【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 9 课时4 Writing 讲义

Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.

知识点01  思路点拨

本单元话题是“音乐和电影”，围绕这一话题谈论和表达喜好。而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是根据提示或表格信息，谈论自己的喜好或介绍他人的喜好。这也是单元测试和中考试题中常考的话题作文之一。

体裁：说明文       

时态：一般现在时       

人称：以第三人称为主

知识点02  必背句型

单词：music，movie，favorite，prefer，dislike，lyrics，musician，director，relaxed，sadness，tired，smooth，director，down，dialog，ending，pain，moving，perform，master，praise，documentary

短语：electronic music，dance to，action movies，Chinese folk music，spare time，listen to music，different kinds of music，once in a while＝from time to time，cheer up，plenty of，sing along with，watch/see a movie，talk about，sound like，a piece of

句型：

作文常用句型：

It's possible for us to ...

My favorite kind of music/movie/... is...

I like...because...It was...by...

When I listen to/watch/...it,I feel...

I think you should listen to/watch/...it too because...

知识点03  提纲

知识点04  范文

 Spider­Man: Far From Home is my favorite movie.It was directed by Jon Watts.He is a famous American director.The movie is set in Europe and tells the story of how Spider­Man Peter saves the earth.Every time I watch the movie，I feel very excited.It shows us Peter's courage to fight against threats to the earth.I think you should watch it because it is the most exciting movie that I have ever watched.

《蜘蛛侠：远离家乡》是我最喜欢的电影。它是由乔恩·瓦茨导演的。他是一位著名的美国导演。这部电影以欧洲为背景，讲述了蜘蛛侠彼得如何拯救地球的故事。每次看这部电影，我都感到非常兴奋。它向我们展示了彼得对抗地球威胁的勇气。我认为你应该看它，因为它是我看过的最激动人心的电影。

我喜爱的歌曲

I prefer songs that have great lyrics. 7 Years is just what I like. It’s a nice song for teenagers.

The song was created by Danish music band Lukas Graham. Lukas Forchhammer, the lead singer of the band, says the song is mainly about his experiences and it also describes his hopes for the future.

7 Years is about growing up. I’d like to share my favorite lyrics with you. “I only see my goals. I don’t believe in failure.” These lyrics tell us we should work hard to achieve our dream. Never give up easily.

It’s a song that gives us something to think about. What’s more, it is also a meaningful and beautiful song that we can sing along with.

我喜欢歌词很棒的歌曲。7年正是我喜欢的。这是一首适合青少年的好歌。

这首歌由丹麦乐团卢卡斯·格雷厄姆创作。乐队主唱卢卡斯·福奇哈默（Lukas Forchhammer）说，这首歌主要讲述了他的经历，也描述了他对未来的希望。

7年是关于成长的。我想和你分享我最喜欢的歌词。“我只看到自己的目标。我不相信失败。”这些歌词告诉我们，我们应该努力实现梦想。永远不要轻易放弃。

这是一首让我们思考的歌。更重要的是，这也是一首有意义的美丽的歌，我们可以一起唱。

题组A  基础过关练

1．（2022·河南·上蔡县第一初级中学模拟预测）假如你是一个导演，要拍一部电影。你会拍关于什么的电影呢？请以“I want to make a movie about ________”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。

要求：

1．请补全标题，如heroes，parents或toys 等；

2．文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；

3．词数100左右。

       I want to make a movie about____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

例文：

I want to make a movie about parents

I want to make a movie about parents for the reason that they play an important role in our lives.

Parents love their kids and make their efforts to support them with heart and soul in study and life. But many kids think that parents are always talking about schoolwork, grades and so on. They sometimes even argue with their parents. However, parents are the people who care about them most in the world. So I want to make a movie about parents to show their selfless love to their kids as well as to build a good relationship between them.

I will invite some parents to play roles in the movie and tell the true stories in daily life, which may help kids understand their parents and feel their love better.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇话题作文，根据题目要求，假如你是一个导演，要拍一部电影。会拍什么题材的电影，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅，在写作时，第一段应承接短文开头，引出标题；第二段介绍拍一部关于父母的电影的原因；第三段描述如何拍一部关于父母的电影。注意要保证内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、语言丰富、表达准确、书写规范。

2．（2022·四川成都·二模）在今年世界地球日(4月22日)的学校活动中，合唱团演唱了一首节奏舒缓、饱含深情的英文歌曲。请根据下列提示写一篇乐评，向更多人推荐这首歌。

要求：

1.文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；

2.乐评须包含以上所给信息；

3.写出推荐理由并适当阐述，至少三条；

3.注意文章逻辑，语句通顺，有恰当的过渡和衔接；

4.词数：110 词左右。

提示词汇：世界地球日 World Earth Day            合唱团 School Chorus          推荐[v.] recommend

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【答案】例文

On April 22, our School Chorus sang a song, Heal the World, to celebrate the World Earth Day. The song came out in 1991 and was sung by Michael Jackson. It encourages people to protect our world. I feel so moved that I want to write a music review to recommend it.

First, Michael sings the song with full love, which truly touches me. Besides, the lyrics are easy to understand, and each sentence makes us think a lot. Last, the song is worth spreading because it helps call on people to take action now.

I hope you’ll love the song and we can help make our world a better place.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据歌词内容和歌曲的信息写一篇乐评，从而推荐该歌曲。

2.写作指导：本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。第一段介绍作者创作歌曲的事，第二段介绍推荐原因，第三段总结。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

题组B  能力提升练

3．（2021·江苏·模拟预测）第33届中国电影金鸡奖于11月25日在厦门举行，为期三天，吸引了很多粉丝的注意力。

假如你是一名初三学生，请根据以下要点写一篇短文。

1. 周冬雨是你最喜欢的女演员之一，因在电影《少年的你》（Better Days）中的角色而获得最佳女演员奖。

2. 你打算在即将到来的寒假里再欣赏一些纪录片，因为……（1-2点）

3. 担心由于作业太多，没有太多时间看电影，打算……（1-2点）

要求：

1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3. 词数：90左右；

4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

The 33rd China Film Golden Rooster Awards took place on November 25 in Xiamen.

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【答案】例文

The 33rd China Film Golden Rooster Awards took place on November 25 in Xiamen. Zhou Dongyu, one of my favorite actresses, won the best actress award for her role in the film Better Days. Winter vacation is coming. I'm going to use my spare time to watch some documentaries to broaden my horizons and make my winter vacation life more meaningful. But because of too much homework, I don't have enough time to watch movies. I'm going to use my time reasonably to solve this problem. I want to make a schedule and strictly implement it. I hope I can have a meaningful holiday.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍周冬雨获奖、自己的假期计划以及担心。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时以第一人称为主，时态综合使用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。在介绍周冬雨获奖时用一般过去时，客观事实时用一般现在时，在介绍假期计划时用一般将来时。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

4．（2021·广西河池·中考真题）弘扬红色文化，传承红色基因。上周你校举办了“经典红歌传唱”歌咏比赛，你班以《我的祖国》为参赛曲目并获得了第一名。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友David想了解这首歌及你对它的感受，请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

1. 这首歌乔羽作词，刘炽作曲。其歌词雄壮、旋律激昂，它首唱于电影《上甘岭》中（write, great lyrics, music, be sung on the film Battle On Shangganling Mountain）

2. 你十岁时观看了电影《上甘岭》，电影中这首歌带给受伤的战士希望及力量。 那一刻，你被深深地感动了（see, bring, the wounded soldiers, hope and strength, be moved）。

3. 无论你何时听到这首歌，你都为祖国感到自豪。它激励你努力学习，今后你将尽力为祖国作贡献，并祝愿祖国。（请写出一至两点）（whenever, feel proud, encourage, devote myself to our motherland）

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；

2. 内容需包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；

4. 词数100左右。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）

Dear David,

How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you something about the song My Motherland.

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All in all, I like the song very much. What do you think of it? Look forward to hearing from you!

Li Hua

【答案】范文：

Dear David,

How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you something about the song My Motherland.

This song was composed by Qiao Yu and by Liu Chi. Its lyrics are majestic and its melody is exciting. It was first sung on the film Battle On Shangganling Mountain.

When I was ten years old, I watched the movie. The song brought hope and strength to the wounded soldiers. At that moment, I was deeply moved.

Whenever I hear this song, I am proud of my motherland. It inspires me to study hard. In the future, I will try my best to contribute to our country and wish our country better and better.

All in all, I like the song very much. What do you think of it? Look forward to hearing from you!

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，介绍这首歌的词曲作者，旋律以及它首唱在哪里；接下来介绍这首歌在电影《上甘岭》中的作用；最后介绍这首歌对自己的影响。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。

题组C  培优拔尖练

5．（2017·江苏无锡·中考真题）近期，一部片名为《摔跤吧，爸爸！》的印度电影在各地热映，引发了观众对父母育儿方式的热议，为此英文报Teens将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题。假设你是Alice，上周随父亲一起观看了此片，请结合观后感受给报社写一封英文信参与讨论，内容提示见下表：

注意事项：

1. 英文信须包括表格中所有提及内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 表格中“你的观点”一栏须用2-3句话进行合理阐述，可作适当发挥；

3. 词数在90个左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数，信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

参考词汇：正能量(positive energy)   世界冠军(world champion)

Dear editor,

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Alice

【答案】参考范文：

Dear editor,

I think the film Dangal is a wonderful one and it is full of positive energy.

It tells a story about a father and two daughters. In the film, the father wants to realize his world champion dream by training his two daughters hard. At first, the two girls don’t agree. However, their father is very strict with them. They finally make a big success.

After the film, many people discuss whether parents should decide their children’s future.

I suggest our parents should guide us to choose our own life. When we have difficulty making decisions, they should give us wiser advice.

Yours,

Alice

【详解】题干解读：题目要求结合《摔跤吧，爸爸！》观后感受给报社写一封英文信；要求包含表格中所有提示内容，并用2-3句话阐述自己的观点。

写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称和第三人称口吻。此文可采用4段落格式，第一段：介绍这部电影的总体印象；第二段：介绍这部电影的主要内容；第三段：介绍人们的热议焦点；第四段：阐述自己的观点，并说明理由。

6．（2020·山东菏泽·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lisa来信说她对中国民歌很感兴趣，想请你推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。请根据图片信息，用英语写封回信，简要介绍你最喜欢的民歌《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》（What a Beautiful Jasmine），并谈谈你对这首歌曲的感受。

要求：

1.语言规范，语句通顺,可适当发挥；

2.字数：100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my favorite song.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文：

Dear Lisa,

I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my favorite song.

What a Beautiful Jasmine is my favourite classical folk song. It is one of the classical folk songs around the world. The song came from Xianhuadiao, which has been sung for centuries. In 1942, He Fang, who was 14 yesrs old, made up the song. The song has been played in some important occasions, such as when Hong Kong and Macao returned to China, the song was played.

I always listen to the song in my free time. The song is sweet and soft, it can make me relaxed. I hope that you can enjoy the beautiful song.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，要求根据题目信息，向丽莎介绍自己最喜欢的民歌。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段点明主题，向丽莎介绍自己最喜欢的歌曲；第二段讲述了自己最喜欢的歌曲，同时指出该歌曲的历史；第三段提出自己对这首歌曲的感受。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称和第三人称；时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。

3.高分亮点：

短语：hear from sb.；around the world；come from；make up；such as；listen to；in one’s free time。

句型：The song came from Xianhuadiao, which has been sung for centuries. which引导的非限制性定语从句；I hope that you can enjoy the beautiful song. that引导的宾语从句。