新高考英语三轮冲刺重难点练习热点04 人物介绍之应用文写作押题(2份打包,原卷版+解析版)
展开纵览高考命题思路,2023年全国甲卷应用文写作中考到人物介绍的话题,虽然新高考卷没有出现,但是人物介绍依然是写作的热点话题,人物介绍主要要写该人物是谁,主要贡献是什么,该人物的影响等,所以平常考生要多积累人物介绍的素材,才能在考试中游刃有余。
(一)人物简介的写作步骤;(概,貌,育,平,估)
1)概.age, sex, birth-place, backgrund
2)貌,.)appearance ,character
3)育,educatin
4)平, big events in his r her life ( in rder f time )
5)估.evaluatin
(二) 语法,句法高分技巧
A. 概况 (尽量用同位语结构,分词)
B.外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语)
C. 教育经历 (注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼)
D.生平 (尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等,润色文章)
E.评估 (注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语,词组)
典例分析
(2023·浙江丽水·统考期末)假定你是李华,将参加学校举行的以“The Persn I am Especially Mved by”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 人物介绍;
2. 感动原因;
3. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear fellw students,
It’s my privilege t deliver a speech here. Of all the mst respectable peple, I am especially mved by Zhng Nanshan.
This 85-year-ld man with gray hair wrks really hard, fr the peple, fr the mtherland, fr his respnsibility. He is ne f Chinese heres vlunteering many times t fight against pandemics. The picture f him resting n the high-speed rail seat made us tuched and tearful. Such great cntributin did he make that he was awarded the Medal f the Republic. His deeds and spirit d make a great difference t me.
Thank yu.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿,主题为“The Persn I am Especially Mved by”,内容包括:人物介绍;感动原因;对你的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣耀:privilege→hnr
发表演讲:deliver a speech→make a speech
祖国:mtherland→hmeland
责任:respnsibility→duty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This 85-year-ld man with gray hair wrks really hard, fr the peple, fr the mtherland, fr his respnsibility.
拓展句:This 85-year-ld man whse hair is gray wrks really hard, fr the peple, fr the mtherland, fr his respnsibility.
【点睛】[高分句型1] He is ne f Chinese heres vlunteering many times t fight against pandemics. (运用了非谓语动词做后置定语)
[高分句型2] Such great cntributin did he make that he was awarded the Medal f the Republic. (运用了倒装句,即在“such…that+句子”句型中,such位于句首,该部分用部分倒装)
(建议用时:10分钟/篇)
1.(2023上·山东·高三校联考开学考试)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter对中国文学作品感兴趣,来信请你介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品,请你给他写一封e-mail,内容如下:
1.介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品;
2.说明你喜欢的理由。
注意:1、词数 80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear peter,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad t knw that yu are interested in Chinese classic wrks. Nw I am writing t intrduce Sushi and his wrks t yu.
Sushi lived in Sng Dynasty in ancient China. During his life, he created many wrks, including pems and many essays. I have read a lt f his wrks, and ne pem called Ode t Chibi is my favrite, which described ne big war breaking ut n the Yangtze River.
I admire Sushi fr his great cntributins t the literature and his high spirit when facing challenges. I am sure yu will als like his wrks.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封e-mail,介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
给……取名:call→name
肯定的:sure→certain
对……感兴趣:be interested in→shw interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During his life, he created many wrks, including pems and many essays.
拓展句:During his life, he created many wrks, which included pems and many essays.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad t knw that yu are interested in Chinese classic wrks. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I have read a lt f his wrks, and ne pem called Ode t Chibi is my favrite, which described ne big war breaking ut n the Yangtze River. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(2023·浙江金华·统考模拟预测)下周,你将参与你校与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上交流活动。请你准备一篇英语发言稿。内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear all,
It is my pleasure t share with yu tday abut my favrite artist, Vincent van Ggh. Van Ggh was a Dutch pst-impressinist painter, best knwn fr his vivid and expressive use f clr. One f his mst famus wrks is “Starry Night”, which depicts the night sky ver a village in France. The swirling stars and bld brushstrkes make the painting cme t life, cnveying a sense f mvement and emtin.
I admire van Ggh because f his ability t cnvey intense emtins thrugh his art. He had a difficult life, struggling with mental illness and pverty, but he fund cmfrt and meaning in his painting. His dedicatin and passin fr art are truly inspiring t me.
Thank yu fr listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上交流活动,要求考生准备一篇英语发言稿,介绍自己最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
乐事:pleasure → enjyment/delight
知名的:knwn → renwned/famus
描绘:depict → prtray
因为:because f → due t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Van Ggh was a Dutch pst-impressinist painter, best knwn fr his vivid and expressive use f clr.
拓展句:Van Ggh, wh is best knwn fr his vivid and expressive use f clr, was a Dutch pst-impressinist painter.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One f his mst famus wrks is “Starry Night”, which depicts the night sky ver a village in France. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The swirling stars and bld brushstrkes make the painting cme t life, cnveying a sense f mvement and emtin. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
3.(2023上·湖北襄阳·高三校联考期中)假如你是红星中学校报记者李华,请你为中学生英语报社写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
注意:1.写作字数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Amng the utstanding figures shining at the Hangzhu Asian Games, Wang Zngyuan is abslutely an impressive ne, wh demnstrated his exceptinal pwer and wn 2 diving gld medals fr China. Brn n Octber 24th, 2001, Wang Zngyuan spent mst f his childhd practicing gymnastics in his hmetwn, Xiangyang, hubei prvince. Then he was discvered as a talented diver. After jining in the natinal swimming team in 2017, Wang gt his first wrld champin in Tky Olympics in 2001, which pened his remarkable jurney in the swimming wrld.
Nt nly des Wang Zngyuan devte his wn pwer t the diving event f China, but he als sets a gd example t the yung swimmers in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中学生英语报社写一篇新闻报道,报道杭州亚运会两枚跳水金牌获得者王宗源的事迹。
【详解】1.词汇积累
优秀的:utstanding → superb
完全地:abslutely→ cmpletely
表现,显露:demnstrate →shw
非凡的:remarkable →extrardinary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Brn n Octber 24th, 2001, Wang Zngyuan spent mst f his childhd practicing gymnastics in his hmetwn, Xiangyang, hubei prvince.
拓展句:Wang Zngyuan ,wh was brn n Octber 24th, 2001, spent mst f his childhd practicing gymnastics in his hmetwn, Xiangyang, hubei prvince.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Amng the utstanding figures shining at the Hangzhu Asian Games, Wang Zngyuan is abslutely an impressive ne, wh demnstrated his exceptinal pwer and wn 2 diving gld medals fr China. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Nt nly des Wang Zngyuan devte his wn pwer t the diving event f China, but he als sets a gd example t the yung swimmers in China. (运用了部分倒装句)
4.(2023上·山东潍坊·高三统考阶段练习)假定你是李华,你班本周Class Reprt的主题是A Man f Perseverance。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括:
1. 人物事迹简介;
2. 给你的启示。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gd mrning, everyne. Tday, I’d like t share a stry abut a man f perseverance.
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Thanks fr yur listening.
【答案】One pssible versin:
Gd mrning, everyne. Tday, I’d like t share a stry abut a man f perseverance.
Thmas Edisn, the great inventr, faced numerus failures befre his grundbreaking success. He made cuntless attempts t invent the electric light bulb, experiencing ver a thusand failures. Hwever, instead f giving up, he famusly said, “I have nt failed. I’ve just fund 10,000 ways that wn’t wrk.” His tenacity and refusal t accept defeat ultimately led him t success, frever changing the wrld.
This stry teaches me a valuable lessn abut perseverance. It reminds me that failure is nt a reasn t quit but an pprtunity t learn and grw. It is thrugh persistence that we can vercme bstacles and achieve ur gals.
In cnclusin, let us remember the wrds f Thmas Edisn and embrace perseverance in ur wn lives.
Thanks fr yur listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇主题为A Man f Perseverance的发言稿参加本周的课堂报告,需简要介绍人物事迹,并分享自己得到的启示。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
无数的:numerus→cuntless, numberless, innumerable
经历:experience→underg, g thrugh
放弃:give up→quit, abandn
宝贵的:valuable→precius, treasurable
战胜:vercme→cnquer, surmunt
阻碍:bstacle→barrier, impediment
实现:achieve→accmplish, btain
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:His tenacity and refusal t accept defeat ultimately led him t success, frever changing the wrld.
拓展句:His tenacity and refusal t accept defeat ultimately led him t success, which has frever changed the wrld.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It reminds me that failure is nt a reasn t quit but an pprtunity t learn and grw. (运用了连接词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is thrugh persistence that we can vercme bstacles and achieve ur gals. (运用了It is…that…强调句型)
5.(2023下·湖北襄阳·高三襄阳市襄州区第一高级中学校考开学考试)进入新时代,我们的身边涌现出了许多青年榜样:如零零后消防员,零零后志愿者等。为了向青年榜样们学习,你校组织了主题为“We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility”的英语征文活动,请你投稿。
内容包括:
1. 青年榜样的突出品质;
2. 他们对你的影响;
3. 呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility
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【答案】We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility
Nwadays, many yung rle mdels have emerged in varius fields: pst-00s firefighters, pst-00s vlunteers, etc. They demnstrate their bravery and ambitin, especially, their sense f respnsibility.
They make me think abut ur respnsibility. As a student, study is ur pririty and we shuld shulder the respnsibility t cmplete ur studies seriusly and d slid wrk. Only if we are equipped with knwledge can we better serve ur cuntry. Meanwhile, we have t grw up with physical and mental health, which is what ur belved parents expect. That’s why we shuld nt shirk any respnsibility f lve and care.
T cnclude, I appeal t all the yung peple t learn frm them and shulder the respnsibility.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作,现要求考生写一篇“We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility”英语征文投稿。其内容包括:青年榜样的突出品质、他们对你的影响以及呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很多:many→plenty f
特别:especially →in particular
考虑:think abut→reflect n
应该:shuld→be suppsed t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They make me think abut ur respnsibility.
复合句:What they did made me think abut ur respnsibility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Only if we are equipped with knwledge can we better serve ur cuntry.(nly if放在句首的倒装句)
【高分句型2】That’s why we shuld nt shirk any respnsibility f lve and care.(why引导的表语从句)
6.(2023·河北·校联考三模)假定你是李华,受校英文报约稿,请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文,刊登在校英文报Peple专栏,内容包括:
1. 该人物的生平;
2. 他的主要事迹;
3. 你的评价。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Yuan Lngping, knwn as the “father f hybrid rice”, is ne f China’s mst famus scientists.
Yuan Lngping was brn in September 1930 and died in 2021, aged 91. He cultivated the wrld’s first high-yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly ne-fifth f the wrld’s ppulatin.
After fighting China’s fd shrtages, he turned his attentin t a much bigger challenge, slving wrld hunger. Since the 1980s, Yuan’s team has ffered training curses in dzens f cuntries in Africa, the Americas and Asia, prviding a huge fd surce in areas with high risks f famine.
Yuan Lngping’s legacy is nt nly the prgress f hybrid rice-his curisity, devtin, curage, perseverance, diligence, cperatin and selflessness have left an indelible spiritual wealth t us all.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于受校英文报约稿这一情况,写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文,刊登在校英文报Peple专栏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培育:cultivated→ breed
提供:ffer →prvide
巨大的:huge→ enrmus
财富:wealth→ treasure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Yuan Lngping, knwn as the “father f hybrid rice”, is ne f China’s mst famus scientists.
拓展句:Yuan Lngping, wh is knwn as the “father f hybrid rice”, is ne f China’s mst famus scientists.
【点睛】【高分句型1】He cultivated the wrld’s first high-yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly ne-fifth f the wrld’s ppulatin. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Since the 1980s, Yuan’s team has ffered training curses in dzens f cuntries in Africa, the Americas and Asia, prviding a huge fd surce in areas with high risks f famine. (运用了现在分词作状语)
7.(2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模)在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年逆行者榜样人物:00后消防员,00后志愿者等。你校正在组织“We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility”英语征文活动,请你投稿。
内容包括:1.青年榜样的突出品质;
2.他们对你的影响;
3.呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.参考词汇:00后:pst-2000s generatin/pst-00s;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility
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【答案】One pssible versin:
We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility
Recently many yung rle mdels emerged in the muntain fire in Chngqing and the Luding earthquake, in which pst-00s firefighters, pst-00s vlunteers shwed their bravery and ambitin, especially, their sense f respnsibility.
What they did made me think abut ur respnsibility. As yung peple, we have t wrk hard t serve the cuntry. As a student, we have a respnsibility t cmplete ur studies seriusly and steadfastly, enduring all kinds f hardship. We shuld nt escape any respnsibility f lve and care.
In a wrd, all f us yung peple shuld learn frm them and shulder ur respnsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校组织的以“We Shuld Shulder the Respnsibility”为题的英语征文活动投稿,内容包括青年榜样的品质、影响并呼吁学生向他们学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
承担,肩负:shulder →undertake
完成:cmplete →finish
忍受:endure →bear
总之:in a wrd →in shrt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As yung peple, we have t wrk hard t serve the cuntry.
拓展句:As yung peple, we have t wrk hard t serve the cuntry, which can shw ur lve fr ur cuntry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What they did made me think abut ur respnsibility.(运用了what引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】As a student, we have a respnsibility t cmplete ur studies seriusly and steadfastly, enduring all kinds f hardship.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
8.(2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末)假定你是李华,你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会,介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.做出的贡献;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Tu Yuyu
Tu Yuyu is a great Chinese medical scientist.
Determined t help thse suffering frm malaria, TuYuyu devted mst f her time t finding the cure. Luckily, her effrts paid ff. In 2015, she was awarded the Nbel Prize in Physilgy r Medicine fr discvering artemisinin, which is the key t the treatment f malaria. Behind her success were numerus failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.
S great is her cntributin t the wrld that she has becme an idl f many peple, including me. Inspired by her stry, I decide t study harder s as t realize my dream.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物,包括人物简介及其所做贡献并分享自己的感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
下定决心的:determined→reslved
幸运地:luckily→frtunately
努力:effrt→endeavr
无数的:numerus→cuntless
实现:realize→achieve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Determined t help thse suffering frm malaria, TuYuyu devted mst f her time t finding the cure.
拓展句:As she was determined t help thse suffering frm malaria, TuYuyu devted mst f her time t finding the cure.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In 2015, she was awarded the Nbel Prize in Physilgy r Medicine fr discvering artemisinin, which is the key t the treatment f malaria. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Behind her success were numerus failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.(运用了介词短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装)
【高分句型3】S great is her cntributin t the wrld that she has becme an idl f many peple, including me.(运用了s+形容词前置的倒装及s... that...引导的结果状语从句)
9.(2022·辽宁·校联考模拟预测)我们身边有许许多多值得我们学习的榜样。请你以“The Pwer f an Example”为题写一篇短文,投稿于你校英文报。内容包括:
1.你的学习榜样;
2.该榜样对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Pwer f an Example
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【答案】One pssible versin:
The Pwer f an Example
Cmrade Lei Feng, wh served peple whleheartedly, is the best example that I determine t fllw. March 5 is the “Learn frm Lei Feng Day”. Peple used t sing the sng “Learn frm Lei Feng's gd example”and d gd deeds that day, which influenced several generatins f peple.
As fr me, I impress n myself that we live t better thers' lives. That way I will d all in my pwer t help the peple in need as well as make the mst f my time t d well in all my subjects at schl. All in all, I am t have the “screw spirit” f creating extrardinary achievements in rdinary wrk based n my wn duties.
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【详解】1.词汇积累
影响:affect→ influence
充分利用:make the mst f →make the best f
全心全意地:with heart and sul→ whleheartedly
帮助:assist→ help
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:In cnclusin, we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
拓展句:In cnclusin, we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages, finding a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
【点睛】[高分句型1] . Cmrade Lei Feng, wh served peple whleheartedly, is the best example that I determine t fllw.(wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Peple used t sing the sng “Learn frm Lei Feng's gd example”and d gd deeds that day, which influenced several generatins f peple.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
人物
王宗源,男,2001年10月24日出生于湖北襄阳
事件
杭州亚运会获得两枚跳水金牌。六岁前学习体操,游泳,后转跳水,2017年进国家跳水队。曾获2021年东京奥运会男子跳水冠军。
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