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这是一份三年（2022-2024）高考英语真题分类汇编（全国通用）专题21 读后续写（新高考）（解析版），共16页。试卷主要包含了续写线索，词汇激活等内容，欢迎下载使用。
精准练01 新课标卷
1.（2024年新高考I卷&II卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter n a cld, wet and unfrgettable evening in September. I had planned t fly t Vienna and take a bus t Prague fr a cnference. Due t a big strm, my flight had been delayed by an hur and a half. I tuched dwn in Vienna just 30 minutes befre the departure f the last bus t Prague. The mment I gt ff the plane, I ran like crazy thrugh the airprt building and jumped int the first taxi n the rank withut a secnd thught.
That was when I met Gunter. I tld him where I was ging, but he said he hadn't heard f the bus statin. I thught my prnunciatin was the prblem, s I explained again mre slwly, but he still lked cnfused. When I was abut t give up, Gunter fished ut his little phne and rang up a friend. After a heated discussin that lasted fr what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phne dwn and started the car.
Finally, with just tw minutes t spare we rlled int the bus statin. Thankfully, there was a lng queue (队列) still waiting t bard the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned arund, and lked at me with a big smile n his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zer cash in my wallet. I flashed him an aplgetic smile as I pulled ut my Prtuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did nt play alng. A feeling f helplessness washed ver me as I saw the bus queue thinning ut.
At this mment, Gunter pinted twards the waiting hall f the bus statin. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the machine, and ppped my card in, nly t read the message: "Out f rder. Srry."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news.
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Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised.
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【答案】
Para 1
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news. He lked at me in disbelief, asking me what t d. Flashing him anther aplgetic smile, I begged him fr a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus t Prague, I’ll be late fr the cnference which is s imprtant that I can’t affrd t miss it!” I explained. “May I have yur phne number? I will call yu and return the mney I we yu. I prmise I will keep my wrd r yu keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrte dwn his phne number and gave it t me. “Just keep yur prmise, Sir.” A feeling f gratitude washed ver me as I heard his wrds. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the bus, and jumped nt it just befre its departure.I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news. He lked at me in disbelief, asking me what t d. Flashing him anther aplgetic smile, I begged him fr a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus t Prague, I’ll be late fr the cnference which is s imprtant that I can’t affrd t miss it!” I explained. “May I have yur phne number? I will call yu and return the mney I we yu. I prmise I will keep my wrd r yu keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrte dwn his phne number and gave it t me. “Just keep yur prmise, Sir.” A feeling f gratitude washed ver me as I heard his wrds. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the bus, and jumped nt it just befre its departure.
Para 2
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised. He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the mment I saw him. We chatted happily n the way t the airprt. I tld him that thanks t his genersity and timely help, everything had gne smthly. When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn. I als gave him an attractive suvenir I had bught at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became gd friends and kept in tuch with each ther regularly. I felt blessed t have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised. He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the mment I saw him. We chatted happily n the way t the airprt. I tld him that thanks t his genersity and timely help, everything had gne smthly. When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn. I als gave him an attractive suvenir I had bught at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became gd friends and kept in tuch with each ther regularly. I felt blessed t have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。
2.续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝：reject/refuse
②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb.
③记下，写下：write dwn/set dwn
情绪类
①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably
②开心地：happily/jyfully
【点睛】【高分句型1】He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句）
2.（2023年新高考I卷&II卷）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle schl, my scial studies teacher asked me t enter a writing cntest. I said n withut thinking. I did nt lve writing. My family came frm Brazil, s English was nly my secnd language. Writing was s difficult and painful fr me that my teacher had allwed me t present my paper n the sinking f the Titanic by acting ut a play, where I played all the parts. N ne laughed harder than he did.
S, why did he suddenly frce me t d smething at which I was sure t fail? His reply: “Because I lve yur stries. If yu’re willing t apply yurself, I think yu have a gd sht at this.” Encuraged by his wrds, I agreed t give it a try.
I chse Paul Revere’s hrse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Bstn wh rde a hrse at night n April 18, 1775 t Lexingtn t warn peple that British sldiers were cming. My stry wuld cme straight frm the hrse’s muth. Nt a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely t be anyne else’s chice.
What did the hrse think, as he sped thrugh the night? Did he get tired? Have dubts? Did he want t quit? I sympathized immediately. I gt tired. I had dubts. I wanted t quit. But, like Revere’s hrse, I kept ging. I wrked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my lder sister t crrect my grammar. I checked ut a half dzen bks n Paul Revere frm the library. I even read a few f them.
When I handed in the essay t my teacher, he read it, laughed ut lud, and said, “Great. Nw, write it again.” I wrte it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thught f winning had given way t the enjyment f writing. If I didn’t win, I wuldn’t care.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news.
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I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin.
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【答案】
A few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news. I was infrmed that I wn the first prize in the writing cntest and that there wuld be an award presentatin in tw days. I was s happy t hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew yu’d win! I am prud f yu. Yu made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited t the stage t receive the award, I expressed my thanks t my teacher. I said, “It’s yu wh make me fall in lve with writing, my scial studies teacher. Withut yur recgnitin and guidance, I culdn’t have written this article. Again thank yu very much!”
I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin. My teacher was waiting fr me. Hlding my hands, he said “Cngratulatins! Yu are a gd writer, s keep writing.” “Yu knw I didn’t like writing befre, but nw I am crazy abut it! I will try my best t create gd wrks.” I said seriusly. Since then, I have written many gd wrks and nw I am a famus writer. I we my success t my scial teacher wh is a beacn in my life n the rad t writing.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输赢了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖，在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感激。
②由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作，自此作者坚持写作取得了成功，作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。
2.续写线索：比赛消息传来——作者获奖——高兴——颁奖典礼感谢老师——颁奖后来到老师办公室——老师告诉作者坚持写作——作者表达了对写作的喜爱——作者写作取得了成功——感激老师
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告知：infrm/tell
②成功做到：make it/succeed
③表达：express/cnvey
情绪类
①高兴：happy/glad
②激动地：excitedly/with excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was infrmed that I wn the first prize in the writing cntest and that there wuld be an award presentatin in tw days. （运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] It’s yu wh make me fall in lve with writing, my scial studies teacher.（运用了强调句）
[高分句型3] I we my success t my scial teacher wh is a beacn in my life n the rad t writing.（运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句
3.（2022年新高考I卷&II卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the day f the big crss-cuntry run. Students frm seven different primary schls in and arund the small twn were warming up and walking the rute(路线)thrugh thick evergreen frest.
I lked arund and finally sptted David, wh was standing by himself ff t the side by a fence. He was small fr ten years ld. His usual big tthy smile was absent tday. I walked ver and asked him why he wasn’t with the ther children. He hesitated and then said he had decided nt t run.
What was wrng? He had wrked s hard fr this event!
I quickly searched the crwd fr the schl’s cach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids frm ther schls wuld laugh at him,” he explained uncmfrtably. “I gave him the chice t run r nt, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustratin(懊恼). I knew the cach meant well—he thught he was ding the right thing. After making sure that David culd run if he wanted, I turned t find him cming twards me, his small bdy rcking frm side t side as he swung his feet frward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him frm walking r running like ther children, but at schl his classmates thught f him as a regular kid. He always participated t the best f his ability in whatever they were ding. That was why nne f the children thught it unusual that David had decided t jin the crss-cuntry team. It just tk him lnger—that’s all. David had nt missed a single practice, and althugh he always finished his run lng after the ther children, he did always finish. As a special educatin teacher at the schl, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was prud f his strng determinatin.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn’t lk at me.
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I watched as David mved up t the starting line with the ther runners.
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【答案】
We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn’t lk at me. I said gently and quietly, “N ne can change yur mind, except yurself. If yu desire t challenge yurself, there is nthing t d with thers’ thughts.” He sat still with a deep breath. “Yu have a full preparatin befre this event, which is the mst imprtant reasn why yu shw up here”, I added with a sincere tne. Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run. His cach heard what David said
and gave me a lk—the kind that was mre determined than anyne else’s.
I watched as David mved up t the starting line with the ther runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely lng fr yung children, nt t mentin a child with a heart disease. David insisted n running as if he had frgtten all his weaknesses, thugh he was tripped ver within the a few kilmeters. It didn’t take lng befre he picked himself up again and cntinued his missin. Classmates all appeared n the racing track, cheering fr him. “Cme n! Yu can make it! We are prud f yu!” they shuted enthusiastically. T everyne’s jy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was n mre imprtant whether he wn the first place r nt. It was his brave heart and strng faith that culd make smething unusual happen finally.
【解析】
【导语】本文以赛跑为线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句内容”我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛，大卫经过强烈的心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。
②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。
2续写线索：鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛
3.词汇激活：
行动类：
①深呼吸：with a deep breath/breathe deeply
②坚持做：insisted n ding/be stick t ding
情绪类：
①热情：enthusiastically /with great passin
②骄傲：be prud f/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Yu have a full preparatin befre this event, which is the mst imprtant reasn why yu shw up here. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句和 why引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run. (现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was his brave heart and strng faith that culd make smething unusual happen finally. (含有It was…that结构的强调句型)
精准练02 浙江卷
1.（2024年浙江卷1月）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eva spent the first week f high schl trying t keep her head abve water. One f the majr headaches fr her was finding her way in the huge schl building. It was a six-stry building. On each flr, hallways stretched in fur directins, leading t classrms, labratries, and teachers’ ffices. Smewhere in the building, there was als a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.
Having a pr sense f directin, Eva fund it impssible t get arund in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rms were t much t think abut, let alne cmmit t memry. She decided that she wuld memrize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest f the place didn’t exist.
In her first PE class, Eva was shcked when Cach Pitt annunced that everyne had t run ne mile arund the track utside. She searched the faces f her classmates fr signs f panic. There was nthing she feared mre than having t run a whle mile. T Eva, “a mile” was used t describe lng distances. It was ten miles frm her hme t her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a lng way, even in a car!
When Cach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she wuld be left in the dust. Hwever, while sme f her classmates edged ahead, thers actually fell behind. ” It’s just the beginning, “she thught.” I’ll cme in last fr sure. “
Sn Eva began t breathe hard, with her heart punding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick n herself. She stpped thinking abut the wrd” mile. “Instead, she fcused n reaching the shadw cast n the track by an ak tree up ahead. Then she cncentrated n jgging t the spt where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried t see if she culd cmplete her first lap. One lap turned int tw, then three, then fur.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.
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Paragraph 2:
Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building.
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【答案】
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. In the vast expanse f her schl, a girl with pr directinal skills struggled t navigate and ften gt lst. One day, during gym class, she bserved a unique way t find her way - fllwing the shadws f trees. As the sun cast its rays, the girl nticed hw the shadws created patterns n the grund, guiding her path. She tk a leap f faith and fllwed the shadws, surprising herself with each turn and stretch. Her effrts were nticed by the teacher, wh praised her innvative thinking.
Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building. She used the shadws t navigate the schl hallways, find her classes, and even lcate the schl's varius facilities. This newfund skill nt nly helped the girl navigate her schl but als instilled in her a sense f cnfidence and adventure. She learned excitedly that with a little creativity and bservatin, any challenge culd be vercme. And with each step she tk, she left behind a legacy f inspiratin fr thse wh fllwed in her ftsteps, knwing that even withut a clear sense f directin, there's always a way t find ne's way.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了高中生Eva因为方向感不强，经常在学校里迷路，在一次体育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候Eva发现跟着树的影子能找到方向，她通过这个方法重新认识到了校园。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当Pitt教练在终点线对她说:“干得好!”，伊娃很惊讶。”可知，第一段可描写Eva通过自己追随影子的方法找到方向，并且受到了教练的称赞。
②由第二段首句内容“Eva决定用同样的手段来记住学校大楼。”可知，第二段可描写Eva通过记住影子的方法来记住学校大楼并且通过这件事之后的感悟。
2.续写线索：方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置——体育课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向——害怕最后一名心里非常紧张——跟随影子找到方向——受到教练的赞赏——获得感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①努力做某事：struggle t d sth./strive t d sth.
②导航：navigate/guide
③了解：learn/knw/acknwledge
情绪类
①使某人惊讶：surprise sb./astnish sb.
②激动地：excitedly/in excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]Her effrts were nticed by the teacher, wh praised her innvative thinking.（wh引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]She learned that with a little creativity and bservatin, any challenge culd be vercme. （that引导的宾语从句）
2.（2023年浙江卷1月）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend’s farm in western Washingtn. I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years. A nise at a windw caught my attentin, s I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying t escape. She was cvered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able t mve her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in. The brken windw glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside, clsing the dr securely behind me.
When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes. I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings. Still, she made n attempt t fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle, she began t mve. I stpped, and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away.
Hvering (悬停), she apprached within six inches f my face. Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side. Then she flew quickly ut f sight.
During the ckut, I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident. They prmised t fix the windw. As I was departing, my friends walked me t my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering. She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me. She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne. Fr a mment, all were speechless. Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gdbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.
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I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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【答案】
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. I rushed back t the deserted huse. It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. Leaving the huse, I culdn’t help wndering hw it was getting n nw. Had it managed t find its way back hme, r was it still ut there smewhere struggling t survive?
I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash f mvement caught my attentin. I turned arund t see the same hummingbird hvering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting fr me, its beady eyes lcked n mine as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude. I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature, and I knew that I wuld always cherish the memries we shared as I climbed int my car and drve away.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。
2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到……：thughts drift back t/thughts return t
②匆匆回到：rush back t/hurry back t
③盯着：eyes lcked n/eyes staring at
情绪类
①宽慰：feel a surge f relief/feel relieved
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. (由that引导的主语从句)
3.（2022年浙江卷1月）
阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事
When Dr. Hendersn was assigning（指定） prject mates fr his psychlgy class, I secretly hped he wuld pair me with my best friend r at least a classmate I culd have sme fun with. Abve all, I hped he wuldn't assign me t wrk with the fiercely cmpetitive, extremely serius fellw wh always wre dark clthes and apparently had a persnality t match. As fate （命运）wuld have it, Dr. Hendersn very deliberately matched everyne in class and annunced that I wuld be wrking with the ne persn in class I wanted t avid.
I went up t my new teammate and intrduced myself. He lked at me as thugh I weren't there. I felt he treated me as thugh I wuld hld him back and prbably make him fail t get an A in the curse. He wasn't mean r abusive; he just gave me the impressin he culd d whatever prject we dreamed up better if he did it alne.
Needless t say, I didn't lk frward t an entire term f being brushed ff, but I tried t make the best f it and didn't say anything fr fear that I wuld make things wrse.
The prject required each team t develp a hypthesis （假说）, set up an experiment t test the hypthesis, d the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received wuld be shared by bth students.
When my teammate and I met t discuss ur prject, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student wh had a reputatin fr single-mindedness and gd grades—the exact ppsite f me. I was utmatched. I actually wanted t drp the class at ne pint, but stpped shrt because I didn't want t give him the satisfactin f my chickening ut. I decided t stick t it n matter what.
After lng discussins we smehw agreed t d a study n the psychlgical well-being f teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a tpic.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 结尾部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. We started t meet regularly t draw up ur plans.
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Para 2. One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease.
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【答案】
We started t meet regularly t draw up ur plans. Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back. I just kept ndding when he asked me whether it is k t d this way r that way. I thught it was impssible t persuade him int accepting my views, s I didn’t want t waste ur time t discuss. I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he. I just hped that the presentatin day culd cme earlier.
One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease. I felt s srry t hear that and I thught I shuld visit him in any case. He was a little surprised t see me when I stepped int his ward with sme flwers and fruits. I ffered t d the rest wrk f ur prject and he invited me t share my ideas t perfect it. We began t wrk as a fine team and finally finished ur prject n time. Our hard wrk paid ff and Dr. Hendersn’s was very satisfied with ur wnderful findings. Frm this prject, we als learned the significance f teammates. Just as the saying ges, ne persn can g far, but a grup f persns can travel farther.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次课上被分配了一个不想要的队友共同完成作业共享分数，他们从最开始的无法配合到最后圆满完成任务的温暖故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由续写段落第一段首句内容“我们开始定期见面起草计划。”可知，第一段可描写见面起草过程中所发生的事情以及过程中的心理活动。
②由续写段落第二段首句内容“有一天，我听说他因为严重的疾病住院了”可知，第二段可描写我的搭档住院以后我们是如何应对并最终圆满完成作业的。
2.续写线索：见面起草——我害怕说错，基本保持沉默，只是顺从他的想法——搭档生病住院——探望取得互信——合作圆满完成——懂得了团队合作的意义
3.词汇激活
行为类
①与…分享：share sth with sb / exchange sth with sb
②没能做：fail t d/be unable t d /nt make it
③到达：arrived at /get t /reach/
④走进：step int/enter/cme int
情绪类
①惊讶的：surprised/amazed/shcked
②满意的：satisfied /cntent/ pleased
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he.（使用了“s+（助）动词+主语”表示“……也一样”的倒装句型）
[高分句型2]. Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back.（使用了thugh 引导的让步状语从句）
4.（2022年浙江卷6月）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I needed t d smething in my cmmunity (社区) in rder t cmplete the cmmunity service hurs required t graduate frm high schl. Sme f my friends had signed up t spend time at a sup kitchen, s I did, t. It seemed like a gd thing t d.
I thught that we wuld just be passing ut dinners t thse in need, but I fund ut we wuld be ding everything frm preparing t serving the dinner. We began preparing the fd, frm mixing salad dressing t separating frzen meat. Much still needed t be dne befre dinner was served, but already utside the building many hmeless peple were gathering. It wasn’t until a cuple f hurs later that we pened the drs and began serving dinner.
As the line f peple came tward me, I gt a little scared. I’d cme face t face with the hmeless: Hw shuld I act? Hw wuld they treat me? Wuld they hate me fr having mre than they did? While sme f the peple lked very friendly, sme f them lked s dangerus. I didn’t have t much time t wrry abut it. I was assigned (分配) t serve the salad with the lady next t me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I fund quite cmfrting.
I had never seen s many peple wanting fd. They were f all ages and natinalities. Mst f them wre clthes that were trn and dirty. Sme lked like they had tally given up n life, while thers seemed t be making the best f the situatin, smiling and jking. Sme were better ff than thers, but they all needed a gd meal and a warm place t eat. It saddened me t think f hw many peple there were wh didn’t have a place t call hme and the nly fd they gt came frm a sup kitchen.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.
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Paragraph 2:
I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way.
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【答案】
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted t make them knw that I was really anxius t help them. T my relief, they smiled plitely back at me when they saw my smile, and I culd see their exhaustin in their eyes. I wanted t knw what they were ging thrugh and I was desperate t knw what I culd d fr them. They ndded gratefully as I pushed my spn int the pt and tk a large spnful and pured it int their bwls.
I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way. This experience made me realize that there are s many peple in this wrld wh need ur help. It als made me realize that ur small act f kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference t them. I will never frget the way they lked at me when they were given fd. I am anxius t urge the wrld t d everything pssible t help thse in need.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间，需要在所在的社区做点什么，作者去了施粥所，作者发现准备过程中要做的事情很多，作者看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕，但是却忙得没有时间去担心这些，作者看到了年龄和国籍各不相同的人，这让作者感到很难过。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候，我露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥。
②由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。”可知，第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟。
2.续写线索：无家可归的人笑——作者舀粥——无家可归的人感激——作者感悟——作者发出呼吁
3.词汇激活
行为类
①倒：pur/decant
②意识到：realize that/be aware that
③主张：urge sb. t d/advcate sb. t d
情绪类
①感谢：gratefully/thankfully
②急切的：anxius/eager
【点睛】[高分句型1] This experience made me realize that there are s many peple in this wrld wh need ur help. (由that引导的宾语从句和wh引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I will never frget the way they lked at me when they were given fd. (由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that和when引导的时间状语从句)
三年考情（2022-2024）
命题趋势
2024：新高考I卷&II卷：人与社会（打车费）
浙江1月：人与自我（校园话题）
2023 新高考I卷&II卷：人与自我（老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣）
浙江1月：人与动物（救助蜂鸟）
2022 新高考I卷&II卷；人与自我（鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑）
浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务）
浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务）
新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友情类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类。
精准练01 新课标卷
1.（2024年新高考I卷&II卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter n a cld, wet and unfrgettable evening in September. I had planned t fly t Vienna and take a bus t Prague fr a cnference. Due t a big strm, my flight had been delayed by an hur and a half. I tuched dwn in Vienna just 30 minutes befre the departure f the last bus t Prague. The mment I gt ff the plane, I ran like crazy thrugh the airprt building and jumped int the first taxi n the rank withut a secnd thught.
That was when I met Gunter. I tld him where I was ging, but he said he hadn't heard f the bus statin. I thught my prnunciatin was the prblem, s I explained again mre slwly, but he still lked cnfused. When I was abut t give up, Gunter fished ut his little phne and rang up a friend. After a heated discussin that lasted fr what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phne dwn and started the car.
Finally, with just tw minutes t spare we rlled int the bus statin. Thankfully, there was a lng queue (队列) still waiting t bard the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned arund, and lked at me with a big smile n his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zer cash in my wallet. I flashed him an aplgetic smile as I pulled ut my Prtuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did nt play alng. A feeling f helplessness washed ver me as I saw the bus queue thinning ut.
At this mment, Gunter pinted twards the waiting hall f the bus statin. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the machine, and ppped my card in, nly t read the message: "Out f rder. Srry."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news.
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Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised.
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【答案】
Para 1
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news. He lked at me in disbelief, asking me what t d. Flashing him anther aplgetic smile, I begged him fr a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus t Prague, I’ll be late fr the cnference which is s imprtant that I can’t affrd t miss it!” I explained. “May I have yur phne number? I will call yu and return the mney I we yu. I prmise I will keep my wrd r yu keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrte dwn his phne number and gave it t me. “Just keep yur prmise, Sir.” A feeling f gratitude washed ver me as I heard his wrds. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the bus, and jumped nt it just befre its departure.I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news. He lked at me in disbelief, asking me what t d. Flashing him anther aplgetic smile, I begged him fr a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus t Prague, I’ll be late fr the cnference which is s imprtant that I can’t affrd t miss it!” I explained. “May I have yur phne number? I will call yu and return the mney I we yu. I prmise I will keep my wrd r yu keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrte dwn his phne number and gave it t me. “Just keep yur prmise, Sir.” A feeling f gratitude washed ver me as I heard his wrds. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the bus, and jumped nt it just befre its departure.
Para 2
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised. He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the mment I saw him. We chatted happily n the way t the airprt. I tld him that thanks t his genersity and timely help, everything had gne smthly. When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn. I als gave him an attractive suvenir I had bught at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became gd friends and kept in tuch with each ther regularly. I felt blessed t have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised. He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the mment I saw him. We chatted happily n the way t the airprt. I tld him that thanks t his genersity and timely help, everything had gne smthly. When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn. I als gave him an attractive suvenir I had bught at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became gd friends and kept in tuch with each ther regularly. I felt blessed t have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。
2.续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝：reject/refuse
②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb.
③记下，写下：write dwn/set dwn
情绪类
①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably
②开心地：happily/jyfully
【点睛】【高分句型1】He picked me up at the bus statin where he had drpped me ff fur days befre.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When he stpped his taxi utside the airprt, I paid him fr the “duble car ride”, back and frth frm the airprt t the bus statin, tgether with a generus tip that he turned dwn.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句）
2.（2023年新高考I卷&II卷）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle schl, my scial studies teacher asked me t enter a writing cntest. I said n withut thinking. I did nt lve writing. My family came frm Brazil, s English was nly my secnd language. Writing was s difficult and painful fr me that my teacher had allwed me t present my paper n the sinking f the Titanic by acting ut a play, where I played all the parts. N ne laughed harder than he did.
S, why did he suddenly frce me t d smething at which I was sure t fail? His reply: “Because I lve yur stries. If yu’re willing t apply yurself, I think yu have a gd sht at this.” Encuraged by his wrds, I agreed t give it a try.
I chse Paul Revere’s hrse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Bstn wh rde a hrse at night n April 18, 1775 t Lexingtn t warn peple that British sldiers were cming. My stry wuld cme straight frm the hrse’s muth. Nt a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely t be anyne else’s chice.
What did the hrse think, as he sped thrugh the night? Did he get tired? Have dubts? Did he want t quit? I sympathized immediately. I gt tired. I had dubts. I wanted t quit. But, like Revere’s hrse, I kept ging. I wrked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my lder sister t crrect my grammar. I checked ut a half dzen bks n Paul Revere frm the library. I even read a few f them.
When I handed in the essay t my teacher, he read it, laughed ut lud, and said, “Great. Nw, write it again.” I wrte it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thught f winning had given way t the enjyment f writing. If I didn’t win, I wuldn’t care.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news.
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I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin.
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【答案】
A few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news. I was infrmed that I wn the first prize in the writing cntest and that there wuld be an award presentatin in tw days. I was s happy t hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew yu’d win! I am prud f yu. Yu made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited t the stage t receive the award, I expressed my thanks t my teacher. I said, “It’s yu wh make me fall in lve with writing, my scial studies teacher. Withut yur recgnitin and guidance, I culdn’t have written this article. Again thank yu very much!”
I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin. My teacher was waiting fr me. Hlding my hands, he said “Cngratulatins! Yu are a gd writer, s keep writing.” “Yu knw I didn’t like writing befre, but nw I am crazy abut it! I will try my best t create gd wrks.” I said seriusly. Since then, I have written many gd wrks and nw I am a famus writer. I we my success t my scial teacher wh is a beacn in my life n the rad t writing.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输赢了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖，在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感激。
②由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作，自此作者坚持写作取得了成功，作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。
2.续写线索：比赛消息传来——作者获奖——高兴——颁奖典礼感谢老师——颁奖后来到老师办公室——老师告诉作者坚持写作——作者表达了对写作的喜爱——作者写作取得了成功——感激老师
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告知：infrm/tell
②成功做到：make it/succeed
③表达：express/cnvey
情绪类
①高兴：happy/glad
②激动地：excitedly/with excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was infrmed that I wn the first prize in the writing cntest and that there wuld be an award presentatin in tw days. （运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] It’s yu wh make me fall in lve with writing, my scial studies teacher.（运用了强调句）
[高分句型3] I we my success t my scial teacher wh is a beacn in my life n the rad t writing.（运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句
3.（2022年新高考I卷&II卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the day f the big crss-cuntry run. Students frm seven different primary schls in and arund the small twn were warming up and walking the rute(路线)thrugh thick evergreen frest.
I lked arund and finally sptted David, wh was standing by himself ff t the side by a fence. He was small fr ten years ld. His usual big tthy smile was absent tday. I walked ver and asked him why he wasn’t with the ther children. He hesitated and then said he had decided nt t run.
What was wrng? He had wrked s hard fr this event!
I quickly searched the crwd fr the schl’s cach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids frm ther schls wuld laugh at him,” he explained uncmfrtably. “I gave him the chice t run r nt, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustratin(懊恼). I knew the cach meant well—he thught he was ding the right thing. After making sure that David culd run if he wanted, I turned t find him cming twards me, his small bdy rcking frm side t side as he swung his feet frward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him frm walking r running like ther children, but at schl his classmates thught f him as a regular kid. He always participated t the best f his ability in whatever they were ding. That was why nne f the children thught it unusual that David had decided t jin the crss-cuntry team. It just tk him lnger—that’s all. David had nt missed a single practice, and althugh he always finished his run lng after the ther children, he did always finish. As a special educatin teacher at the schl, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was prud f his strng determinatin.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn’t lk at me.
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I watched as David mved up t the starting line with the ther runners.
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【答案】
We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn’t lk at me. I said gently and quietly, “N ne can change yur mind, except yurself. If yu desire t challenge yurself, there is nthing t d with thers’ thughts.” He sat still with a deep breath. “Yu have a full preparatin befre this event, which is the mst imprtant reasn why yu shw up here”, I added with a sincere tne. Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run. His cach heard what David said
and gave me a lk—the kind that was mre determined than anyne else’s.
I watched as David mved up t the starting line with the ther runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely lng fr yung children, nt t mentin a child with a heart disease. David insisted n running as if he had frgtten all his weaknesses, thugh he was tripped ver within the a few kilmeters. It didn’t take lng befre he picked himself up again and cntinued his missin. Classmates all appeared n the racing track, cheering fr him. “Cme n! Yu can make it! We are prud f yu!” they shuted enthusiastically. T everyne’s jy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was n mre imprtant whether he wn the first place r nt. It was his brave heart and strng faith that culd make smething unusual happen finally.
【解析】
【导语】本文以赛跑为线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句内容”我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛，大卫经过强烈的心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。
②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。
2续写线索：鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛
3.词汇激活：
行动类：
①深呼吸：with a deep breath/breathe deeply
②坚持做：insisted n ding/be stick t ding
情绪类：
①热情：enthusiastically /with great passin
②骄傲：be prud f/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Yu have a full preparatin befre this event, which is the mst imprtant reasn why yu shw up here. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句和 why引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run. (现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was his brave heart and strng faith that culd make smething unusual happen finally. (含有It was…that结构的强调句型)
精准练02 浙江卷
1.（2024年浙江卷1月）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eva spent the first week f high schl trying t keep her head abve water. One f the majr headaches fr her was finding her way in the huge schl building. It was a six-stry building. On each flr, hallways stretched in fur directins, leading t classrms, labratries, and teachers’ ffices. Smewhere in the building, there was als a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.
Having a pr sense f directin, Eva fund it impssible t get arund in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rms were t much t think abut, let alne cmmit t memry. She decided that she wuld memrize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest f the place didn’t exist.
In her first PE class, Eva was shcked when Cach Pitt annunced that everyne had t run ne mile arund the track utside. She searched the faces f her classmates fr signs f panic. There was nthing she feared mre than having t run a whle mile. T Eva, “a mile” was used t describe lng distances. It was ten miles frm her hme t her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a lng way, even in a car!
When Cach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she wuld be left in the dust. Hwever, while sme f her classmates edged ahead, thers actually fell behind. ” It’s just the beginning, “she thught.” I’ll cme in last fr sure. “
Sn Eva began t breathe hard, with her heart punding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick n herself. She stpped thinking abut the wrd” mile. “Instead, she fcused n reaching the shadw cast n the track by an ak tree up ahead. Then she cncentrated n jgging t the spt where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried t see if she culd cmplete her first lap. One lap turned int tw, then three, then fur.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.
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Paragraph 2:
Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building.
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【答案】
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. In the vast expanse f her schl, a girl with pr directinal skills struggled t navigate and ften gt lst. One day, during gym class, she bserved a unique way t find her way - fllwing the shadws f trees. As the sun cast its rays, the girl nticed hw the shadws created patterns n the grund, guiding her path. She tk a leap f faith and fllwed the shadws, surprising herself with each turn and stretch. Her effrts were nticed by the teacher, wh praised her innvative thinking.
Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building. She used the shadws t navigate the schl hallways, find her classes, and even lcate the schl's varius facilities. This newfund skill nt nly helped the girl navigate her schl but als instilled in her a sense f cnfidence and adventure. She learned excitedly that with a little creativity and bservatin, any challenge culd be vercme. And with each step she tk, she left behind a legacy f inspiratin fr thse wh fllwed in her ftsteps, knwing that even withut a clear sense f directin, there's always a way t find ne's way.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了高中生Eva因为方向感不强，经常在学校里迷路，在一次体育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候Eva发现跟着树的影子能找到方向，她通过这个方法重新认识到了校园。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当Pitt教练在终点线对她说:“干得好!”，伊娃很惊讶。”可知，第一段可描写Eva通过自己追随影子的方法找到方向，并且受到了教练的称赞。
②由第二段首句内容“Eva决定用同样的手段来记住学校大楼。”可知，第二段可描写Eva通过记住影子的方法来记住学校大楼并且通过这件事之后的感悟。
2.续写线索：方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置——体育课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向——害怕最后一名心里非常紧张——跟随影子找到方向——受到教练的赞赏——获得感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①努力做某事：struggle t d sth./strive t d sth.
②导航：navigate/guide
③了解：learn/knw/acknwledge
情绪类
①使某人惊讶：surprise sb./astnish sb.
②激动地：excitedly/in excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]Her effrts were nticed by the teacher, wh praised her innvative thinking.（wh引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]She learned that with a little creativity and bservatin, any challenge culd be vercme. （that引导的宾语从句）
2.（2023年浙江卷1月）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend’s farm in western Washingtn. I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years. A nise at a windw caught my attentin, s I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying t escape. She was cvered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able t mve her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in. The brken windw glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside, clsing the dr securely behind me.
When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes. I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings. Still, she made n attempt t fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle, she began t mve. I stpped, and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away.
Hvering (悬停), she apprached within six inches f my face. Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side. Then she flew quickly ut f sight.
During the ckut, I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident. They prmised t fix the windw. As I was departing, my friends walked me t my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering. She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me. She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne. Fr a mment, all were speechless. Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gdbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.
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I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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【答案】
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. I rushed back t the deserted huse. It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. Leaving the huse, I culdn’t help wndering hw it was getting n nw. Had it managed t find its way back hme, r was it still ut there smewhere struggling t survive?
I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash f mvement caught my attentin. I turned arund t see the same hummingbird hvering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting fr me, its beady eyes lcked n mine as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude. I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature, and I knew that I wuld always cherish the memries we shared as I climbed int my car and drve away.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。
2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到……：thughts drift back t/thughts return t
②匆匆回到：rush back t/hurry back t
③盯着：eyes lcked n/eyes staring at
情绪类
①宽慰：feel a surge f relief/feel relieved
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. (由that引导的主语从句)
3.（2022年浙江卷1月）
阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事
When Dr. Hendersn was assigning（指定） prject mates fr his psychlgy class, I secretly hped he wuld pair me with my best friend r at least a classmate I culd have sme fun with. Abve all, I hped he wuldn't assign me t wrk with the fiercely cmpetitive, extremely serius fellw wh always wre dark clthes and apparently had a persnality t match. As fate （命运）wuld have it, Dr. Hendersn very deliberately matched everyne in class and annunced that I wuld be wrking with the ne persn in class I wanted t avid.
I went up t my new teammate and intrduced myself. He lked at me as thugh I weren't there. I felt he treated me as thugh I wuld hld him back and prbably make him fail t get an A in the curse. He wasn't mean r abusive; he just gave me the impressin he culd d whatever prject we dreamed up better if he did it alne.
Needless t say, I didn't lk frward t an entire term f being brushed ff, but I tried t make the best f it and didn't say anything fr fear that I wuld make things wrse.
The prject required each team t develp a hypthesis （假说）, set up an experiment t test the hypthesis, d the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received wuld be shared by bth students.
When my teammate and I met t discuss ur prject, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student wh had a reputatin fr single-mindedness and gd grades—the exact ppsite f me. I was utmatched. I actually wanted t drp the class at ne pint, but stpped shrt because I didn't want t give him the satisfactin f my chickening ut. I decided t stick t it n matter what.
After lng discussins we smehw agreed t d a study n the psychlgical well-being f teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a tpic.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 结尾部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. We started t meet regularly t draw up ur plans.
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Para 2. One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease.
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【答案】
We started t meet regularly t draw up ur plans. Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back. I just kept ndding when he asked me whether it is k t d this way r that way. I thught it was impssible t persuade him int accepting my views, s I didn’t want t waste ur time t discuss. I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he. I just hped that the presentatin day culd cme earlier.
One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease. I felt s srry t hear that and I thught I shuld visit him in any case. He was a little surprised t see me when I stepped int his ward with sme flwers and fruits. I ffered t d the rest wrk f ur prject and he invited me t share my ideas t perfect it. We began t wrk as a fine team and finally finished ur prject n time. Our hard wrk paid ff and Dr. Hendersn’s was very satisfied with ur wnderful findings. Frm this prject, we als learned the significance f teammates. Just as the saying ges, ne persn can g far, but a grup f persns can travel farther.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次课上被分配了一个不想要的队友共同完成作业共享分数，他们从最开始的无法配合到最后圆满完成任务的温暖故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由续写段落第一段首句内容“我们开始定期见面起草计划。”可知，第一段可描写见面起草过程中所发生的事情以及过程中的心理活动。
②由续写段落第二段首句内容“有一天，我听说他因为严重的疾病住院了”可知，第二段可描写我的搭档住院以后我们是如何应对并最终圆满完成作业的。
2.续写线索：见面起草——我害怕说错，基本保持沉默，只是顺从他的想法——搭档生病住院——探望取得互信——合作圆满完成——懂得了团队合作的意义
3.词汇激活
行为类
①与…分享：share sth with sb / exchange sth with sb
②没能做：fail t d/be unable t d /nt make it
③到达：arrived at /get t /reach/
④走进：step int/enter/cme int
情绪类
①惊讶的：surprised/amazed/shcked
②满意的：satisfied /cntent/ pleased
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he.（使用了“s+（助）动词+主语”表示“……也一样”的倒装句型）
[高分句型2]. Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back.（使用了thugh 引导的让步状语从句）
4.（2022年浙江卷6月）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I needed t d smething in my cmmunity (社区) in rder t cmplete the cmmunity service hurs required t graduate frm high schl. Sme f my friends had signed up t spend time at a sup kitchen, s I did, t. It seemed like a gd thing t d.
I thught that we wuld just be passing ut dinners t thse in need, but I fund ut we wuld be ding everything frm preparing t serving the dinner. We began preparing the fd, frm mixing salad dressing t separating frzen meat. Much still needed t be dne befre dinner was served, but already utside the building many hmeless peple were gathering. It wasn’t until a cuple f hurs later that we pened the drs and began serving dinner.
As the line f peple came tward me, I gt a little scared. I’d cme face t face with the hmeless: Hw shuld I act? Hw wuld they treat me? Wuld they hate me fr having mre than they did? While sme f the peple lked very friendly, sme f them lked s dangerus. I didn’t have t much time t wrry abut it. I was assigned (分配) t serve the salad with the lady next t me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I fund quite cmfrting.
I had never seen s many peple wanting fd. They were f all ages and natinalities. Mst f them wre clthes that were trn and dirty. Sme lked like they had tally given up n life, while thers seemed t be making the best f the situatin, smiling and jking. Sme were better ff than thers, but they all needed a gd meal and a warm place t eat. It saddened me t think f hw many peple there were wh didn’t have a place t call hme and the nly fd they gt came frm a sup kitchen.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.
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Paragraph 2:
I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way.
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【答案】
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted t make them knw that I was really anxius t help them. T my relief, they smiled plitely back at me when they saw my smile, and I culd see their exhaustin in their eyes. I wanted t knw what they were ging thrugh and I was desperate t knw what I culd d fr them. They ndded gratefully as I pushed my spn int the pt and tk a large spnful and pured it int their bwls.
I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way. This experience made me realize that there are s many peple in this wrld wh need ur help. It als made me realize that ur small act f kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference t them. I will never frget the way they lked at me when they were given fd. I am anxius t urge the wrld t d everything pssible t help thse in need.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间，需要在所在的社区做点什么，作者去了施粥所，作者发现准备过程中要做的事情很多，作者看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕，但是却忙得没有时间去担心这些，作者看到了年龄和国籍各不相同的人，这让作者感到很难过。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候，我露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥。
②由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。”可知，第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟。
2.续写线索：无家可归的人笑——作者舀粥——无家可归的人感激——作者感悟——作者发出呼吁
3.词汇激活
行为类
①倒：pur/decant
②意识到：realize that/be aware that
③主张：urge sb. t d/advcate sb. t d
情绪类
①感谢：gratefully/thankfully
②急切的：anxius/eager
【点睛】[高分句型1] This experience made me realize that there are s many peple in this wrld wh need ur help. (由that引导的宾语从句和wh引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I will never frget the way they lked at me when they were given fd. (由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that和when引导的时间状语从句)
三年考情（2022-2024）
命题趋势
2024：新高考I卷&II卷：人与社会（打车费）
浙江1月：人与自我（校园话题）
2023 新高考I卷&II卷：人与自我（老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣）
浙江1月：人与动物（救助蜂鸟）
2022 新高考I卷&II卷；人与自我（鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑）
浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务）
浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务）
新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友情类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类。
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