] I we my success t my scial teacher wh is a beacn in my life n the rad t writing.（运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句）
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It was the day f the big crss-cuntry run. Students frm seven different primary schls in and arund the small twn were warming up and walking the rute(路线)thrugh thick evergreen frest.
I lked arund and finally sptted David, wh was standing by himself ff t the side by a fence. He was small fr ten years ld. His usual big tthy smile was absent tday. I walked ver and asked him why he wasn’t with the ther children. He hesitated and then said he had decided nt t run.
What was wrng? He had wrked s hard fr this event!
I quickly searched the crwd fr the schl’s cach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids frm ther schls wuld laugh at him,” he explained uncmfrtably. “I gave him the chice t run r nt, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustratin(懊恼). I knew the cach meant well—he thught he was ding the right thing. After making sure that David culd run if he wanted, I turned t find him cming twards me, his small bdy rcking frm side t side as he swung his feet frward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him frm walking r running like ther children, but at schl his classmates thught f him as a regular kid. He always participated t the best f his ability in whatever they were ding. That was why nne f the children thught it unusual that David had decided t jin the crss-cuntry team. It just tk him lnger—that’s all. David had nt missed a single practice, and althugh he always finished his run lng after the ther children, he did always finish. As a special educatin teacher at the schl, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was prud f his strng determinatin.
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We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn’t lk at me.
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We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn’t lk at me. I said gently and quietly, “N ne can change yur mind, except yurself. If yu desire t challenge yurself, there is nthing t d with thers’ thughts.” He sat still with a deep breath. “Yu have a full preparatin befre this event, which is the mst imprtant reasn why yu shw up here”, I added with a sincere tne. Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run. His cach heard what David said and gave me a lk—the kind that was mre determined than anyne else’s.
I watched as David mved up t the starting line with the ther runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely lng fr yung children, nt t mentin a child with a heart disease. David insisted n running as if he had frgtten all his weaknesses, thugh he was tripped ver within the a few kilmeters. It didn’t take lng befre he picked himself up again and cntinued his missin. Classmates all appeared n the racing track, cheering fr him. “Cme n! Yu can make it! We are prud f yu!” they shuted enthusiastically. T everyne’s jy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was n mre imprtant whether he wn the first place r nt. It was his brave heart and strng faith that culd make smething unusual happen finally.
【导语】本文以赛跑为线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句内容”我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛，大卫经过强烈的心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。
②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。
2.续写线索：鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛
3.词汇激活：
行动类：
①深呼吸：with a deep breath/breathe deeply
②坚持做：insisted n ding/be stick t ding
情绪类：
①热情：enthusiastically /with great passin
②骄傲：be prud f/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Yu have a full preparatin befre this event, which is the mst imprtant reasn why yu shw up here. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句和 why引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run. (现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was his brave heart and strng faith that culd make smething unusual happen finally. (含有It was…that结构的强调句型)
考点02 人与社会类读后续写
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My wife and I wanted t share ur new hme with family and friends by hsting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lts f snacks, while my jb was t have the backyard in rder.
There was plenty f space fr the kids t run and play. There was just ne thing I hadn’t cunted n: My brther chse t bring his dg Tby, a 50-pund ball f fire. Thugh friendly, he culd easily knck ver my niece’s small bys and my six-mnth-ld granddaughter. S, when my brther shwed up, I asked him t watch Tby and keep him utside.
My plan was wrking ut just fine. Tby was using up his energy by running back and frth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty f rm. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started t rain and everyne went indrs.
It was an awkward mment. I didn’t want Tby t be running arund in the huse, and my brther wasn’t happy with driving hme with a wet dg. Eventually, my brther decided t leave rather than frce the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything frm my brther. I texted him and expressed wishes fr him t cme ut again. His reply came as a surprise — a shck, actually: “Nt a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy ver the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little chice. Well, he’ll get ver it, I reasned.
Tw mnths passed. My wife suggested I get in tuch with my brther, but I resisted, thinking he shuld call first. Hwever, my cnscience (良心) kept bthering me. I tried t put myself in my brther’s shes. He was facing health issues and his wife f thirty-five years had passed away a few mnths earlier. Tby was his cnstant cmpanin, the ne wh kept him ging.
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I realized it was me wh was at fault.
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With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brther’s dr.
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I realized it was me wh was at fault. I had been s fcused n keeping the party under cntrl that I failed t cnsider hw imprtant Tby was t my brther during this difficult time. My pride had kept me frm reaching ut, and nw mnths had passed withut a prper cnversatin. One evening, I picked up the phne and left him a vice message, aplgizing fr my behavir and asking if we culd meet. T my relief, he called back the next day, and we agreed t get tgether sn.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brther’s dr. He pened it with a surprised smile, and fr a mment, neither f us spke. Then we hugged — smething we hadn’t dne since befre his wife passed away. We sat n the prch with Tby resting beside us, and I handed him the bx f biscuits. “Thank yu,” he said quietly. We talked fr hurs, laughing, remembering ld times, and slwly rebuilding what had been lst. As I watched Tby gently rest his head n my brther’s leg, I knew we were finally n the path t healing.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因担心弟弟的狗Tby影响聚会，要求弟弟看好狗，后因天气变化导致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂。两个月后作者意识到自己的过错，主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉，最终兄弟俩和解的故事，展现了亲情中理解与包容的重要性。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我意识到是我错了。” 可知，第一段可描写作者反思自己在聚会上只顾控制局面，忽视了Tby对弟弟的重要性，因骄傲迟迟未联系弟弟，最终通过电话留言道歉并约定见面。
②由第二段首句内容“带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟家门口。”可知，第二段可描写弟弟开门时的惊讶与沉默，兄弟俩拥抱和解，坐在门廊上谈心，看着Tby依偎在弟弟腿边，明白亲情修复的意义。
2. 续写线索：反思过错——电话留言道歉——约定见面——带饼干登门——拥抱沉默——谈心和解——领悟亲情
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①道歉：aplgize/say srry/make an aplgy
②拥抱：hug/embrace
③重建：rebuild/restre/recnstruct
情绪类：
①宽慰：relief/cmfrt/satisfactin/ease
②惊讶：surprised /shcked/astnished
【点睛】[高分句型1] I had been s fcused n keeping the party under cntrl that I failed t cnsider hw imprtant Tby was t my brther during this difficult time.（运用了“”引导结果状语从句以及hw引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] One evening, I picked up the phne and left him a vice message, aplgizing fr my behavir and asking if we culd meet.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及if引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型 3] As I watched Tby gently rest his head n my brther’s leg, I knew we were finally n the path t healing.（运用了as引导时间状语从句以及省略that的宾语从句）
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I met Gunter n a cld, wet and unfrgettable evening in September. I had planned t fly t Vienna and take a bus t Prague fr a cnference. Due t a big strm, my flight had been delayed by an hur and a half. I tuched dwn in Vienna just 30 minutes befre the departure f the last bus t Prague. The mment I gt ff the plane, I ran like crazy thrugh the airprt building and jumped int the first taxi n the rank withut a secnd thught.
That was when I met Gunter. I tld him where I was ging, but he said he hadn't heard f the bus statin. I thught my prnunciatin was the prblem, s I explained again mre slwly, but he still lked cnfused. When I was abut t give up, Gunter fished ut his little phne and rang up a friend. After a heated discussin that lasted fr what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phne dwn and started the car.
Finally, with just tw minutes t spare we rlled int the bus statin. Thankfully, there was a lng queue (队列) still waiting t bard the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned arund, and lked at me with a big smile n his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zer cash in my wallet. I flashed him an aplgetic smile as I pulled ut my Prtuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did nt play alng. A feeling f helplessness washed ver me as I saw the bus queue thinning ut.
At this mment, Gunter pinted twards the waiting hall f the bus statin. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the machine, and ppped my card in, nly t read the message: "Out f rder. Srry."
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I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news.
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Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised.
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I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news. He lked at me in disbelief, asking me what t d. Flashing him anther aplgetic smile, I begged him fr a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus t Prague, I’ll be late fr the cnference which is s imprtant that I can’t affrd t miss it!” I explained. “May I have yur phne number? I will call yu and return the mney I we yu. I prmise I will keep my wrd r yu keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrte dwn his phne number and gave it t me. “Just keep yur prmise, Sir.” A feeling f gratitude washed ver me as I heard his wrds. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the bus, and jumped nt it just befre its departure.
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised. He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the mment I saw him. We chatted happily n the way t the airprt. I tld him that thanks t his genersity and timely help, everything had gne smthly. When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn. I als gave him an attractive suvenir I had bught at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became gd friends and kept in tuch with each ther regularly. I felt blessed t have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。
2.续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝：reject/refuse
②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb.
③记下，写下：write dwn/set dwn
情绪类
①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably
②开心地：happily/jyfully
【点睛】【高分句型1】He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句）
【2021新课标I&II卷】
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A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther’s Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff’s hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear! The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
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本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. Knwing what they were preparing fr, he was greatly surprised. S immediately, he ffered t get invlved in the kids’ jb. Firstly, he put the pt f prridge n a gentle heat, asking Jeff t watch ut fr it ging fr fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna t break anther tw eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparatins dne, they started t fry bread tgether. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. T their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. Eyes pened, the wman heard a harmnius “Happy Mther’s Day” frm her twin kids with ht, sweet breakfast befre her. Behind the children std their father. T shed light n the game f the gift, he tld the mther the whle stry. After learning abut what happened, she rse quickly t gaze at the by’s hand with mved tears rlling dwn her cheeks. “Thank yu, my hney!” said the mther.
【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②完成：finish/cmplete
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②感动：mved/tuched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. It was nt nly the breakfast, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much. (固定短语nt nly…but (als)和强调句型)
【2020新课标卷】
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him,” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn't see what he can d.”
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney,” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d I,” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish(完成).”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d,” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn(爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn's idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.
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With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.
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【答案】
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. S, they went t the lcal supermarket tgether. They bught a bag f crn and sme special bags fr ppcrn. When they gt hme, they made a lt f ppcrn and put it in the special bags. With the ppcrn, they went t Bernard’s hme. They tld Bernard hw t sell the ppcrn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family als felt very happy t help this family.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. He tk the ppcrn arund t the huses and sld all his ppcrn. He earned a lt f mney. Then, he wanted t be self-dependent. Therefre, he asked Mrs. Meredith t teach him hw t make ppcrn. After that, nt nly did he sell ppcrn, but he als added cream and salt t the ppcrn t make it taste better. Bernard grew up t be a remarkable man. He did nt frget the help f Meredith’s family, and he als did what he culd t help thse in need.
【解析】
【分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。
【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。
2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。
3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。
4.根据第一段首句When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.(当Meredith太太听到Jhn的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.(一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意)可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。
5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。
考点3人与自然类读后续写
【2025八省联考卷】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia fr a cnference when I saw an ad in the htel. A nearby theater was shwing a dcumentary (纪录片) abut several lcal animal shelters that were helping t save abandned dgs acrss the cuntry. I lve animals, and I felt an urge t g t this fundraising event. Hwever, nne f my c-wrkers wuld g with me, and I was wrried abut walking n the street alne at night.
I resigned myself t spending the evening in my htel rm, but as sn as I gt back t my rm I felt restless and bred. The theater where the event was taking place was nly abut five blcks frm the htel, and the area arund the htel didn’t seem particularly dangerus. S, I decided t brave it. I gathered up my wallet and rm key and set ff.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed t find the street the theater was n, but when I turned the crner, I stpped in shck. In frnt f the theater were a grup f bikers — very big, tugh-lking bikers.
I’ve knwn lts f mtrcycle enthusiasts and mst are nice peple. Hwever, in this case, I was a wman all alne, in a strange neighbrhd, at night, and there were twenty r s very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in sme srt f club — standing befre me. Warning bells began t sund in my head, and my heart was punding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date f the event?
A sign utside the theater tld me that I was in the right place n the right evening. Nevertheless, I wndered if I shuld rush back t my htel instead f walking thrugh that crwd f bikers. I finally decided that I wuld be safer inside the theater. Hpefully, the bikers wuld have gne away by the time the film was ver.
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried int the theater, nly t find there were even mre bikers inside.
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When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue grup.
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【答案】
I hurried int the theater, nly t find there were even mre bikers inside. They were chatting ludly and seemed t fill every crner f the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly fund an empty seat in the back rw, trying t make myself as incnspicuus as pssible. I clutched my bag tightly, cnstantly glancing arund, praying that nthing bad wuld happen. Every nw and then, I peeked at the bikers, wndering what they were ding here. Were they ging t cause truble? The tensin in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decisin t cme alne.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue grup. They had cme t supprt the fundraiser fr the lcal animal shelters. As the dcumentary unflded, shwing the plight f the abandned dgs, I saw many f the bikers wiping away tears. They were as mved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stries. During the intermissin, sme f them even came ver t me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjying the film. Their tugh exterirs hid big, sft hearts. I felt ashamed f my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided t cme. We spent the rest f the evening sharing ur lve fr animals and discussing ways t help.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。
②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。
2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流
3. 词汇激活：
行为类：
①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize
②偷看：peek at/steal a lk at/glance at
③支持：supprt/back/uphld/advcate
情绪类：
①感动：mved/tuched/affected
②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed
【点睛】【高分句型1】Every nw and then, I peeked at the bikers, wndering what they were ding here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As the dcumentary unflded, shwing the plight f the abandned dgs, I saw many f the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语)
【2024九省联考卷】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, Hilda wrked as a vlunteer with dlphin trainers at a sea life park. Her jb was t make sure the tanks were free f any items s that the trainers culd train the dlphins t fetch specific items. Hwever, ne day after cleaning, ne f the dlphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper frm the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda fr her carelessness. Upset but nt discuraged by this event, Hilda decided t d sme spying n Maya.
The next mrning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put n her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped int the tank fr her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nthing in the tank, she climbed ut f the water just in time t see Katherine jumping in n the ther side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was ding. She watched as Katherine perfrmed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but nw the dlphin stpped suddenly and swam t the back part f the tank where the filter (过滤) bx was lcated. She stuck her nse dwn behind the bx and then swam away. What was Maya ding back there? Hilda wndered. She jumped back int the water and swam ver t take a lk behind the bx, and her questin was answered. Hilda then swam acrss the tank fllwing Maya’s path and emerged frm the water t find Katherine remving her scuba gear. As Katherine turned arund, her muth drpped pen. There was Maya at the edge f the tank with a cmb (梳子) in her muth waiting fr her treat.
“Maya! Where did yu get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the cmb and thrwing her a fish. “I knw where she gt it,” declared Hilda climbing ut f the tank with a handful f items still wet frm their watery, resting place. “What’s all this?” Katherine asked, bviusly cnfused.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
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Nw Katherine realized what had been ging n.
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【答案】
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. The truth f the matter, Hilda cntinued, is that Maya has been secretly cllecting items frm the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back f the tank. When yu train her, she will give yu sme items s that she can get treats frm yu. “Really? Hw d yu knw that?” Catherine asked in surprise. Hilda laughed and replied, “It tk me a lng time t discver this secret, t. It’s nt easy t fllw Maya.”
Nw Katherine realized what had been ging n. Catherine thught t herself, this is really a clever dlphin. And she said t Hilda, “Well, Maya lves treats, s we’ll wrk tgether, and yu’ll secretly help her cllect a few things and put them in the filter at the back f the tank. I’ll give her treats, the number f which I can increase.” Hilda replied, “Gd idea, let’s d it.” Frm then n, the Sea Life Park is full f warmth and harmny. Maya’s perfrmance in frnt f the audience is getting better and better.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了希尔达在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员凯瑟琳一起做志愿者，以及她们和海豚玛雅之间的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘这是玛雅的秘密，’希尔达笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写玛雅的秘密是什么。
②由第二段首句内容“现在凯瑟琳意识到发生了什么事。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。
2.续写线索：训练海豚——发现秘密——分析秘密——互相协商——共同配合——良好结果
3.词汇激活
行为类
①密密地：secretly/in private
②收集：cllect/gather
③隐藏：hid/cnceal
情绪类
①惊讶地：in surprise/in amazement
②笑：laugh/smile
【点睛】【高分句型1】The truth f the matter, Hilda cntinued, is that Maya has been secretly cllecting items frm the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back f the tank. (运用了that引导的表语从句和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I’ll give her treats, the number f which I can increase. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【2023浙江1月卷】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend’s farm in western Washingtn. I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years. A nise at a windw caught my attentin, s I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying t escape. She was cvered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able t mve her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in. The brken windw glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside, clsing the dr securely behind me.
When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes. I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings. Still, she made n attempt t fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle, she began t mve. I stpped, and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away.
Hvering (悬停), she apprached within six inches f my face. Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side. Then she flew quickly ut f sight.
During the ckut, I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident. They prmised t fix the windw. As I was departing, my friends walked me t my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering. She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me. She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne. Fr a mment, all were speechless. Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gdbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.
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I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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【答案】
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. I rushed back t the deserted huse. It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. Leaving the huse, I culdn’t help wndering hw it was getting n nw. Had it managed t find its way back hme, r was it still ut there smewhere struggling t survive?
I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash f mvement caught my attentin. I turned arund t see the same hummingbird hvering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting fr me, its beady eyes lcked n mine as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude. I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature, and I knew that I wuld always cherish the memries we shared as I climbed int my car and drve away.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。
2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到……：thughts drift back t/thughts return t
②匆匆回到：rush back t/hurry back t
③盯着：eyes lcked n/eyes staring at
情绪类
①宽慰：feel a surge f relief/feel relieved
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. (由that引导的主语从句)
【2023安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband and I enjy seeing life thrugh the eyes f ur children. It’s amazing t watch as they discver their wrld.
While we were utdrs last summer enjying the sunshine, ur ldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me t the drway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it frm a distance, nt wanting t disturb it r scare ff its mther. But after a lng wait—and lking all arund ur huse fr signs f a nest r a mther—we realized the tiny squirrel was lst.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried t find an expert t help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website shwed that there were n wildlife experts in ur area. After sme quick research, we cncluded that the best way t give the squirrel a fighting chance was t care fr him urselves. S a trip t the lcal stre fr milk and supplies was in rder. Mre research taught us hw much t feed him, hw t estimate his age, hw and when t wean (断奶) him, and that we shuld let him g as sn as he culd survive n his wn.
Our daughters and I tk turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin tk n the mst respnsibility. She taught him t eat frm a bttle, and she wke in the night fr his feeds.
T ur relief, Squirt sn became healthy and strng. Within a few weeks he became mre active. He wuld chatter (吱吱叫) fr his next meal, playfully g arund the girls, and lie dwn n them fr sleep. It wasn’t lng befre he was weaned nt slid fd and reintrduced t the wild.
His first few visits t the great utdrs were funny. Just like a child, he wuld play in the grass sme and then run back t Kaytlin fr safety. Sn she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
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One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family f gray squirrels.
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One night, Squirt didn’t cme back t ur huse and it rained hard.
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【答案】
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family f gray squirrels. But the family was nne t happy abut his visit. They sclded and swatted at him. At first Squirt was s unhappy that he avided them. And then he quickly learned sme scial skills. He wuld take sme snacks t meet them. Fr several days he played all day in the trees surrunding ur huse but came dwn at bedtime.
One night, Squirt didn’t cme back t ur huse and it rained hard. Our girls fretted. They wanted t seek Squirt. We prevented them because it was t dangerus. But when the sun rse the next day, there was Squirt, begging fr fd. And that remained the pattern fr weeks. The experience was entertaining and heartwarming fr ur family. In the wild and smewhat silly mments f raising an rphaned baby squirrel, ur children learned t value and appreciate life.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他们决定收养它，看着这只小松鼠从瘦弱幼小，慢慢变的健康活泼，让作者一家感觉既有趣又温暖。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天，在树林里，Squirt遇到了一个灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一段可描写Squirt遇到这一家灰松鼠的情况，Squirt如何与灰松鼠一家交往。
②由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，Squirt没有回到我们家，下起了大雨。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家的担心，和最后的结果，以及作者的感悟。
2. 续写线索：遇到灰松鼠——与灰松鼠一家交往——没有回家，担心它——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①责骂：scld/blame/rebuke
②拍打：swat/slap/hit
③寻找：seek/find/lk fr/search fr
④阻止：prevent/put a stp t/head ff
情绪类
①高兴的：happy/delighted
②有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrssing
【点睛】[高分句型1]At first Squirt was s unhappy that he avided them.(引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]But when the sun rse the next day, there was Squirt, begging fr fd.(when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)
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