专题15 书信邮件类之感谢信-2024年中考英语作文押题
展开感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件,通常用于收到别人的邀请或受到别人的帮助时。感谢信的写作目的非常明确,只要把需要感谢的人和事写清楚就行。
写作方法指导
感谢信的写作,可以分以下三段进行:
第一段,简述写信的目的,诚挚地表达谢意,
第二段,表明感谢的原因,回顾对方所做的具体事情,
第三段,再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。
写作模板
Dear ,(称呼)
①Hw is yur life/study/wrk recently? In this letter I wuld like t thank yu fr yur .(原因)/I'm writing t express my heartfelt gratitude.
②I am writing t yu because .(所做的事)Thanks t yur help,I Withut yur help,I culdn't .It's s kind f yu t .
③ Thank yu again fr what yu have dne. I hpe t have the chance t express my thanks. I hpe | can meet yu smetime and express my thanks in persn.(愿望)
④All the best!
Yurs sincerely,
(署名)
注:
①问候并表明写作意图
②详细描写感谢的原因
③再次表示感谢并抒发愿望
④表达祝愿
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
常用表达
必备亮点词汇
heartfelt adj.衷心的gratitude n.感激grateful adj.感谢的,感激的
sincerely adv.真诚地kindness n.善良hspitality n.热情好客,款待
express v.表达d sb. a favr 帮忙in persn 亲自
frm the bttm f ne's heart 从心底frm the bttm f ne's heart
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
Hw time flies!时间过得真快啊!
I am writing t express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。
Hw is yur stay 您在······待着感觉怎么样?
I am writing t yu because I want t tell yu a piece f gd news 我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。
I am writing t yu because I want t thank yu fr yur hspitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。
I'm writing t express my thanks fr...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。
I am writing t yu because...因为······,我给您写这封信。
I'm writing t thank yu fr yur great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助!
出彩篇中句
Many thanks fr yur kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。
Thank yu fr yur generus hspitality.多谢您的款待。
Thanks t yur help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助,我才得到了这个奖。
精彩篇尾句
I hpe I can express my thanks t yu in persn.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。
I'm sincerely grateful fr all yur help.对于您的帮助,我真的非常感激。
Thank yu fr yur kindness t have dne me a favur.对于您的善意的帮忙,我向您表示感谢。
Many thanks fr all the gd things yu have dne in helping us t...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。
I am glad t hear that yu will visit ur schl sn.听说您很快会来我们学校参观,我特别高兴。
中考真题精讲
(2021·湖北黄石·中考真题)
As an ld saying ges, “A true friend reaches fr yur hand and tuches yur heart.” 假如你叫李华,在你的初中学习生涯中,一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际,请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。
要点:
1. 感谢他(她)对你的帮助。
2. 他(她)是如何帮助你的。
要求:
1. 请结合具体事例,适当发挥;语言通顺,意思连贯。
2. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息。
3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Lei,
Hw time flies! We are ging t graduate frm junir high schl. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wish yu all the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Li Lei,
Hw time flies! We are ging t graduate frm junir high schl.
Hw is yur study recently? In this letter I wuld like t thank yu fr yur help in the past three years .I'm writing t express my heartfelt gratitude.
I am writing t yu because yu always helped me when I had difficulty learning during the three years f study . My study prgress can’t be ging smthly withut yu.Especially in English,I make a s rapid prgress ,yur help and suggestin is f great value t me .It's s kind f yu t accmpany me thrugh the junir middle schl three years.
Thank yu again fr what yu have dne. I hpe t have the chance t express my thanks. I hpe I can meet yu smetime and express my thanks in persn.
Wish yu all the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求针对初中生活好友的帮助,给李雷写一封感谢信,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文,时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题,感谢对方的帮助;第二段介绍他是如何帮助你的;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(2021·广西柳州·中考真题)
假设你是李华,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter t My Parents”的短文,用于投稿。
注意:
1.词数70左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
感谢某人
养育raise
做饭ck fd
生病be sick
信任trust
关心care abut
个人感受persnal feeling
处于困难中be in truble
健康的 healthy
A Letter t My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing t express my thanks fr all yur care and lve.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again fr everything yu have dne fr me.
Lve,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
A Letter t My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing t express my thanks fr all yur care and lve.
First f all, I want t thank yu fr raising me.Yu ck fr me every day and taking care f me when I’m sick.,I can’t grw healthy Withut yur help and attendance.Yu always trust and care abut my persnal feelings. I can't get ut f the trubles withut yur encurage .It's s kind f yu t give me thughtful kindness.S I have t study hard t repay yu. At the same time, I wish yu keep healthy and happy.
Thanks again fr everything yu have dne fr me.
Lve,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇给材料的书信作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写一篇题为“A Letter t My Parents”的短文,来感恩父母。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:短文主要以第一人称来行文,时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出,也给出了相关要点的词汇,在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。注意保证语法正确,无单词的拼写错误。
(2017·黑龙江·中考真题)
假如你是Mary,初中学习生活即将结束,请向你的老师(Mr. White)致谢,感谢他对你一直以来的教育、关心和帮助,并祝福老师健康快乐。
Dear Mr.White,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Mary
【参考范文】
Dear Mr.White,
Hw is yur wrk recently?Leaving yu and lvely junir schl life, I have s many wrds frm my heart t say.
I am writing t yu because yu are a hardwrking,kind and strict teacher.Yur lessns are always interesting. And yu are friendly t us. Yu’re strict with us in study and als take care f us kindly. All my classmates agree that we get n well with each ther fr these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, yu encuraged me t keep trying. When I had truble in life, yu tld me t be brave. Thanks t yur help,I can make a rapid prgress in the past three years.Withut yur help,I culdn't be mre and mre interested in English and get a such gd grades.It's s kind f yu t given me s much. .
Thank yu again fr what yu have dne. I hpe t have the chance t express my thanks. I hpe I can meet yu smetime and express my thanks in persn.
All the best!
Yurs,
Mary
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目是书信类书面表达,要求向自己的老师写一封感谢信,并祝老师健康快乐。
2.写作指导:该题目人称主要使用第一人称和第二人称,时态主要使用一般过去时;内容包括:感谢老师对自己的教育、关心和帮助,并祝福老师健康快乐,同时注意结构要清晰条理,无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
名校模拟题提升练10篇
(2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测)
假如你是李平,三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好,你最想感谢Mr. Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助,请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信,表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。
内容提示:
Why d yu write this letter?
What did Mr. Jin d t help yu?
Hw d yu feel abut yur mistake?
Smething mre abut yur experience.
…
注意:字数60-80字;内容要连贯得体,不要逐条翻译;表达流畅、书写整洁,信的首尾已给出,不计入总字数;文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate sn. Lking back at the past three years, I have a lt t say.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate sn. Lking back at the past three years, I have much t say t yu. Yu helped me with my lessns when I didn’t d well in my study. Yu asked me t wear mre clthes t keep warm. Yu have given me s much help and encuragement. But I have dne many things that made yu angry. Last term, when we had classes nline, I spent t much time playing cmputer games. I gt bad grades withut dubt. Yu tried yur best t help me and frmed my study habits.
Yu always tld me I culd d better. I’ve changed a lt. I think I shuld say srry and thanks t yu. Best wishes t yu and yur family.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”,“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我(李平)最想感谢Mr. Jin在学习上、生活上甚至在我犯错误的时候给予我帮助的介绍。表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍三年的初中生活就要结束了,为感激老师而写这封信;
第二步,介绍在学习上、生活上甚至在自己犯错误的时候老师给予自己的帮助;
第三步,表达自己因做错事抱歉的感受以及感激和依依惜别之情。
[亮点词汇]
① d well in擅长,在……干得好
② keep warm保温
③ had classes nline在线上课
④ withut dubt毫无疑问
[高分句型]
① But I have dne many things that made yu angry.(定语从句)
② Last term, when we had classes nline, I spent t much time playing cmputer games.(when引导时间状语从句)
③ I think I shuld say srry and thanks t yu.(宾语从句)
2.(2023·福建厦门·统考二模)
感恩是中华民族的传统美德,懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段,一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际,以信传情。
请你根据要点提示,给你最想感谢的人写一封信,心怀感恩。
内容要点:
1. 表达对他/她的感谢;
2. 回顾过去暖心的经历;
3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Ms. Lee,
I want t say “thank yu” t yu. In my junir high schl life, yu helps me a lt.
Yu take gd care f me and ften help me with my English. When I am in truble, yu always encurage me t face my difficulties and give me gd advice. I still remember that nce I failed in an imprtant English exam and was upset. Yu cheered me up and tld me sme gd ways t imprve my English. Thanks t yu, I have made great prgress in English and am becming mre and mre interested in it.
I’m very thankful fr all that yu have dne fr me. I hpe that yu are healthy and happy every day.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁,表达感谢;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍过去经历;
第三步,书写结语。表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take gd care f好好照顾
②encurage鼓励
③upset烦恼的
④made great prgress取得极大的进步
[高分句型]
①When I am in truble, yu always encurage me t face my difficulties and give me gd advice.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I still remember that nce I failed in an imprtant English exam and was upset. (that引导宾语从句)
3.(2023·吉林长春·吉林省第二实验学校校考一模)
假如你是刘薇,在美国学习期间,你的寄宿家庭布朗夫妇对你帮助很大。下周一,你就要回国了。请给布朗夫妇写一封感谢信,表达你对他们的感激之情。
内容:
1.感到宾至如归;
2.英语进步很大;
3.邀请布朗夫妇来长春共度春节。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;语言简洁;不少于40词。
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr and Mrs Brwn,
I will return t China next Mnday. I’m writing t shw my thanks t yu. Yu are s kind t me and make me feel at hme. With yur help, my English has imprved a lt. Wuld yu like t cme t Changchun t spend the Spring Festival with my family? I’m lking frward t yur cming.
Best wishes.
Liu Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为感谢信;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的关键信息,写感谢信表达对布朗夫妇的感激之情并邀请他们来长春共度春节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信的目的是表示感谢;
第二步,介绍布朗夫妇对自己的帮助;
第三步,邀请布朗夫妇来长春与自己家人共度春节。
[亮点词汇]
①return t 返回
②be kind t sb. 对某人友善
③make sb. feel at hme 使某人感到宾至如归
④lk frward t ding sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
Wuld yu like t cme t Changchun t spend the Spring Festival with my family?(表示邀请的常见句型)
4.(2023·吉林长春·统考二模)假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(President f the student unin),现在请你代表全校师生,为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。
要点包括:
①感谢您每日辛勤劳动;
②为了保护生态环境,我们坚持不乱扔垃圾,为呵护环境尽一份力;
③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息,我们为您提供热水和食物。
要求:
以上要点全部包括,可以适当补充,语言清晰流畅,书写工整,不少于40词。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Dear the lveliest peple,
I am the President f the student unin in the third grade f ur schl. I am writing this letter n behalf f all the teachers and students in the schl t thank yu fr yur hard cleaning every day.
First f all, all f us thank yu fr yur hard wrk every day. In additin, in rder t prtect the eclgical envirnment, we insist n nt littering and d ur part t prtect the envirnment. Last but nt least, if yu are tired frm wrk, yu can cme t ur schl t have a rest at any time. We will prvide yu with ht water and fd.
In a wrd, yu are the lveliest peple in the wrld. Because f yu, ur wrld is s beautiful.
President f the student unin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封感谢信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的是为了感谢环卫工人的辛勤劳动;
第二步,具体从“感谢环卫工人辛勤劳动、我们应该如何做以及我们对环卫工人提供的帮助”几方面来表达感谢;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in rder t为了
②have a rest休息
③because f因为
[高分句型]
①In additin, in rder t prtect the eclgical envirnment, we insist n nt littering and d ur part t prtect the envirnment.(目的状语从句)
②Last but nt least, if yu are tired frm wrk, yu can cme t ur schl t have a rest at any time. (条件状语从句)
5.(2023·辽宁丹东·统考一模) 假如你叫李华,是一名交换生。为期一年的法国交换生活即将结束,回国前,你的法国同学为你举办了盛大的欢送派对。请写封感谢信,感谢精彩的派对以及在法国期间同学们的帮助,你期待着再次去法国,同时表达你对同学们的祝福。
要求:字迹工整,表达清晰有条理。词数 30 左右。
Dear classmates,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
Thank yu fr having a farewell party fr me. I am s appreciative. We had a great time at the party. I als thank yu fr helping me during my stay in France. I am s lucky t meet these friends. I will miss yu and am lking frward t cming t France sn. I wish yu all the best.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己的感谢;
第二步,表达自己会怀念这些朋友,以及对同学们的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①thank yu fr ding sth因为做某事感谢
②have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
I am s lucky t meet these friends.(动词不定式作原因状语)
6.(2023·全国·一模)假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国,请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括:
1. 表达感激之情;
2. 回忆各种收获;
3. 发出邀请。
注意:
1. 必须包含所有要点,词数80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
Dear Li Hua,
Hw are yu ding these days?
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu sn.
Yurs,
Jim
【答案】例文:
Dear Li Hua,
Hw are yu ding these days?
I am writing t cnvey my gratitude fr yur kind help and care during my stay in yur cuntry, withut which I wuldn’t have enjyed it s much.
Guided by yu, I had a chance t visit sme places f interest in China and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks t yur generus help, I d believe that I have a better understanding f yur cuntry and culture. What’s mre, I learned sme Chinese sngs with yur help.
I will be mre than pleased if I have the pprtunity t repay yur kindness. I will shw yu arund my cuntry.
Lking frward t seeing yu sn.
Yurs,
Jim
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息,写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明写信的目的是表示感谢;
第二步,回忆自己的收获;
第三步,邀请对方到自己的国家。
[亮点词汇]
①places f interest 名胜古迹
②thanks t 多亏了
[高分句型]
①I am writing t cnvey my gratitude fr yur kind help and care during my stay in yur cuntry, withut which I wuldn’t have enjyed it s much.(“介词+which”引导定语从句)
②I will be mre than pleased if I have the pprtunity t repay yur kindness.(if引导的条件状语从句)
7.(2023·天津·模拟预测)初中阶段的学习生活即将结束,回想自己在妈妈的关爱和帮助下的成长过程,心中充满感恩之情。请你根据以下要点提示以李华的名义给妈妈写一封感谢信。
(1)自从我出生,您就一直照顾我;
(2) 每天早上早起准备早点、水果,每天晚上做可口的饭菜;
(3) 每天陪我写作业,复习功课;
(4) 当我遇上麻烦,您总是鼓励我并帮我解决问题;
(5) 妈妈,谢谢您……
参考词汇:解决slve 陪伴accmpany
要求:(1)词数:80—100个。
(2)信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Mum,
Hw time flies! I will graduate frm middle schl. With the care and help f yu, I have made great prgress.
Yu__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mum,
Hw time flies! I will graduate frm middle schl. With the care and help f yu, I have made great prgress.
Yu have taken care f me all the time since I was brn. Every mrning yu get up early in rder t make breakfast and get fruit ready fr me. Every evening I can enjy the delicius fd which yu make fr me. When I d my hmewrk and g ver lessns every night, yu ften accmpany me till midnight.Whenever I am in truble, yu always encurage me and help me slve prblems.
Thank yu, my dear mther. I am s thankful fr yur lve that I’ll wrk harder and try t d better in the future.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要根据题干中的提示内容给自己的妈妈写一封感谢信,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段已给出;第二段主要根据题干中的提示具体描述妈妈为自己做的事情;第三段表达对妈妈的感激之情。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
8.(2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模)若说青春是一段旅程,初中三年一定是其重要的一程。回顾过往三年,你一定感慨万千:谁在你成功时为你呐喊?谁在你失败时给你安慰和力量?谁又在你彷徨时指引你前进?也许是父母,也许是老师,也许是同伴……毕业在即,你一定有话想对他们说。假如你是李悦,请围绕以下要点写一篇英文感谢信:
(1)Wh d yu want t write t?
(2)Why d yu want t write t the persn?
(3)What happened between yu and the persn?
(4)What have yu learned frm the experience?
注意:1. 内容必须包含以上要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 不少于100词
Dear ______________,
I am writing t express my sincere thanks t yu because
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Yue
【答案】例文:
Dear Miss Ga,
I am writing t express my sincere thanks t yu because yu have helped me a lt in the past three years.
I still remember that yu devted yur spare time t helping me with my English. I wasn’t gd at English when I entered this schl. Thus, I was s wrried abut it that I ften cried silently after class. It was yu wh cmfrted me a lt and prmised t help me imprve it. I was advised t read alud in the mrning and speak as much as pssible in class. Because f yur useful advice and my hard wrk, I have made great prgress in English in the past three years. Last year, I came first in the final English exam and bth f us were very excited!
I will never frget yu thugh I will leave yu sn. I really hpe ne day I will becme an excellent English teacher like yu s that I will help mre children like me fall in lve with English!
Best wishes,
Li Yue
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示问题写感谢信,在信中要有人物、原因、事件、学到了什么等内容。可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要先补全信件开头。正文以第一、二人称为主,结合具体语境采用合适的时态。在信中突出要感谢谁、感谢对方的原因、两人之间发生过什么事情、从中学到了什么。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
9.(2023·重庆合川·统考一模)书面表达。
拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满,回国后写一一封感谢信,同时指出了同学们的一些不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华,请根据要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件。
要点提示:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 表达意愿(告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为);
3. ……
要求:
1. 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t receive yur email.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t receive yur email. Thank yu fr telling us s much. I’m very srry fr what we have dne.
As a student, we shuld learn t have gd habits. First, we will keep quiet in public. Als, we will n lnger thrw things here and there. What’s mre, we wn’t write r draw n the desks and ther places, and we will be mre plite t thers.
I’d like t invite yu t visit ur schl again. I’m sure yu will see a clearer schl.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析:考查提纲类作文,要求我们以学生会主席李华的身份给Peter写一封信,信中的主要内容包括对Peter提出的自己学校里存在的一些不良行为表示感谢,并表示决心改正这些不好的行为习惯。我们需要正确的英语将这些内容表达出来,动笔前,我们需要仔细分析需要表达的内容要点,不能遗漏要点,更不能跑题偏题。写作时注意运用正确时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
写作亮点:这篇短文中作者根据题目的要求给Peter写了回信,对Peter指出学校存在一些不良行为表示感谢,并下决心改正学生们的这些行为。短文内容完整,句意连贯。范文中使用了一些短语,如Thank yu fr, 因为某事而感谢某人;be srry fr因为…感到抱歉; learn t d sth., 学会做某事;keep quiet,保持安静; n lnger, 不再;here and there, 到处;What’s mre, 而且;be plite t thers, 对某人有礼貌;invite sb. t d sth.,邀请某人去做某事等。这些短语的使用增强了文章表现力,使文意更连贯。
10.(2022·黑龙江鸡西·校考模拟预测)假如你是刘华,Lucy送你一张英语学习卡作为生日礼物。它对你的学习非常有帮助,你也特别喜欢它。请你给Lucy写一封感谢信,表达你的感激之情。
Dear Lucy,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Liu Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lucy,
Thank yu fr yur English-studying cards. It helps me a lt with my English. I like it wery much. It’s my best birthday gift. Thank yu again.
Yurs,
Liu hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇感谢信,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。感谢对方送的英语学习卡;
第二步,介绍学习卡对自己的帮助并再次表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①Thank yu fr...感谢……
②very much非常
[高分句型]
①It helps me a lt with my English.(help sb. with sth)
②It’s my best birthday gift.(形容词最高级)
你的感谢
父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你
父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你
你的决心
努力学习
你的祝愿
祝愿父母健康快乐
Dear Mr and Mrs Brwn,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Liu Wei
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