2020年中考英语真题分项汇编：专题21 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（含解析）

专题21 书面表达

考点4 叙事描写类

（一）【 •浙江省温州市】

56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。

请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。

注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。

The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve

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【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

【参考范文】

The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve

The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.

There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.

【名师点评】

例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：get together；all kinds of；For example；thousands of等。

句型：For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation.

At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

（二）【 •北京市】

39.从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。

提示词语：lose, make up（弥补）, buy, send

提示问题：

What happened to the book?

What will you do to make up for it?

【写作思路】

该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method? I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                                              Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。

2.高分亮点：

短语：borrow from；want to do sth；send…to…；look forward to。

句型：定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago；宾语从句that you can forgive me。
 

（三）【 •浙江省宁波市】

71.假如你是李华, 学业考试后要参加"21世纪杯"中学生英语演讲大赛, 题目为A/An _____________Winter Holiday, 请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿, 讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历, 并谈谈它对你今后的影响。

注意:

(1) 将演讲稿标题补充完整;

(2) 演讲稿必须包含所有要点, 并适当拓展;

(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

(4) 词数100左右;首尾句已给出, 不计入总词数。

A/An _____________Winter Holiday

Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.

【写作思路】

本文是一篇演讲稿。文中描述了在一个难忘的寒假里做的事情，学到的东西以及对自己未来的影响。

【参考范文】

An Unforgettable Winter Holiday

Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.

Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of the COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped parents with housework like coking. And I learnt how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learnt to get on better with them.

What I learnt during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely.

That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time.

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。

2.高分亮点：

短语：because of因为；as a result因此；learn by oneself自学；help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；communicate with sb与某人交流。

句子：And I learnt how to cook well句中用的是宾语从句的简略形式；I will be more self-controlled and independent句中用的是形容词比较级；I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely句中用that引导宾语从句，引导词that已省略。

（四）【 •浙江省台州市】

61.假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。

注意: (1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;(2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; (3）词数:80～100.

【写作思路】

该题目是书信类书面表达，根据安德鲁的邮件内容进行回复，格式按照邮件格式。

【参考范文】

Hi, Andrew,

Welcome to China. So glad you’ll come and see me.

In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.

Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1,500 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. It sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttings are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of good luck.

See you soon.

Li Hua

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：例文采用四段式结构，第一段表示问候，第二段介绍天气情况，第三段介绍中国传统剪纸艺术，第四段表示期待与对方见面；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；时态主要是一般现在时。

2.高分亮点：

短语：turn into；put on；good luck；welcome to…；most of the day；with a history of…。

句型：In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. there be句型；You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. had better do sth.表示提建议。