沪教牛津版（2024）七年级上册（2024）Writing教学课件ppt

这是一份沪教牛津版（2024）七年级上册（2024）Writing教学课件ppt，文件包含Unit4TheEarth第四课时Writing课件pptx、Unit4TheEarth第4课时Writing教学设计docx、Unit4TheEarth大单元整体教学设计docx、314735592-1-16-314735592-1-16mp4等4份课件配套教学资源，其中PPT共21页， 欢迎下载使用。
Learning bjectives
3. Imprve the structure, cntent, and language f the initial draft thrugh self-evaluatin and peer evaluatin.
1. Understand the writing purpse, style, and requirements.
2. Discuss the prblems the Earth is facing and the slutins f these prblem.
After learning this lessn, yu can:
Su Wen decided t write an email t tell thers his ideas n hw t prtect the Earth.
Befre thinking abut hw we can prtect the Earth, we must knw the prblems the Earth is facing first. Then rganize the infrmatin we knw.
Step ne: Plan
Pre-writing
Part 1: Part 2: Part 3:
Structure (谋篇布局)
What things are there n the Earth?
Why shuld we prtect the Earth?
Hw can we prtect the Earth?
wild fields, green frests and dry deserts
different kinds f animals
prvide humans with fd, water and energy
Watch a vide, catch sme useful wrds abut pllutin frm it, and write them dwn.
waste/rubbish
air/water/sil pllutin
Lk at the phts belw and discuss the prblems. What can we d t slve these prblems?
factries/ waste water/pllute the rivers
The prblem
Factries pur waste water int rivers.
It pllutes the rivers and makes many fish die.
We shuld stp plluting the rivers and lakes.
We shuld eat less seafd.We shuld nt catch small fish.We can use slar pwer r wind pwer.We must make energy in a green way.We must put rubbish int rubbish bins.We shuld use fewer plastic bags. We can recycle as much as we can.We can plant mre trees.…
Write my article with this layut.
Step tw: Write
The Earth is a beautiful planet.
Plants, Animals,Peple
Stp and Prtect
Think f a tpic sentence fr each part.
Add details r examples t supprt the tpic sentence.
Fr example + 例子
列举措施(actin)
Pay attentin t the lgic between different parts.
Remember t add:a titlea cncluding sentence necessary linking wrds
supprting sentences
Tpic sentences
Prtect the EarthThe Earth is a beautiful place. There are a lt f high muntains, blue seas, and beautiful rivers. The Earth prvides us with air, water and fd. This beautiful planet is ur nly hme. Hwever, we are harming the Earth in many ways. Fr example, factries put dirty water int lakes and rivers. It causes water pllutin. Besides, peple use t much plastic and thrw rubbish everywhere. As a result, lts f sea animals are dying because f plastic pllutin.
Pst-writing
What’s mre, sme peple cut dwn many trees t build farms. S there is less and less frest land. We nly have ne Earth, s we have t prtect it. First, factries shuld stp plluting rivers and lakes. Secnd we bring ur wn shpping bags t the supermarket and srt rubbish in the right way befre thrwing rubbish int the trash can. Finally, it’s imprtant fr us t plant mre trees t make ur Earth mre beautiful.Let’s start small and prtect ur Earth!
Step three: Check and revise
Tick () the bxes t check yur writing, and then revise it.
factries shuld stp plluting rivers and lakes
Grade and share
Hw t write an article abut prtecting the Earth?