2025版高考英语一轮总复习写作培优第1部分第3章第3讲征文投稿课件

这是一份2025版高考英语一轮总复习写作培优第1部分第3章第3讲征文投稿课件，共19页。

征文投稿一般都是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以议论文和记叙文居多。具体写作结构为：
1．吸引眼球开头句①Recently we did a survey abut nt.最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。②T enrich ur lives and deepen ur understanding f traditinal Chinese culture, ur schl held a Chinese painting exhibitin in the schl library last week.为了丰富我们的生活，加深我们对于中国传统文化的理解，上周我们学校在校图书馆举办了国画展。
③At present ur city is carrying ut a campaign, the cntent f which is that anyne wh is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet.目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须戴头盔。
2．亮点出彩篇中句①Mrever, as is knwn t all, setting t much time aside just fr watching TV is a waste f time. 而且，众所周知，只为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。
②T change the habit, I am suppsed t put mre emphasis n smething mre meaningful such as reading and taking exercise, which are nt nly beneficial t my mental and physical health but als can help me get rid f my bad habit. 为了改变这个习惯，我应该把更多的精力放在一些更有意义的事情上，比如读书和锻炼，这些不仅有利于我的身心健康，而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。
③The purpse f the campaign is t mitigate the cnsequence f such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident.这项运动的目的是减轻这类交通事故的后果，降低事故中的死亡率。
3.韵味无穷结尾句①As far as I am cncerned, students shuld d mre listening and speaking s that they can develp their cmmunicatin skills.在我看来，学生们应该多听和多说来发展他们的交流技能。②My appeal is that all ur students riding electric bikes shuld wear helmets fr the safety f urselves and ther peple.我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。
Last Saturday(及其他表示活动/事件发生的时间), ur schl held an activity themed “________ (活动主题)”， aiming t________________ (活动目的).
We________________ (活动/经历)．Sme ________________ (一些人的活动)while thers ________________ (另一些人的活动)．Then came the mst exciting mment when ______________ (其他活动部分)．Finally，__________ (活动/事件结果). Thrugh the activity/experience, I was aware/realized that nt nly did the activity braden my hrizns ____________ (个人感想之一), but it als fueled my enthusiasm fr ________ (个人感想之二).
(2022·全国甲卷改编)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1．海洋的重要性；2．保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Our Oceans, Our RespnsibilityJune 8th was fficially named by the UN in 2009 as Wrld Oceans Day.
【满分范文】Our Oceans, Our RespnsibilityJune 8th was fficially named by the UN in 2009 as Wrld Oceans Day.It aims t raise peple's awareness f prtecting ceans.
Ocean plays a key rle in ur wrld. Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature. Thus, it is imperative t prtect cean. First f all, what we can d is place imprtance n ur daily actins. Fr example, garbage can't be thrwn int cean. What's mre, we can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is.All in all, it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting cean. T prtect cean is t prtect urselves.
【名师点评】1．文章首先介绍世界海洋日的时间和意图；然后介绍海洋的重要性；最后发出保护海洋的倡议。2．范文语言流畅，结构合理，要点齐全，较好地完成了写作任务。在遣词造句上，使用了(nt als引起的)倒装句、形容词以及副词比较级“the＋比较级．..，the＋比较级”结构、以及(it is high time that等)较复杂句型，并使用了高级词汇(imperative和plays a key rle in)，合理使用了过渡词(First f all, What's mre, All in all等)，提高了文章的得分档次。
(2023·全国乙卷)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1．简要描述；2．体验和感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2．题目已为你写好。
Learning a New Skill
【参考范文】Learning a New SkillIt is imprtant fr us t master sme basic living skills t prepare us fr ur future life.