2024届高三英语二轮复习：读后续写环境描写课件

这是一份2024届高三英语二轮复习：读后续写环境描写课件，共31页。PPT课件主要包含了WHAT ，WHAT，WHY ，WHY，HOW，rattled，clinked ，croaking ，hissing ，hum等内容，欢迎下载使用。
3. As the evening grew darker and the temperature drpped, Ian tld Jeremy t leave him. B1U3 Getting Alng With Others
1. Belw the muntains, the sunshine reflects n the many lakes, making them shine like diamnds against the rich cuntryside. Sheep, cattle and hrses wander n the green grass, and the surrunding frests are hme t many birds and animals. M2U2 Wish Yu Were Here
2. The sea became very rugh and the ship began t struggle in the heavy waves. Then the ship was thrwn t the left, then the right. M3U1 The Wrld f Our Senses
Natural setting
时间、地点、季节、气候、景物
4. It is just past five 'clck n the Chinese New Year's Eve, and the dinner table is already cvered with white china plates and bwls, full f all srts f dishes. B2U3 Festivals and Custms
5. Frm the neat designs f the paper-cuttings n the windws, t the Spring Festival cuplets n the dr, and t the New Year paintings n the wall, everything represents jy, luck and happiness. B2U3 Festivals and Custms
6. The rm is in a mess, with pizza bxes n the flr and dirty dishes in the sink. In the crner, there is a garbage can arund which are pieces f garbage and waste paper. M1U2 Grwing Pains
scial setting
特定时代背景、人物生活环境室内陈设、风土人情、时代氛围
Buck lived at a big huse in the sun-kissed Santa Clara Valley. Judge Miller's place, it was called. It std back frm the rad, half hiddenamng the trees, thrugh which glimpse culd be caught f the wide cl veranda that ran arund its fur sides. The huse was apprached by gravelled driveways which wund abut thrugh wide-spreading lawns and under theinterlacing bughs f tall pplars. 巴克住在阳光灿烂的圣克拉拉谷地的一座大宅子里，人们管这里叫米勒法官的宅子。宅子远离大路，绿树掩映，从树缝里能瞥见宅子周围的凉篷。几条蜿蜒曲折的碎石路穿过宽阔的草坪通向宅子，路边是高高的白杨，枝桠交叉，亭亭如盖。
clarify the setting
in the lap f luxury
At the first step upn the cld surface, Buck's feet sank int a white mushy smething very like mud. Mre f this white stuff was falling thrugh the air. He shk himself, but mre f it fell upn him. He sniffed it curiusly, then licked sme up n his tngue. It bit like fire, and the next instant was gne. This puzzled him. The nlkers laughed uprariusly, and he felt ashamed, he knew nt why, fr it was his first snw. 刚一踏上寒冷的舱面，巴克的脚就陷进了雪白的、柔软得像烂泥的东西里面去了。这些白色的东西还在从天上向下落。他抖了抖身体，但身上又落下许多。他好奇地嗅了嗅，又用舌头舔了舔，感觉像被火燎了一下，但顷刻间这种感觉就消失了。这让他有点摸不着头脑。看到他这个样子，一旁的人哄堂大笑。他感到难为情，可又不明白怎么回事，因为这是他第一次看到雪。
prmte the plt
in the cld wasteland
In a flash Buck knew it. The time had cme. It was t the death. He seemed t remember it all--the white wds, and earth, and mnlight, and the thrill f battle. Over the whiteness and silence brded a ghstlycalm.There was nt the faintest whisper f air--nthing mved, nt a leaf quivered , the visible breaths f the dgs rising slwly and lingering in the frsty air. 巴克突然明白了，是时候（和Spitz）分出胜负了。他全记起来了--那白色的树木、大地、月光，还有那战斗的激情。洁白寂静的世界笼罩在一片幽灵般可怕的宁静之中。没有一丝风声，没有一片叶子在颤动--仿佛一切都是静止的，只看到群狗呼出来的气息慢慢升起，在寒冷的空气中飘荡。
reflect the atmsphere
tensin f the battle
Deep in the frest a call was sunding, and as ften as he heard this call, mysteriusly thrilling and luring, he felt cmpelled t turn his back upn the fire and the beaten earth arund it, and t plunge int the frest, But as ften as he gained the sft unbrken earth and the green shade, the lve fr Jhn Thrntn drew him back t the fire again. 森林深处回荡着一声呼唤，一听到这声呼唤，这具有神奇的感染力和诱惑力的呼唤，他就忍不住转身离开火堆和周围被踏过的土地，跃入森林, 然而，每当他来到这柔软的、未被踏足的土地和绿荫下，对约翰.桑顿的爱就会把他重新拉回到火堆旁。
prtray the characters' persnality
lyal & appreciative
Irresistible impulses seized he wuld spring t his feet and dash away, and n and n, fr hurs, thrugh the frest aisles and acrss the pen space where the niggerheads bunched. He lved t run dwn dry watercurses, and t creep and spy upn the bird life in the wds. Fr a day at a time he wuld lie in the underbrush where he culd watch thepartridges drumming and strutting up and dwn. But especially he lved t run in the dim twilight f the summer nights, listening t the subdued and sleepy murmurs f the frest, 无法抗拒的冲动左右着巴克, 他回一跃而起，朝远处奔去，跑过一排排树林，跑过布满黑色岩石的开阔地，跑啊跑啊。他喜欢沿着干涸的河床奔跑，喜欢在林子里偷偷窥视鸟儿的生活，有时会在灌木丛里卧上一整天，看着鹧鸪咕咕叫着踱来踱去。然而，他最喜欢的却是在夏季的午夜黄昏中奔驰，聆听着树林在睡梦中发出的喃喃细语。
wild & free
On the ppsite slpe f the watershed they came dwn int a level cuntry where were great stretches f frest and many streams, and thrugh these great stretches they ran steadily, hur after hur, the sun rising higher and the day grew warmer. Buck was wildly glad. 在分水岭的另一侧，他俩顺坡向下走，来到一片平原，这儿有大片大片的树林和许许多多的河流。那些树林被他们甩在身后，不知过了多久，太阳越来越高，天气越发暖和。巴克喜不自胜。
display the characters' md
wildly glad answer the call f the wild
reveal the theme
Example 1 The beach was empty, but yu culd tell it usually wasn’t. There was trash everywhere, abandned twels, tipped ver clers, even a whle umbrella, unfurled(展开), sticking ut f a hle in the grund.
Drill 1 Fr a man like Thedre, traveling in a railway carriage was nt verypleasant, especially if he had t travel in secnd class. The windws were never clean enugh, the seats were always either t sft r t hard, and his fellw passengers annyed him by cughing, talking, mving arund, r humming tunes.
windw/seat/passengers
wide angle -- clse-up
Example 2 It was a Saturday mrning, and all the summer wrld was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a sng in every heart, a spring in every step and cheer in every face. The air was filled with the pleasant smell f flwers.
Drill 3 Describe a peaceful scene in the cuntryside by using sense f hearing. I culd hear the distant sund f pts clattering in the kitchen as Grandmafixed me up a hme-cked meal, and the cws faintly med in the distance.
Drill 2 春日的公园里，鲜花盛开，香气弥漫。 In spring, there are many kinds f flwers blming in the crner f the park and I can smell the fresh/fragrant scent with cl breeze. Hw sweet!
sight&smell
Shw, dn't tell
Drill 4 Fill in the blanks with wrds f particular sunds.
1. Lying in the tent by a pnd, we culd hear frgs ________(呱呱叫). 2. A flck f little birds flew by, jyfully ______________________(叽叽喳喳).3. A snake slithered in between the thick green leaves, ________(嘶嘶). 4. Hearing the wlves _______(嚎叫) n the tp f the hill, we shk with fear in the tent. 5. Bees ________(嗡嗡) lazily amng the flwers. 6. Every time a truck passed by, the windws ________. (发出咔哒声)7. When she started t run, the cins in her pcket ________(叮当作响) against each ther.8. She seemed t be shuting t him, but her vice was drwned ut by the ________(轰鸣)f the train.
tweeting and chirping
buzzed
raring/rumble
9. Yu culd hear the train ________________(喷气、轰鸣) further and further away. 10. The lightening flashed and the thunder _________(隆隆声). 11. The nly sund she culd hear was the teasing ________(嗡嗡、嘈杂) f her neighbr's air cnditiner. 12. I stepped ut f my car and made way t their frnt dr, gravel ________(嘎吱) beneath my bts. 13. A gentle breeze ________(沙沙声) thrugh the willws(柳树) that std gallantly in the distance. 14. The rain ________(击打发出咚咚声) n the windw, bidding farewell t the last beam f sunlight.15. Heavy rain ________________(啪嗒声) n the rf, and we were trapped inside.
puffing and rumbling
splattered/splashed
Example 3 Standing there at the ft f the Rckies and seeing muntains fr the first time, I marvelled at ______________________________________. I marvelled at its magnificence, feeling the whle wrld was shrinking and realizing hw small I had becme.
Drill 5 ____________________________________. Standing at the bus stp in a dim yellw circle f light, she tugged her cat clser, feeling the chill in the air. It was a cld winter night when rain pured dwn. A strng wind was bellwing(咆哮), and rain was puring dwn.
Avid excessive descriptin
1. The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。2. Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。3. The scenery befre us is as beautiful as a picture.我们面前的景色美如一幅画。4. The flurescent lamps in the hall shne brightly as if it were in the daytime.大厅里的日光灯照得如同白昼。
1. The beautiful park was a scented carpet f clr.美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。2. The sun shne thrugh cluds, which were flating pieces f cttn candy in the sky. 朵朵白云如同飘在空中的棉花糖，阳光透过云层洒下来。3. T many peple, Shangri-La is a paradise n earth, which is heavenly beautiful.对许多人来说，香格里拉美得如同人间仙境。
1. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch f my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下，那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。2. The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. 微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。3. The frest held its breath, and the trees seemed t listen intently. 森林屏住了呼吸，树木似乎也在聚精会神地听着。4. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest.顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。5. I was very happy and culd hear the birds singing and chirping in the wds. 我很开心，似乎听到了林中唱歌的鸟儿。
persnificatin 拟人
Drill 6 What figure f speech is used in each sentence? 1. The hallway was zebra-striped with darkness and mnlight.门厅里闪现着忽明忽暗的光线。
2. The sky was vercast, and the whle wrld was envelped in a huge gray quilt. 天色阴沉，整个世界都笼罩在一块巨大的灰色棉被中。
3. Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet grund is cld under ft. The birds busy themselves arund me, nt caring that I’ m there.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。
4. A stream twines the vast green field just like blue satin ribbn. 一条小溪宛如蓝色的缎带缠绕着一望无际的绿色原野。
5. The rse lks like an angel, swaying in the wind, dancing in the sun. 这朵玫瑰就像是在风中摇摆、阳光下跳舞的天使。
Drill 7 Describe a scene by using figures f speech.
1. 朵朵白云飘在蓝天中，就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。White cluds flw in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in brad cean. 2. 蔚蓝的天空下，百花盛开，阳光洒在湖面上如同铺上了一颗颗闪耀的钻石。Clrful flwers were blming beneath the blue sky, and the sunshine reflected n the lake, making it shine like diamnds. 3. 我骑着车穿过一片如同摩天大楼般的绿树。I rde my bicycle thrugh the evergreen trees which were as tall as skyscrapers. 4. 寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.5. 夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。Stars winked at me in the darkening sky.
1. The sun began t rise in the sky, ______ (沐浴)the muntain in glden light. 2. The dark blue sky _________________(点缀) twinkling stars.3. I was immediately stunned by the blue sky with cluds ____________ (飘)arund.4. When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight ________(照进) in. 5. As the sky gradually ___________(变暗) and the light dimmed, he quickened his steps.6. The sky is vercast, __________(变暗) with glmy cluds.7. Then the mn appeared in all its elegant whiteness, ________(照亮) the cludless sky.
was dtted with
Drill 8 Fill in the blanks with apprpriate verbs
drifting/flating
darkened
lighting
1. A ________________ wind(阵/狂风) blew the fallen leaves away. 2. A _________________________ breeze (微风) blew thrugh the garden, bringing sweet scent f spring. 3. There's a chill in the air, but he desn't zip up his jacket against it since the ______ wind/breeze(凉风) feels gd.4. The wind was hwling/blwing _________________________________, making every step frward difficult.
Drill 9 Fill in the blanks with apprpriate adjectives r adverbs.
a dreadful, fierce, vilent, devastating strm; hurricane, trnad, typhn
gusty/strng
a gust f wind
gentle/fresh/light/refreshing
dreadfully/wildly/fiercely/hrribly/vilently
The summer breeze ________ mved thrugh the leaves.
1. It was raining cats and dgs and I was saked thrugh/cmpletely wet. 2. A rainbw was seen shimmering acrss the sky as the sun returned after a dwnpur.3. I struggled back t the hut thrugh blinding rain. 4. It began t drizzle/sprinkle but there was n wind s I decided t g int the muntains alne.5. March winds and April shwers bring frth May flwers.
Drill 10 Translate the underlined parts.
heavy, rapid, light, gentle, pleasant, icy, freezing, rainstrm
The rain came puring dwn./ It was puring utside.
1. Snw blanketed every rftp and weighed n the branches f ld trees. 2. It was late n a bitterly cld, snwy New Year's Eve. A pr little girl was wandering in the dark, cld streets.3. The whle white wrld sparkled as if it were made f little stars.4. Sn the tiny flakes flated sftly dwn, like flcks f little white birds.5. The bitter wind swept the cuntless snwflakes acrss the frnt yard.6. In the midnight, snw fell dwn heavily and the flakes were driven by the wind whirling in the air.
Drill 11 What scene is described?
snw -- state&actin
Everything was cvered with a white blanket.
Capture striking features
Add sensry details
Invlve characters' reactin
Use apprpriate wrds
Emply figures f speech
1. We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. Winding rivers, lfty muntains, sunny beaches and deep valleys all held me entirely in their fascinatin. 2. Rays f light filtered thrugh the trees. 3. Glden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea f fragrant flwers crwd int my eyes. 4. Birds were chirping, the air was filled with laughter and everyne was in the best f mds.
Drill 12 Figure ut the md r atmsphere accrding t the descriptin.
happy&peaceful
5. The sky was vercast, darkened with glmy cluds. 6. As she wiped the tears ff her cheek, the sun disappeared and a slw patter f rain started t thrum n the pavement. A gust f cld wind blew right thrugh her.
sad&depressing
11. All the cars sped/zmed past us, ignring ur frantically waving hands and leaving nly dust. 12. It was late n a bitterly cld, snwy New Year's Eve. A pr little girl was wandering in the dark, cld streets.
tense&nervus
7. When the breeze stpped, everything went still and the wds became unnaturally quiet. 8. It was s quiet in the rm that even the sund f a pin drpping culd be heard. 9. There was nt the faintest whisper f air--nthing mved, nt a leaf quivered. 10. I tried t peek thrugh the windws, but the rtting bards blcked my view. I pushed the dr and it swung pen with the lud creak f rusty hinges.
hpeless&desperate
13. Rars and screams (f the plar bear) pierced the silence with shrillness. The nises turned us pale with hrrr. 14. He(the plar bear) rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f silence.15. Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. 16. The rain came puring dwn, the streams rse, and the winds blew and beat against the huse.17. Waves abut twelve meters high came rushing in, drwning everything. Water was all arund and everywhere. 18. A snake slithered in between the thick green leaves, hissing.
dangerus&scary
Mini writing task Describe a camping experience (abut 80 wrds)
After an exhausting day f hiking, we finally fund a perfect camping site at the ft f the muntain. We busied urselves in putting up tents and preparing dinner. When the setting sun cast an range glw ver the muntains, everything was ready. Sitting arund the camp fire, we wlfeddwn the meal and had casual chats, laughing merrily. Sn the mn appeared, glittering as she rlled thrugh the deep vault f a cludless sky. Twinkling stars winked and fragrant breeze gently kissed ur faces, as if cmfrting all the tiredness alng the trip.
1. clarify the setting 2. reflect the atmsphere3. dispaly the characters' md
the setting sun; camp fire; mnlight; stars; breeze; darkness; dwnpur; hwl; trees&leaves