高中英语读后续写专题--动作描写之动作链动作面 课件-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

这是一份高中英语读后续写专题--动作描写之动作链动作面 课件-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项，共25页。PPT课件主要包含了续写步骤，Revision ，刚睡醒 ，睡眼惺忪地揉眼睛+ ，把腿移到床外+，摸索着找拖鞋，场景刚睡醒，doing，李白站在月下 ，+ 思念家乡等内容，欢迎下载使用。
5W1H; 篇章结构，情感变化
合理预测情节，确定续写内容
动作描写，情感描写，环境描写
Watch a vide and answer sme questins.
1. Where is this vide taken frm?2. What did this prse(散文) want t cnvey? 3. Hw did Zhu Ziqing express his father’s lve?
The sight f Father’s back by Zhu Ziqing.
Father’s lve t his sn.
He didn’t reveal the deep lve with direct wrds, instead letting actins speak luder.
Shw the readers everything, tell them nthing. --Ernest Hemingway
T shw, nt t tell
What is “t shw”?T Tell: give us infrmatin.T Shw: help us frm pictures in ur mind thrugh details.
Actin chain
S + V1, V2 and V3
Ding，S + V2 and V3
Having dne, S + V
动作描写之具象化--将结果性 动作细节到过程性 动作。
Pre-actin （先前动作）
Trans-actin(过渡动作)
Pst-actin(后续动作)
Actin具体的动作描写
He stpped the taxi, jumped with the suitcase and tld the driver, “G t the plice statin, please.””
高考范例：描述“上出租车去警察局”的动作。
S + V1, V2 and V3
actin chain
场景：Thmas 发表演讲
Thmas glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began his speech.
1. 他放下书包，掏出课本，开始朗读。2. 小猫跳上桌子，叼起鱼干，跑回了窝。3. 男孩握紧拳头，咬紧牙关，冲向了终点线。
He put dwn his schlbag, pulled ut his textbk, and started reading.
The kitten jumped nt the table, picked up the dried fish, and ran back t its nest.
The by clenched his fists, gritted his teeth, and dashed tward the finish line.
Rubbing his eyes sleepily,
he swung his legs ver the bed
and grped fr his slippers.
Ding，S + V2 and V3
Standing under the mn,
and missed his family.
Libai gazed at the mn
场景：“举头望明月，低头思故乡”
场景：餐厅等位一小时还没等到位
思考：这个动作前后可能还有哪些动作？
Having waited fr an hur,
they decided t leave the restaurant.
Having dne, S + V
Having finished his hmewrk,
he turned ff the desk lamp
and went t bed.
1. 这位老人坐在地铁里，看着手机，皱着（knit）眉头。2. 轻轻吹着口哨，她打开窗户，探身出去感受微风。3. 把信读了两遍后，她小心地折起来，放进了口袋。
Sitting n the subway, the ld man stared at his phne and knitted his brws.
Whistling a tune sftly, she pened the windw and leaned ut t feel the breeze.
Having read the letter twice, she flded it carefully and put it int her pcket .
Actin scene
Surrundings
actin scene
Walking past the garden, she smelled the rses and felt a sudden lift in her spirits.
走过花园时，她驻足轻嗅花香，心情瞬间明朗起来。
surrundings
“Dn’t wrry, I’ll fix it,” Dad smiled, tapping the brken bike gently.
“别担心，我会修好的，”爸爸微笑着，轻轻敲了敲那辆坏了的自行车。
“…..,”S said, ding…
Having waited fr an hur,they decided t leave the restaurant.
Having waited fr an hur,they decided t leave the restaurant, with their stmach grwling. / with their patience wearing thin.
with sth. +介词短语
Standing under the mn, Libai gazed at the mn and missed his family.
With the silence f night, standing under the rund mn, Libai gazed at the mn lnely and missed his family with sadness n his face.
adj. / adv.
Three principles
tipte 踮起脚尖走limp 一瘸一拐地走pace up and dwn 来回踱步wander 漫步
jg 慢跑race 飞奔rush 冲向dash 猛冲
laugh 大笑smile 微笑grin 露齿笑chuckle 咯咯的笑
stare 盯着glance 扫视；瞥glare 怒目而视peer 偷看
描述场景（60词左右）