第08讲+建议信（（复习课件）-2026年高考英语一轮复习讲练测 （全国通用）

这是一份第08讲+建议信（（复习课件）-2026年高考英语一轮复习讲练测 （全国通用），共28页。PPT课件主要包含了第08讲，建议信，智能导览·极速定位，真题溯源·考向感知，知识点1  命题规律，知识点1 常用词汇，as follows，知识点3 模板必背，高考真题01，考点分析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
2026年高考英语一轮复习
五大考点，真题研析+核心精讲+变式训练
紧扣新风向，设题新语境，聚焦重难点
01 考情解码·命题预警
02 体系构建·思维可视
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。 这类信件通常结构清晰，开篇会简要介绍写信的背景或目的，明确指出要讨论的问题。主体部分则详细阐述建议的内容，包括问题的分析、具体的改进措施或解决方案，以及这些建议的可行性和预期效果。
知识点2  写作技能提升
建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分： （1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。 （2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 （3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
1. 征求某人的建议 2. 在…方面给某人建议3. 提出一些建议 4. 接受我的建议 5. 在我看来，就我而言 6. 表达某人的观点
ask sb fr advice/suggestins
give sb. advice/ suggestins n….
make/ffer sme suggestins/advice
adpt/accept/fllw/ take up my advice/ suggestins
in my pinin/as far as I’m cncerned/persnally
express ne’s views/pinins
7. 实用的建议 8. 关于 9. 建议某人做某事10.对某人有益 11.考虑我的建议 12.觉得我的建议有益/实用
practical/helpful/useful advice/suggestins
cncerning/as t/regarding/with regard t
suggest sb. ding sth/advise/recmmend sb. t d sth
be beneficial/be f benefit t sb.
take my advice/suggestins int cnsideratin/ accunt
find my suggestins/advice helpful/practical
13.如下14.有了某人的共同努力 15.开阔我们的视野 16.掌握英语17.意识到 18.一个有效的方式 19.保持乐观
braden ur hrizn
master English/ have a gd cmmand /knwledge f English
an effective way
remain ptimistic abut
with the jint effrts f sb.
20.记住 21.振奋某人的精神 22.习惯于这个现象 23.对…有坏影响 24.制定具体的制度 25.培养好的习惯 26.涵括各种各样的…
keep… in mind
lift ne’s spirits
get used/ accustmed t the phenmenn
have a bad effect/ influence n
set up specific rules
develp gd habits
cver a wide variety f
知识点2 必背经典句
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
I'm srry t hear that yu are having truble fitting in yur new schl. Such prblems are quite nrmal. Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful.
Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
I'm writing t yu t present what I think n the further imprvement f ur htel s as t attract mre clients（顾客）.
I‘m writing t yu t present what I think n…
知识点5 必背句（思维导图）
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
In my pinin/ As far as I’m cncerned/Persnally, it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.
it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.
我认为如果你…,将会受益
I think it wuld be beneficial/f benefit if yu…
it wuld be beneficial/f benefit if…
如果你能认真考虑我的建议我将会非常高兴。
I will be glad if yu take my advice int accunt/cnsideratin.
I will be glad if…
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
I will be mre than happy t see imprvements in this regard.
I will be mre than happy t…
我希望我的建议对你有益。
I d hpe that my suggestins/advice will be beneficial/f benefit t yu.
my suggestins/advice will be beneficial/f benefit t yu.
（模版1） In recent days, we have t face the prblem____________A, which is becming mre and mre serius.  First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Secnd,  ____________（举例进一步说明现状）. Cnfrnted with A, we shuld take a series f effective measures t cpe with the situatin. Fr ne thing, ____________（解决方法一）. Fr anther ____________（解决方法二）.  Finally, ____________（解决方法三）.  Persnally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）.  Cnsequently, I’m cnfident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）.
（模版2）Dear ______ (称谓) It is cmmn t see that ______(陈述现象). Nt nly ______, but als______ (现象的影响). I’m writing t call n us students t ______(呼吁) . Firstly, we are suppsed t ______(建议一). What’s mre, it is suggested that ______(建议二). Eventually, whatever pssible it’s gd t______(建议三) . Such measures can definitely make a marked imprvement in______(在什么方面提高), we wuld like all f yu t attach imprtance t______(主题)!Yur sincerely,Li Hua
04 真题溯源·考向感知
1. 2025年北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1. 提出的建议; 2. 建议的理由。提示词：倡议 prpsal注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。__________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim, I'm glad t receive yur email. I'm mre than willing t ffer yu sme suggestins n the prpsal. I suggest yu fcus n envirnmental prtectin. Yu can prpse a campaign t encurage teenagers arund the wrld t reduce plastic waste. The reasn is that plastic pllutin has becme a serius glbal prblem. It nt nly harms the envirnment but als affects the health f animals and humans. By launching this campaign, we can make a difference and raise peple's awareness f envirnmental prtectin. I hpe my suggestins will be helpful t yu. I'm lking frward t yur excellent prpsal.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇是回复朋友Jim关于提案建议的书信。【详解】 1. 词汇积累 乐意做：be willing t → be eager t 提议：prpse → put frward 增强：enhance → strengthen 打破刻板印象：break dwn steretypes → dispel prejudices 2. 句式拓展 原句：Yu can prpse a campaign t encurage teenagers arund the wrld t reduce plastic waste. 拓展句：It wuld be advisable t prpse a campaign that encurages teenagers wrldwide t reduce plastic waste, as this issue has reached urgent prprtins. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] The reasn is that plastic pllutin has becme a serius glbal prblem.（使用“the reasn is that...”表语从句，清晰阐释建议的核心依据） [高分句型2] By launching this campaign, we can make a difference and raise peple's awareness f envirnmental prtectin.（用“by + 动名词”结构说明行动方式，“make a difference”短语增强说服力）
2. 2025年1月浙江卷你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：(1) 陈述看法; (2) 提出建议。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】My views n filming shrt vides n campus Gd mrning, everyne!Tday, I’d like t share my thughts n filming shrt vides n campus. Just as every cin has tw sides, filming n campus has bth advantages and disadvantages. On the ne hand, it’s a great way t recrd beautiful mments and express creativity. On the ther hand, it may affect learning and even disturb thers.Therefre, I suggest we shuld film at suitable times and places and avid distracting classmates.  Let’s make ur campus a harmnius and inspiring envirnment.Thank yu!
【导语】本篇是英语课“一分钟演讲”活动的演讲稿，围绕部分同学在校园内拍摄短视频的现象，阐述看法并提出建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累表达：express→cnvey影响：affect→impact干扰：disturb→interfere和谐的：harmnius→peaceful2. 句式拓展原句：On the ne hand, it’s a great way t recrd beautiful mments and express creativity.拓展句：On the ne hand, it’s a great way that can be used t recrd beautiful mments and cnvey creativity.【点睛】[高分句型1] Just as every cin has tw sides, filming n campus has bth advantages and disadvantages.（as引导方式状语从句，生动形象地引出对校园拍摄短视频现象的辩证看法）[高分句型2] Therefre, I suggest we shuld film at suitable times and places and avid distracting classmates.（使用虚拟语气“suggest sb. shuld d”，明确提出合理建议，增强说服力）
3. 2024年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)建议投稿内容；(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。__________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim, It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry. Here are a few suggestins fr yur article. T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld. In additin, yu can als mentin China’s rle in helping slving glbal issues such as the glbal warming, ffering a mre cmprehensive view. Lking frward t reading yur article! Yurs,Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。【详解】1.词汇积累很好的：great →wnderful成就：achievement→ accmplishment建议：suggestin →advice此外：In additin → what’s mre2.句式拓展原句：It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.拓展句：It’s great t hear what yu’re planning t write abut is China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.【点睛】【高分句型1】T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
4. 2023年6月新高考1&2卷假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。__________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with. My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether. Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin. Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1. 词汇积累首先：t begin with → first f all提高：imprve → prgress建议：suggestin → advice选择：chse → select2. 句式拓展原句：My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.拓展句：My suggestin is that we are suppsed t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.【点睛】[高分句型1]This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Besides, Students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.（运用了省略句和wh引导定语从句）
5. 2023年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。__________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim, Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”. Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.Yurs,Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestin→tip提供：ffer→prvide开展：carry ut→cnduct主题：theme→tpic2.句式拓展原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6. 2022年全国乙卷学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beynd the Classrm为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】 Learning English Beynd the Classrm Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm in varius ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%. As far as I’m cncerned, it is a disturbing trend. Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks. Because f their lack f self-discipline, they’re mre easily addicted t chatting nline r playing games. It’s urgent fr students themselves t imprve their self-discipline, and it’s als urgent fr parents and teachers t strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累缺乏：lack→shrtage加强：strengthen→enhance各种各样的：varius→all kinds f就我而言：as far as I’m cncerned→frm my perspective2.句式拓展原句：Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.拓展句：Hwever, thse wh chse reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及wh引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
7. 2022年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2．交流时间和其他相关事项。注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim. Hw's everything? I'm writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing. Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically,hw t develp a paragraph,and hw t structure an essay? The talk will be abut an hur,and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience.Please let me knw which platfrm yu'll be using It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk. Lking frward t yur reply. Yurs, Li Hua
【导语】本篇是红星中学高三学生李华邀请英国好友Jim开展线上英语写作经验交流的电子邮件，内容涵盖建议交流内容及原因、交流时间和相关事项，符合100词左右的应用文写作要求。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 薄弱的：be weak in → be pr at 建议：suggestins → tips 逻辑地：lgically → cherently 决定：decide n → cnfirm 2. 句式拓展 原句：Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. 拓展句：Since ur classmates ften struggle with essay structure, they seem t be weak in rganisatinal skills. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay?（使用“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语，并列三个写作痛点，清晰呈现交流需求） [高分句型2] The talk will be abut an hur, and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience.（用and连接两个分句，前半部分说明时长，后半部分体现对对方时间的尊重，语气得体）
8. 2021年6月全国乙卷你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart nline learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括：1.分析优势及不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100词左右；2.题目和首句以为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Be smart nline learners Just like the ld saying ges, "each cin has tw sides." On the ne hand, prviding an easy access t plenty f excellent learning surces, nline learning is really a helping hand. On the ther hand, what we learn nline isn't necessarily what we need, nt t mentin its cnstant damage t ur eyes. Fr me, nline learning is, after all, just a tl. It's nt the new methd itself but the persn wh use it that really matters. T becme a smart nline learner, nt nly shuld we carefully chse frm cuntless alternatives we may face, but extra attentin needs t be attached when we take lessns nline. What's mre, n cnditin that we culd apply what we learn nline t ur daily life, nline learning wuld be mre meaningful. Thanks, everyne. Hpe we all culd be smart nline learners.
【导语】这篇发言稿属于应用文，以 “Be smart nline learners” 为主题，通过阐述线上学习的优势与不足，提出学习建议，旨在引导听众成为优秀的在线学习者，结构清晰，观点明确。【详解】1.词汇积累工具：tl→instrument选择：chse→select2.句式拓展原句：On the ne hand, prviding an easy access t plenty f excellent learning surces, nline learning is really a helping hand.拓展句：On the ne hand, since nline learning prvides an easy access t a multitude f excellent learning surces, it serves as a valuable helping hand fr learners.【点睛】[高分句型 1] Just like the ld saying ges, "each cin has tw sides."（引用谚语开篇，增强文章文化底蕴，自然引出主题，为下文论述做铺垫 ）[高分句型 2] On the ne hand, prviding an easy access t plenty f excellent learning surces, nline learning is really a helping hand.（现在分词短语 “prviding an easy access t...” 作伴随状语，说明线上学习的优势，使句子结构紧凑，表达流畅）
9. （2019北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim, I’m pleased that yu’re cming t tur in China. I suggest that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund. Tianjin will be yur next stp. After that, yu can g t Shanghai, where yu can stay fr a week. Yu can take high-speed trains t bth cities. Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu. Lking frward t yur arrival.Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。词汇积累shw yu arund  带你参观；take high-speed trains t bth cities  坐高铁到这两个城市；take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu 带上夏季服装和雨伞；Lking frward t yur arrival 期待你的到来。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that yu’re cming t tur in China.和that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund.是宾语从句。 where yu can stay fr a week.是非限制性定语从句。
10. 【2019·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100：（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
【参考范文】Dear Chris, I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High schl. Hearing that yu will be sent t ur schl t participate in a ne-week cmmunicatin activity n behalf f ur partner-schl, I feel excited t give sme advice n the speech abut western art, which will be given by yu. Here are sme f my suggestins. Frm my perspective, amng all the themes n western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I wuld like t have a better understanding f music, fr a great number f my classmates are fnd f music. T enhance ur knwledge, I wuld appreciate it if yu add sme infrmatin abut the histry and develpment f western music. In additin, sme excellent wrks f music and the intrductin f several distinguished musicians wuld be a gd way t braden ur hrizn. Anyway, I can't wait t meet yu frm the bttm f my heart! Thank yu fr yur time!Yurs,Li Jin
【导语】此篇邮件属于应用文，是李津就英方教师 Chris 将开展的西方艺术讲座，向其表达自己期望的讲座话题、原因、感兴趣内容及收获期待，符合信息沟通类邮件的写作需求。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in→take part in建议：advice→suggestins观点：perspective→viewpint2.句式拓展原句：Hearing that yu will be sent t ur schl t participate in a ne-week cmmunicatin activity n behalf f ur partner-schl, I feel excited t give sme advice n the speech abut western art, which will be given by yu.拓展句：When I heard that yu will be sent t ur schl t take part in a ne-week cmmunicatin activity n behalf f ur partner-schl, I was filled with excitement and eager t give sme advice n the speech abut western art that yu will deliver.【点睛】[高分句型 1] Hearing that yu will be sent t ur schl t participate in a ne-week cmmunicatin activity n behalf f ur partner-schl, I feel excited t give sme advice n the speech abut western art, which will be given by yu.（现在分词短语作时间状语，同时 “which” 引导非限制性定语从句修饰 “speech”，使句子开头自然流畅，且信息丰富 ）[高分句型 2] Frm my perspective, amng all the themes n western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I wuld like t have a better understanding f music, fr a great number f my classmates are fnd f music.（“frm my perspective” 表明观点，“” 列举范围，“fr” 引导原因状语从句，阐述选择理由，使句子逻辑连贯 ）
11. (2018全国卷I) 假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括：1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪注意：1.词数不少于80；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Terry, I am delighted t learn that yu will visit yur Chinese friend in his huse sn. Accrding t the questins yu raised, I'd like t ffer yu the fllwing advice.Firstly, yu shuld cnfirm the arrival time with him befre yur visit. It's better t turn up 5 minutes in advance. Besides, I recmmend that yu shuld bring a prper gift with yu, which can be a prime wine, a selected skin care prduct r sme ppular hney prduced in New Zealand. I think the family will appreciate any f them as they are quite ppular in China. Mst imprtantly, Chinese table manners are very different frm yurs. What's cnsidered t be plite is taking fd just presented in frnt f yu with a spn r chpsticks. Als, dn't wrry if they keep filling yur bwl with varius fd, because it always means welcme and friendship in ur culture, which yu can feel free t enjy. I can't wait t see yu in China! Hpe yu have a pleasant trip!Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】这篇范文属于应用文写作中的邮件体裁，是李华回复新西兰朋友 Terry做客中国朋友家相关习俗的邮件，需详细且准确地告知到达时间、合适礼物及餐桌礼仪等内容，以帮助朋友更好地融入社交场合。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→thrilled建议：ffer advice→give suggestins提前：in advance→ahead f time2.句式拓展原句：Firstly, yu shuld cnfirm the arrival time with him befre yur visit. It's better t turn up 5 minutes in advance.拓展句：Firstly, befre yu visit yur Chinese friend, yu shuld cnfirm the arrival time with him, and it wuld be better if yu culd turn up 5 minutes ahead f time, which shws yur respect and punctuality.【点睛】[高分句型 1] I am delighted t learn that yu will visit yur Chinese friend in his huse sn.（that 引导宾语从句，作为 “learn” 的宾语，简洁明了地引出邮件话题 ）[高分句型 2] I recmmend that yu shuld bring a prper gift with yu, which can be a prime wine, a selected skin care prduct r sme ppular hney prduced in New Zealand.（that 引导宾语从句，使用虚拟语气 “shuld + 动词原形”，“which” 引导非限制性定语从句，对礼物进行补充说明，丰富句子内容 ）[高分句型 3] What's cnsidered t be plite is taking fd just presented in frnt f yu with a spn r chpsticks.（what 引导主语从句，“presented in frnt f yu” 是过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰 “fd”，句子结构多样且合理 ）
12. 2018年6月高考真题北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50； (2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim, I’m s glad t hear yur future educatin plan in Beijing in yur last letter. First I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu and I am sure yu will have the mst unfrgettable experience during yur cllege in Beijing. Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest yu apply fr Peking University, ne f the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature majr is perfect fr yu where yu can be cmpletely saked in Chinese prfund histry and rich culture. As fr preparatin, sme reading in advance in needed like The Stry f the Stne while sme nline curses f spken Chinese can be helpful fr yu t adapt int the Chinese language envirnment. I sincerely hpe yur dream will cme true and it’s my pleasure t shw yu arund in Beijing when that day cmes. If yu have further questins, please feel free t let me knw.Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的邮件体裁，是李华回复英国朋友 Jim 关于来北京上大学咨询的邮件，需包含表示欢迎、推荐大学、建议准备工作等内容，文章紧扣主题，有效完成了信息传达与交流的任务。【详解】1. 词汇积累难忘的：unfrgettable→memrable建议：suggest→recmmend提前：in advance→ahead f time2. 句式拓展原句：First I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu and I am sure yu will have the mst unfrgettable experience during yur cllege in Beijing.拓展句：First f all, I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu, and I am firmly cnvinced that yu will have the mst memrable experience during yur cllege years in Beijing, where yu can explre a vibrant city full f histry and mdernity.【点睛】[高分句型 1] First I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu and I am sure yu will have the mst unfrgettable experience during yur cllege in Beijing.（and 连接两个并列句，后一句中 “ I am sure + that 从句” 表达确信，自然传递对朋友的欢迎与祝福 ）[高分句型 2] Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest yu apply fr Peking University, ne f the best universities in China.（现在分词短语 “Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture” 作原因状语，简洁明了地说明推荐大学的依据，使句子结构紧凑 ）
13 2017年高考真题北京卷你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行" 或者 "泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请您给他回信。内容包括：1．你建议的线路； 2．你的理由； 3．你的祝愿.注意：1．词数不少于50； 2．开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Jim, I’m happy t receive yur letter and knw yu’re cming t China.Of the tw trips t the Yangtze River and Munt Tai, bth are highly recmmended. Persnally, I prefer the tur alng the Yangtze, the lngest river and ne f the mther rivers f Chinese civilizatin. Yu can learn a lt abut the histry f China and Chinese peple. Mrever, the scenery alng the river is amazing, with many well-knwn sightseeing spts. That’s why I think the trip alng the Yangtze will be a better chice. Hpe yu’ll have a gd time in China.Yurs,Li Hua