2025温州高三下学3月二模试题英语南瓜雕刻比赛故事续写讲义

这是一份2025温州高三下学3月二模试题英语南瓜雕刻比赛故事续写讲义，共8页。试卷主要包含了 catch ne's eye， skip a beat， hit sb， put dwn， wrap sb等内容，欢迎下载使用。
and small. I’d ften tie his shes r prepare anther glass f water fr him. My mm
saw my larger size and strng bdy as a sign that I was t be a kind f guardian angel
fr Brian. Hwever, that was nt the case.
One day ur schl spnsred a pumpkin-carving cntest. First prize was $100,
and I knew just hw I wuld spend it. There was a brand-new game I was dying t
wn. S I decided the first-place bnus definitely had t land in my pcket.
When I had t carve the perfect pumpkin I’d picked ut, it dawned n me that
with my big clumsy fingers I’d surely screw it up. I thught f Brian’s smaller, delicate
hands and knew he was the man fr the jb. I immediately begged Brian.
Unexpectedly, he asked fr a cut. That was fifty-fifty. Quickly ding the math in my
head, I figured ut even if I split the first prize, I’d still have enugh cash fr the
game. S I gave in t Brian’s demands. With skillful hands, Brian carved the perfect
face, and nw we had the best pumpkin ever.
Then the unexpected happened: We came in secnd. Unfrtunately, secnd
prize was nly $50, and I needed every penny f that t buy the game. The day f
the awards ceremny, the principal handed ver the mney t me because Brian
was hme, sick with a cld.
If he really wanted t win, he wuld have been here tday, I thught t myself,
justifying stealing the cash frm under pr Brian’s runny nse. With hardly a
thught, I ran t the stre and bught my dream game. That night when Brian asked
if we had wn, I denied, afraid t lk int his eyes.
The whle thing was never mentined again until the day when Brian was
packing fr cllege. I played my usual rle in helping him pack when I came acrss an
ld album filled with phts he had taken as the schl phtgrapher.
Paragraph 1: I was enjying the phts when ne caught my eye.
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Paragraph 2: “Yu actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was shcked.
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文本主旨
文本主要讲述了兄弟之间的故事，通过回忆过去在南瓜雕刻比赛中 “我”
偷走奖金，而哥哥 Brian 早已知晓却选择宽容的经历，展现了兄弟情的
珍贵与宽容的力量，强调在亲情面前，理解与包容能化解矛盾，让关系
更加深厚。同时也体现了 “我” 在得知真相后的愧疚以及决心改正，做
一个更好的弟弟，守护这份亲情。
词汇积累
1. catch ne's eye：吸引某人的目光。文中 “I was enjying the
phts when ne caught my eye.” 表示一张照片吸引了 “我”
的注意。
2. skip a beat：（心脏）突然停跳，此处指心跳加速，形容惊讶或
激动的心情。“But what made my heart skip a beat was the small
nte Brian had written n the back.” 说明纸条上的内容让 “我”
十分震惊。
3. a lump in ne's thrat：喉咙哽咽，形容因激动、难过等情绪而
说不出话。“I stared at the wrds, feeling a lump frm in my
thrat.” 生动描绘出 “我” 看到纸条后的情绪反应。
4. fld ne's mind（：记忆等）涌上心头。“Memries f all the times
I had been less than kind t him flded my mind...” 形象地体
现出 “我” 开始回忆过去对哥哥不好的种种时刻。
5. hit sb. like a tn f bricks：使某人深受打击。“His wrds hit me
like a tn f bricks.” 突出哥哥的话给 “我” 带来的强烈冲击。
6. put dwn：放下。“I put dwn the album and walked ver t
him...” 描述了 “我” 放下相册走向哥哥的动作。
7. wrap sb. in a hug：紧紧拥抱某人。“wrapping him in a tight hug”
表达了 “我” 对哥哥的情感释放。
续写分析
1. 衔接句：第一段首句 “I was enjying the phts when ne
caught my eye.” 承接上文提到的在帮 Brian 收拾行李时看到旧
相册，自然地引出关键照片及背后的纸条，从而推动情节发展。
第二段首句 “‘Yu actually knew and didn’t say anything?’ I was
shcked.” 则是基于第一段纸条内容的发现，直接引出与 Brian
的对话，衔接紧密，过渡流畅。
2. 情节合理性：从情节来看，Brian 知晓 “我” 偷钱却未声张，符合
他一直以来宽容善良的性格特点。在比赛时他提出分成，说明他
对金钱并非完全不在意，但在亲情面前选择了让步。而 “我” 在
看到纸条后的震惊、愧疚以及后续与 Brian 的对话，都在情理之
中，整个情节发展符合人物性格和故事逻辑。
3. 情感铺垫：前文提到 “我” 一直被要求照顾 Brian，但实际上却在
南瓜雕刻比赛奖金这件事上表现自私，这为后文 “我” 的愧疚埋
下伏笔。Brian 对 “我” 的宽容，从之前生活中的点滴细节以及他
愿意帮 “我” 雕刻南瓜都有所体现，使得他在得知 “我” 偷钱后选
择沉默这一情节的情感铺垫充足，不显得突兀。
情感走向
起初，“我” 看到纸条时内心充满震惊与愧疚，回想起过去对 Brian 的
种种不好，情绪低落自责。在与 Brian 对话过程中，听到他宽容的话语，
“我” 深受感动，意识到自己的错误，情感从愧疚转向对哥哥的感激与对
自身行为的悔恨。最后，“我” 与 Brian 拥抱和解，情感变得温暖而坚
定，决心要守护这份兄弟情，情感基调从低沉转向积极向上。
主题深化
文本通过回忆南瓜雕刻比赛这一事件，将兄弟之间的矛盾与和解展现出
来。Brian 的宽容让 “我” 认识到亲情的珍贵，不能因一时的自私而破
坏。主题从简单的兄弟间的日常故事，深化到对亲情中宽容、理解和责
任的思考，强调在家庭关系中，要珍视亲人，用爱和包容去对待彼此，
才能让亲情更加牢固。
下水文一
Paragraph 1: I was enjying the phts when ne caught my eye. It
was a picture f the pumpkin we carved tgether. But what made my
heart skip a beat was the small nte Brian had written n the back. It
read, “I knew yu tk the mney. I just didn't want t ruin ur
relatinship.” I stared at the wrds, feeling a lump frm in my thrat.
This discvery was like a wake - up call. All these years, I had been
living with my selfish act, thinking I was getting away with it. But Brian
had seen thrugh me and still chse t lve me. I realized hw much
I had grwn up since then. I used t be s fcused n my wn
desires, but nw, lking at this nte, I felt a strng urge t make
things right. Memries f the times I had let Brian dwn flded my
mind, and I knew I culdn't keep being that persn.
Paragraph 2: “Yu actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was
shcked. Brian lked up frm his packing and smiled gently. “Yu're
my brther. I lve yu. I knew hw much that game meant t yu.
And I was sick that day, s I culdn't really g t claim the prize
anyway.” His wrds hit me like a tn f bricks. I nt nly felt guilty but
als inspired. I put dwn the album and walked ver t him,
wrapping him in a tight hug. “I'm s srry, Brian. I was wrng. I
shuld have never taken the mney. Yu deserved half f it.” Brian
hugged me back. “It's kay. Let's just frget abut it. We're brthers,
and that's what matters.” Frm that day n, I made a prmise t
myself. I wuld nt nly be a better brther t Brian but als use this
experience t becme a mre hnest and caring persn in all aspects
f my life. I wuld n lnger let my desires clud my judgment and
wuld always priritize the feelings f thse I lved.
下水文二
Paragraph 1: I was enjying the phts when ne caught my eye. It
was a picture f the pumpkin we carved tgether. But what made my
heart skip a beat was the small nte Brian had written n the back. It
read, “I knew yu tk the mney. I just didn't want t ruin ur
relatinship.” I stared at the wrds, feeling a lump frm in my thrat.
As I std there, memries f that day came flding back even
mre vividly. I remembered hw nervus I was when Brian first asked
fr a cut f the prize. I was s fcused n getting that game that I
didn't even cnsider his feelings prperly. Nw, lking at this nte, I
saw all the times I had been impatient with him when he needed help
tying his shes r getting a glass f water. I realized hw much he
had endured frm me, yet he still held nt ur brtherly bnd.
Paragraph 2: “Yu actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was
shcked. Brian lked up frm his packing and smiled gently. “Yu're
my brther. I lve yu. I knew hw much that game meant t yu.
And I was sick that day, s I culdn't really g t claim the prize
anyway.” His wrds hit me like a tn f bricks. I put dwn the album
and walked ver t him, wrapping him in a tight hug. “I'm s srry,
Brian. I was wrng. I shuld have never taken the mney. Yu
deserved half f it.” Brian hugged me back. “It's kay. Let's just frget
abut it. We're brthers, and that's what matters.” Frm that day n,
every time I thught f Brian, I wuld als remember this mment f
truth. I wuld recall all the little and big things he had dne fr me
ver the years. And I made a slemn vw t myself. I wuld cherish
ur relatinship, and whenever I was faced with a chice, I wuld
always think f hw my actins wuld affect Brian. I wuld be the
brther he truly deserved, making up fr all the times I had fallen
shrt in the past.
参考答案
Paragraph 1: I was enjying the phts when ne caught my eye. It
was a picture f the pumpkin we carved tgether. But what made my
heart skip a beat was the small nte Brian had written n the back. It
read, “I knew yu tk the mney. I just didn't want t ruin ur
relatinship.” I stared at the wrds, feeling a lump frm in my thrat.
All these years, I had thught I gt away with it, but Brian had knwn
all alng. I culdn't believe I had been s selfish and that he had been
s frgiving. Memries f all the times I had been less than kind t
him flded my mind, and I felt an verwhelming sense f guilt.
Paragraph 2: “Yu actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was
shcked. Brian lked up frm his packing and smiled gently. “Yu're
my brther. I lve yu. I knew hw much that game meant t yu.
And I was sick that day, s I culdn't really g t claim the prize
anyway.” His wrds hit me like a tn f bricks. I realized hw much he
had sacrificed fr me, nt just in that mment but thrughut ur
lives. I put dwn the album and walked ver t him, wrapping him in
a tight hug. “I'm s srry, Brian. I was wrng. I shuld have never
taken the mney. Yu deserved half f it.” Brian hugged me back. “It's
kay. Let's just frget abut it. We're brthers, and that's what
matters.” Frm that day n, I made a prmise t myself t be a better
brther, t always lk ut fr Brian, just like I was suppsed t frm
the start.