高中英语2024届高考复习应用文投稿写作讲解和练习

这是一份高中英语2024届高考复习应用文投稿写作讲解和练习，共8页。
【写作指导】
把握投稿的写作框架。其写作框架如下：
第一段：开门见山，引出话题。
第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。
第三段：表达愿望。
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之第一段
词汇积累
第一段：引出话题
1.as we all knw, as is knwn t all,
众所周知
2.it is widelyacknwledged
人们普遍认为...
3.Nwadays, with the develpment with the increasing ppularity f ...
如今，随着...的发展/流行 when it cmes t 当谈到...时
4.In the lng span f the Chinese histry...
在中国漫长的历史中
5.When it cmes t prtecting the cean, it is well-knwn that cean plays an imprtant part in ur life.
说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
第二段：介绍主题细节
1.Nt nly des exercise build up ur bdies but als helps us stay energetic.
锻炼不仅能锻炼我们的身体，还能帮助我们保持活力。
2.Only if we take actin t exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
3.My favrite scientist is Qian Xuesen, a ________, __________________________ scientist.
我最喜欢的科学家是钱学森，一个________，__________________________科学家
第三段：表达愿望
1.I sincerely hpe Yuth will achieve greater success and enjy mre ppularity.
我真诚地希望青年能取得更大的成功，更受欢迎。
2.I believe that with the tips abve we will becme smart nline learners.
我相信，有了以上提示，我们将成为聪明的在线学习者。
3.Fr ne thing , nt nly des the cean ffers us varius f sea fd t eat, but als it is hme t many kinds f animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
【万能句式】
一、篇首句
1.An article in the newspaper caught my attentin.
报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意。
2.I want t talk abut “Hw Scial Media affect Peple's live” in yur clumn.
我想在你的专栏里谈谈“社交媒体如何影响人们的生活”。
3.There are many peple wh I respect .As fr me, my father is the ne I respect.The reasns why I respect him are as fllws.
近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。
4.Nwadays, with the develpment f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm by using them.
如今，随着智能手机和电脑的发展，越来越多的学生选择在课堂以外使用它们来学习英语。
5.In the lng span f the Chinese histry, the existence f the utstanding Cnfucius is like a shining pearl.
在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。
cnsidered t be ne f the mst influential figures in histry due t his/her accmplishments/achievements/impact].
某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。
二、篇中句
1.Nwadays many students care t much abut high grades, which cntributes t grwing inapprpriate behavirs in exams.
现在许多学生过于关心高分，导致考试中的不当行为增多。
2.Nwadays, with the imprvement f the standard f living, an increasing number f teenagers suffer frm besity, which aruses scial cncerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。
3.Nt nly des playing basketball build up my bdy and relieve stress frm study, but it als prmtes friendship with thers.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
4.As a high schl student, I nticed that many students had a series f health prblems because f irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
5.I will greatly appreciate a respnse frm yu at yur earliest cnvenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
三、篇尾句
1.We hpe that with all these measures taken, eyesight prblems can be greatly reduced.
我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。
2.I sincerely hpe Yuth will achieve greater success and have a prmising future.
我衷心希望Yuth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。
3.I sincerely hpe that thrugh mre understanding f Cnfucius and his Cnfucianism, we can make the wrld filled with mre lve, justice and peace.
我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。
【高考真题链接】
1.(202年全国甲卷)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2.意义或启示。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。
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【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：well-knwn → famus
人物：figure → persn
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：fundatin → basis
【范文】
Cnfucius is a well-knwn figure in Chinese histry.His teachings emphasized the imprtance f mral values, respect fr elders, and scial harmny.Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety.
The significance f Cnfucius cannt be verstated.His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge.Even tday, his ideas cntinue t guide individuals and cmmunities in China and beynd.
Cnfucius’s life ffers valuable lessns.He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld.His teachings remind us f the imprtance f integrity, cmpassin, and scial respnsibility.
2.（2023年全国乙卷）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：pprtunity → chance
使沮丧：demralize → discurage
满意的：satisfied → cntent
空闲的：leisure → spare
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply.I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply, s I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely.(运用了althugh引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
【范文】
When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl.That was the first time I watched a live musical perfrmance.The fantastic players tuched me deeply.
I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.In the beginning, it was quite difficult t read the ntes n the stave.Hwever, it did nt demralize me.I spent mst f my leisure hurs t practice pian.Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely.
Even thugh I will nt pursue as my life career, I will still cntinue learning and playing pian as my hbby.It is simply because music is the best medicatin fr my sul.
【名校模拟题提升练】
1.（2024·河北·高三承德市双滦区实验中学阶段练习）假定你是李华，为保护学生的视力，你校英语报正在举办以“保护眼睛”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“My prpsals fr prtecting eyes”为题写一篇短文投稿。要点如下：
1.保护眼睛的重要性； 2.你的具体做法和建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为100词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My prpsals fr prtecting eyes
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【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My prpsals fr prtecting eyes”为题写一篇短文投稿，参加学校英语报正在举办的以“保护眼睛”为主题的英语征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：prpsal →suggestin
此外：besides →what’s mre
由于：due t →because f/in view f
应该：shuld →be suppsed t
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In rder t keep ur eyes healthy, I’d like t share my prpsals.
拓展句：With the aim f keeping ur eyes healthy, I’d like t share my advice.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First f all, we shuld pay attentin t eye psture, aviding reading n yur phne while lying dwn, walking, r taking a car.(运用了现在分词作状语以及状语从句中的省略结构)
【高分句型2】Besides, due t endless hmewrk, we ften feel ur eyes tired s we shuld cntrl eye usage time, resting fr 5-10 minutes every 40-50 minutes and ding eye-prtectin exercises during the break.(运用了现在分词作状语
【范文】
My prpsals fr prtecting eyes
The eyes are the windw f ur sul, the imprtant guarantee f ur cntact with the utside wrld, s we must prtect ur eyes.In rder t keep ur eyes healthy, I’d like t share my prpsals.
First f all, we shuld pay attentin t eye psture, aviding reading n yur phne while lying dwn, walking, r taking a car.Besides, due t endless hmewrk, we ften feel ur eyes tired s we shuld cntrl eye usage time, resting fr 5-10 minutes every 40-50 minutes and ding eye-prtectin exercises during the break.
Let’s prtect ur eyes, and see mre beautiful things.
2.（2023·全国·模拟预测）某英文报纸举行“我爱劳动”主题征文比赛，请你结合自己的一次真实的劳动经历写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.具体经历； 2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
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【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生结合自己的一次真实的劳动经历写一篇短文向某英文报纸举行的“我爱劳动”主题征文比赛投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
极其：terribly→extremely
累的：tired→wrn ut
最后：in the end→finally
养活：bring up→supprt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having nly wrked fr half an hur, I began t feel bth tired and thirsty.
拓展句：After I had nly wrked fr half an hur, I began t feel bth tired and thirsty.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When we finished the wrk in the end, I was cvered in sweat and mud.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】At that time all I wanted t d was lie dwn and rest.（运用了省略关系词that引导的定语从句
【范文】
The experience I’d like t share is abut helping my father water the fields during the summer hlidays.
It was a terribly ht, airless day.Having nly wrked fr half an hur, I began t feel bth tired and thirsty.What’s wrse, my back started t ache.When we finished the wrk in the end, I was cvered in sweat and mud.At that time all I wanted t d was lie dwn and rest.
Thrugh the experience, I develp an awareness that hw hardwrking and great my parents are wh manage t bring up the whle family.
3.（2023·贵州六盘水·高三校考阶段练习）你校校园报英文栏目开展了主题为“Sprts are super helpful”的征文活动，请根据以下内容投稿：
1.你最喜欢的一项运动；2.这项运动的益处。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sprts are super helpful
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【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇自己最喜欢的运动的短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like→be fnd f
由…组成：cnsist f→be made up f
要求：require→ask
和：as well as→and
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, enabling me t be energetic and dynamic all the time.
拓展句：Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, which enables me t be energetic and dynamic all the time.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it cmes t sprts, I like basketball best.（由When引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Basketball has been an imprtant part in my life ever since I was intrduced t it at the age f 9.（由since引导的时间状语从句
【范文】
Sprts are super helpful
When it cmes t sprts, I like basketball best.It is a ball game between tw teams, each cnsisting f five players.It requires speed, strength, talent as well as skills.Basketball has been an imprtant part in my life ever since I was intrduced t it at the age f 9.Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, enabling me t be energetic and dynamic all the time.Fr anther, it has taught me t value teamwrk ver individual perfrmance.Basketball fills my days with wnders and challenges.
4.2023·浙江·高三校联考期中）假定你是李华。你上周参加了校学生会组织的“用劳动感恩母校”活动。请你给校英语报投稿，分享活动经历，内容包括：
1.参与的过程； 2.感受与收获。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shw Gratitude t Our Schl thrugh Labr
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【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生记述上周参加的校学生会组织的“用劳动感恩母校”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：engage in→g in fr
保养：maintain→upkeep
共同努力：jint effrts→mutual effrt
机会：pprtunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week I engaged in an unfrgettable activity — “Shw Gratitude t Our Schl thrugh Labr” rganized by the Student Unin.
拓展句：Last week I engaged in an unfrgettable activity — “Shw Gratitude t Our Schl thrugh Labr” which was rganized by the Student Unin.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Lnging t repay ur schl’s unfailing supprt, I arrived early last Saturday at the schl hall, where participants were assigned different tasks (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I was excited t be in a grup t maintain the schl’s garden, weeding the flwerbeds and watering the plants.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【范文】
Shw Gratitude t Our Schl thrugh Labr
Last week I engaged in an unfrgettable activity — “Shw Gratitude t Our Schl thrugh Labr” rganized by the Student Unin.
Lnging t repay ur schl’s unfailing supprt, I arrived early last Saturday at the schl hall, where participants were assigned different tasks.I was excited t be in a grup t maintain the schl’s garden, weeding the flwerbeds and watering the plants.With jint effrts, ur schl tk n a refreshingly new lk after abut tw hurs.
I felt lucky t have the pprtunity t shw my appreciatin fr schl.The activity nt nly bnded us tgether but als impressed n us the significance f labr, teamwrk, and gratitude.
5.（2024·四川·校联考一模）你校将以“我们的劳动实践课(Our labr practice curse)”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：
1.学校开展劳动实践课程的目的； 2.你遇到的挑战和从中受到的启发。
要求：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就主题为“我们的劳动实践课(Our labr practice curse)”的英语征文比赛写一篇英语短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：aim→gal
参与：engage in→take part in
致使：cause→lead t
机会：pprtunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T make up fr my mistake, I bught seeds and replanted them in the field, using up my entire weekends.
拓展句：T make up fr my mistake, I bught seeds and replanted them in the field, which uses up my entire weekends.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】While wrking in the field, I, as a weeder, pulled ut a rw f yung plants by mistake, which caused my grup members t scream.(运用了While引导的时间状语从句的省略和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thus, what we culd d is t develp the ability t self-adjust, which is key t respnding prperly in scial situatins.(运用了what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句
【范文】
Our Labr Practice Curse
With the aim f educating students t feel freer t engage in brader explratin, experimenting and questining, ur schl has carried ut a series f agricultural practices.
While wrking in the field, I, as a weeder, pulled ut a rw f yung plants by mistake, which caused my grup members t scream.T make up fr my mistake, I bught seeds and replanted them in the field, using up my entire weekends.
This setback is a real disappintment fr me but meanwhile an pprtunity fr learning.I felt prud t have cme up with slutins t the challenge.Things are never ging t happen the way we imagine.Thus, what we culd d is t develp the ability t self-adjust, which is key t respnding prperly in scial situatins.