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Section D Writing——如何写说明文Part Ⅰ 文体感知Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解1．Skim the passage and you will find this expository essay tells us something about the connections between ___________ and some famous ________ architectural marvels.2．The passage mainly tells us that the Lei family, pioneering ________， who for ____ generations were behind the marvels of imperial ________．the Lei FamilyQingdynastyengineerssevenarchitectureⅡ.文本剖析：特色表达diligenceinnovationplangenerationambitiousassociatedtreasurebeyondⅢ.识记下列短语1．have...in common与……有共同之处2．vary from...to...在……之间变化3．in minute detail 详尽无遗4．in light of 考虑到……，根据……5．along with 与……一起6．be associated with 与……有联系7．the spirit of craftsmanship 工匠精神8．show diligence and humility 展现勤奋和谦虚Part Ⅱ 写作指导技法指导1.文体介绍说明文是指以说明为主要表达方式，来说明事物的情况、特征或道理的文体。其特点在于说明性、 知识性和科学性。2．篇章结构第一部分：提出要介绍的人物(可包括出生时间、地点等基本信息)；第二部分：介绍人物的主要经历、事迹或成就、人物品质、贡献或地位等；第三部分：对人物进行评价与总结。3．常用表达(1)XXX, a famous..., was born in..., on...XXX，一位著名的……，X年X月X日生于……(2)XXX, born in..., was a great scientist and inventor.XXX生于……，是一位伟大的科学家和发明家。(3)Born in..., XXX is recognised as one of China's greatest scientists, a pioneer of...XXX生于……，被公认为中国最伟大的科学家之一，是……的先驱。(4)XXX, known as..., plays a crucial role in...XXX作为……，在……方面发挥着至关重要的作用。(5)XXX, without whom it would have been impossible for us to..., is one of the academicians of the Chinese Academy of Engineering.XXX是中国工程院院士之一，没有他/她我们就不可能……(6)XXX, the founding father of..., was the founder and promoter of...XXX是……的先驱，是……的奠基人和倡导者。(7)XXX was so diligent that he worked day and night.XXX是如此勤奋，日夜工作。(8)It was not until he died that his parents and many of his friends realised that he had produced such extraordinary achievements.直到他去世，他的父母和许多朋友才意识到他取得了如此非凡的成就。(9)Many good qualities are embodied in these heroes and they do deserve respect from all of us.这些英雄身上体现了许多优秀品质，值得我们所有人尊敬。(10)They are diligent and down to earth, which best demonstrates that the Chinese people are a hardworking people.他们勤奋踏实，这最能说明中国人民是艰苦奋斗的民族。(11)Happiness of the people always tops the list in their dictionary, and the interests of our country outweigh their own personal ones.人民的幸福永远是他们的头等大事，国家的利益高于他们个人的利益。精品展示假定你是李华，英语老师要求学生们了解“工匠精神”，根据以下要点，用英文写一篇体现工匠精神的人物介绍。1．29岁的工匠王曦是天津杨柳青木版印刷最年轻的继承人。2．从小喜欢木刻，自从2014年成为学徒，至今致力于木刻。3．雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作，孩子们的胳膊和腿的线条以及脸上的细节，包括眼睛，都是最具挑战性的部分。4．老师教导他保持一种平和的心态以及王曦对木刻的认识。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题谋篇第一步：确定体裁、人称和时态本文为人物介绍，以第三人称为主，时态主要以一般现在时为主，兼顾其他时态。第二步：确定段落第一段：人物介绍第二段：工作情况介绍第三段：对工作的认识第三步：提炼要点1．________________ 木版印刷2．________________ 献身于……3．________________ 提醒某人做某事4．_________________ 保持平和的心态5．________________ 净化灵魂6．________________ 瞬息变化的世界woodblock printingdevote oneself toremind sb. to do sth.maintain a peaceful mindpurify one's soulfastchanging world第四步：句式升级1．雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作，这可能需要一个月甚至两个月的时间才能完成。(一般表达)Engraving wood is never an easy job, and it may take one or even two months for him to complete.(高级表达)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Engraving wood is never an easy job, which may take one or even two months for him to complete.2．孩子们的胳膊和腿的线条以及脸上的细节，包括眼睛，都是最具挑战性的部分，因为这些细细的线条应该光滑优美，足以展现人物生动艺术的表情。(一般表达)The lines of children's arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve. These thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures' vivid and artistic expressions.(高级表达)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ The lines of children's arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve, as these thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures' vivid and artistic expressions.3．我的老师经常提醒我要保持平和的心态，没有这种心态，手艺就不会稳定和准确。(without which定语从句)(一般表达)My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind. Without the mind, there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship.(高级表达)________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship.连句成篇_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wang Xi, a 29yearold craftsman is the youngest inheritor of Yangliuqing woodblock printing in Tianjin. A fan of this art form since his childhood, he has devoted himself to engraving wood since he became an apprentice of woodblock printing in 2014. Engraving wood is never an easy job, which may take one or even two months for him to complete. The lines of children's arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve, as these thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures' vivid and artistic expressions. “My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship，” Wang says. “Maybe this job seems boring to others. For me, it seems that I am carving the woodblock, but in fact, I am carving out my life and purifying my soul in this fastchanging world.”单元复习 核心考点梳理一、重点单词1．pose v．(使)摆好姿势 n．姿势，姿态pose for 为……摆好姿势2．devotion n．深爱，挚爱；奉献，忠心devote oneself to 献身于……，致力于……devote one's life/time/energy/attention to 把某人的生命/时间/精力/注意力奉献于……be devoted to (doing) sth.致力于(做)某事3．approach n．方法，方式；接近，靠近；通路，路径 v．接近，靠近an approach to (doing) sth.做某事的方法adopt/take an approach 采用一种方法the approach of ……的来临4．trial n．试验；试用；审判，审理by trial and error 反复试验(以得出最佳结果)on trial 在试用；在受审5．polish v．擦亮，擦光；修改，润色polish up 擦亮，擦光；提高(技能)；改善(外表等)6．preserve v．维护，保护；保存，保养；贮存，保鲜 n．保护区preserve...from (doing)...保护……免受……preserve the peace 维护和平preserve the forest 保护森林7．dominate v．支配，控制，主宰→domination n．支配，控制，主宰8．associate v．与……有关；联系associate...with...把……与……联系起来be associated with 与……有联系in association with 与……有关联；与……联合9．comprise v．包括，由……构成be comprised of 由……构成二、重点短语1．nothing more than 仅仅，不过是nothing less than 不亚于，完全not...anything more than 不过，仅仅2．as much as 和……一样多；多达……as much as you can 最大程度地as soon as you can 尽可能快地(时间)as fast/quick as you can 尽可能快地3．belong to 属于(某人)；是(俱乐部、组织等)的成员a sense of belonging 归属感personal belongings 个人财物，私人用品4．put...into...将……投入……；用……表达；将……译成……put...into practice 把……付诸实施put...into use 将……投入使用put...into (the) action 实行，实施5．not once 从未，从来没有(位于句首时用部分倒装)at once 立刻，马上once in a while 偶尔，间或once again＝once more 再一次，又一次all at once 突然6．a passion for sth.对……的热爱，对……的强烈爱好with great passion 充满激情7．die out 灭绝；消失die away (声音、风或光)逐渐消失，逐渐减弱die down 逐渐变弱；逐渐平息die off 相继死去，先后死去(直至死光)8．back down 退让；认输；承认(错误)back off 后退；放弃back up 堵塞；支持；倒退9．break new ground 开辟新的领域；有新发现hold/stand one's ground 坚守阵地，不退缩；坚持自己的立场get off the ground 开始获得成功，取得进展gain ground 取得优势，变得更成功lose ground 失去优势，失利have/keep both feet on the ground 实事求是，脚踏实地10．at one's own pace 按自己的节奏at a．..pace 以……速度keep pace with 与……并驾齐驱，与……步调一致set the pace 确定速度；领跑pace up and down 踱来踱去11．day in day out 日复一日地(＝day after day)week in week out＝week after week 连续几个星期，一周又一周month after month 一月又一月，月复一月year after year 年年，年复一年12．range from...to...在……到……之间变化；包括从……到……之间的各种事物range between...and...在……到……之间变化a (wide) range of 一系列的；各种各样的13．bring...back to life 使……复活；使……恢复生机come to life 复活bring...to a conclusion 使……结束come to a conclusion 得出结论bring...to an end 使……结束come to an end 结束14．pass on...to...将……传授/传递给……pass by 路过，经过pass down 把(知识或技能)往下传pass through 通过，经历三、重要句式1．强调句型： It is/was＋被强调部分＋that＋其他部分These things were real, and it was within their reality that Cunningham saw both beauty and potential.这些东西是真实的，在这种真实中，坎宁安看到了美好和潜力。2．“no matter＋疑问词”引导让步状语从句He valued his integrity and would not be bought by anyone, no matter how many free clothes or flights to faraway destinations he was offered.他珍视自己的正直，不为任何人所动摇，无论提供给他多少免费衣物或远程航班。3．If it hadn't been for...要不是……If it hadn't been for a three-episode documentary, outsiders would never have known that...要不是那三集纪录片，外面的人永远也不会知道……4．so...that...中so...位于句首引起倒装So incredible was their skill that many of their buildings survived earthquakes and remained standing over hundreds of years.他们的技术是如此的不可思议，以至于他们的许多建筑在地震中幸存下来，并屹立了数百年。
Section D Writing——如何写说明文Part Ⅰ 文体感知Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解1．Skim the passage and you will find this expository essay tells us something about the connections between ___________ and some famous ________ architectural marvels.2．The passage mainly tells us that the Lei family, pioneering ________， who for ____ generations were behind the marvels of imperial ________．the Lei FamilyQingdynastyengineerssevenarchitectureⅡ.文本剖析：特色表达diligenceinnovationplangenerationambitiousassociatedtreasurebeyondⅢ.识记下列短语1．have...in common与……有共同之处2．vary from...to...在……之间变化3．in minute detail 详尽无遗4．in light of 考虑到……，根据……5．along with 与……一起6．be associated with 与……有联系7．the spirit of craftsmanship 工匠精神8．show diligence and humility 展现勤奋和谦虚Part Ⅱ 写作指导技法指导1.文体介绍说明文是指以说明为主要表达方式，来说明事物的情况、特征或道理的文体。其特点在于说明性、 知识性和科学性。2．篇章结构第一部分：提出要介绍的人物(可包括出生时间、地点等基本信息)；第二部分：介绍人物的主要经历、事迹或成就、人物品质、贡献或地位等；第三部分：对人物进行评价与总结。3．常用表达(1)XXX, a famous..., was born in..., on...XXX，一位著名的……，X年X月X日生于……(2)XXX, born in..., was a great scientist and inventor.XXX生于……，是一位伟大的科学家和发明家。(3)Born in..., XXX is recognised as one of China's greatest scientists, a pioneer of...XXX生于……，被公认为中国最伟大的科学家之一，是……的先驱。(4)XXX, known as..., plays a crucial role in...XXX作为……，在……方面发挥着至关重要的作用。(5)XXX, without whom it would have been impossible for us to..., is one of the academicians of the Chinese Academy of Engineering.XXX是中国工程院院士之一，没有他/她我们就不可能……(6)XXX, the founding father of..., was the founder and promoter of...XXX是……的先驱，是……的奠基人和倡导者。(7)XXX was so diligent that he worked day and night.XXX是如此勤奋，日夜工作。(8)It was not until he died that his parents and many of his friends realised that he had produced such extraordinary achievements.直到他去世，他的父母和许多朋友才意识到他取得了如此非凡的成就。(9)Many good qualities are embodied in these heroes and they do deserve respect from all of us.这些英雄身上体现了许多优秀品质，值得我们所有人尊敬。(10)They are diligent and down to earth, which best demonstrates that the Chinese people are a hardworking people.他们勤奋踏实，这最能说明中国人民是艰苦奋斗的民族。(11)Happiness of the people always tops the list in their dictionary, and the interests of our country outweigh their own personal ones.人民的幸福永远是他们的头等大事，国家的利益高于他们个人的利益。精品展示假定你是李华，英语老师要求学生们了解“工匠精神”，根据以下要点，用英文写一篇体现工匠精神的人物介绍。1．29岁的工匠王曦是天津杨柳青木版印刷最年轻的继承人。2．从小喜欢木刻，自从2014年成为学徒，至今致力于木刻。3．雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作，孩子们的胳膊和腿的线条以及脸上的细节，包括眼睛，都是最具挑战性的部分。4．老师教导他保持一种平和的心态以及王曦对木刻的认识。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题谋篇第一步：确定体裁、人称和时态本文为人物介绍，以第三人称为主，时态主要以一般现在时为主，兼顾其他时态。第二步：确定段落第一段：人物介绍第二段：工作情况介绍第三段：对工作的认识第三步：提炼要点1．________________ 木版印刷2．________________ 献身于……3．________________ 提醒某人做某事4．_________________ 保持平和的心态5．________________ 净化灵魂6．________________ 瞬息变化的世界woodblock printingdevote oneself toremind sb. to do sth.maintain a peaceful mindpurify one's soulfastchanging world第四步：句式升级1．雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作，这可能需要一个月甚至两个月的时间才能完成。(一般表达)Engraving wood is never an easy job, and it may take one or even two months for him to complete.(高级表达)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Engraving wood is never an easy job, which may take one or even two months for him to complete.2．孩子们的胳膊和腿的线条以及脸上的细节，包括眼睛，都是最具挑战性的部分，因为这些细细的线条应该光滑优美，足以展现人物生动艺术的表情。(一般表达)The lines of children's arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve. These thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures' vivid and artistic expressions.(高级表达)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ The lines of children's arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve, as these thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures' vivid and artistic expressions.3．我的老师经常提醒我要保持平和的心态，没有这种心态，手艺就不会稳定和准确。(without which定语从句)(一般表达)My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind. Without the mind, there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship.(高级表达)________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship.连句成篇_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wang Xi, a 29yearold craftsman is the youngest inheritor of Yangliuqing woodblock printing in Tianjin. A fan of this art form since his childhood, he has devoted himself to engraving wood since he became an apprentice of woodblock printing in 2014. Engraving wood is never an easy job, which may take one or even two months for him to complete. The lines of children's arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve, as these thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures' vivid and artistic expressions. “My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship，” Wang says. “Maybe this job seems boring to others. For me, it seems that I am carving the woodblock, but in fact, I am carving out my life and purifying my soul in this fastchanging world.”单元复习 核心考点梳理一、重点单词1．pose v．(使)摆好姿势 n．姿势，姿态pose for 为……摆好姿势2．devotion n．深爱，挚爱；奉献，忠心devote oneself to 献身于……，致力于……devote one's life/time/energy/attention to 把某人的生命/时间/精力/注意力奉献于……be devoted to (doing) sth.致力于(做)某事3．approach n．方法，方式；接近，靠近；通路，路径 v．接近，靠近an approach to (doing) sth.做某事的方法adopt/take an approach 采用一种方法the approach of ……的来临4．trial n．试验；试用；审判，审理by trial and error 反复试验(以得出最佳结果)on trial 在试用；在受审5．polish v．擦亮，擦光；修改，润色polish up 擦亮，擦光；提高(技能)；改善(外表等)6．preserve v．维护，保护；保存，保养；贮存，保鲜 n．保护区preserve...from (doing)...保护……免受……preserve the peace 维护和平preserve the forest 保护森林7．dominate v．支配，控制，主宰→domination n．支配，控制，主宰8．associate v．与……有关；联系associate...with...把……与……联系起来be associated with 与……有联系in association with 与……有关联；与……联合9．comprise v．包括，由……构成be comprised of 由……构成二、重点短语1．nothing more than 仅仅，不过是nothing less than 不亚于，完全not...anything more than 不过，仅仅2．as much as 和……一样多；多达……as much as you can 最大程度地as soon as you can 尽可能快地(时间)as fast/quick as you can 尽可能快地3．belong to 属于(某人)；是(俱乐部、组织等)的成员a sense of belonging 归属感personal belongings 个人财物，私人用品4．put...into...将……投入……；用……表达；将……译成……put...into practice 把……付诸实施put...into use 将……投入使用put...into (the) action 实行，实施5．not once 从未，从来没有(位于句首时用部分倒装)at once 立刻，马上once in a while 偶尔，间或once again＝once more 再一次，又一次all at once 突然6．a passion for sth.对……的热爱，对……的强烈爱好with great passion 充满激情7．die out 灭绝；消失die away (声音、风或光)逐渐消失，逐渐减弱die down 逐渐变弱；逐渐平息die off 相继死去，先后死去(直至死光)8．back down 退让；认输；承认(错误)back off 后退；放弃back up 堵塞；支持；倒退9．break new ground 开辟新的领域；有新发现hold/stand one's ground 坚守阵地，不退缩；坚持自己的立场get off the ground 开始获得成功，取得进展gain ground 取得优势，变得更成功lose ground 失去优势，失利have/keep both feet on the ground 实事求是，脚踏实地10．at one's own pace 按自己的节奏at a．..pace 以……速度keep pace with 与……并驾齐驱，与……步调一致set the pace 确定速度；领跑pace up and down 踱来踱去11．day in day out 日复一日地(＝day after day)week in week out＝week after week 连续几个星期，一周又一周month after month 一月又一月，月复一月year after year 年年，年复一年12．range from...to...在……到……之间变化；包括从……到……之间的各种事物range between...and...在……到……之间变化a (wide) range of 一系列的；各种各样的13．bring...back to life 使……复活；使……恢复生机come to life 复活bring...to a conclusion 使……结束come to a conclusion 得出结论bring...to an end 使……结束come to an end 结束14．pass on...to...将……传授/传递给……pass by 路过，经过pass down 把(知识或技能)往下传pass through 通过，经历三、重要句式1．强调句型： It is/was＋被强调部分＋that＋其他部分These things were real, and it was within their reality that Cunningham saw both beauty and potential.这些东西是真实的，在这种真实中，坎宁安看到了美好和潜力。2．“no matter＋疑问词”引导让步状语从句He valued his integrity and would not be bought by anyone, no matter how many free clothes or flights to faraway destinations he was offered.他珍视自己的正直，不为任何人所动摇，无论提供给他多少免费衣物或远程航班。3．If it hadn't been for...要不是……If it hadn't been for a three-episode documentary, outsiders would never have known that...要不是那三集纪录片，外面的人永远也不会知道……4．so...that...中so...位于句首引起倒装So incredible was their skill that many of their buildings survived earthquakes and remained standing over hundreds of years.他们的技术是如此的不可思议，以至于他们的许多建筑在地震中幸存下来，并屹立了数百年。
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