人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet？-话题作文写作提升专练（教师版）

这是一份人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet？-话题作文写作提升专练（教师版），共28页。试卷主要包含了能结合实际生活进行写作训练等内容，欢迎下载使用。

近三年考情分析
本单元以“文学与音乐”为话题，要求我们会写关于一位作家、一本书或一名歌手、一个乐队的短文。写作体裁多为记叙文，时态多为一般现在时或现在完成时，写作时首先要点明你想写的人、物或事，然后阐明其具体情况，一般在结尾时表达出自己的观点和感受。
写作目标
1.能介绍一位自己喜欢的歌手或作家;
2.能正确运用各种时态描述事件的发展过程;
3.能结合实际生活进行写作训练。
真题感知
（2023·山东淄博·统考中考真题）
某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favrite bk”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：
1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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【答案】例文
My favurite bk
Gd bks are valuable treasures. Amng all the bks I’ve read, the Mnkey King is my favurite bk.
The Mnkey King is the main character in the traditinal Chinese bk Jurney t the West. He is nt a nrmal mnkey. In fact, he is brave enugh t fight with any bad persn and he can always win the fights. S I like t read it.
The bk mainly talks abut three things. First f all, it tells us why the mnkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and bjects he can change int. Secndly, the bk shws us hw the mnkey uses his magic stick. Smetimes he can make the stick s small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but nt least, the bk tells us hw the mnkey fights with bad peple. I like t read this part very much because the mnkey always tries his best t win the fights.
The bk teaches us t be brave when we are in truble. And it als tells us t keep fighting t help the weak. Mst imprtantly, it tells us t keep trying in ur lives and never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求介绍自己最喜欢的书，包括其主要内容及喜欢它的理由；考生应按照要求写作，正确用词，使作文表达流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的书是什么；
第二步，详细介绍这本书的主要内容以及你喜欢它的理由；
第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact 事实上
②try his best t d sth. 尽他最大的努力做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①First f all, it tells us why the mnkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and bjects he can change int. (why引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)
②I like t read this part very much because the mnkey always tries his best t win the fights.(because引导的原因状语从句)
词汇积累
type 种类 finish ding sth.完成某事 put dwn 放下
cut dwn 砍倒 wait fr 等待 be interested in 对……感兴趣
can’t wait t d sth.迫不及待做某事 belng t 属于
d sme research n sth.做一些关于……的研究 cme t realize 开始意识到
bring sb.back 使某人回忆;回顾 enjy success in 享受……的成功
used t d sth.过去常常做某事
句型积累
1.Chen Ping likes reading.She has read at least 200 different bks.
陈萍喜欢阅读。她已经读了至少200本不同的书。
2.The mvie brings me back t my cllege life.这部电影使我想起了我的大学生活。
3.That bk reminds students that studying withut thinking is dangerus.
那本书提醒学生没有思考的学习是很危险的。
4.M Yan is ne f the mst successful writers in China.莫言是中国最成功的作家之一。
5.The writer grew up in the muntain and he belnged t it.
这位作家在大山里长大,他属于这座大山。
【单元写作素材】
◆开头句
①M Yan is ne f the mst successful writers in Chinese histry.
②Nw she has becme ne f the mst successful writers in the wrld.
③I enjy reading different kinds f bks，and my favrite bk is Jurney t the West.
◆中间句
①The stry was s amazing that I culdn’t put it dwn until I finished reading it.
②This bk teaches me never t give up when I am in truble.
③If we are brave enugh and nt afraid f failure，we will succeed in the end.
◆结尾句
①If yu haven’t read any f the bks yet，pick ne nw.
②Yu will find a wnderful wrld in it.
③It reminds us that the best things in life are free—laughter，friends，family and s n.
④All in all，the bk nt nly gives me a lt f fun but als tells me what t d when I am in truble.
⑤Reading can make a difference t ur life.
◆谚语积累
1.There is n end t learning.学无止境。
2.One is never t ld t learn.活到老，学到老。
3.A gd bk is a gd friend.好书如挚友。
4.Reading ten thusand bks is like traveling ten thusand miles.读万卷书，行万里路。
常用句型
①It's abut fur sisters grwing up.
②I chse Treasure Island, but I haven't finished reading it yet.
③Her favrite kind f bks is science fictin.
④Every time she is in the library，Sally lks at the many bks she hasn't read yet and she can't wait t read them.
⑤Listening t The Tms is a gd way t wake up.
⑥She heard a sng full f feelings abut returning hme n the radi.
⑦Garth is ne f the mst successful musicians in American histry.
⑧He's sld mre than 120 millin recrds.
⑨Many sngs these days are just abut mdern life.
动听的音乐就像是飞舞的蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞，也像是叮咚的泉水在山间流淌，有时候，也像是璀璨的星辰，在夜空里闪烁。各种各样的音乐中，你最喜欢哪一种呢？请从cuntry music, light music, classical music, flk music, pp music…中选择你最喜欢的音乐种类，以“My favrite music”为题，写一篇不少于60 词的作文。
提示：
1. What kind f music d yu like best?
2. When d yu usually listen t it?
3. Why is it yur favrite?
4. Wh is yur favrite musician r singer?
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My favrite music
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【答案】One pssible versin:
My favrite music
There are many kinds f music. I like sft music best. Befre I g t sleep, I always listen t sft music. It can help me relax and have a gd dream. My mther tells me that befre I was brn, she listened t sft music all the time, s I must be affected by her. My favrite musician is Matthew Lien. His gal is t aruse peple’s awareness f prtecting the envirnment by music.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，还有“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示要点并适当进行发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己最喜欢的音乐类型和听音乐的时间；
第二步，说明喜欢这类音乐的原因；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐家。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds f许多种
②help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
③be affected by受……影响
④aruse ne’s awareness唤起某人的意识
[高分句型]
①My mther tells me that befre I was brn, she listened t sft music all the time, s I must be affected by her.（that引导的宾语从句）
②His gal is t aruse peple’s awareness f prtecting the envirnment by music.（动词不定式作表语）
今天的外教课上，老师让同学们介绍一位自己最喜爱的作家或者歌手。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文，在课上发言。
提示：
1.Wh is yur favrite writer/singer?
2.When and why did he/she becme famus?
3.Hw d yu feel abut his/her bks/music?
要求：
1.词数：80左右；
2.书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚，标点符号使用正确。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
◆◆范文欣赏
is my favrite writer.Her first bk abut Harry Ptter came ut in 1997，and she became famus right after that.Nw she has becme ne f the mst successful writers in the wrld.I read the first bk abut Harry Ptter three years ag.The stry was s amazing that I culdn't put it dwn until I finished reading it.S far，I have read all the seven bks abut Harry Ptter and watched all the mvies.If yu haven't read any f the bks yet，pick ne nw.Yu will find a wnderful wrld in it.
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1．书籍是人类进步的阶梯。书籍在赋予我们知识的同时，也向我们传授生活的道理。生活中，你喜欢读书吗？哪位作家的著作使你印象深刻呢？请你以“My favrite writer”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你最喜欢的作家。
My favrite writer
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【答案】One pssible versin:
My favrite writer
I like reading in my free time and I have already read many bks written by different writers. Of all the writers, I like J. K. Rwling best.
J. K. Rwling became famus because f Harry Ptter. Its first nvel came ut in 1997 and the last ne came ut in 2007. The nvels were s ppular that bth children and adults lved t read them. Althugh I have already read thse nvels several times, I still find them exciting.
Have yu read these nvels yet? I think yu will lve them if yu read them.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我最喜欢的作家”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。先介绍自己最喜欢的作家是谁，再介绍这位作家的相关情况以及他的作品。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（二）
请你以“My Favrite Singer”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
My Favrite Singer
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【答案】例文
My Favrite Singer
Zhu Jielun is my favrite singer, and I like him very much.
His English name is Jay Chw. It sunds s funny in Chinese prnunciatin. He is a talent by because he can make music by himself, nt by thers. And he als knws a lt abut the music, especially the Mderns and Hip-pp music. I can sing many sngs f him, fr example, Qinghuaci, Yifuzhiming, and Qianlizhiwai.
This is my favrite singer. I hpe I will be a singer like him ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕主题介绍自己最喜欢的歌手的信息和原因等内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题介绍自己最喜欢的歌手是谁；
第二步，描写喜欢他/她的原因；
第三步，书写结语，做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
① especially尤其
② fr example例如
③ by himself他自己
[高分句型]
① He is a talent by because he can make music by himself, nt by thers. （because引导的原因状语从句）
② I hpe I will be a singer like him ne day.（hpe后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
（三）
假设你校读书俱乐部正在举办“世界文学名著欣赏”系列活动，这周阅读的名著是《格列佛游记》（Gulliver’s Travels）。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1. 这部小说由英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特（Jnathan Swift）创作；
2. 书中讲述了医生格列佛四次出海航行冒险的经历；
3. 你读完这部小说后的感受。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、语法正确；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，但可作适当发挥；
3. 80词左右。
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【答案】例文
This week I have read a bk called Gulliver’s Travels. It was written by Jnathan Swift wh was an English writer. It tld a stry abut a dctr named Gulliver and his jurney t fur different cuntries. During his jurney, he met sme little peple, sme big peple, sme smart but useless peple and sme hrses. I wuld like t be as brave as Gulliver. The stry is full f fun. If yu read it, I’m sure yu will fall in lve with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这本书的基本情况，包括它的作者以及讲述的主要内容；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t想要
②as…as与……一样
③be full f充满
[高分句型]
①It was written by Jnathan Swift wh was an English writer.（wh引导的定语从句）
②If yu read it, I’m sure yu will fall in lve with it.（if引导条件状语从句）
（四）
请根据下面内容，以“My Favrite Bk”为题，写一篇英语短文。
My Favrite Bk
名称和作者 主要人物介绍
主要内容或情节 个人观点或感想
My Favrite Bk
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【答案】例文：
My Favrite Bk
My favrite bk is Harry Ptter. It is written by British writer J. K. Rwling. It is full f interesting stries. And it is ne f the funniest bks I have read.
The main character f the bk is Harry Ptter. He’s a brave and clever by wh fights against pwerful enemies. I have learned a lt frm him. We shuld be cnfident and brave like Harry Ptter. And we shuld lve and prtect ur friends.
I like reading Harry Ptter very much and I have read it three times. I think it is an interesting bk.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要题中给出的四个要点信息，写短文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的书的名称、作者；
第二步，介绍主要人物及情节，并发表个人观点；
第三步，简单收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be full f 充满
②fight against 与……作斗争
[高分句型]
①And it is ne f the funniest bks I have read.（省略that的定语从句）
②He’s a brave and clever by wh fights against pwerful enemies.（wh引导定语从句）
③I like reading Harry Ptter very much and I have read it three times.（and连接并列句）
（五）
书籍是人类进步的阶梯，音乐使人类的精神爆发出火花。请根据以下提示，以“My Favrite Bk and Music”为题写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1. What’s yur favrite bk? Hw did yu get it? Hw lng have yu read it? What’s it abut? What d yu think f it?
2. What kind f music d yu like best? Why d yu like it? Have yu intrduced it t thers?
3. What have yu learned frm yur favrite bk and music?
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括以上写作提示，也可在此基础上适当发挥。
2. 分段介绍，条理清晰，语句连贯，逻辑性强，书写规范。
3. 60词以上。照抄阅读语篇和写作提示不得分。
4. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，严禁乱写乱画，否则不予评分。
My Favrite Bk and Music
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【答案】例文
My favrite bk is Treasure Island. I gt it frm my aunt n my tenth birthday. I have read it fr three years. It is abut a by wh ges ut t sea and finds an island full f treasures. I think it is nt nly interesting but als educatinal.
I like American cuntry music. I like it because it can remind me that the best things in life are free—laughter, friends, family and the beauty f nature and the cuntryside. I have intrduced it t my classmates. They are als interested in listening t it.
I have learned a lt frm my favrite bk and music. We shuld never give up trying t achieve ur dreams. What’s mre, we shuld be kind t each ther and trust ne anther.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为辅；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意按照要求分段介绍自己最喜欢的书籍和音乐是什么，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己最喜欢的书籍，具体包括书名、如何获得的、读了多久了、主要故事情节等；
第二步：介绍自己最喜欢的音乐，具体介绍自己为什么喜欢它以及把它推荐给他人；
第三步：谈谈从最喜欢的书籍和音乐中收获了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① educatinal 有教育意义的
② remind 提醒
③ be interested in 对……感兴趣
④ give up 放弃
⑤ be kind t 对……友好
[高分句型]
① It is abut a by wh ges ut t sea and finds an island full f treasures. （wh引导的限制性定语从句）
② I think it is nt nly interesting but als educatinal.（think后是省略that的宾语从句）
（六）
中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，以“Grwing Up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你曾经读过的一本书或一首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
提示：
要求：
1. 短文应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；
3. 词数80～100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
classics 经典作品；pen up ne’s eyes开阔某人的眼界；imprve neself提升自我；be mre cnfident更自信；respnsibility责任；cperatin合作Grwing Up with Reading
Have yu watched the prgram Everlasting Classics n CCTV? This prgram makes us mre interested in reading bks, especially classics. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文
Grwing Up with Reading
Have yu watched the prgram Everlasting Classics n CCTV? This prgram makes us mre interested in reading bks, especially classics. Reading can nt nly help us get a lt f knwledge, but als help us pen up ur eyes. At the same time, it can make urselves feel mre cnfident and imprve urselves.
I have already read Jurney t the West. The Mnkey King uses a magic stick t fight against the bad peple. I’m interested in reading this bk because the Mnkey King keeps fighting t help the weak and never gives up. It is s gd that I can’t put it dwn. After reading it, I knw the imprtance f cperatin and respnsibilities.
S I suggest that everyne shuld read mre bks, especially classics, in their spare time. And I hpe that everyne can get int the habit f reading, which can bring us a lt f pleasure.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“Grwing Up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：介绍读书的重要性；第二段：介绍读过的一本书；第三段：建议人们多读书，读好书。
（七）
请根据以下提示以“Mzart”为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况。
莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奥地利。不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴，还可以演奏小提琴。他的家人带着他在欧洲许多城市进行巡演。他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲。然而他变的很穷。并且在1791年，年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了。和施特劳斯父子一样，他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家，许多人仍然认为他的曲子是完美的。
1.词数80左右；
2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。
提示词：作曲家cmpser；奥地利Austria ；施特劳斯Jhann Strauss
Mzart
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【答案】参考范文：
Mzart
Mzart was a very imprtant cmpser. He was brn in Austria in 1756. Befre he was six he played nt nly the pian, but als the vilin. His family tk him arund Eurpe and he gave cncerts in many cities. He wrte hundreds f beautiful pieces f music. But he became very pr and died in 1791 when he was nly 35. Like Jhann Strauss, father and sn, he was a great Eurpean musician, and many peple still think his music is perfect.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍莫扎特的相关信息。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。从他的出生地，学习和演奏钢琴的经历，以及人们对他的评价等方面来进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（2023·湖南张家界·统考中考真题）
假如你是张家界某青少年宣讲团的李娟，国外友人Peter对首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一“鲵宝宝”很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍“鲵宝宝”。
写作要点：
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.不少于60词(文章开头及结尾均已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：鲵宝宝 Ni Baba 吉祥物 masct 大鲵 giant salamander
Dear Peter,
I’m happy t hear frm yu. It’s my hnr t intrduce the masct t yu. In fact, the masct was designed frm the prtected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander.
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I’m lking frward t seeing yu in Zhangjiajie. Let’s experience Tujia culture and enjy the beautiful scenery.
Yurs truly,
Li Juan
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Peter,
I’m happy t hear frm yu. It’s my hnr t intrduce the masct t yu. In fact, the masct was designed frm the prtected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander.
We call it Ni Baba. It has a rund smiling face with big eyes. And it has a small nse and a small muth. In my pinin, it is a little fat but cute. What’s mre, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands fr Tujia culture. Lk, it is waving its little hands and saying hi t yu. It is friendly, isn’t it? Besides, d yu knw why we call it Baba? As far as I can see, it aims t prtect the animal. If yu cme t Zhang Jiajie, yu can’t miss it.
I’m lking frward t seeing yu in Zhangjiajie. Let’s experience Tujia culture and enjy the beautiful scenery.
Yurs truly,
Li Juan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍“鲵宝宝”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对“鲵宝宝”的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名字、外貌、象征意义”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin在我看来
②What’s mre而且
③stands fr代表
④lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①What’s mre, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands fr Tujia culture.（which引导的定语从句）
②If yu cme t Zhang Jiajie, yu can’t miss it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·广西·统考中考真题）
艺术充满魅力，艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favurite art curse”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学校开设的艺术课（如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等）；
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况（如上课时间、活动等）；
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：art curse（艺术课），painting（n.绘画），calligraphy（n.书法），drama（n.戏剧）
My favurite art curse
Art curses are imprtant at schl.
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【答案】例文：
My favurite art curse
Art curses are imprtant in schl. We have many art classes in ur schl, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and s n. Hwever, my favrite art class is painting.
I attend three classes a week which are held n Mndays, Wednesdays and Thursdays frm 4 p.m. t 5 p.m. Our schl hlds a painting cmpetitin n June 30 every year.
I enjy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayns, I can paint a vibrant wrld and anything that catches my fancy. Additinally, drawing allws me t express my emtins thrugh pictures when wrds fail me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，介绍最喜欢的一门艺术课，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并点明自己最喜欢的艺术课是绘画；
第二步，具体介绍课程、活动的安排；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②从……到……
③allw sb t d允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I attend three classes a week which are held n Mndays, Wednesdays and Thursdays frm 4 p.m. t 5 p.m. (which引导的限制性定语从句)
②I enjy painting because it brings me happiness.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Additinally, drawing allws me t express my emtins thrugh pictures when wrds fail me.(when引导的时间状语从句)
（2023·山东枣庄·统考中考真题）
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favurite bk”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，
内容包括：
1.书名、书的类型和主要内容；
2.你喜欢这本书的理由。
注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad t share my favurite bk with yu.
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That’s all. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad t share my favurite bk with yu.
My favrite bk is Jurney t the West. It is ne f the Fur Great Classical Nvels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The stry tells us abut fur main characters. They are Tang Mnk, the Mnkey King , Piggie and Mnk Sha. They get ver many difficulties n the way t the West. Finally, they make it. The Mnkey King is my favrite character. He is s smart and brave that he can prtect his master and brthers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The bk is s interesting that I lse myself in it. It tells me that as lng as I never give up, I can achieve everything.
That’s all. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题。
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容；
第三步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。
[亮点词汇]
①get ver difficulties克服困难
②n the way t在去往某地的路上
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is s smart and brave that he can prtect his master and brthers well.(引导的结果状语从句)
②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句)
（2023·四川南充·统考中考真题）
你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你对该谚语的理解；
（2）你生活中的一个事例；
（3）你的感悟。
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have yu heard f the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means
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【答案】例文：
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have yu heard f the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means if yu are really determined t d smething, hwever difficult it might be, yu will eventually find a way t d it well. The imprtant pint is that yu must have the will t achieve success.
Take me fr example. Speaking English used t be difficult fr me. In Grade 7, I culdn’t speak English clearly and my classmates always laughed at me. With my English teacher’s help, I made plans t imprve it. I read English texts alud fr an hur every mrning. I als made a freign friend nline. I talked t her twice a week. She helped me crrect the way I spke English. Day by day my spken English imprved a lt. Last mnth I wn first prize in my schl’s English Speech Cntest.
This experience has taught me that nthing is t difficult as lng as yu make the decisin t d it, just the saying ges, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，结合自身经历，谈谈你对“有志者，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并表达自己对该谚语的理解；
第二步，以自身经历为例来阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take me fr example就拿我来说
②used t be过去常常是
③make plan t d制定计划做某事
④make the decisin t d sth下决定做某事
[高分句型]
①The imprtant pint is that yu must have the will t achieve success. (表语从句)
②This experience has taught me that nthing is t difficult as lng as yu make the decisin t d it, just the saying ges, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(as lng as引导的条件状语从句)
（2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）
梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：
1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；
2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。
参考词汇：读唇语read lips
注意：
1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A cmmn girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Tuching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. Hwever, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
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【答案】 A cmmn girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Tuching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. Hwever, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The rad t life and study is full f hardships, but it has always been her dream t study medicine t save peple. S she read lips and studied hard t realize her dream f becming a Dctr f pharmacy.
I als have a dream. I want t be a teacher when I grw up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I als like t teach my knwledge t thers. In rder t realize my dream, I must study hard and stick t my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；
第二步，介绍自己的梦想；
第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①be full f充满
②grw up长大
③in rder t为了
④stick t坚持
[高分句型]
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②The rad t life and study is full f hardships, but it has always been her dream t study medicine t save peple.（并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用）
（2022·浙江衢州·统考中考真题）
每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长”为主题的征文活动。请以“T Learn, T Grw”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1. 介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历；
2. 谈谈你的感受。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
2. 词数：90-110；
3. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：activity, pleasure, imprve, experience
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【答案】例文
T Learn, T Grw
Every experience is a learning experience, and we can always learn smething valuable frm it.
Last term, there was an English speech cntest in my schl. I decided t take part in it, because I thught I was gd at speaking English and I had sme experience in giving speeches. I was sure I culd win the cntest easily, s I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of curse nt. The winner was Jim, ne f my classmates, wh had practiced after schl every day.
“Practice makes perfect”, as the saying ges. N ne can succeed withut hard wrk. This is what I learned frm my failure. If there’s anther chance, I’ll take it seriusly and d my best.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“T Learn, T Grw”为题，结合提示内容进行写作。写作前，可以提前列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导：这是一篇材料作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描述过去的经历时用一般过去时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的经历；第三段描述自己的感受。
（2022·四川宜宾·统考中考真题）
亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你一定有很多感慨。在此之际，请你以“My Favrite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。
内容包括：
1. 最喜欢的老师；
2. 简单介绍该老师（外貌或性格）；
3. 喜欢他（她）的理由（两个）；
4. 最想对老师说的话。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名（只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓；学科）；
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
My Favrite Teacher
Hw time flies! My three-year junir middle schl life will be ver sn. Lking back, I have many memries f my teachers.
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【答案】例文
My Favrite Teacher
Hw time flies! My three-year Middle schl life will be ver sn. Lking back, I have many memries f my teachers.
As fr me, my favrite teacher is Ms. Li, ur English teacher. She is a bit thin but very beautiful, with a pair f thick glasses. She is serius and strict. In fact, she ften makes her classes s interesting and lively that we all enjy her lessns. When we are tired in class, she ften tells jkes t make us relaxed. With the help f her, we have made great prgress in English.
Ms. Li, I nly want t say t yu: My dream—t be a gd senir schl student—will cme true in the end. Thank yu! (I wish yu a happy life in yur life lng jurney.)
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以“My Favrite Teacher”为题，介绍自己喜欢的老师。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段文章已给。第二段阐述喜欢的这位老师是谁、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜欢的原因。最后一段介绍自己想对老师说的话。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（2022·辽宁沈阳·统考中考真题）
榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校英语社团开展以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题的社团活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样——李想。
内容包括：
1. 人物描写；
2. 说明理由；
3. 表达希望。
【注意】
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellw students,
I am Li Hua. Tday I wuld like t intrduce Li Xiang, a mdel student in my mind.
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Thanks fr yur listening!
【答案】例文
Dear fellw students,
I am Li Hua. Tday I wuld like t intrduce Li Xiang, a mdel student in my mind.
He is very kind and caring. At schl, he studies s hard that he ften gets gd scres in exams. Hwever, I dn’t d well in studying. S he nt nly helps me with every subject but als tells me hw t study in rder t catch up thers. With Li Xiang’s help, I made great prgress and I thank him very much.
I think I’m lucky t have such a gd friend. Frm nw n, I will d my best t study better and better. And I hpe I will learn frm Li Xiang t help thers in truble and shw the act f kindness t thers.
Thanks fr yur listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，要求根据提示问题，介绍自己心中的榜样。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：文章以第一、三人称，一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时要分别介绍榜样是谁，为什么是自己的榜样并表达自己的希望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
话题
考查热度
文学与音乐
自己喜欢的歌手、作家及其作品，描述他们的经历和故事
读书的重要性
1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；
2. 提升自我，增强自信……
读过的一本书或一首诗
1. 作品内容简介；
2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。
多读书、读好书
1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；
2. 多读经典文学作品……
Name
Ni Baba
Appearance (外貌)
rund face, big eyes…
Xilankapu scarf (西兰卡普围巾)…
Meaning (象征意义)
be friendly…
say hi t…
prtect the animal…
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