2024届高三英语基础写作课件：倡议书-倡议志愿者活动

这是一份2024届高三英语基础写作课件：倡议书-倡议志愿者活动，共27页。PPT课件主要包含了倡议背景+目的，意义 +再次呼吁，一般现在一般将来，要点描写的角度不对，考场作文欣赏等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假如你是某学生会主席李华，为了迎接国际志愿者日的到来，请你以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议信，号召参加主题为“互助,互爱”的志愿者活动, 内容包括: 1. 倡议目的; 2. 活动内容; 3. 呼吁参加。(Internatinal Vlunteer Day)(mutual assistance and care)
审题五问：文体：对象+语气：人称：时态：每段要点： para 1 para.2 para.3
倡议信；目的是倡议而非建议
全体师生
“以学生会的名义”：第一 /三
告知/ 介绍活动内容 （时地人；具体活动）
语气：积极热情；但不卑微
advcate ding appeal t sb. t d call n sb. t d call fr sth
requirements f the writing
Para. 1 占比篇幅太大
Internatinal Vlunteer Day, cmmnly knwn as IVD, is celebrated n 5 December every year. It started as an internatinal bservance 习俗、仪式 mandated (授权) by the United Natins General Assembly (议会/集会) in 1985. It is a day when vlunteers are acknwledged and the spirit f vlunteerism is prmted at the lcal, natinal and internatinal levels.
backgrund infrmatin
倡议目的1：迎接国际志愿者日 (Internatinal Vlunteer Day) 的到来 T celebrate/ bserve/ mark/ embrace the Internatinal Vlunteer Day With the appraching f the Internatinal Vlunteer Day... With the Internatinal Vlunteer Day drawing near/ arund the crner...为了 in a bid t/ with the purpse f/ with the bjective f/ aim t d/ be aimed at ding/ in an effrt t d/ in an attempt t d...
Hw t rganize para.1 ?
倡议目的2：做志愿者有什么好处persnal develpment (加强，增强) bst /enhance / strengthen/ fster /cultivate /facilitate (能力) willpwer /cperatin / teamwrk/ a strng sense (awareness) f respnsibility (achievement) / prblem-slving skills / interpersnal skills/ self-cnfidence/ a sense f empathy / `empəθi / 同情 and slidarity /ˌsɔlɪˈdærɪti/ 团结 // mutual understanding (塑造) shape character/ persnality (获得，丰富) gain valuable experience/ enrich extracurricular life shw cmpassin 同情, cmmitment and cperatin
倡议的目的3: scial cntributin cntributes t the well-being f the cmmunity 为社会的福祉做出贡献 give back t the cmmunity 回馈社会 cntributes t the imprvement/ betterment f sciety 有助于社会变得更好 Make the cmmunity mre harmnius and prsperus. 让社会更和谐，更繁荣
考场作文欣赏(单个目的)
考场作文欣赏 (多个目的)
In a bid t embrace the Internatinal Vlunteer Day, I n behalf f the Student Unin, appeal t all the teachers and students t actively engage in the vlunteer campaign with/ n the theme f “mutual assistance and care”.In an attempt t welcme the appraching f the Internatinal Day, I’m nw exceedingly glad t call upn all f yu t participate in the activity titled/ entitled “ mutual assistance and care” n behalf f the Student Unin.T celebrate the appraching f Internatinal Vlunteer Day, a vlunteer activity with the theme f “mutual assistance and care” is scheduled t be held/ launched/ munted next Friday. I’m writing t call n everyne t engage in.In a bid t embrace the cming f Internatinal Vlunteer Day, we are here t advcate everyne getting invlved/ engaged in the vluntary activities with the theme f “mutual assistance and care”
Appreciatin
假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将于下周开展以 “Labr is the Mst Beautiful” 为主题的劳动周活动，请你以学生会的名义发起倡议。T fuel ur enthusiasm fr labr, ur schl is scheduled t hld an activity n the theme f “Labr is the Mst Beautiful”. On behalf f the Student Unin, I’m here t appeal t yur participatin genuinely.In a bid t raise labr awareness amng us, the Labr Week themed n “Labr is the Mst Beautiful” is scheduled t be held next week and we are appealing t everyne t actively engage in the activities.
practice makes perfect
10月16日是世界粮食日(Wrld Fd Day)，你校为了提高学生珍惜粮食的意识举办了一系列活动。假定你是校学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义发起倡议。T celebrate Wrld Fd Day, which falls n Octber 16th, a series f theme activities will be held in ur schl, hping/ meant/ intended t heighten/ prmte ur awareness/ cnsciusness f cherishing/ treasuring fd. On behalf f the Student Unin, I’m here t appeal t yur participatin genuinely.
D yu think the cntent is rganized well?
要点内容不突出，笔墨太少
要点不对题，不能体现核心内容，无效信息
Hw t rganize para.2 ?
活动内容：活动参与者、活动时间、活动地点，具体内容pay a visit t the elderly hme / the Nursing Hme 养老院pay a visit t a lcal rphanage /`ɔrfənədʒ / 孤儿院raise mney fr lcal charity (disaster/ pverty-stricken area) hld a charity/ bk sale t raise mney fr the less frtunatehld a fundraising activity fr the lcal charityvlunteer at the children’s hspital/ sup kitchen/ fd bankpick up/ cllect garbage in the parkdistribute water and fd t the city cleaners Hw t cmbine them tgether?
what vluntary wrk we can d
列举式/ 一般特殊式Firstly; Additinally/ Plus/ Apart frm that/ MreverVarius kinds f vluntary activities will be rganized/ staged, ranging ; ne f the highlight f the event will what highlights the event will be... 时间顺序It will kick ff /cmmence with...; Sth. serve as a curtain-raiser (前奏开幕戏) t... What fllws will be...; Subsequently; Subsequent t that will ..., the activity will be brught t an end.
Hw t intrduce activities?
First we will visit nursing hme nearby and we will d a beach clean-up. At last, we will raise mney fr a charity prgram.增加表时间的连接词过度；增加定语从句和非谓语 (补充细节)The event will cmmence with/ kick ff with a visit t the nursing hme in ur cmmunity, where we will engage in cleaning activities fr the elderly and share ur jy with them. Fllwing that, we will cnduct a beach clean-up, prviding us with the pprtunity t participate in garbage srting at the castal turist spts. The highlight f the activity will invlve fundraising fr a charity prgram, bringing the event t a meaningful cnclusin.
Hw t plish?
The activity pssesses a lt f cntent, including visiting islated elderly and prviding fd fr children. Besides, we will help street cleaners. We will spread lve t the wrld.增加表列举的连接词，非谓语(补充细节)，增加形容词，从句Arranged t take place n Mar. 1st, the rewarding activity pssesses abundant cntent, ranging frm visiting islated elderly individuals t prviding sufficient fd fr hmeless children. Additinally, assisting street cleaners in their clean-up effrts may be the highlight f the activity. During this time, students have a glden/ marvellus pprtunity t fster virtues f kindness and circulate warmth and lve arund the wrld.What highlights the activity...
13分内容：要点齐全，表述清楚，词汇语法：句式丰富，有非谓语，定语从句，倒装句等。词汇丰富准确，语言表达多样篇章结构：上下文衔接合理、连贯
t a highlight.
We strngly advcate making jint effrts t spread kindness and cmpassin fr the betterment f ur sciety.Let’s spring int actin frm nw n. Even the smallest acts can make a significant difference t the cmmunity.Tgether, individuals can make a difference. With everyne endeavring t d his bit, I’m psitive that we can embrace a mre brilliant future.Rse given ,fragrance in hand. Dn’t hesitate anymre and jump at the chance/ cherish the pprtunity t make a brighter wrld!The whle activity is nt nly a matter f vluntary wrk but als a matter f mutual assistance and care. Tgether, let’s take immediate actin t render them ur helping hand t inspire psitive changes and t start the chain f kindness.
Hw t put an end t the writing?
In a bid t embrace the cming f Internatinal Vlunteer Day, we are here t advcate that all the teachers and students get invlved in the vluntary activities with the theme f “mutual assistance and care”. The event ,which falls n December 5th, will cmmence with a visit t the nursing hme in ur cmmunity, where we will engage in cleaning activities fr the elderly and share ur jy with them. Fllwing that, we will cnduct a beach clean-up, prviding us with the pprtunity t participate in garbage srting at the castal turist spts. The highlight f the activity will invlve fundraising fr a charity prgram, bringing the event t a meaningful cnclusin. The whle activity is nt nly a matter f vluntary wrk but als a matter f mutual assistance and care. Tgether, let’s take immediate actin t render them ur helping hand t inspire psitive changes and t start the chain f kindness.
Dear teachers and schlmates, As president f the Students’ Unin, I am thrilled t annunce the upcming celebratin f Internatinal Vlunteer Day n December 5th that serves as a reminder f the imprtance f mutual assistance and care within ur cmmunity. T cmmemrate/ celebrate 纪念 this meaningful ccasin, ur Student Unin is rganizing a series f vlunteer activities centered arund the theme f “Mutual Assistance and Care”. These activities will include vlunteering at lcal shelters, rganizing dnatin activity fr thse in need, and spreading kindness thrughut ur campus. I urge each and every ne f yu t jin us in making a psitive impact n ur cmmunity by participating in these vlunteer activities. Tgether, let’s embdy 体现 the spirit f mutual assistance and care, and make a difference t the lives f thers.the Students’ Unin
T celebrate the upcming Internatinal Vlunteer Day, we are appealing t all f yu fr yur active participatin in a vlunteer campaign with the theme f “mutual assistance and care”. The campaign, which falls n December 5th, cnsists f tw activities, and yu can sign up fr either ne f them. One is a visit t the lcal nursing hme t help care fr the elderly, such as chatting and teaching them hw t use smart phnes. Anything that can bring them fun and laughter will d. The ther is a fundraising event fr the lcal charity, where diverse handmade crafts and abundant secnd-hand items dnated by the vlunteers will be n sale. Thrugh these activities, nt nly will the spirit f mutual assistance and care be prmted but als ur sense f scial respnsibility will be enhanced. We strngly advcate everybdy making jint effrts t shwcase ur cmpassin and cmmitment and ding ur bit fr a better sciety.
(类似练习) 教育部发文要求每个中小学生都要参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。内容包括： 1. 志愿者活动的益处；2. 可以开展的志愿者活动；3. 发出倡议。Dear schlmates, Vlunteering is playing a crucial rle in students’ verall develpment. With the apprach f winter vacatin, it’ s high time that we tk up vlunteering.___________________________________________________________________ Yurs Sincerely, Li Hua
put what we’ve learnt int practice