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历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times. As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫),the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear came back. ____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.___________________________________________________________________
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
原文出处 2009年国家地理杂志FACE TO FACE WITH POLAR BEARSOne fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside "the plar bear capital f the wrld"---the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears-like all wild animals---shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur spaghetti and garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high, wire fence. He clawed, bit, and shved the wire mesh. He std n his hind legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, banged pts, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear-he just grwled and went back t trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws. I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter, I snapped sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested l use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I crept up t ur uninvited guest and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar, the bear ran back t the lake t wash his eyes.
回答下面几个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。
Q2: What were the writer and Elli ding when the bear came?
Q1: What’s the relatinship between the writer and Elli?
Q3: Why did the bear cme?
Q4: What did the writer and Elli d seeing the bear?
Q5: Hw was the bear when it ran t the lake?
Very angry.
Husband and wife.
They were cking dinner.
Because f the smell f fd.
They tried all the defense actins they knew, radied the camp fr help, and tk sme pictures f the bear.
研读以下句子，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
(Para 1) One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. (Para 3) … a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. (Para 6) He tld me a helicpter was n its way ...(Para 7) The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them.
They were here t take phtgraphs f plar bears.
The writer and his wife were baking bread.
A helicpter was t cme.
The bear didn’t get hurt.
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
The bear came back angry and they had t try new ideas.
The cuple went t a twn in Canada t take phts f plar bears.
A bear came unexpectedly while the cuple was cking dinner.
Frightened, the cuple tried all the means f defense they knew but nne f them wrked.
The helicpter arrived t their rescue.
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal：t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
我们有一个梦想：给北极熊拍照。
给北极熊拍照很刺激也很危险，预示着侯文可能遇到危险。
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
故事的开端：饥饿的北极熊被我们的食物吸引想要过来吃食物。
看到北极熊面对面， 我们害怕， 想方设法赶走他们。
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter（相遇）, I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar（吼叫）, the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
驱赶北极熊的方法。最后北极熊被赶走了。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Para. 1: A few minutes later, the bear came back.
Para. 2: At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
Accrding t Para. 2, the cuple must have tried hard t keep themselves safe frm the bear; if this was the case, what did they d? What was happening when the helicpter arrived?
Did the helicpter cme t their rescue? What might happen next?
Paragraph 1 ： A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： At that very mment, the helicpter arrived._______________________________________________________________________
接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面。
如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“After thrughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trtted frward a few steps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。
“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved.”
Analysis f the beginning sentences
Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear came back.Para 2: At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
At the very mment
3. a tense situatin between us
1. ur actin and ______feelings f seeing the helicpter
1. ur respnse and ______ feelings after seeing the bear
2. the bear's actin
2. hw we escaped
3. ur final thught f the experience
A few minutes later, the bear came back. ____________________________________________________________ _____________________（这只毛茸茸的动物对栅栏发起攻击，栅栏立刻就豁开了一个口子。V-ing作状语）Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. _______________________________________________________（虽然我很想用相机给不断逼近的熊拍照，但我还是毫不犹豫地抓起面包向远处扔去。as倒装）Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Ellie scream and shake all the time.
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. ___________________________________________________________（当我们升入空中时，我们看见这只顽固的熊已经向我们营地跑了回去。see…ding）When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. _______________________________________________________________ （和人一样，北极熊也有病痛和情绪，也会感到害怕。并列谓语）Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
Paragraph 1 ： A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
The bear’s raring sund frightened us.
We tk the chance t take phts f the bear.
The bear trtted frward a few steps
Paragraph 2 ： At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
I was s happy t see smene cme t rescue us.
We used pepper spray t keep away with the bear.
We thrw fd t the bear.
We were rescued.
1.吼叫声和尖叫声打破寂静，尖锐刺耳，久久未消。
Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.
pierced the silence
needle-like shrillness
2. 这些噪音把埃利和我吓得脸色发白。
The nises turned Elli and I pale with hrrr.
pale with hrrr
3. 我担心那个大东西会毁掉我们的整个栅栏。
I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle fence.
destry ur whle fence
4. 他不停地吼叫，打破了寂静。
He rared repeatedly, and the nise shattered the silence.
He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence.
rared repeatedly
5. 埃利抓住这个机会给熊拍了几张照片。
Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures f the bear.
seized this pprtunity
take sme pictures f the bear
6. 动物的声音在我们周围回荡。
The animal’s nises eched all arund us.
A few minutes later, the bear came back. The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time. At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time.
A few minutes later, the bear came back.
It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
2018年6月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
A few minutes later, the bear came back. The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time.
2020年7月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
检测一下你对范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
对……发动进攻随时回到……拆毁在……上空盘旋安然无恙冲洗我们的照片当心……
launch an attack n at any minute head back t tear dwn hver ver safe and sunddevelp ur picturesbeware f
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
1. Irritated by the spray, the bear greeted us with a hwl f rage.2. Seeing the appraching bear, I threw ut the bread withut hesitatin.3. Ellie threw a bag ver the fence, which landed in a bush faraway.4. Try as we might, we culd nt get rid f the bear.5. With the bear running away, I sighed with relief.6. … t scared t mve.7. Extremely pleased and relieved, we waved …8. The animal tk a few hesitant steps back and eventually disappeared …9.The pictures, taken with difficulty and hanging n my wall, remind me f the rare encunter and narrw escape.10. The clse-ups we tk were definitely wrth the danger we experienced.
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The nises turned Elli and I pale with hrrr. I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle fence. He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence. Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures f the bear. The animal’s nises eched all arund us. We betrayed ur feelings by huddling tgether, shivering with fear. After thrughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trtted frward a few steps.
注意环境描写和动作描写。
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved. Elli used pepper spray again t buy us enugh time. But this time the bear became mre alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity f hunger, s we thrw all the fd we have. He then turned away and started devuring. As we were climbing the rpe ladder, Elli prayed like thusand times t shw thankfulness f being safe and sund.
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times. As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫),the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear came back. ____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.___________________________________________________________________
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
原文出处 2009年国家地理杂志FACE TO FACE WITH POLAR BEARSOne fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside "the plar bear capital f the wrld"---the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears-like all wild animals---shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur spaghetti and garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high, wire fence. He clawed, bit, and shved the wire mesh. He std n his hind legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, banged pts, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear-he just grwled and went back t trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws. I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter, I snapped sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested l use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I crept up t ur uninvited guest and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar, the bear ran back t the lake t wash his eyes.
回答下面几个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。
Q2: What were the writer and Elli ding when the bear came?
Q1: What’s the relatinship between the writer and Elli?
Q3: Why did the bear cme?
Q4: What did the writer and Elli d seeing the bear?
Q5: Hw was the bear when it ran t the lake?
Very angry.
Husband and wife.
They were cking dinner.
Because f the smell f fd.
They tried all the defense actins they knew, radied the camp fr help, and tk sme pictures f the bear.
研读以下句子，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
(Para 1) One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. (Para 3) … a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. (Para 6) He tld me a helicpter was n its way ...(Para 7) The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them.
They were here t take phtgraphs f plar bears.
The writer and his wife were baking bread.
A helicpter was t cme.
The bear didn’t get hurt.
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
The bear came back angry and they had t try new ideas.
The cuple went t a twn in Canada t take phts f plar bears.
A bear came unexpectedly while the cuple was cking dinner.
Frightened, the cuple tried all the means f defense they knew but nne f them wrked.
The helicpter arrived t their rescue.
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal：t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
我们有一个梦想：给北极熊拍照。
给北极熊拍照很刺激也很危险，预示着侯文可能遇到危险。
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
故事的开端：饥饿的北极熊被我们的食物吸引想要过来吃食物。
看到北极熊面对面， 我们害怕， 想方设法赶走他们。
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter（相遇）, I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar（吼叫）, the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
驱赶北极熊的方法。最后北极熊被赶走了。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Para. 1: A few minutes later, the bear came back.
Para. 2: At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
Accrding t Para. 2, the cuple must have tried hard t keep themselves safe frm the bear; if this was the case, what did they d? What was happening when the helicpter arrived?
Did the helicpter cme t their rescue? What might happen next?
Paragraph 1 ： A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： At that very mment, the helicpter arrived._______________________________________________________________________
接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面。
如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“After thrughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trtted frward a few steps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。
“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved.”
Analysis f the beginning sentences
Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear came back.Para 2: At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
At the very mment
3. a tense situatin between us
1. ur actin and ______feelings f seeing the helicpter
1. ur respnse and ______ feelings after seeing the bear
2. the bear's actin
2. hw we escaped
3. ur final thught f the experience
A few minutes later, the bear came back. ____________________________________________________________ _____________________（这只毛茸茸的动物对栅栏发起攻击，栅栏立刻就豁开了一个口子。V-ing作状语）Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. _______________________________________________________（虽然我很想用相机给不断逼近的熊拍照，但我还是毫不犹豫地抓起面包向远处扔去。as倒装）Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Ellie scream and shake all the time.
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. ___________________________________________________________（当我们升入空中时，我们看见这只顽固的熊已经向我们营地跑了回去。see…ding）When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. _______________________________________________________________ （和人一样，北极熊也有病痛和情绪，也会感到害怕。并列谓语）Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
Paragraph 1 ： A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
The bear’s raring sund frightened us.
We tk the chance t take phts f the bear.
The bear trtted frward a few steps
Paragraph 2 ： At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
I was s happy t see smene cme t rescue us.
We used pepper spray t keep away with the bear.
We thrw fd t the bear.
We were rescued.
1.吼叫声和尖叫声打破寂静，尖锐刺耳，久久未消。
Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.
pierced the silence
needle-like shrillness
2. 这些噪音把埃利和我吓得脸色发白。
The nises turned Elli and I pale with hrrr.
pale with hrrr
3. 我担心那个大东西会毁掉我们的整个栅栏。
I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle fence.
destry ur whle fence
4. 他不停地吼叫，打破了寂静。
He rared repeatedly, and the nise shattered the silence.
He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence.
rared repeatedly
5. 埃利抓住这个机会给熊拍了几张照片。
Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures f the bear.
seized this pprtunity
take sme pictures f the bear
6. 动物的声音在我们周围回荡。
The animal’s nises eched all arund us.
A few minutes later, the bear came back. The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time. At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time.
A few minutes later, the bear came back.
It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
2018年6月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
A few minutes later, the bear came back. The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time.
2020年7月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
检测一下你对范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
对……发动进攻随时回到……拆毁在……上空盘旋安然无恙冲洗我们的照片当心……
launch an attack n at any minute head back t tear dwn hver ver safe and sunddevelp ur picturesbeware f
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
1. Irritated by the spray, the bear greeted us with a hwl f rage.2. Seeing the appraching bear, I threw ut the bread withut hesitatin.3. Ellie threw a bag ver the fence, which landed in a bush faraway.4. Try as we might, we culd nt get rid f the bear.5. With the bear running away, I sighed with relief.6. … t scared t mve.7. Extremely pleased and relieved, we waved …8. The animal tk a few hesitant steps back and eventually disappeared …9.The pictures, taken with difficulty and hanging n my wall, remind me f the rare encunter and narrw escape.10. The clse-ups we tk were definitely wrth the danger we experienced.
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The nises turned Elli and I pale with hrrr. I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle fence. He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence. Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures f the bear. The animal’s nises eched all arund us. We betrayed ur feelings by huddling tgether, shivering with fear. After thrughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trtted frward a few steps.
注意环境描写和动作描写。
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved. Elli used pepper spray again t buy us enugh time. But this time the bear became mre alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity f hunger, s we thrw all the fd we have. He then turned away and started devuring. As we were climbing the rpe ladder, Elli prayed like thusand times t shw thankfulness f being safe and sund.
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