2024读后续写 07 读后续写：历险型（故事构造“三大套路”）(word+ppt)

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套路一：恶劣环境要烘托
1. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats， gt n ur hrses， and headed slwly twards the muntains（慢慢地向山走去）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）2. Never had I seen such a lvely creature in my life, s I fllwed its track withut thinking twice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.（17年11月浙江高考 ）3. In the prcess f seeking fr it, I was ttally immersed in the charm f nature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）
4. What's wrse, he didn't have any fd r water with him, let alne his cell phne r ther supplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）. （江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）5. We were in the middle f nwhere, wearing nly underwear, with ur supplies burnt int ashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）, including ur cellphnes. （湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）
套路二：转折思维技巧好
例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。Suddenly it ccurred t us that we culd keep t the track t guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult fr us t make ut the rad.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）解析：这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向”。
【素材积累】1. Ultimately, we were back, safe and sund（安然无恙）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）2. We jumped int the warm vehicle and the frester drve us t the ranger statin（开车送我们去巡逻站）, where we were given clthes and were able t call ur parents.（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）
套路三：万能升华要牢记
需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢”、“克服困难”，当然还有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”。
万能句1：That day was s unfrgettable that it wuld stay in my memry frever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了的句式结构：如此以至于。unfrgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
万能句2：Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can cnquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
【素材积累】1. Sitting in the guestrm, I fund it really blissful t be accmpanied by ur belved nes（有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福）.（17年11月浙江高考 ）2. Despite feeling weak, Nichlas was generally in a gd cnditin,and he was really happy as he was carried back t the ski resrt t reunite with his family（和他的家人团聚）.（江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）3.As ur van chugged((发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声) dwn the freeway, I thught this trip might nt be s bad after all. Gd-bye, regular ld summer vacatin. （2021.03 十校联盟）
①海上遇难天气The sky is darkened with glmy cluds. Lighting flashed acrss the sky, fllwed by a clap f thunder. Minutes later, there came a dwnpur.The wind was hwling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.
海上The sea biled in the strm.The angry waves crashed against the side f the bat, with water splashing here and there. 船Leaned sidewaysThe ship was rcking up and dwn in the restless sea.The crashing waves filled their bat with water faster than they culd empty it.
救援人But then, as I lked in the distance, I discvered a series f three r fur big waves heading twards the shre.Withut thinking, I ran dwn int the street, hlding my bdy bard n the way and shuted at a stranger t call the plice.Patting their faces t wake them up, I cntinuusly tld them t be strng.
遇难者She calmed dwn t keep the rhyme f breathing s that she culd breathe evenly.I felt extremely exhausted（apparently wrn-ut）Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy.Salt stinging my eyes, I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd hld n.But I still shuted in my head: keep n.
救援过程Then he dragged her upper frm the water,.救人未遂He held her hand tightly but a huge wave separated them.He fught the waves and strve t catch her, but failed, she was drifted away.
②洪水The water kept rising. Tw hurs passed. He did nt dare t mve an inch fr fear f slipping.Anther tw hurs later, he nticed that the water level went dwn enugh that he culd try an escape. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr hurs, he slwly unflded his bdies.Cautiusly and steadily, he made his way frward t the entrance.
③地震Deep cracks pened up in the streets.The wall caved in.Huge buildings cllapsed, sending cluds f dust int the air.The animals grew restless as if in anticipatin f a disaster.
④火灾屋子Fanned by the wind, the huse was bathed in an immense stream f flames.The huse was bathed in an immense stream f flames.The raring fire swallwed the whle huse.烟Dense smke swirled and billwed and the fumes made her chke fr a mment.The thick smke caused him t stumble blindly arund, burned his eyes, and made it impssible t breathe.
人的反应Thrugh the ffice dr, she saw flames climbing up the wall.Bth f them were cughing and their eyes were stinging.She clung t her, terrified by the leaping flames.Turning, he fught thrugh the smke and ran ut f the huse.
3、内疚1.一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。Thinking abut what I had dne t him, regret and guilt verwhelmed me like endless tides. 2.每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。Whenever I thught f Henry’s wet bk, my face turned red.
⑤受伤She turned arund, nly t find Tim beaten t the grund in extreme danger.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed twards him.With all her strength, she instantly seated him nt the car.He pulled her twards him with full strength.Her bdy was limp and she was nt breathing.He scped her int his arms and struggled t feet.
伤情He was attacked vilently and cvered with scratches.There was a trickle f bld frm the wund.治疗She applies a clean twel t the wund and press firmly n it t stp the bleeding.Wash and stitched the wundApply sme medicine t his wund
⑥丛林逃生意识到不见了He scanned arund the frest fr her. “Eurus?” he shuted again.her heart drpped as he realized that she was gne.he spared n effrt t find her, but it was all in vain.Thinking back t all f the gd times that he had shared with her, he realized that he lved her and he wanted nthing mre than fr her t cme back.
逃生He tried t get n faster, but he culd nt find the way ut f the bush.He was getting tired because Ceil was t heavy t carry fr a yung by.At last he came int an pen space with a large pl in the middle.He quickly saked his clthes, fr the appraching smke culd chke them.
救援He immediately ran ut fr searching, sb running after him.My pr children, the flame culd have burnt them t death.’ thught sb desperately.While they walked n withut hpe, there came a sweet vice. ”Dad!”it was frm sb. Sb jumped with jy and hugged his kids.She culd hear water tricking smewhere at a distance.