高中英语2024高考复习应用文写作练习与讲解（回复信+感谢信+投稿）

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信：分享万米接力赛（湖南省长沙市长郡中学2024届高三暑假作业检测卷）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David发来邮件想了解你们学校近期举行的万米接力赛的情况。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.比赛目的；2.时间和地点；3.过程及意义。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右。1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山说明写作目的——分享学校万米接力赛；第二段写比赛目的（要点1）、时间和地点（要点2）以及比赛过程和意义（要点3）；第三段期待回复。【参考范文】Dear David,Glad to receive your letter, in which you asked about the 10,000-meter relay race held by our school, I'd like to share it with you.Last Tuesday afternoon witnessed the relay race at the school's playground with the purpose of enriching the school's sports culture and cultivating students' teamwork spirit and collective sense of honor. On the running track, out rushed the players in pursuit of victory with the starting gun going off, and the whole field immediately boiled up, refueling and cheering one after another. Not only did the competition demonstrate the students' youthful vigor and vitality, it also enhanced the unity of the class.What about any activities in your school? Looking forward to your sharing. (119 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的大卫：很高兴收到你的来信。你在信中询问我们学校近期举办的万米接力赛，那我就和你分享下相关情况。此次接力赛于上周二下午在校田径场举行，旨在丰富学校的运动文化，培养学生的团队合作意识和集体荣誉感。赛场上，随着发令枪响，选手们冲出起跑线求胜，整个赛场顿时沸腾起来，加油助威声此起彼伏。此次活动充分展现了同学们的青春风采与活力，也增强了班级的凝聚力。你们学校有什么精彩活动吗？期待你的分享。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为回复信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为分享近期举办的万米接力赛，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）witness运用无灵主语结构；（2）with the purpose of目的是...；（3）out rushed ...运用完全倒装结构；（4）in pursuit of追求；（5）boil up沸腾；（6）refiling and cheering ...分词短语作状语，加油和欢呼声（此起彼伏）；（7）Not only did ...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构。二、感谢信：感谢对自己的热情款待（浙江A9协作体2023年9月高二暑假返校联考）假设你是李华，假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时受到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意，内容包括：1.写邮件目的；2.得到好友的哪些款待；3.表达谢意。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段交代写信目的——表达感谢（要点1）；第二段说明理由（要点2）；第三段再次表达谢意（要点3）。【参考范文】Dear Judy,I have arrived home. I’d like to extend my sincere thanks to you for your splendid hospitality during my visit to your hometown.Memories came flooding back to me. I still remember the wonderful time when you led me to get around and visit the most famous attractions, enabling me to have a good view of the exotic scenery and expose myself to the traditional customs. I still remember the wonderful time when you led me to taste the local delicacies, bringing me a feast for my appetite.Words fail to express my gratitude to you, and I sincerely invite you to visit my hometown. Looking forward to your reply. (109 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的朱迪：我已经抵达家里。对于我在你的家乡游玩期间你给我的热情款待，我表示由衷感谢。假期的美好时光历历在目。我清晰地记得你带我四处游玩，游遍了当地最著名的风景点，让我饱览异国美景，体验传统民俗。我清晰地记得，你让我遍尝当地的山珍海味，让我大饱口福。千言万语难以表达我的感谢之情，同时我也诚挚地邀请你来我的家乡做客。期待你的回复。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作三步法：（1）仔细审题，确定本文为感谢信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）根据写作要求，本文主体部分为回忆Judy的热情款待，确定本文时态主基调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）extend one's sincere thanks to sb表达某人的诚挚谢意；（2）splendid hospitality盛情款待；（3）Memories came flooding back to me过去的回忆历历在目；（4）have a good view of饱览；（5）expose oneself to体验；（6）bringing me a feast for my appetite让我大饱口福；（7）Words fail to express my gratitude to you千言万语难以表达我的谢意。三、投稿：养成好习惯，促进我健康（2023-2024学年江苏省徐州市侯集高级中学高二上入学检测）假定你校英文报正在以“养成好习惯，促进我健康”为主题开展征文活动。请写一篇短文，向报社投稿，内容包括：1．介绍一项你的好习惯；2．该习惯对健康的影响；3．呼吁养成健康习惯。注意：1．词数100左右，题目已为你写好；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Good Habits, Good Heal写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山介绍自己养成的一项好习惯（要点1）；第二段说明习惯对健康的影响（要点2）；第三段呼吁养成健康习惯（要点3）。【参考范文】Good Habits, Good HealAs is known to all, good habits benefits us for a lifetime, of which early sleep and early rise is what I have held on to.I still remember the time during my summer vacation five years ago when I tended to stay up late for fun and lie in bed without breakfast the next day. Not only did it disrupt my body clock, resulting in my memory loss and the decrease in my immune system, it also had a huge impact on my studies. It was early to bed and early to rise, however, that brought me back to normal life.Together, let's develop healthy habits! I believe that persistence prevails. (112 words)【中文翻译】大家下午好！我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天，我们在这里为她举行欢送会。养成好习惯，促进我健康众所周知，好的习惯使人受益终身。早睡早起就是我一直坚持的好习惯。犹记我在五年前的假期，因为贪玩经常晚上很晚睡觉，第二天赖在床上不吃早饭。这不但打乱了我的生物钟，导致我记忆力和免疫力下降，也对我的学习造成巨大影响。是早睡早起让我回归到正常的学习与生活。让我们一起养成健康的好习惯吧！我相信，坚持就是胜利。【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为投稿；（2）因文体是投稿，故作者身份在正文中不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍自己养成的一项好习惯并说明该习惯对健康的影响，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）As is known to all众所周知，定语从句，as指代后面整个句子；（2）tend to do sth往往会做某事；（3）Not only did it ...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；（4）result in导致；（5）have a huge impact on对...产生巨大影响；（6）It was ... that ...强调句型；（7）persistence prevails坚持就是胜利。