《读后续写技巧-对话描写》课件 2025届高中英语高考一轮复习

这是一份《读后续写技巧-对话描写》课件 2025届高中英语高考一轮复习，共29页。PPT课件主要包含了asked，whispered，screamed，promised，complained，完成句子，“说” 动词+副词，“说” 动词+语气，“说” 动词+嗓音，续写微作文等内容，欢迎下载使用。
对话(dialgue)是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。它可以用来揭示人物的性格和个性，它也可以用来推动情节向前发展，并展示情节发展的过程。
What is the functin f dialgue in a stry？
对话描写的原则： ① 对话要为推动故事情节服务，每段出现一两句即可； ② 对话描写必须反映人物的心理与情感，刻画人物的性格； ③ 不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇； ④ 尽可能结合动作描写，明确对谁说。
对话描写存在的问题 ？？？
标点符号使用 不够规范
Learning Objectives
She said, “Our bus will arrive in five minutes.”
① 说话人在前 当Sb said位于句首时，后面一般用逗号;引号内第一个字母大写,句尾标点符号放在引号内。
Sb said, “Xxxxx.”
“I hpe yu will be here, ” he said. “I dn't care!” he said. “Why?” he asked.
② 说话人在后 当sb said位于句末时，引号内第一个字母大写,陈述句句末用逗号，疑问句用问号，感叹句用感叹号。引号外第一个字母小写。
“Xxxxx, ！？”sb said.
③ 说话人在中间当sb said位于句中时, 前面引号内句末用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写；sb said后面一般用逗号，后面引号内第一个字母小写。
“Xxxxxx,” sb said, “xxxxxx.”
“That’s cl,” he said, “can I have a try?”
“Xxxxxx, ！？” sb said.
Sb said, “Xxxxxx.”
1. “cme n！ Yu can d it. I whispered t him in a sft vice.2. “I will never d that again,” He answered firmly. 3. I ran t him and said: “get up and run!” 4. “Thank yu s much,” He said with a chking vice, “ But I dn't knw hw t pay fr yur kindness.”
二、对话用词的丰富性
用词---如果续写中语言描写较多，那么一定要避免通篇都是“said”，而要灵活多变地使用表示“说”的动词
用词 --- 不能只是said---换个词
说道 ________ 回答道 ________ 问道 _______ 补充说 ______ 解释道 _______ 叹气地说 ______ 同意地说 ______ 大笑地说 ______ 请求 _______尖叫道 ___________ 大声地吼道 ___________ 承诺 ________ 抱怨道 ________ 说服 ________ 安慰 ________ 道歉 ________ 建议 _______耳/低语 ____________
shut/ yell / rar
whisper/murmur
1. “Why dn’t yu want t accept this wnderful pprtunity?” ___________ the bss n the phne.2. “Shall we leave nw?” he ___________ t us and we left the rm very quietly.3. “Help! Help! I can’t swim,” ___________ the frightened by.4. “I will never d that again,” I ___________.5. “ I didn’t like that meal at all,” ________the custmer.
scream whisper prmise ask cmplain
Fill in the blank with the right verb frm.用所给动词的正确形式填空。
Hw t express "say" mre vividly?
(三) 给各种“说”加点料
在直播节目中，李发出一声惊人的喊叫，“我的妈呀，答应我，买它！”In a live streaming, Li shuted in a surprising tne, “Oh, my Gd! Prmise me t buy it”!
skill1 加语气 基本结构为:
in a/an adj tne( 语气，语调 )
加点料---修饰动词said
  in a tne 以一种温柔的语气 in a tne 以一种愉悦的语气 in a tne 以一种坚定的语气 in a tne 以一种粗鲁的语气 in a tne 以一种悲伤的语气 in a tne 以一种好奇的的语气 in an tne 以一种不耐烦的语气
in a/an adj tne( 语气，语调 )
sft/gentle/mild
“I didn't mean t,” she murmured in a lw vice.
“我不是故意的，”她低声说。
skill2 加嗓音 基本结构为:
in a/an adj vice( 声音)
  in a vice 用一个高的声音 in a vice 用一个低的声音 in a vice 用一个响亮的声音 in an vice 用一个恼火的的声音 in a vice 用一个坚定的声音 in a vice用一个颤抖的声音 in an vice用一个局促不安的声音
特朗普是如此生气，以致于他在办公室大声吼道，“这下完蛋了！”S annyed was Dnald Jhn Trump that he rared ludly in the ffice, “It's ver”!
skill3 加副词 基本结构为:
impatiently
unwillingly
desperately
1. She lked at him with an angry glance and____________________“Leave me alne!”她生气地看了他一眼，不耐烦地说：“别烦我！”2. He stpped me and___________________, “I d miss yu!”他拦住我，轻轻地说：“我真想你！”3. “Wh brke the glass?” the by _________________________. 男孩声音颤抖地问道，“谁打碎的玻璃？”
said impatiently
added in a sft tne
asked in a trembling vice
4. . “I wuld lve t,” _______________________________. “我很乐意这样做，”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说。5. In a _______________________ he _____________________, “Okay, I guess.”他用颤抖的、局促不安的声音不情愿地回答说:“好吧，我想。”
Emily said in a pleasant tne
trembling , awkward vice
answered unwillingly
6.The children _____________________,"Happy Mther's Day!" 孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”
shuted ludly
Last week at a dinner party, the hstess asked me t sit next t Mrs. Rumbld. Mrs. Rumbld was a large, unsmiling lady in a tight black dress.①_________________________________________________(当我在她身边坐下时，她甚至连头都没抬一下).②__________________（她的眼睛盯着自己的盘子，）and in a shrt time, she was busy eating.I tried t make a cnversatin. “Will yu be spending yur hlidays abrad this year?” ③___________________________________(我微笑着礼貌地问道).
She didn’t even lk up when I tk my seat beside her
Her eyes were fixed/fcused n her plate
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I asked plitely with a smile
“N,” ④________________________________（她头也不抬地回答，“说” ）. “Will yu be staying in England?”⑤_________________________________(我继续用温和的语气说）.“N,”she shk her head. ⑥_____________________________________________________（我绝望地问她晚餐是否吃得好）.“Yung man, ”⑦_____________________________________（她用一种恼火的声音回答）, “if yu ate mre and talked less, we wuld bth enjy ur dinner!”
she answered withut lking up
I cntinued in a gentle tne
Desperately,I asked her whether she was enjying her dinner
she answered in an annyed vice
② 丰富对话用词（词）
③ 丰富语段内容（句）