作文（课件）通用版英语六年级下册

这是一份作文（课件）通用版英语六年级下册，共45页。
英语脑筋急转弯Q：What question can you never answer 'yes' to? 　　A：'Are you asleep?'“你睡着了吗？”这句话可能还有其他答案，不过这一个肯定是经典之一。因为绝对没有人在睡着后还能回答“你睡着了吗？”这个问题的。 Writing--How can we write a beautiful English article ?Warming-up(热身) 1. Praise your deskmate. (夸一夸你的同桌.) friendly …. 2.Answer questions: What’s her/his name ? -Her/His name is… What does she/he look like ? –She/He is… –She/He has… What’s her/his hobby ? -She/He likes … … …Warming-up (热身) passage：My deskmate is Li Mei with two big eyes. She is very quiet and shy. She enjoys listening to music, singing and dancing. She is an excellent student and we are the best friends. Discussion:What should we pay attention to while writing?1.定内容和结构, 切题不跑题。2.定时态，时态前后呼应。记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。3.定人称，用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。4.定句型、定用词；应依据内容，先定句型后定用词。写作注意“四定”1.尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记 “避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。3.检查时要注意标点符号和大小写是否使用准确。写作注意的几个问题：“模仿”胜过“创新”！开门见山，少绕弯子！文章要有结构，不能想起一句写一句。写你会写的，不要写你想写的！不要使用Chinglish（中式英语）！ 英语写作黄金原则假设你是Li Mei , Mike White是你的新朋友。请根据以下关于Tom的信息写一篇题目为My New Friend 的英文作文。可适当发挥，80词左右。四定之一：1.定内容和结构: ①介绍姓名、国籍和能力。②外貌、性格和爱好。③其它内容。四定之二：2.定时态 ：一般现在时 3.定人称： 四定之三：第三人称单数 he/she四定之四：4.定句型和用词:e.g: round face, black hair, tall, strong, humorous, kind, clever……e.g: be intersted in, enjoy doing sth. ... like doing sth. ...根据题目给出的写作要求，你可以得出多少关键信息？1, 必写内容：介绍Mike White的姓名，国籍，语言，外贸，性格，爱好。2,必须把“其它”这项要求拓展出2-3个要点。 My new friend I have a new friend . His name is Mike White . He comes from England . However , he can speak English ,French and some Chinese . He is tall with blonde hair . He wears a pair of glasses .Tom is outgoing and handsome . He also loves helping other people . But sometimes he is quiet . He likes music that he can dance to . Last year , he moved to China with his parents . He studies very hard and gets good grades in his exams . Do you want to make friends with him? 范文Part 2信件类Have you written a letter to your friends?Free talkLetter FormsDear Simon,I'm glad to hear from you. How have you been these days?In your last letter, you talked about films you like. I agree with you that Life of Pi is a great film.His adventure was so exciting. Besides, Pi is a really brave boy. I like him very much.Anyway, here is one of favourite films that I would like to recommend to you. It's Titanic.Yours,William齐头式Dear Simon, I'm glad to hear from you. How have you been these days?In your last letter, you talked about films you like. I agree with you that Life of Pi is a great film. His adventure was so exciting. Besides, Pi is a really brave boy. I like him very much. Anyway, here is one of favourite films that I would like to recommend to you. It's Titanic.Yours , William缩进式书信体的要素：称呼正文结束语署名Dear Simon,I'm glad to hear from you. How have you been these days?In your last letter, you talked about films you like. I agree with you that Life of Pi is a great film.His adventure was so exciting. Besides, Pi is a really brave boy. I like him very much.Anyway, here is one of favourite films that I would like to recommend to you. It's Titanic.Yours ,William称呼结束语署名正文书信体的格式：称呼（后面是逗号或者冒号）：Dear Sir/Madam…正文：空4个字母或者顶格写;结束语：Yours sincerely, Yours，…署名：Your name书信体的5要求：1.开门见山说意图；2.咨询建议1、2、3；3.不同内容可分段；4.感谢客气不可少；5.期待回信成老套。Step 1—— 开头段★1.告知对方你的身份（在对方不认识你的情况下）Dear Sir,I am a Grade 5 student in your school. I'm in Class 3. My name is Jonny.Step 1—— 开头段★2.问候收信人（假如对方是你的亲戚、朋友）Dear Timmy,How are you?/How are things going with you?Step 1—— 开头段★3.解释写信的原因（致谢、抱怨、致歉、询问等）Dear Madam,I'm writing to you to show my grateful for your advice.注意每句话的写作意图Exercise 2Circle the correct preposition.1. We arrived at /on midday last Friday.2. My sister often goes out in / at the evening.3. Our school year finishes on / in July.4. My parents are coming on / in Thursday.5. The last bus is on / at 4.30.6. At / In winter it gets very cold here.7. My birthday is in / on 29th May.Step 3—— 结尾段★1.再次表示歉意或感激Thank you for you kindness./ I’m so sorry that I can’t …,but I believe you can understand me.Step 3—— 结尾段★2.期盼回信I look forward to hearing from you soon./I hope to receive you reply soon. 评分标准评分标准 总分为10分，按4个档次给分。 第四档（8—10分）：覆盖所有内容要点，并适当展开 ，语言无误或基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第三档（6—7分）：能写出全部内容要点，有少量语言错误,行文较连贯, 表达较清楚。 第二档（3—5分）：能写出大部分内容要点，有一些语言错误，行文不够连贯，但尚能表达意思。第一档（1—2分）：只写出部分要点或与内容有关的一些单词，语言错误较多，只有个别句子可读，可看懂。0分 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或无法看清，无法评判。 你的英语作文书写规范吗？漂亮的书法令人爱不释手，小错误都会被改卷老师“视而不见”丑得掉渣的书写！文章内容写得再好，阅卷老师都没有耐心读下去！Let's practice! 做小老师修改以下作文My is a girl. My name is Li Xiao Ming. I am a Zhongshan school’s student. My age is 11 years old. I have a big eyes and a nose. I is helpful. I can water flower and cook dinner. I like play ping-pong and read a book. My favourite food is a eggplant, because it healfty. I very like Chinese’s food. Because is very tasy.I’m Li Xiaoming I am am playing readingeggplantsis healthyChinesetastyvery muchAhasBhaveCdoAhaveAdoesCareClass is over! Homework1. 完成第十讲课后练习。2.认真做笔记。 3.单词打卡（第五六模块） （作业提交方式：钉钉班级群家校本 截止时间：周三23:00前） 1