译林版（2024）七年级下册英语Units 1~4期中作文复习学案（含答案、范文）

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经典范文
中国文化包罗万象，作为新时代的中国青少年，我们应当了解并弘扬中华优秀传统文化。假如你是李华，你校本月将举行以“中华优秀传统文化”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and schlmates,
I'm Li Hua. It's my hnur t stand here and make a speech. I'm glad t intrduce ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms, paper-cutting, t yu.
Paper-cutting is an art frm. Peple can use scissrs t cut designs ut f a piece f paper. It is ften used as a frm f decratin during the Spring Festival, and the clur is always red.Hwever, paper-cutting is mre than just a frm f decratin. It is a way t express emtins and cnvey the spirit f Chinese peple.
It is great t prtect and prmte traditinal Chinese culture. By ding s, we can pass dwn Chinese traditins. What's mre, we can help peple frm all ver the wrld understand the beauty f Chinese traditins.
That's all. Thank yu fr yur listening.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，关于传统文化--中国的剪纸艺术：
1.I'd like t intrduce ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms-----paper-cutting.
2.It has a lng histry and was very ppular with ancient Chinese writers.It's the paper-cutting.
3.I'm glad t see that mre and mre peple enjy traditinal Chinese culture.Tday,I’ll tell yu smething abut the traditinal flk art --paper-cutting.
4.Paper-cutting is a traditinal art frm.
5.We can see it everywhere arund us.What's the art frm?It's the paper-cutting.
另起一段，详细介绍：性质，用处，制作方法等
1.Peple can use scissrs t cut designs ut f a piece f paper.
2.It takes a lng time t make.
3.Paper-cutting is mre than just a frm f decratin.
4.Thrugh paper-cutting, peple can express their best wishes.
5.I like the paper-cutting f the Chinese character chun.
6.It means hpe t peple.
另起一段，写个人观点：（积极向上的）
1.It is an imprtant part f Chinese culture.
2.We can help peple frm all ver the wrld understand the beauty f Chinese traditins.
3.We ften rganize sme activities.
4.We can intrduce paper-cutting t mre peple.
5.We can help mre peple knw mre abut traditinal Chinese culture.
课堂演练
中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化，请你用英语写一封回信，向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点。
中国结(Chinese knt) 剪纸
材料:丝线(silk thread) 材料;纸和剪刀(scissrs)
颜色：红色 特点：剪出各种图案
形状：像花、动物等 用途：张贴在门、窗等地
寓意：带来好运 寓意：表达喜悦
1.你对传统艺术的看法(请补充)
2.你的期望(请补充)
Dear Sam,
I'm glad t hear frm yu. Yu said yu had great interest in traditinal Chinese culture.Nw let me tell yu smething abut it.





Yurs,
Li Hua
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
It is made f silk thread.
It usually cmes in red .
It is always in the shapes f flwers, animals and s n.
Chinese peple believe that the Chinese knt can bring them gd luck.
第二部分
It desn't need t much t start wrking，just a pair f scissrs and sme red paper.
It has different shapes，such as flwers，animals ，sme landscapes and s n.
Peple usually put paper-cuts up n drs, windws.
Peple ften use paper-cuts t express happiness.
第三部分
I think traditinal Chinese art frms are ur art treasures.
I hpe mre and mre yung peple like them and explre them.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
第一部分
The Chinese knt is ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms.
第二部分
Anther traditinal Chinese art frm is paper-cutting. ,
4、整合作文
The Chinese knt is ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms.It is made f silk thread. It usually cmes in red .It is always in the shapes f flwers, animals and s n.Chinese peple believe that the Chinese knt can bring them gd luck.
Anther traditinal Chinese art frm is paper-cutting. It desn't need t much t start wrking，just a pair f scissrs and sme red paper.It has different shapes，such as flwers，animals ，sme landscapes and s n.Peple usually put paper-cuts up n drs, windws.Peple ften use paper-cuts t express happiness.
I think traditinal Chinese art frms are ur art treasures.
I hpe mre and mre yung peple like them and explre them.
实战演练
近几年来，传统文化正在走进我们的日常生活。某杂志社为了鼓励同学们感受并传承传统文化之美,开辟了“Traditinal Chinese culture arund me”的专栏。假如你是刘美,请你写一封信投稿，词数不少于 80。
内容包括：
1.列举你身边的一种中华传统文化。
2.谈谈你对这种文化的理解。
3.你是如何传播这种文化的。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm glad t see that mre and mre peple enjy and spread traditinal Chinese culture in ur daily life







Yurs,
Liu Mei传统文化
中国的剪纸艺术
详细介绍
……
个人观点
……
Unit 3：要求同学们用上教材中的句型介绍自己的家乡。写作时通常可以先介绍自己，然后描述家乡的具体情况，包括名称、位置、环境等，最后评价一下自己的家乡，结束语通常是发出邀请。
经典范文
请以“My hmetwn”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
【要点如下】
【要求】
1.语句通顺，语言规范。
2.80 词左右。
My hmetwn
My hmetwn is a mdern and beautiful city. It has an area f abut 260,000 square kilmetres. It takes us nly ne hur t drive t Shanghai. There are buses t the city centre every day.
It is quiet and has fresh air. We can hear the birds sing and smell the flwers. There are lts f wrks f art t see in the museums here. Visitrs can learn abut Chinese histry and culture here.
I am lucky t live in this city. I will be very happy t shw yu arund my hmetwn if yu cme here.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，总体描述自己的家乡：
My hmetwn is a beautiful seaside city.
My hmetwn is a mdern and beautiful city.
Let me tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
I wuld like t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
It is lcated in the nrth f Jiangsu Prvince.
另起一段，详细介绍：当对方来到自己城市时可以做的事情、自己所在城市的环境等
1. When yu visit the city, yu can g fr a walk by the sea.
2. Yu can als try sme traditinal fd like fish and chips.
3. There are lts f wrks f art t see in the museums here.
4. The weather here is neither t cld nr t ht.
5. There are a lt f green trees and clurful flwers.
6. Peple can enjy delicius fd here.
另起一段，邀请语，总结语：
1. I hpe yu can enjy this trip.
2. I am lucky t live in this city.
3. I am prud t live here.
4. Welcme yu t my hmetwn.
课堂演练
假如你是李华，请根据下面的内容提示，用英语写一封信，向你的朋友 Lily介绍你的家乡——苏州。90词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
I'm glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.





Welcme t my hmetwn!
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
It's ne f the biggest cities in Eastern China.
It is in the suth-east f Jiangsu Prvince.
第二部分
It has a histry f ver 4,000 years.
It is a famus ancient city, where peple live by rivers with bridges everywhere.
It's als famus fr canals, stne bridges and beautiful scenery.
It has als been an imprtant centre f China's silk industry.
Yu can cme here t visit Suzhu Museum and the Taihu Lake.
Yu can als enjy Kunqu pera here.
Suzhu is a gd place t g shpping.
There are many big malls.
第三部分
I am lking frward t yur cming and I will shw yu arund it.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
Suzhu is my hmetwn.
Cme here and enjy yurself.
4、整合作文
I'm glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
Suzhu is my hmetwn. It's ne f the biggest cities in Eastern China. It is in the suth-east f Jiangsu Prvince.
It has a histry f ver 4,000 years. It is a famus ancient capital, where peple live by rivers with bridges everywhere. It's als famus fr canals, stne bridges and beautiful scenery. It has als been an imprtant centre f China's silk industry. Yu can cme here t visit Suzhu Museum and the Taihu Lake. Yu can als enjy Kunqu pera here. Suzhu is a gd place t g shpping. There are many big malls.
Cme here and enjy yurself. I am lking frward t yur cming and I will shw yu arund it.
Welcme t my hmetwn!
Best wishes!
实战演练
请根据图示,以“My charming hmetwn”为题,写一篇短文介绍你的家乡。
要求：
1.短文必须包括图示中的所有要点。
2. 90 词左右。








Yurs,
Liu Mei
位置
美丽的现代化城市……
车程
开车到上海只需1个小时……
环境
安静，空气新鲜……
感想
很幸运能够住在这座城市……
我的家乡——苏州
地理位置和风土人情。
自然和人文环境。
我在家乡做的一些有意义的事情。
……
Unit 2：要求谈论自己居住的社区的情况,写作时先要想好写哪些方面的内容，后要表达自己对社区的评价或感想。
经典范文
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报纸正在举行题为“My neighburhd”的征文活动假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。
【要求】
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2.必须包括思维导图中所有要求，并适当发挥。
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighburhd
I am Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Cmmunity. My neighburhd is like a big family.
My neighburs are kind and helpful. There are sme engineers amng them. They can help us fix things like washing machines. Sme f my neighburs are cllege students. They can help students with their hmewrk. They are patient enugh t explain prblems. I am always ready t help my neighburs t. Smetimes they are t busy t lk after their children. I ften play with their kids until they cme back.
I feel very lucky t live in such a neighburhd. I hpe it will becme better and better in the future.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，总体描述自己的街区：
My neighburhd is like a big family.
I'd like t share my idea f helping ur cmmunity with yu.
I live in Garden Neighburhd.
It is a small but beautiful place.
It is really cl t live here.
另起一段，详细介绍：自己家的情况，邻居的情况，平时的活动等
My parents and I live n the eighth flr in a tall building.
Sme f my neighburs are cllege students.
We will raise mney fr the plants in ur cmmunity.
I have sme friendly neighburs.
They are always ready t help thers.
Smetimes my neighburs take care f each ther's pets.
Our neighburs are willing t give us sme ideas.
My neighburs are nice.
另起一段，总结语：
Let's wrk tgether t make ur cmmunity a better place.
I feel very lucky t live in a neighburhd like this.
I lve my neighburhd.
I feel lucky t live in a neighburhd like this.
I think it will becme better.
课堂演练
假如你是 Amy，你的美国朋友 Mike向你询问你社区的情况。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。
【要求】1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2.必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3.词数80左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike,
I'd like t tell yu smething abut my neighburhd.





Yurs,
Amy
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
My neighburhd is in the centre f the city.
There is a park abut 1 kilmetre frm the neighburhd.
It is very fantastic fr us t g fr a walk after supper in the park.
第二部分
My neighburs are friendly and helpful.
Sme f them are vlunteers.
They help us with all kinds f prblems.
When I have truble with smething, I can ask them fr help.
第三部分
It is very lucky and happy t live here.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
I hpe that yu can cme t my neighburhd ne day.
4、整合作文
Dear Mike,
I'd like t tell yu smething abut my neighburhd.
My neighburhd is in the centre f the city. There is a park abut 1 kilmetre frm the neighburhd. It is very enjyable t g there fr a walk after supper.
My neighburs are friendly and helpful. Sme f them are vlunteers. They help us with all kinds f prblems.When I have truble with smething, I can ask them fr help.
It is very cnvenient and happy t live here. I hpe that yu can cme t my neighburhd ne day.
Yurs,
Amy
实战演练
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My neighburhd”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区。请你根据表格提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。
要求：
1.必须包括表格中所有要点内容。
2.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。








Yurs,
Liu Mei
Unit 1：要求学生结合所学内容并发挥想象力，设计出自己未来的梦想家园
经典范文
根据所给提示以“My dream huse”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。
【要点】
1.房子很大，是一个三层楼房，带有花园和游泳池……
2.一楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅……
3.二楼有一个电脑房和一个大客厅……
4.我有自己的卧室，又大又干净。
My dream huse
My dream huse is very big. It has three flrs with a garden and a swimming pl. The garden is full f flwers and lks very beautiful.
On the grund flr, there is a big kitchen and a dining rm. I can invite ver twenty friends t have dinner. On the first flr, there is a cmputer rm and a big living rm. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living rm. I have a bedrm f my wn. It is big and clean.
I hpe I can live in my dream huse ne day.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，总体描述自己梦想的家：
My dream hme is a huse with tw flrs.
My dream huse is very big. It has a nice garden.
My dream hme is a huse with seven rms in it.
It has tw flrs.
另起一段，详细介绍：自己家的情况
On the grund flr, there is a big kitchen and a dining rm.
On the first flr, there is a cmputer rm.
My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living rm.
On the grund flr, yu can see a sfa in the living rm.
There is a fridge in it.
In frnt f my huse, there is a nice garden.
另起一段，总结语：
This is my dream hme. I like it.
I hpe I can live in my dream huse ne day.
That's my dream hme.
I hpe yu can visit it sn.
Wuld yu like t share yurs with me?
课堂演练
(2024·江苏兴化昭阳湖初级中学调研)Millie的朋友 Sandy下周来兴化玩，请根据下表提示帮 Millie写一封信，邀请 Sandy 来兴化玩时住在自己家里。
【要求】
词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名。
短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy t knw that yu will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like t invite yu t stay at my hme.


Yurs,
Millie
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre f Xinghua.
It is near a schl and a shpping centre.
第二部分
There is a small supermarket in the neighburhd.
Peple can g there t buy what they need.
There is als a small garden, s peple can take a walk there after dinner.
第三部分
Our neighburs are very kind and helpful.
Sme f them are vlunteers.
They ften help us fix things like brken bicycles.
Students can als get help with hmewrk frm cllege students.
第四部分
I am happy t have my wn bedrm and study.
The living rm is very big.
We can sit n the sfa and watch TV there.
I like the balcny best.
I ften sit there and enjy the sunshine.
第五部分
I hpe I can see yu sn.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
My hme has fur rms.
Welcme t Xinghua! Welcme t my hme.
4、整合作文
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy t knw that yu will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like t invite yu t stay at my hme.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre f Xinghua. It is near a schl and a shpping centre. There is als a small garden, s peple can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighburs are very kind and helpful. They ften help us fix things like brken bicycles. Students can als get help with ur hmewrk frm cllege students.
My hme has fur rms. I am happy t have my wn bedrm . The living rm is very big. We can sit n the sfa and watch TV there. I like the balcny best. I ften sit there and enjy the sunshine.
I hpe I can see yu sn. Welcme t Xinghua! Welcme t my hme.
实战演练
请根据你校校刊有关“Dream hme”的征稿内容写一篇英语短文来设计你自己的梦想家园。
What is yur dream hme like?
Hw many rms are there in yur dream hme and what are they?
What things are in it?
要求：
1.文章要涵盖所有要点，可以适当发挥。
2.词数不少于80，文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。






译林版（2024）七年级下册英语Units 1~4期中作文复习学案·答案版
Unit 4：要求学生们运用所学习的知识介绍自己家乡的民间艺术或传统风俗习惯
经典范文
中国文化包罗万象，作为新时代的中国青少年，我们应当了解并弘扬中华优秀传统文化。假如你是李华，你校本月将举行以“中华优秀传统文化”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and schlmates,
I'm Li Hua. It's my hnur t stand here and make a speech. I'm glad t intrduce ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms, paper-cutting, t yu.
Paper-cutting is an art frm. Peple can use scissrs t cut designs ut f a piece f paper. It is ften used as a frm f decratin during the Spring Festival, and the clur is always red.Hwever, paper-cutting is mre than just a frm f decratin. It is a way t express emtins and cnvey the spirit f Chinese peple.
It is great t prtect and prmte traditinal Chinese culture. By ding s, we can pass dwn Chinese traditins. What's mre, we can help peple frm all ver the wrld understand the beauty f Chinese traditins.
That's all. Thank yu fr yur listening.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，关于传统文化--中国的剪纸艺术：
1.I'd like t intrduce ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms-----paper-cutting.
2.It has a lng histry and was very ppular with ancient Chinese writers.It's the paper-cutting.
3.I'm glad t see that mre and mre peple enjy traditinal Chinese culture.Tday,I’ll tell yu smething abut the traditinal flk art --paper-cutting.
4.Paper-cutting is a traditinal art frm.
5.We can see it everywhere arund us.What's the art frm?It's the paper-cutting.
另起一段，详细介绍：性质，用处，制作方法等
1.Peple can use scissrs t cut designs ut f a piece f paper.
2.It takes a lng time t make.
3.Paper-cutting is mre than just a frm f decratin.
4.Thrugh paper-cutting, peple can express their best wishes.
5.I like the paper-cutting f the Chinese character chun.
6.It means hpe t peple.
另起一段，写个人观点：（积极向上的）
1.It is an imprtant part f Chinese culture.
2.We can help peple frm all ver the wrld understand the beauty f Chinese traditins.
3.We ften rganize sme activities.
4.We can intrduce paper-cutting t mre peple.
5.We can help mre peple knw mre abut traditinal Chinese culture.
课堂演练
中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化，请你用英语写一封回信，向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点。
中国结(Chinese knt) 剪纸
材料:丝线(silk thread) 材料;纸和剪刀(scissrs)
颜色：红色 特点：剪出各种图案
形状：像花、动物等 用途：张贴在门、窗等地
寓意：带来好运 寓意：表达喜悦
1.你对传统艺术的看法(请补充)
2.你的期望(请补充)
Dear Sam,
I'm glad t hear frm yu. Yu said yu had great interest in traditinal Chinese culture.Nw let me tell yu smething abut it.





Yurs,
Li Hua
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
It is made f silk thread.
It usually cmes in red .
It is always in the shapes f flwers, animals and s n.
Chinese peple believe that the Chinese knt can bring them gd luck.
第二部分
It desn't need t much t start wrking，just a pair f scissrs and sme red paper.
It has different shapes，such as flwers，animals ，sme landscapes and s n.
Peple usually put paper-cuts up n drs, windws.
Peple ften use paper-cuts t express happiness.
第三部分
I think traditinal Chinese art frms are ur art treasures.
I hpe mre and mre yung peple like them and explre them.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
第一部分
The Chinese knt is ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms.
第二部分
Anther traditinal Chinese art frm is paper-cutting. ,
4、整合作文
The Chinese knt is ne f the traditinal Chinese art frms.It is made f silk thread. It usually cmes in red .It is always in the shapes f flwers, animals and s n.Chinese peple believe that the Chinese knt can bring them gd luck.
Anther traditinal Chinese art frm is paper-cutting. It desn't need t much t start wrking，just a pair f scissrs and sme red paper.It has different shapes，such as flwers，animals ，sme landscapes and s n.Peple usually put paper-cuts up n drs, windws.Peple ften use paper-cuts t express happiness.
I think traditinal Chinese art frms are ur art treasures.
I hpe mre and mre yung peple like them and explre them.
实战演练
近几年来，传统文化正在走进我们的日常生活。某杂志社为了鼓励同学们感受并传承传统文化之美,开辟了“Traditinal Chinese culture arund me”的专栏。假如你是刘美,请你写一封信投稿，词数不少于 80。
内容包括：
1.列举你身边的一种中华传统文化。
2.谈谈你对这种文化的理解。
3.你是如何传播这种文化的。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm glad t see that mre and mre peple enjy and spread traditinal Chinese culture in ur daily life







Yurs,
Liu Mei周围环境
；；
社区情况
，
居住感受

My neighburhd
Cnditins
What is yur neighburhd like?
Neighburs
What are yur neighburs like?
Hw d they help thers? (give tw examples)
Feelings
Hw d yu feel t live in yur neighburhd?
小区
，，
配套设施
邻居
……
传统文化
中国的剪纸艺术
详细介绍
……
个人观点
……
Unit 3：要求同学们用上教材中的句型介绍自己的家乡。写作时通常可以先介绍自己，然后描述家乡的具体情况，包括名称、位置、环境等，最后评价一下自己的家乡，结束语通常是发出邀请。
经典范文
请以“My hmetwn”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
【要点如下】
【要求】
1.语句通顺，语言规范。
2.80 词左右。
My hmetwn
My hmetwn is a mdern and beautiful city. It has an area f abut 260,000 square kilmetres. It takes us nly ne hur t drive t Shanghai. There are buses t the city centre every day.
It is quiet and has fresh air. We can hear the birds sing and smell the flwers. There are lts f wrks f art t see in the museums here. Visitrs can learn abut Chinese histry and culture here.
I am lucky t live in this city. I will be very happy t shw yu arund my hmetwn if yu cme here.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，总体描述自己的家乡：
My hmetwn is a beautiful seaside city.
My hmetwn is a mdern and beautiful city.
Let me tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
I wuld like t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
It is lcated in the nrth f Jiangsu Prvince.
另起一段，详细介绍：当对方来到自己城市时可以做的事情、自己所在城市的环境等
1. When yu visit the city, yu can g fr a walk by the sea.
2. Yu can als try sme traditinal fd like fish and chips.
3. There are lts f wrks f art t see in the museums here.
4. The weather here is neither t cld nr t ht.
5. There are a lt f green trees and clurful flwers.
6. Peple can enjy delicius fd here.
另起一段，邀请语，总结语：
1. I hpe yu can enjy this trip.
2. I am lucky t live in this city.
3. I am prud t live here.
4. Welcme yu t my hmetwn.
课堂演练
假如你是李华，请根据下面的内容提示，用英语写一封信，向你的朋友 Lily介绍你的家乡——苏州。90词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
I'm glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.





Welcme t my hmetwn!
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
It's ne f the biggest cities in Eastern China.
It is in the suth-east f Jiangsu Prvince.
第二部分
It has a histry f ver 4,000 years.
It is a famus ancient city, where peple live by rivers with bridges everywhere.
It's als famus fr canals, stne bridges and beautiful scenery.
It has als been an imprtant centre f China's silk industry.
Yu can cme here t visit Suzhu Museum and the Taihu Lake.
Yu can als enjy Kunqu pera here.
Suzhu is a gd place t g shpping.
There are many big malls.
第三部分
I am lking frward t yur cming and I will shw yu arund it.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
Suzhu is my hmetwn.
Cme here and enjy yurself.
4、整合作文
I'm glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
Suzhu is my hmetwn. It's ne f the biggest cities in Eastern China. It is in the suth-east f Jiangsu Prvince.
It has a histry f ver 4,000 years. It is a famus ancient capital, where peple live by rivers with bridges everywhere. It's als famus fr canals, stne bridges and beautiful scenery. It has als been an imprtant centre f China's silk industry. Yu can cme here t visit Suzhu Museum and the Taihu Lake. Yu can als enjy Kunqu pera here. Suzhu is a gd place t g shpping. There are many big malls.
Cme here and enjy yurself. I am lking frward t yur cming and I will shw yu arund it.
Welcme t my hmetwn!
Best wishes!
实战演练
请根据图示,以“My charming hmetwn”为题,写一篇短文介绍你的家乡。
要求：
1.短文必须包括图示中的所有要点。
2. 90 词左右。








Yurs,
Liu Mei
位置
美丽的现代化城市……
车程
开车到上海只需1个小时……
环境
安静，空气新鲜……
感想
很幸运能够住在这座城市……
我的家乡——苏州
地理位置和风土人情。
自然和人文环境。
我在家乡做的一些有意义的事情。
……
Unit 2：要求谈论自己居住的社区的情况,写作时先要想好写哪些方面的内容，后要表达自己对社区的评价或感想。
经典范文
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报纸正在举行题为“My neighburhd”的征文活动假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。
【要求】
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2.必须包括思维导图中所有要求，并适当发挥。
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighburhd
I am Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Cmmunity. My neighburhd is like a big family.
My neighburs are kind and helpful. There are sme engineers amng them. They can help us fix things like washing machines. Sme f my neighburs are cllege students. They can help students with their hmewrk. They are patient enugh t explain prblems. I am always ready t help my neighburs t. Smetimes they are t busy t lk after their children. I ften play with their kids until they cme back.
I feel very lucky t live in such a neighburhd. I hpe it will becme better and better in the future.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，总体描述自己的街区：
My neighburhd is like a big family.
I'd like t share my idea f helping ur cmmunity with yu.
I live in Garden Neighburhd.
It is a small but beautiful place.
It is really cl t live here.
另起一段，详细介绍：自己家的情况，邻居的情况，平时的活动等
My parents and I live n the eighth flr in a tall building.
Sme f my neighburs are cllege students.
We will raise mney fr the plants in ur cmmunity.
I have sme friendly neighburs.
They are always ready t help thers.
Smetimes my neighburs take care f each ther's pets.
Our neighburs are willing t give us sme ideas.
My neighburs are nice.
另起一段，总结语：
Let's wrk tgether t make ur cmmunity a better place.
I feel very lucky t live in a neighburhd like this.
I lve my neighburhd.
I feel lucky t live in a neighburhd like this.
I think it will becme better.
课堂演练
假如你是 Amy，你的美国朋友 Mike向你询问你社区的情况。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。
【要求】1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2.必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3.词数80左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike,
I'd like t tell yu smething abut my neighburhd.





Yurs,
Amy
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
My neighburhd is in the centre f the city.
There is a park abut 1 kilmetre frm the neighburhd.
It is very fantastic fr us t g fr a walk after supper in the park.
第二部分
My neighburs are friendly and helpful.
Sme f them are vlunteers.
They help us with all kinds f prblems.
When I have truble with smething, I can ask them fr help.
第三部分
It is very lucky and happy t live here.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
I hpe that yu can cme t my neighburhd ne day.
4、整合作文
Dear Mike,
I'd like t tell yu smething abut my neighburhd.
My neighburhd is in the centre f the city. There is a park abut 1 kilmetre frm the neighburhd. It is very enjyable t g there fr a walk after supper.
My neighburs are friendly and helpful. Sme f them are vlunteers. They help us with all kinds f prblems.When I have truble with smething, I can ask them fr help.
It is very cnvenient and happy t live here. I hpe that yu can cme t my neighburhd ne day.
Yurs,
Amy
实战演练
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My neighburhd”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区。请你根据表格提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。
要求：
1.必须包括表格中所有要点内容。
2.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。








Yurs,
Liu Mei
Unit 1：要求学生结合所学内容并发挥想象力，设计出自己未来的梦想家园
经典范文
根据所给提示以“My dream huse”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。
【要点】
1.房子很大，是一个三层楼房，带有花园和游泳池……
2.一楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅……
3.二楼有一个电脑房和一个大客厅……
4.我有自己的卧室，又大又干净。
My dream huse
My dream huse is very big. It has three flrs with a garden and a swimming pl. The garden is full f flwers and lks very beautiful.
On the grund flr, there is a big kitchen and a dining rm. I can invite ver twenty friends t have dinner. On the first flr, there is a cmputer rm and a big living rm. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living rm. I have a bedrm f my wn. It is big and clean.
I hpe I can live in my dream huse ne day.
首先开篇点题：灵活运用素材积累中的开篇点题句型，总体描述自己梦想的家：
My dream hme is a huse with tw flrs.
My dream huse is very big. It has a nice garden.
My dream hme is a huse with seven rms in it.
It has tw flrs.
另起一段，详细介绍：自己家的情况
On the grund flr, there is a big kitchen and a dining rm.
On the first flr, there is a cmputer rm.
My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living rm.
On the grund flr, yu can see a sfa in the living rm.
There is a fridge in it.
In frnt f my huse, there is a nice garden.
另起一段，总结语：
This is my dream hme. I like it.
I hpe I can live in my dream huse ne day.
That's my dream hme.
I hpe yu can visit it sn.
Wuld yu like t share yurs with me?
课堂演练
(2024·江苏兴化昭阳湖初级中学调研)Millie的朋友 Sandy下周来兴化玩，请根据下表提示帮 Millie写一封信，邀请 Sandy 来兴化玩时住在自己家里。
【要求】
词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名。
短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy t knw that yu will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like t invite yu t stay at my hme.


Yurs,
Millie
分析：
1、根据中文提示要点列出大纲
根据大纲进行补充，即完成句子
第一部分
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre f Xinghua.
It is near a schl and a shpping centre.
第二部分
There is a small supermarket in the neighburhd.
Peple can g there t buy what they need.
There is als a small garden, s peple can take a walk there after dinner.
第三部分
Our neighburs are very kind and helpful.
Sme f them are vlunteers.
They ften help us fix things like brken bicycles.
Students can als get help with hmewrk frm cllege students.
第四部分
I am happy t have my wn bedrm and study.
The living rm is very big.
We can sit n the sfa and watch TV there.
I like the balcny best.
I ften sit there and enjy the sunshine.
第五部分
I hpe I can see yu sn.
每段选择性补充总起，衔接和总结的句子
My hme has fur rms.
Welcme t Xinghua! Welcme t my hme.
4、整合作文
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy t knw that yu will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like t invite yu t stay at my hme.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre f Xinghua. It is near a schl and a shpping centre. There is als a small garden, s peple can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighburs are very kind and helpful. They ften help us fix things like brken bicycles. Students can als get help with ur hmewrk frm cllege students.
My hme has fur rms. I am happy t have my wn bedrm . The living rm is very big. We can sit n the sfa and watch TV there. I like the balcny best. I ften sit there and enjy the sunshine.
I hpe I can see yu sn. Welcme t Xinghua! Welcme t my hme.
实战演练
请根据你校校刊有关“Dream hme”的征稿内容写一篇英语短文来设计你自己的梦想家园。
What is yur dream hme like?
Hw many rms are there in yur dream hme and what are they?
What things are in it?
要求：
1.文章要涵盖所有要点，可以适当发挥。
2.词数不少于80，文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。






答案：
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm glad t see that mre and mre peple enjy and spread traditinal Chinese culture in ur daily life. Paper-cutting is a very cmmn traditinal art frm that we can see everywhere arund us—n the windws, cups r bags.
In my eyes, paper-cutting is a kind f traditinal Chinese culture. Thrugh paper-cutting, peple can express their best wishes. I like the paper-cutting f the Chinese character chun because spring means hpe t peple.
Nw I'm in a paper-cutting club. We ften rganize sme activities r d sme prjects with ur partners. In this way, we can intrduce paper-cutting t mre peple and make them knw mre abut this art frm.
Yurs,
Liu Mei
My hmetwn is Lian yungang. It's a beautiful city in the nrth f Jiangsu Prvince.
The weather in Lian yungang is warm in winter and cl in summer.S it's a gd place t live in.
It is famus as the hme f the Mnkey King, Sun Wukng. When yu climb Huagu Muntain, yu can see a lt f lvely mnkeys . They are s cute. If yu can reach the tp f the muntain, yu can lk at the view f the city.
As a seaside city, yu als can enjy the fresh sea air by the seaside. The seawater is blue and clear. Yu can swim in the sea, g fishing n the bat, r play games n the beach.
Lian yungang is als rich in delicius fd,such as all kinds f sea fish, lcal fruit and s n.
I lve my hmetwn, cme here and enjy yurself,I will shw yu arund it.
My neighburhd
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighburhd. It is a small but beautiful place with sme tall buildings and many green trees.
I have sme neighburs wh are friendly and helpful.They are always ready t help thers. At weekends, I can ften get help with my hmewrk frm sme cllege students. Smetimes my neighburs take care f each ther's pets when the wner is nt at hme. We needn't wrry abut ur prblems because ur neighburs are willing t give us sme ideas anytime.
I lve my neighburhd and I feel lucky t live in a neighburhd like this.
I'm glad t share my ideas abut my dream hme. My dream hme is a huse with seven rms in it.
On the grund flr, yu can see a sfa in the living rm. Beside the living rm is the kitchen. There is a large fridge and a cupbard in it. There is a large dinner table in the dining rm. On the first flr, there is a study and three bedrms. There is a large bkcase in the study. I have my wn bedrm and there is a bathrm in it. In frnt f my huse is a nice garden with many flwers. Hw beautiful the flwers are!
That's my dream hme. Wuld yu like t share yurs with me?
周围环境
；；
社区情况
，
居住感受

My neighburhd
Cnditins
What is yur neighburhd like?
Neighburs
What are yur neighburs like?
Hw d they help thers? (give tw examples)
Feelings
Hw d yu feel t live in yur neighburhd?
小区
，，
配套设施
邻居
……