(2020-2022)中考英语真题分项汇编专题51叙事描写类(含详解)

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专题51 书面表达—叙述描写类

【2022年】
（一）（2022·新疆·中考真题）
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行
2.一次难忘的比赛
3.一次难忘的志愿服务
……
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…
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【答案】例文
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.
Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.
What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。



（二）（2022·甘肃武威·中考真题）
以“being lost”为主题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。

The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
●Where was Mary?
●What was Mary doing?
●What happened to her?
●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother?
The following words may help you:
●crowded with visitors
●so interested in the animals
●no one around
●turn to …
要求：
1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息；
3.在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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【答案】One possible version:
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully. After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what she’d found about these animals. However, she noticed there was no one around. She was afraid and worried, but she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo. Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. When seeing her mother, Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，结合图片提示进行详细地描述故事的发生以及过程及结果，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧密结合所给出的要点内容，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。


（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）
亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。
内容包括：
1.你对这位老师的印象；
2.你感谢他（她）的原因；
3.你对他（她）的祝福。
注意：
1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当举例或拓展；
3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。



（四）（2022·天津·中考真题）
假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。
（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。
（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。
（4）人们过来帮忙。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down   挡住block   树枝branch   树干trunk
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


（五）（2022·云南·中考真题）
I Learned How to ________
提示：人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能，明白了某些道理……请以“I Learned How to ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你的一次学习经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
I Learned How to Learn English Well
At the beginning of middle school, I always got bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t know how to learn it well.
One day, my English teacher talked to me and understood my problem. She gave me some advice like speaking more. From that day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened to English songs or watched English movies. Second, I listened to teacher in class carefully and took notes. Thirdly, I took part in the English corner. I communicated with others as much as possible in English. Finally, I have great progress in English.
From this experience, I know that when you face some difficulties, don’t give up easily. You should find some ways to deal with them. You will success one day.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我学会了如何学好英语”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学习英语的经历；最后一段介绍自己从这次经历得到了什么感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。


（六）（2022·浙江宁波·中考真题）
为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动 (a series of labour activities)，假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80-100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Time
Things I learned
My feelings
March
grow vegetables and plant trees
…
April
repair things like electric fans…
May
…
Let’s Enjoy Working
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【答案】例文：
Let’s enjoy working!
This term, I took part in a series of labor activities in our school. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things like electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do much housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I’m sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己参加的学校组织的一系列劳动实践活动的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。



（七）（2022·重庆A卷·中考真题）

科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。
要求：
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 起因，经过；
2. 结果，感悟；
3. ……
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【答案】例文
       A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.
       I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.
From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。


（八）（2022·重庆B卷·中考真题）
有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Coner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒
1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）
3. ……
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题，结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。





【2021年】
A
（2021·湖南湘潭市·中考真题）
榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示：
What does he/she look like?
What is he/she like?
Why do you admire him/her?
参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream
要求：
1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is_______________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己最敬佩的人是谁以及为什么值得你敬佩等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
B
（2021·湖北恩施土家族苗族自治州·中考真题）
为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。

要点提示：
1. 过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……；
2. 现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……；
3. 你的感想。
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
My Beautiful Hometown
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My Beautiful Hometown
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.
There were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town.
But now, there are green mountains, clean water, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved.
I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Beautiful Hometown为题，结合图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍家乡的过去；第三段介绍家乡的现在；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
C
（2021·湖南怀化市·中考真题）
假定你是李华，2022年亚运会将在杭州举行，你想成为一名志愿者，请用英语给组委会写一封信，内容包括：
1. 擅长英语，口语很棒；
2. 性格外向，乐于助人；
3. 爱好运动，了解亚运会等。
要求：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be good at/I do well in擅长 spoken English口语 outgoing外向的
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer.
Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. Secondly, I am an outgoing girl and I’m ready to help others. So I can cooperate with others well. Last but not the least, I like sports. I want to know more about the Asian Games. I hope to take part in the Asian Games one day.
I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份写一篇申请信，申请成为杭州亚运会的志愿者。题目中给出了具体的写作内容，文中应包括：介绍自己想成为亚运会志愿者的三个理由，应添加一个适当的结尾，如表达自己的期盼以及如果获得这个机会会非常感激等等。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文应用一般现在时叙述，人称为第一人称。写作时应根据题目中给出的要点进行适当的拓展，使文章内容更丰富、具体。应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯。
D
（2021·江苏南京市·中考真题）
某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。


This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire（鼓舞）our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab?
Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful.
Send your writing to us right now!
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long time but didn’t see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she told me that she passed it. I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
E
（2021·江苏盐城市·中考真题）
初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An Unforgettable Experience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What was the experience?
2. What have you learned from it?
注意事项：
（1）词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences._____________________
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An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the experience of being a volunteer for the Asian Games held in our city.
Being one of the three volunteers selected from our school, I felt excited and proud. To make sure that I could provide the best service, I practiced in my spare time, especially my spoken English. When the day finally came, I felt a little bit nervous because I was afraid of making any mistakes. Fortunately, I performed well and was spoken highly of by the volunteer organization.
I learned that we should be confident and hard-working. It was the first time that I had been a volunteer for such an important event, which made me proud ever since.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，根据提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍令自己难忘的经历；第三段介绍自己的感受和学到了什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
F
（2021·浙江宁波市·中考真题）
假如你是李华, 上个月你校举行了 “祖国在我心中”的主题活动（theme event）, 请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历, 写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括导图的所有要点, 并适当发挥;
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
（3）词数 80-100;标题已给出, 不计入总词数。

Motherland in My Heart
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Motherland in My Heart
Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland.
During the event, we had many activities, including singing red songs and telling stories about the Red Army. I took part in the singing competition. Besides, I attended the speech contest in which I told a story about a hero. Many students were moved by my story.
I think this event is very meaningful. I’m proud of my country. I hope our motherland will become much greater and everybody can live a better life.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目要求根据所给提示，以“Motherland in My Heart”为题，结合自己参加“祖国在我心中”主题活动的经历写篇文章，向学校英语报投稿。
2.写作指导：人称应采用第一人称，介绍主题活动内容时用一般过去时，表达自己的感受时用一般现在时。注意要包含所给要点，保证条理清晰。
G
（2021·云南昆明市·中考真题）
Life is full of love
爱是荒漠甘泉，滋养你的心灵；爱是长夜明灯，指引你前进的方向。生活中爱无处不在，它或来自你的父母、家人；或来自你的老师、朋友、同学甚至陌生人。请你用英文以 “Life is full of love”为题写一篇短文，叙述一个你经历过充满爱的故事。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Life is full of love
Is there a thing full of love buried deeply in your heart? I want to share one with all of you and push myself.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. It was the rush hour and the bus was extremely crowded. I was even secretly happy that I had a seat. Just at that moment, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. Just as I was hesitating, our eyes met. I had mixed feelings, embarrassed, worried, nervous…Before I could get up, she said to me with a warm voice “Boy, you must be very tired after the whole day’s work. But fighting for your dream is a happy thing. I will get off at the next stop. Sit here and have a good rest.”
How kind and understanding she was! What she said made me not only ashamed but moved. It was her love that is pushing me to be a better person!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以Life is full of love为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段叙述自己经历过的充满爱的故事；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
H
（2021·浙江衢州市·中考真题）
为助力打造 “书香校园”，你校英语社团将举办以 “热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以 “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
要求：
1. 短文应包括两个要点（阅读情况和阅读好处），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2. 短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数：90～110。
参考词汇：experience, habit, knowledge, pleasure
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【答案】
Version 1
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man.
I have a great passion for reading and it has become part of my life. I have a good reading habit. Every morning, I read newspapers for the latest news. I’m also fond of novels and magazines. Besides, book reviews provide me with different ideas on great books.
When reading, I feel relaxed and pleased. It’s the best moment to get knowledge and pleasure in life. What’s more, reading opens my eyes and broadens my mind. Through reading, I can experience what I haven’t seen or done before.
With a deep love for reading, I can’t wait to read more.

Version 2
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life. Bacon said: “Reading makes a full man”. And reading makes our life colorful too.
I’ve developed a good reading habit since I was a child. Comics are my favorite, like “Journey to the West”. These funny books gave me great pleasure and accompanied me through a happy childhood. After entering middle school, I had a wide reading in varied fields. And all these books brought me both valuable knowledge and wonderful experiences.
Books are human’s friends. Love them, and they will reward you better!
【详解】
Version 1
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己的阅读情况以及阅读的好处是什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
I
（2021·江苏苏州市·中考真题）
在日常生活中, 冲突难免发生。请以 “A conflict with…”为题。用英语写下你与他人（如：家人, 老师, 同学等）或自己内心发生过的冲突故事。故事需包括冲突的发生和解决。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右;
2. 请先将标题填写完整，再写文章；
3文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名， 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
参考词汇：conflict 冲突
A conflict with ________
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【答案】
A conflict with my mother
In daily life, conflicts often occur. I sometimes have conflicts with my mother.
When I got home, she always said a lot. She would ask me about my performance in class, how I got along with my classmates and so on. I felt really bored sometimes. I was very tired after a day’s class. When I got home, I just wanted to rest and didn’t want to talk. So whenever my mother asked me something, we always had some conflicts.
Later, I told my good friend what I thought, and she suggested that I talk to my mother about what I really thought. I did as she suggested. I had a heart-to-heart talk with my mother. I explained my thoughts in detail to my mother. Instead of talking about it endlessly, my mother gave me more space and made me more independent.
In the end, my relationship with my mother became very harmonious. We all became happier and more relaxed.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己和谁发生了冲突，包括冲突的发生和解决，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
J
（2021·湖南常德市·中考真题）
假设你是第二节（回答问题）材料中的Alan, 请写一篇80词以上的英文日记，描述对话中所发生的事情。
注意：
1. 要点包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等；
2. 不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；
3. 请按以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
June 20th, 2021
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【答案】
June 20th, 2021
On my way to school this morning, I saw a traffic accident. A boy was riding a bicycle, listening to music. At a crossing road, the traffic lights were about to turn red when a car appeared. Because the driver was on the phone, he didn’t notice the traffic lights and didn’t stop on time. The boy who was riding a bike fell off his bike and hurt his knee. What a terrible accident!
I think we must be careful on our way to school, don’t catch up, don’t listen to music, especially when crossing the road.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据第二节材料中的Alan的叙述，描写目睹的事情情况，包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣材料内容，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
K
（2021·浙江杭州市·中考真题）
假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping,
How is everything going with you? Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me. We’re having a party next Saturday. Please come! We’ll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food? The party will be starting at 6 p.m. What time do you think you’ll be coming? I’ll probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you’ll be able to stay and help?
Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not.
All the best.
Matt
Dear Matt,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
【答案】
Dear Matt,
It’s good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you. I hope you would like them. Don’t worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up.
Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it!
All the best.
Li Ping
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时根据收到的邮件内容，接受邀请并回复，内容包括几点到达，以及所带的食物等。
2.本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在写作时，力求语言准确，格式准确，保证条理清晰。
【2020年】
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点4 叙事描写类
（一）【2020 •浙江省温州市】
56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。
注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：get together；all kinds of；For example；thousands of等。
句型：For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation.
At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

（二）【2020 •北京市】
39.从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。
提示词语：lose, make up（弥补）, buy, send
提示问题：
What happened to the book?
What will you do to make up for it?
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method? I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：borrow from；want to do sth；send…to…；look forward to。
句型：定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago；宾语从句that you can forgive me。

（三）【2020 •浙江省宁波市】
71.假如你是李华, 学业考试后要参加"21世纪杯"中学生英语演讲大赛, 题目为A/An _____________Winter Holiday, 请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿, 讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历, 并谈谈它对你今后的影响。

注意:
(1) 将演讲稿标题补充完整;
(2) 演讲稿必须包含所有要点, 并适当拓展;
(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(4) 词数100左右;首尾句已给出, 不计入总词数。
A/An _____________Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
【写作思路】
本文是一篇演讲稿。文中描述了在一个难忘的寒假里做的事情，学到的东西以及对自己未来的影响。
【参考范文】
An Unforgettable Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.
Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of the COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped parents with housework like coking. And I learnt how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learnt to get on better with them.
What I learnt during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。
2.高分亮点：
短语：because of因为；as a result因此；learn by oneself自学；help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；communicate with sb与某人交流。
句子：And I learnt how to cook well句中用的是宾语从句的简略形式；I will be more self-controlled and independent句中用的是形容词比较级；I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely句中用that引导宾语从句，引导词that已省略。
（四）【2020 •浙江省台州市】
61.假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。
Hi, Li Hua,
I’m going on holiday to your country next month with my family.
What’s the weather like at that time? I'm just planning what I need to take. What clothes do you think I need to pack? Could you tell me something about one kind of traditional Chinese art, such as paper cutting, Chinese clay art. . . ?
Thanks for your help.
Andrew

注意: (1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;(2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; (3）词数:80～100.
To: Andrew
From: Li Hua
Hi, Andrew,
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Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目是书信类书面表达，根据安德鲁的邮件内容进行回复，格式按照邮件格式。
【参考范文】
Hi, Andrew,
Welcome to China. So glad you’ll come and see me.
In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.
Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1,500 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. It sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttings are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of good luck.
See you soon.
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：例文采用四段式结构，第一段表示问候，第二段介绍天气情况，第三段介绍中国传统剪纸艺术，第四段表示期待与对方见面；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；时态主要是一般现在时。
2.高分亮点：
短语：turn into；put on；good luck；welcome to…；most of the day；with a history of…。
句型：In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. there be句型；You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. had better do sth.表示提建议。
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题22 书面表达
考点4 叙事描写类
【2020 •广西北部湾经济】
66.春去秋来, 四季交替, 你最喜欢什么季节? 请根据以下提示, 以"My favourite season"为题, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点：
1. 你最喜欢的季节是什么？
2. 它有哪些自然现象？
3. 可以进行哪些体育、休闲活动？
4. 你有哪些感受？
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给的要点, 可适当发挥, 使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整, 语句通顺, 语法正确, 书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息, 否则一律不予评分。
My favourite season
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【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍我最喜欢春天；接下来介绍春天的自然现象，可以进行的体育、休闲活动和我的感受；最后鼓励大家一起享受春天。
【参考范文】
My favourite season
There are four seasons in a year. Of all the seasons, I like spring best.
In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer. The trees turn green and the flowers start to come out. We can hear the birds singing happily in the trees. It usually rains lightly and the air is fresh. During this season, there are many outdoor activities, such as going hiking, flying kites and planting trees. I usually go cycling or have a picnic with my parents on weekends. I think these activities are colourful and meaningful.
Spring stands for a new beginning and it is full of hope. Let's enjoy this wonderful season together.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一或第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，描述春天的天气、自然现象、可以从事的休闲活动时，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：come out；hear sb doing sth；such as；on weekends；be full of。
句型：there be句型；宾语从句；祈使句。
【2020 •河北省】
56.李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。

say goodbye kiss his mother

receive a warm welcome give her a big hug
注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there.

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【写作思路】
本题属于看图作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据图画内容并结合文字提示，发挥想象来写一篇英语作文。写作时要包含每幅图片的主要信息并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there. His father took him to say goodbye to her. One day, he saw his mother on TV while she was away. He missed her so much that he kissed his mother across the TV screen. When the outbreak was under control, his mother came back with other medical workers. They received a warm welcome. As soon as his mother got home, Li Shuo gave her a big hug. How he misses his mother!
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据图画及文字提示，以一般过去时讲述了李硕的妈妈去武汉抗疫到回来的过程中的几个细节。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye to sb.；across the TV screen；be under control；come back；medical workers；receive a warm welcome；give sb. a hug。
句型：while引导的时间状语从句；so ... that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；as soon as引导的时间状语从句；以how开头的感叹句。
【2020 •绥化市】

七、写作
94.说起小动物，你的脑海中会浮现哪些画面，干净活泼的猫咪，还是对主人忠诚不二的小狗？这些可爱又有灵性的小动物让我们的生活丰富多彩，充满乐趣。你最喜欢的小动物是什么？你和它之间发生过怎样令人难忘的故事？小动物在你的生活中有怎样重要的位置？写一篇短文来和大家分享一下。

要求：
1. 短文中须包括图表中包含的全部信息，条理清楚、行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等。
3. 词数不少于80词。
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，要求你根据提示写一篇短文，讲述你最喜欢的小动物以及你和它之间的故事。
【参考范文】
I think animals are our friends. I like animals very much.
Once my mother bought a goldfish for me as a gift. It looked very beautiful. I liked it very much. I put it in a big bowl and fed it every day. I thought I should try my best to look after it. But one day. I found it was dead. It made me very sad. My mother said that it was too full because I fed it too much.
From then on, I realized I should learn about the habits of small animals in order to care for them well.
【名师点评】
例文点评：文章主要采用第一人称展开叙述，时态以一般过去时为主；文章主要分为三段：第一段总述自己对动物的看法；第二段详细描述自己和小宠物金鱼之间发生的故事；第三段发表自己的感悟，认为我们应该了解小动物的生活习性来好好照顾它们。文章层次分明、逻辑清晰、叙事有条理。
高分亮点：
短语：like...very much；buy sth. for sb.；put...in；try one's best to do；look after；make sb.+adj.；learn about；in order to do。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句。
泰州市
八、书面表达
81.假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：
1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；
2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；
3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【写作思路】
这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.
We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I’ve learned a lot from you.
It’s important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.
I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye；do well in；do well in；Since then；as soon as；have a talk with sb；learn a lot from；keep healthy；take part in；in order to；look forward to。
句型：①让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.
②时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.
As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well.
③宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.
【2020 •徐州市】

六、书面表达
71.2020 年 6 月 16 日，我市某中学发生了一件感人的事情。请以 What a moving story!为题，写一篇英语短文，简要叙述事情经过并谈谈感想。要点如下：

经过
1．两工人为学校装空调，怕影响学生学习，夜晚工作；雨天路滑， 不小心碰掉一块瓷砖；留下纸条和 50 元钱，愿赔偿。
2．学校表示不用赔偿；学生也为两人点赞并送去了西瓜。
感想
……（内容自拟）

注意：
（1）词数 90 左右。短文需包含表格中的要点，但不要逐字翻译。
（2）短文已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。
（3）短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：空调：air-conditioner 瓷砖：ceramic tile
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【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述事情的经过并发表自己的看法。
【参考范文】
What a moving story!
A moving story happened in a school of our city on 16 June, 2020.
In order not to disturb the students who were studying at school, two workers decided to put in air-conditioners at night. It was rainy and wet. When they were carrying one air-conditioner, they broke one ceramic tile. Feeling sorry for what they had done, they left a note and 50 yuan to pay for the tile. The school, however, didn’t accept the money. The students gave the two workers thumbs up and sent a water-melon to show their gratitude.
I think both the workers and the school have done something right. If we do something wrong, we should be honest and face it bravely. Meanwhile, forgiving others is always appreciated. Just as the saying goes, “one good turn deserves another”.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，讲述事情主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述事情的经过叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：in order not to; decide to; at night; feel sorry for; pay for; give…thumbs up。
句型：what引导的感叹句；when引导的时间状语从句；and表示并列的句子；if引导的条件状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。
【2020 •丹东市】
A.根据要求完成小作文
94.假如你是Peter,你们班级(九年一班)准备举行毕业晚会。请写份邀请函，邀请你的好朋友Tony参加。
时间：7月23日晚上6点
地点：九年一班教室
要求：30词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Tony,
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Peter
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文，文中是彼得邀请托尼来参加毕业晚会，并告诉对方晚会的时间和地点。
【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
I am excited to write to you. There will be a graduation party next week. It will be held in the classroom of Class One Grade Nine at 6 p.m. on July 23rd.
We all wish you to attend this party.
Peter
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文采用的第一人称和第三人称，时态主要采用的是一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。
高分亮点：
短语：be excited to do sth做某事很兴奋；write to sb给某人写信；wish sb to do sth希望某人做某事。
句子：There will be a graduation party next week句中用的是there be句型；It will be held in the classroom of Class One Grade Nine at 6 p.m. on July 23rd句中用的是一般将来时的被动语态。
【2020 •锦州市】
Ⅶ.书面表达
（A）根据要求完成读后续写，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
71.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为40-50词；
2.必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；
3.续写至少一段，第一段开头语已经为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。
Because of COVID-19 (新冠病毒), students had to study online at home for a long time. Compared with studying at school, it’s very different.
Some students like online classes, because they have more freedom. They can get information about their study on the Internet. And they can also ask their teachers questions by Internet, telephone or email. During every break, they can watch TV or listen to music to relax.
Paragraph 1:
However, some students prefer studying at school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据短文中所给情节续写短文，要求至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语，且将所选词语加下划线。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
However, some students prefer studying at school. In class, they can listen to teachers more carefully. Teachers can check their homework and help them in time. They can communicate with their teachers and classmates face to face. School is also good fun. After class, students can play together and enjoy themselves in different sports teams as well.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，与所给短文内容衔接自然，并用了原文中划线的多个关键词。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
单词和短语：prefer doing sth.；carefully；in time；communicate with；face to face；enjoy oneself；as well。
句型：Teachers can check their homework and help them in time. （and连接并列谓语结构）
School is also good fun.（不可数名词fun作表语）
【2020 •枣庄市】
47.Write a passage about an event that's the most unforgettable for you during your junior high school. (写一件在三年的初中生活中你最难忘的事情。)
(请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90-120词的短文。注意：不要出现自己信息：诸如姓名，学校，人名可以用英文名字。)
1. The title of your story. (你的故事的标题。)
2. First write about the event(when and where it happened and who).
(首先写关于事件的时间、地点、相关人物等。)
3. Next write about how it happened.
(接下来写事件是如何发生的。)
4. Then write about how you feel about this event.
(然后写一下你的感受。)
5. At last write about how this event has changed your life or what you learn from it.
(最后写一下这件事如何改变你人生或者你从中学到什么。)
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【写作思路】
这个题目要求学生们写写三年的初中生活中最难忘的事情。题目中列出了写作的提纲，学生们可以根据这一提示，组织文章的结构和内容。首先要有一个标题；然后详细叙述这件事情发生的经过；接下来介绍一下自己的感受；最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。虽然有步骤和结构的提示，但具体的内容还需要学生们发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活去叙述。注意所选的事情要有代表性，能从中有收获。短文应以一般过去时态为主。
【参考范文】
Giving is better than taking
I'll never forget the day when my mom took me to the children's home. When I was in Grade 8, I was not satisfied with what I had. My mom knew all about my problem. One Sunny morning, she took me to the children's home. When I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. There were some poor kids. Some were disabled. Others wore ugly clothes without toys. I gave away my beautiful clothes, toys and books to them. I felt I was happy and lucky enough to live in a family full of love. I knew happiness is giving not taking.
Sample 2:
The black boots
When I was in Grade 7, I studied in town with my aunt's family. It rained a lot that autumn. My shoes were all wet when I walked to school. I complained about the weather and wore the wet shoes all day. One rainy day, I got home from school, my aunt said, "Jim, your uncle bought you black boots. Come and have a try." I was very thankful. I didn't think I could get boots. My aunt and uncle didn't have them, neither did my cousins. I would never forget how my cousins admired me. More than two years has gong by, the black boots are always in my memory.
【名师点评】
例文点评：两篇习作都非常优秀。首先是内容完整，叙述有条理。选取事例有代表性，能引起读者的共鸣，从中得到一些启示或体会到真情实感。其次短文都使用了正确的时态，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式多变，有节奏感。表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：be satisfied with；give away；full of；complain about；have a try；more than。
句型：When引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句；how引导宾语从句；There be句型；动词不定式作结果状语；倒装结构。
【2020 •河南省】
56． 爱思考的人善于提出问题，而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。请以”A question I asked”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1、要点：
1)你提出的问题是什么；
2)你为什么会提出这个问题；
3)你提出的问题有什么结果。
2、要求：
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
A question I asked
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【写作思路】
该题目是话题类书面表达，短文内容要包含题目中的三个要点。
【参考范文】
A question I asked
When I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. I was so hopeless.
One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up, “Why do I have to remember words?” The teacher said, “Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing. Keep using them and you will remember them.”
I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn’t seem to be a problem any more.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述自己遇到的学习问题；第二段讲述向老师求助以后，老师给出学习建议；第三段讲述采纳了老师的建议以后自己的收获。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。
高分亮点：
短语：begin to do sth.；ask sb. sth.；give up；try to do sth.；to one’s surprise；not…any more。
句型：Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. even though引导的让步状语从句；One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up. before引导的时间状语从句。
【2020 •四川省宜宾市】
61． 假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校邀请著名中医专家来校为即将举行的"生命科学周"作中医基本常识讲座。请你用英语给外教James写一封邮件，邀请他参加。
内容包括：
要点
内容
时间、地点
2020年6月10号下午3—5点；学校报告厅
讲座内容
basic common sense of Chinese medicine
你对中医的态度
……
表达愿望
……

注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：生命科学周 a life science week；讲座 lecture；报告厅 lecture hall.
Dear James,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，要求以电子邮件的形式写一封邀请函，文中要提出邀请，介绍讲座内容、时间、地点，以及你对中医的态度，最后表达愿望。这样写作才能要点齐全，表达通顺。另外，要根据写作的内容选用恰当的人称和时态。
【参考范文】
Dear James,
How is it going recently? Our school will have a lecture about basic common sense of traditional Chinese medicine for the coming "Life Science Week". Since you are very interested in Chinese medicine, I’m writing to invite you to attend this lecture. The lecture, to be given by a famous expert of traditional Chinese medicine , will be held in the lecture hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on June 10, 2020.
Today western medicine is people’s first choice, the Chinese medicine is being ignored by more and more people. But I think compared to western medicine, Chinese medicine has its own advantages. It will not out of date. I’m sure we’ll learn more about traditional Chinese medicine from this lecture.
Looking forward to meeting you at the lecture.

Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语：have a lecture；be interested in；invite sb. to do；compared to；out of date；learn more about；looking forward to。
句型：①原因状语从句 Since you are very interested in Chinese medicine, I’m writing to invite you to attend this lecture.
②被动语态 The lecture, to be given by a famous expert of traditional Chinese medicine , will be held in the lecture hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on June 10, 2020.
Today western medicine is people’s first choice, the Chinese medicine is being ignored by more and more people.
③宾语从句 I’m sure we’ll learn more about traditional Chinese medicine from this lecture.
【2020 •天津市】
66．假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历，并表达你的想法。
（1）李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。
（2）他向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹。
（3）他介绍自己的学习方法，还为他们演奏钢琴。
（4）他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：文化交流活动 cultural exchange activities
名胜古迹 places of interest
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述李华假期的经历并发表自己的看法。
【参考范文】
Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to take part in the cultural exchange activities. He introduced the history and places of interest of Tianjin to the local students. He showed his ways of learning and played piano. He made friends with some students there and kept in touch with them.
I think it is an unusual experience. It is necessary for the students to take part in cultural exchange activities. They can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also making friends with other people. It’s a good way to communicate with other students.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述李华假期的经历叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：take part in；kept working；places of interest；played the piano；made friends with；kept in touch with；communicate with。
句型：it做形式主语的句子；not only…but also…的句型；and表示并列的句子。
【2020 •内蒙古赤峰市】

66． 我们在追逐青春梦想的同时，不能忽视"劳动最光荣"的优良传统。专家指出，经常做家务不仅能锻炼我们的动手能力，还能增强我们的责任感。想要做最好的自己，就从做家务开始吧!请以“To be a helper of my family”为题目写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1．你经常做哪些家务?
2．描述一次你印象最深刻的家务劳动过程，并写出劳动后的感悟。
要求：
1．书写规范，词数60 ﹣ 100；
2．要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分；
4．请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则不予赋分。
参考词汇：make the bed，wash the dishes，do some washing/leaning/cooking，look after，diligent(勤劳的)，hard﹣working，responsible，be satisfied with，confident…
To be a helper of my family
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【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时分为三部分，第一部分经常做哪些家务；第二部分分享一次做家务的经历；第三部分自己的感悟。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上在叙述经历时用一般过去时，点题部分和总结部分用一般现在时；描述经历时，起因、过程和结果要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
【参考范文】
To be a helper of my family
I often do housework at home, such as making the bed, washing the dishes, do some washing, looking after my younger sister and so on.
Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents didn't come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework and decided to make a meal for my family instead of just waiting. It was my first cooking. I surfed on the Internet to learn how to do home style dishes. With the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. Then I tried to cook another．When my parents came back home, they couldn't believe their eyes to see the dishes made by me. My parents were very satisfied with me.
I think it is responsible for every family member to share housework. We should be hard-working. After that, I become more confident.

【2020•襄阳市】
61.“来时严冬，归时援春，襄阳人民永感恩!”在今年的抗“疫”战斗中，援襄医护工作者为襄阳人民做出了牺牲，同时他们的家人也为襄阳人民默默地奉献着。你的笔友刘杰是一位中学生，他在家中用自己的行动支持妈妈的援襄工作。假如你是张华，请你用英语给刘杰写一封邮件，表达你衷心的谢意。
1.要点提示：
（1）列出刘杰所做的支持他妈妈工作的两件事情。
（2）写出你将邀请刘杰一家参加的两项活动，以示谢意。
（3）简要表达你对刘杰一家人的祝愿或期盼。
2.注意事项：
（1）90词左右。
（2）行文应连贯流畅。
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
Dear Liu Jie,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ZhangHua
【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍得知刘杰的妈妈去支援襄阳战胜疫情；接下来介绍刘杰在家做的事以及想要邀请他一家参加的活动；最后期盼他的回复。
【参考范文】
Dear Liu Jie,
How is everything going? I heard that your mother with other medical team members rushed to Xiangyang, a city thousands of miles away, to help Xiangyang win the epidemic.
To let your mother concerntrate on her work, you stayed at home, studying hard and doing housework by yoursef. I am proud of you and thankful to your support. I will invite your family to attend a party to share all kinds of delicious food. I will also hope you can visit the medical museum where you can appreciate the development of Chinese traditional medicine.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
ZhangHua
【名师点评】
例文采用三段式；用第一或第二人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时，用一般将来时来介绍我想要邀请他一家参加的活动，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：rush to；concentrate on；be proud of；invite sb to do sth；look forward to。
句型：that引导的宾语从句，where引导的定语从句。
（2020 •湖南省岳阳市）
56.央视一套播出的五四青年节宣言片《后浪》中说：“青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！”青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/ an _________ ”为题写一篇短文。

要求：
1. 词数80~100；
2. 请根据以上的提示和要求，结合自己的实际情况写出你的观点，做适当发挥；
3. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名；
4. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
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【写作思路】
本题为话题作文，要求以“I want to be a/ an _______”为题写一篇短文，题目已给出要点提示。时态应用现在时，人称应用第一人称。

【参考范文】
I want to be a teacher
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.
The motto encourages me most is “Teacher’s biggest happiness is to see the children to grow up!” I think teachers are the most important people in our lives. They teach us knowledge. They help us with our study. They give us confidence. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient to my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.
To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I won’t give up my dream. I think it will come true soon.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，第一段开门见山，点出了自己的理想工作是做一名教师，第二段则提到了自己最受鼓舞的格言，以及想做老师的原因，第三段作者道出自己要为成为老师而做的努力。例文层次分明，逻辑清楚，内容包含题目所给的所有要点，符合题目要求，文中使用了许多高分句型及短语，为文章增色不少。
高分亮点：
短语：grow up，help…with，try one’s best to，work hard，from now on，give up，come true。
句型：
（1）I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.（定语从句）
（2）I think teachers are the most important people in our lives.（宾语从句）
（3）If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient to my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2020 •郴州市）

56.假如你是阳光中学的李明，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营。根据夏令营的活动安排，你需要准备一份关于学校生活的发言稿。
要点如下：
1.课程多样，我最喜欢的科目是……
2.老师友善，我与同学关系融洽……
3.活动丰富，我喜欢的活动是……
4.我对学校生活的感受……
要求：
1.短文须包含要点中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone,
I’m Li Ming from Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to share my school life with you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求根据所给要点提示就校园生活写一篇短文。文章时态用现在时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone,
I’m Li Ming from Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to share my school life with you.
I study many subjects at school. Among them, I like English best, because in class I can not only learn how to use the language but also know some foreign culture. Teachers are friendly and I get on well with my classmates. We have a lot of after-school activities. I like playing basketball. It’s good for my health. I am also a member of my school basketball team. My school life is wonderful, isn’t it?
That’s all. Thank you.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，第一、三段为题目所给内容，第二段为按照要点所写的内容。例文层次分明，思路清晰，要点齐全，符合题目要求，是篇合格的范文。
高分亮点：
短语：in class，not only … but also，get on well with，a lot of，be good for。
句型：
（1）Among them, I like English best, because in class I can not only learn how to use the language but also know some foreign culture.（because引导的原因状语从句）
（2）My school life is wonderful, isn’t it?（反意疑问句）
【2019年】
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点4 叙事描写类
（一）【2019 •天津市】
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记．请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法．
（l）一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢．
（2）地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵．
（3）你认为……
参考词汇： 开始呕吐 begin to vomit；挤向座位 push towards the seat；争吵 have a quarrel
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个；
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed ____________________________________
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【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
【参考范文】
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things around me．（开篇点明题意）
The first thing I met is about a boy．The boy didn't feel well．He began to vomit．A beautiful girl saw the boy．She helped him clean the floor【高分句型一】．Then the boy thanked her for helping．The second thing is about the underground．When the underground got to the station．a lot of people pushed towards the seat．So some people couldn't get off the underground．Some had a quarreel because of this．（介绍碰到的两件事情）
In my opinion，The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this society．As for the underground．It shows your quality there．If you wait in a line，others will get off the underground easily．If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful【高分句型二】．（表达自己的观点结尾）
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一：
She helped him clean the floor.
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事。这句话意为：她帮助他打扫干净地面。
（2）高分句型二：
If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful.
If引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时态。这句话意为：如果我们所有人都这样做，我们的世界将会变得更加美好。
（二）【2019 •四川省自贡市】
初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，你校将举行"感恩"为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．
要点提示：
1．感谢父母，教我如何生活，……
2．感谢老师，教我许多知识，……
3．感谢同学，给我美好回忆，……
写作要求：
1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；
3．文中不能透露个人真实信息．
Good morning， everyone． I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．
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That' s all． Thank you．
【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
【参考范文】
Good morning，everyone．I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．How time flies! We 'll graduate soon． I have so many words from my heart to say．At this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates．（开篇点题）
Dear dad and mom， you've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．You taught me how to get on well with my classmates．（感谢父母亲的关心，鼓励……）
Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so well．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．I still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying． 【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave． Because of your help，I have made much progress．（感谢老师在学习上和生活上的帮助）
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．【高分句型二】 When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some advice．I never forget the days when we studied together．（感谢同学的帮助，鼓励，留下的美好回忆）
Words can't show my thanks to you!I'll remember all of you．
That' s all． Thank you．
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一：
I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．我还记得当我考试不及格时，你们鼓励我继续努力．
I still remember 后跟了宾语从句，宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句，encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
（2）高分句型二：
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．亲爱的同学们，自从我来这里以来，你们在我的学习中帮了我很多忙．
since自从，引导时间状语从句，主句用了现在完成进行时，从句用了一般过去时．
（三）【2019 •重庆市B卷】
假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经历。
要求：1.80~120词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!
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【写作思路】
本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我们经历了农村的生活，学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。that we couldn’t get from books before.是定语从句，修饰不定代词something。2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hope后面是省略that的宾语从句。
【参考范文】
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.
During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”. We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!
We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.
We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!
（四）【2019 •山东省潍坊市】
请根据上文内容和下列问题提示进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

注意：1.续写故事的词数为80左右；
2. 展开合理想象，适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 可根据需要自主选用以下参考词汇：
Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (强盗)
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【写作思路】
这是一篇根据短文内容和图表提示，要求续写一个完整的故事。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
A
“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .Andrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might be in .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and said , “Hello ,madam .We’d like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,please .”
B
"How dangerous! What should I do?" Andrea said to herself "He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this, Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left .
When Andrea got home, she told her parents all about the "old lady". After hearing the story, her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you!” An hour later, the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber.
【名师点评】
重点短语：as soon as一……就……，call the police报警，be proud of为……感到骄傲
（五）【2019 •江苏省苏州市】
人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。 内容包括：
1. 第一次……的整个过程；
2. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time ________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。首先开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己的感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80—100。
【参考范文】
The first time to learn to swim
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim.
Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldn’t move. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.
I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!
（六）【2019 •浙江省宁波市】
回顾初中三年。有许多事令人难忘。校英语报如Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你选择其中一个话题, 并结合具体事例, 用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加此次征文活动。
要点如下：
say "thanks" to___________
say "sorry" to_________
1. be not good at...
2. encourage me to…
3. make great progress
4….
1. argue with…
2. not talk to each other
3. regret doing…
4…..
注意：(1) 短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点，并适当拓展；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数：80-100，书信格式已给出；
(4) 首句供参考Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say...
Dear ___________,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这个作文要求我们从题目中给出的两个话题中选择一个，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加学校英语报的一个征文活动。题目中利用表格的形式展示了两个话题的主要结构，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。文章内容应包括：首先确定一个话题和人物；然后具体说明你感谢他或者向他道歉的原因，这是文章的主体部分，叙述应详细，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感谢或歉意，并表达祝愿。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应完整、充实，注意分清段落和层次；其次需注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。句式结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句直接使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
范文1
Dear Alice,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.
Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.
Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Alan,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.
When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.
I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向自己的同学表达了感谢或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表达了感谢，并详细介绍了Alice帮助自己学习英语的过程；第二篇作文向Alan表达了歉意，介绍了由于足球比赛失利，互相埋怨，产生矛盾的过程，并表达了自己的悔意。文章内容都非常丰富，叙述也很完整、详细。两篇作文都使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。注意了谓语动词过去式形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式结构完整，语言得体、地道，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如第一篇里When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English.、Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.。再如第二篇中When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.、Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.等等。
（七）【2019 •临沂市】
时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
要求：
l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.不少于60词。
提示：
l. What did you use to be like?
2. What is the most important change?
3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.
I have changed a lot!
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【写作思路】
本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是怎么发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。
【参考范文】
I have changed a lot!
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.
I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.
Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
【名师点评】
本篇文章，首先开篇点题，我有很多变化，我最大的变化是我对待英语学习态度的变化。第二段是文章的主体，先描述过去学习英语的状况，其中用到表达过去常用的句型used to do ;在妈妈及老师的帮助下，我的英语学习发生了很大变化，具体表现为 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后对以上变化进行总结，并指出对于这个变化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章内容符合要求，时态用云正确，思路清晰，结构完整，是一篇不错的文章。
（八）【2019 •湖北省黄冈市】
同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the envinmment”、 “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示：
1. 家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；
2. 邻里和睦，礼貌待人；
3. 爱护环境，从我做起：
写作要求
l. 词数90左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：Work hard；be friendly to each other；get on well with；protect the environment；be volunteers
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. __
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：I’m Proud of My Family。主要从1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My families love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My families are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.
My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My families are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I’m proud of my family!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人尽力保护我们日常生活中的环境。该句话运用了：try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事。protect the environment：保护环境。
【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父亲习惯乘公共汽车上班。这句话运用了：be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事。
总之，本文运用了大量的简单句，虽然没有复合句，但是这写简单句把作者的一家人的生活描写的入情入理，就像是发生在我们的眼前一样。
（九）【2019 •江苏省淮安】
为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：
1．你看到或参加过一次活动（包括时间、地点、经过）；
2．你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情；
3．你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数在80～100, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。
To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖国），________________________________________
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【写作思路】
为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. It's the greatest museum I've ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. There are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions to my motherland in the future.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到一些好的句型：It's the greatest museum I've ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life.这些给文中增色不少。
（十）【2019 •浙江省湖州市】
5月18日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。

注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.
Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.
Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点4 叙事描写类
（一）【2019 •北京】
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve
提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined?
What benefits have you got from doing so?
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life ________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先谈一谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时；第二个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自己平时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合自己的实际谈论了自律的好处。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，短文主要分两段：第一段中作者介绍了自己在家里、在学校以及在社会上是如何遵守规则，进行自我约束的。这一段的内容叙述很有条理，从at school, At home, In the society三个方面进行介绍。第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的好处，使用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly，从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范，句式结构文章，且使用了较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了作文档次，展现了作者扎实的写作功底。文章中较好的句型有：I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school.、I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.、First of all，I have had many good habits，which makes my life easier and more regular.、Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.等。
（二）【2019 •湖北省宜昌市】
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。
要求：
(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Milk,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生态公民), we did a good job. Last ________________________________________________________________
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Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.
Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（三）【2019 •湖北省咸宁市】
运动塑造健康，团结凝聚力量。5月10 日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目，战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日记，介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。

写作要求：
1．文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯，条理清晰；
3．词数80~100个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：teamwork
Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. _______________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.
Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我们班的每个人都很兴奋，因为我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也参加了男子100米赛跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒装句。
（四）【2019 •大庆市】
文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括：1. 简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动；
2. 该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友；放松自我)。
写作要求：1. 词数80词左右；开头已写好，不记入总词数；
2. 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important ______________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，让我们写一篇关于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来。写作需要用第一人称，注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括：简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动，时态用一般过去时；你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受，时态以一般现在时为主和一般将来时为主；最后总结自己的心得体会。
【参考范文】
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.
In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我习惯放学后打排球。be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事。
【高分句型二】And it is also a good way to relax myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式to relax myself用作后置定语。
【高分句型三】All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 总之，课外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩，更有意义。more colorful and meaningful用作my life的宾语补足语。
（五）【2019 •河南省】
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：
1）这个名人是谁；
2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；
3）你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1）这个名人是谁；2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I’m expecting this lunch already.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。
句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If time permits, I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。
句子If time permits是由if 引导的条件状语从句。
（六）【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【参考范文】
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
（七）【2019 •甘肃省天水市】
"你养我长大，我陪你变老。"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；
（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）。
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.
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【参考范文】
You bring me up．I will be with you in your life．You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）
Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．
when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．
本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who ...
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点4 叙事描写类
（一）【2019 •河南】
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：
1）这个名人是谁；
2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；
3）你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1）这个名人是谁；2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I’m expecting this lunch already.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。
句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If time permits, I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。
句子If time permits, 是由if 引导的条件状语从句。
（二）【2019 •天水市】
“你养我长大，我陪你变老”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业，是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(l)给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
(2)努力工作，为我提供良好 生活和教育条件；
(3)拥有爱心，教我学会……；
(4)今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥一至少两点）a
注意事项：
(l)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. ____
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【写作思路】
本题是一篇给材料作文，在毕业之际向父母表达自己的“情感”。人称以第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，并补充两条个人的观点。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。
【参考范文】
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.
You give me life and take care of me all the time. When I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also persons who have a heart full of love.
You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to you. Today, I will graduate, so I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results in the future.
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
【名师点评】
用到的主要短语：have problems with sth，be patient enough to do sth，in order to，let sb do sth，live a pleasant life，receive a good education，work hard，have a heart full of love，be ready to，people in need，teach sb to do sth，get better results。
（三）【2019 •山东省威海市】
再读本试卷阅读理解A篇材料, 依据故事情节, 下午Mr Chen会与David谈话。请以“A Talk with David”为题续写故事, 词数100左右。
要求: 1. 仿照阅读理解A篇材料写作手法, 采用叙述、对话或二者结合的形式续写故事;
2. 内容要涉及A篇中的信件、缺课等相关信息以及Mr Chen的建议;
3. 观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅;
4. 题目与开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
A Talk with David
At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，根据A篇阅读的故事情节进行续写。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
A Talk with David
At the end of the day, Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.
“Did your mother really write that letter? ”Mr Chen asked.
David's face turned red and then pale. “No, sir, she didn't. I wrote it. I'm very sorry, sir.”
"It's the P. E, isn't it? "said Mr Chen. "You are avoiding something, aren't you? "
“Yes, sir, ”David admitted.
“And what have you been doing these Thursdays? ”Mr Chen asked.
"I have been studying in the library, "replied David eagerly.
“Oh, well, at least you didn't run off to the cinema, "said Mr Chen. "But you were very silly.
What will happen if I report this to your parents and the Principal. "
David felt ashamed of himself.
“But I won't tell anybody-if you promise me two things, "Mr Chen added.
David looked up hopefully.
"I want you to promise never to do anything like this again. If you have any problems, discuss them with your parents or with me first. Mr Long knows all about this. He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights. Talk to him after school on Monday. OK? ”
“Yes, sir, ”said David with a sigh of relief. “Thank you very much. "
David felt happier as he went home.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如turn red, at least, run off, look up, promise to do, help sb to do, fear of height以及with的复合结构，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。