2024年高考英语读后续写核心素养与实战演练 专题18 读后续写：无灵主语升级 （原卷版+解析版）

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一、无灵主语inanimate subject
无灵主语句，是指用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常带有拟人化的修辞色彩。
例如：Rme witnessed many great histric events. (在罗马发生过许多重大历史事件)
▲它的主语Rme 罗马，是无生命的事物，但谓语witness 目击，是人的动作。这种“无灵主语+有灵谓语”的句式，就是无灵主语句。
它的亮点在哪？先举个栗子：
普通句：She had a gd idea.
无灵主语句：A gd idea came acrss her mind.
▲同样是表达“她有了个好主意”，比起普通句式中的常见句子，无灵主语句中这种“想法跑到脑中”的拟人化表达，肉眼可见更高级！
无灵主语的分类
无灵主语句式与练习
句式1：（a burst/wave/feeling f+)表示情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb
1、表示 “某人感到...” 或“一阵/一种向某人袭来”
2、常用于该句式的有灵动词（短语）有：
3、例句
A sense f despair defeated me, and I fell sbbing n the drstep.《简爱》
绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。
Mary felt a wave f anger sweep ver her.《秘密花园》
玛丽感到一阵愤怒。
“情感状态的抽象名词+谓语动词”的描写还有：
①Fear gripped the village.(整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中)
②Curage deserted him. (他失去了勇气)
③Anger chked my wrds. (我气的说不出话)
④A wave f nervusness washed ver him. (一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头)
⑤A chill f hrrr suddenly swept ver him. (他突然感到不寒而栗)
⑥Excitement seized him. (他好兴奋)
练习一：请把下列表示情感的形容词改成名词，做作主语
练习二：请把下面的句子和相应的有灵动词（谓语）匹配。
句式2：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+其它
1、这类名词有：face/eye/heart/fingers/tears/smile/vice
2、有灵动词有：ne’s face brighten/light up(露出喜色), tears well up(涌出), spread acrss(浮现)
3、例句:
My fingers shk with anger, s that I culd nt g n sewing.《简爱》
I was relieved when a bright, sweet vice interrupted us.《简爱》
“身体部位/音容类名词+谓语动词”的描写还有：
①Smile crumpled his face. (他笑得一脸皱纹)
②Her face brightened when I gave her the present. (我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩)
③His wrds sent me a quiver thrugh my bdy. (他的话让我全身不寒而栗)
④Laughter lingered arund the rm. (笑声在房间里萦绕)
⑤Tears welled up in Anni's eyes. (泪水从安妮的眼中涌出)
这些句子简直完胜xx is crying/ laughing/ smiling！快把它们记下来，用在续写里头去夺分！
练习：根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。
他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。
The mment he saw the familiar handwriting, _________ (主语) ______ _______(有灵动词） in his eyes.
当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。(激动的泪水)
When the ld man returned t his hmetwn after s many years, tears f _________ (主语)_________ _______(有灵动词） in his eyes.
他注视着那个不寻常地沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。
He stared at the unusually silent by and a lk f surprise______ ______ his face.
我给她礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。
________ _______ (主语)______ _______(有灵主语) when I gave her the present.
句式3：表时间和地点的名词+（有灵动词)witness/ fill/ spread thrugh 等等
“时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语动词”的描写有：
①A hush fell upn the classrm. (教室一片寂静)
②Beijing has witnessed great changes in recent years. (北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化)
③Dusk fund the child crying in the street. (黄昏时，孩子在街上哭)
④That chilly afternn witnessed him trudging in the snw. (那个寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉)
⑤Night has fallen ver the cuntry. (夜幕已经笼罩着乡间)
上面这些描写，都是将时间和地点拟人化，从它们的视角“看到”事件发生，不用there be 也不用it is xx，完美展现你续写的高水准！
例句与仿写：
例句1：上海发生了许多重大的历史事件。 Shanghai witnessed many great histrical events.
仿写： 下一刻见证了他们做早餐的努力，最终他们做到了。
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例句2：(2021年全国I卷)早餐的香味弥漫在厨房的空气中。The smell f breakfast filled the air in the kitchen.
仿写： 每个人都欣喜若狂，院子里洋溢着喜悦。
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翻译巩固：
突然之间，双胞胎的脸亮了起来，他们的头坚定地点着。
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他站在门边，脸上露出喜色。
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一见到他的老朋友，一种幸福的感觉席卷了他。(sweep ver)
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(2022年苏州八校联考)当她看到草莓的时候，她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。(twinkle)
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(2022年苏州八校联考)当她看到草莓的时候,幸福的泪水从她脸颊留下。
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(2022年苏州八校联考)当她看到草莓的时候，一种幸福和快乐的感觉席卷了她。
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当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。
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(2021年全国I卷）妈妈试图掩饰自己的情绪，但是那闪闪发光的眼泪却出卖了她。（sth fail sb)
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比赛前，她突然失去了信心。（sth fail sb)
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她想坚持，但是鼓不起勇气。（sth fail sb)
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我一打开盒子，就惊讶地睁大了眼睛。
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简脸色苍白，一阵恐惧袭上心头。(seize/take hld f/ sweep ver)
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她绝望得心都要被撕碎了。
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模拟演练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Bbby was getting cld sitting ut in his backyard in the snw. Bbby didn't wear bts; r rather, he didn't wn any. The thin sneakers he wre had a few hles in them and they had a pr jb f keeping ut the cld.
Bbby hand been in his backyard fr abut an hur already. Try as he might, he culd nt cme up with an idea fr his mther's Christmas gift. "This is useless, even if I d have an idea, I dn't have mney fr a gift."
Wiping tears frm his eyes, Bbby started walking dwn t the street where the shps were. It wasn't easy being six withut a father, particularly when he needed a man t talk t.
Bbby walked frm shp t shp, lking int each decrated windw. Everything seemed s beautiful and s ut f reach. It was starting t get dark and Bbby reluctantly turned t walk hme when his eyes caught the gimmer(微光) f the setting sun's ray reflecting n smething n the radside. He reached dwn and discvered a shinny dime(十分钱硬币).
Never befre had anyne felt s wealthy as Bbby felt at that mment. As he held his newly-fund treasure, warmth spread thrughut his entire bdy and he walked int the first stre. His excitement quickly turned cld when salespersn after salespersn tld him that he culd nt buy anything with nly a dime.
He saw a flwer shp and went inside it t wait in line. When the shp wner asked if he culd help him. Bbby presented the dime and asked if he culd buy ne flwer fr his mther as a Christmas gift. The shp wner lked at Bbby and his dime ffering. Then he put his hand n Bbby's shulder, saying "Yu just wait here and I'll see what I can d fr yu." As Bbby waited, he lked at the beautiful flwers and even thugh he was a by, he culd see why mthers and girls lved flwers.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头已经给出；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
A few minutes later, the shp wner came ut.
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Paragraph 2:
With the bunch f rses in his hands, Bbby walked ut f the dr and brke int a run.
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翻译小练习：
1. 他手里拿着一打玫瑰，这使鲍比很吃惊。
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2. 当店主轻轻地把玫瑰递给他时，鲍比犹豫了一下，愣住了一下，问道：“这么多花，一毛钱就够了吗？”
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3. 店主眨着眼皮，朝他咧嘴一笑：“当然！”鲍比一听到这个回答，脸上就闪过一阵狂喜。
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4. “谢谢你！圣诞快乐！”鲍比接过玫瑰回答说。
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5. 他紧紧地抓住手中的玫瑰，生怕那是幻觉。
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6. 考虑到天气变化无常，店主提议给他一把雨伞，鲍比礼貌地拒绝了。
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7. 他被大雪淋湿了，只是尽可能快地飞奔，因为他不能再等了。
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8. 不久之后，在他的视线里出现了他的家。
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9. 他气喘吁吁地站在门前，深深地吸了一口气，走了进去。
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10. 他一进去就大叫：“妈妈！”但是在房子周围只有他的声音在回响。
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11. 一阵阵忧虑使他不知所措。只是这时，他耳边传来熟悉的脚步声。
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12. 鲍比转过身来，看见他妈妈提着一双他很久以来就想要的靴子。
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13. 他把礼物送给她，低声说：“妈妈，圣诞快乐！”
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14. “谢谢，亲爱的！”她紧紧地拥抱着他，在他的脸上轻轻地吻了一下，幸福的泪水顺着脸颊汩汩流淌。
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无灵主语的分类
01 情感状态类名词
02 主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+其它
03 时间地点景物类名词+ witness/spread acrss/fill
有灵动词（短语）
中文意思
有灵动词（短语）
有灵动词（短语）
seize/take hld f sb
“抓住”“控制住”
swallw sb
“吞噬，淹没”
defeat sb
“击垮”
tear... int pieces
“把...撕碎”
sweep ver sb
“袭来”
chke ne’s wrds
“噎住”（说不出话）
anxius 焦虑的
n.
guilty内疚的
n.
panic 惊慌的
n.
wrried担忧的
n.
despaired 绝望的
n.
angry生气的
n.
hpeless绝望的
n.
depressed 沮丧的
n.
hrrible恐惧的
n.
stressful 有压力的
n.
happy 高兴的
n.
sad 伤心的
n.
( )1、一阵恐慌向她袭来。
A wave f panic______ her.
A.chked
( )2、我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。
I held the present, and excitement________ my wrds.
B.seized
( )3、她的焦虑把她撕成了碎片。（她焦虑不安）
Anxiety_________her int pieces.
C.swept ver
( )4、那些日子里，一种沮丧攫住了我。
A depressin_______ me thse days.
D.tre