2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题9人际关系课件新人教版

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(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1．节目介绍；2．访谈的时间和话题。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Carline，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely，Li Hua
Dear Carline，As the persn in charge f the English prgramme “Talk and Talk” f ur schl radi statin, I sincerely invite yu t participate in ur prgramme．
①It is ten years since “Talk and Talk” was established．②This is an amazing prgramme where yu can share yur ideas with students．Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it．As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a great deal．If yu are available this Friday mrning, I, tgether with the whle “Talk and Talk” staff, am waiting fr yur cming．
③I'd appreciate it if yu culd take my invitatin int cnsideratin．Lking frward t yur reply．Yurs sincerely，Li Hua
1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如in charge f, establish, have truble in ding sth．, urge, distinguished, a great deal, available, take cnsideratin等。2．句式美：①句It is＋一段时间＋since ...，意为“自从……以来已经……时间了”。②句where引导定语从句。③句I'd appreciate it if ...意为“如果……我将不胜感激”，是表达谢意的常用句型。
假定你是李华，是学校学生会主席。请你代表学生会写封邮件给外教Ms Brwn，邀请她参加学生会组织的英语角(English Crner)活动，内容包括：1．活动时间和地点；2．活动内容和目的；3．希望外教给予指导。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Brwn，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs，Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Ms Brwn，I'm Li Hua, chairman f the Students' Unin．Representing all the students in ur schl, I'm sincerely inviting yu t take part in ne f ur activities, English Crner．
The activity is aimed nt nly t aruse ur interest in learning English and practise ur ral English, but als t ffer us a chance t make mre friends．During the activity, everyne, bth teachers and students, shuld talk in English．This time, we hpe yu can ffer us sme methds f imprving ur ral English．Yu are als expected t intrduce smething abut yur cuntry．Please cme t jin us in the schl garden frm 4：00 p．m．t 6：00 p．m．every Saturday．Lking frward t yur participatin．Yurs，Li Hua
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was deep int the night many years ag．The rain just came puring dwn utside．An elderly man and his wife entered the lbby (大厅) f a small htel in Philadelphia, USA．[悬念1]
Trying t get ut f the rain, the cuple apprached the frnt desk hping t get a rm t stay in fr the night．“Culd yu pssibly give us a rm here？” the husband asked．The clerk, a friendly yung man with a winning smile, lked at the cuple and explained that there were three cnferences in the twn．“All f ur rms are taken，” the clerk said．“But I can't send a nice cuple like yu ut int the rain at ne 'clck at night．Wuld yu perhaps be willing t sleep in my rm? It's nt exactly a suite, but it will be gd enugh t make yu cmfrtable fr the night．”
When the cuple declined, the yung man pressed n．“Dn't wrry abut me．I'll make ut just fine，” the clerk tld them．S the cuple agreed．As he paid his bill the next mrning, the elderly man said t the clerk, “Yu are the kind f manager wh shuld be the bss f the best htel．Maybe smeday I'll build ne fr yu．[悬念2]”
The clerk lked at them and smiled．The three f them had a gd laugh．As they drve away, the elderly cuple agreed that the helpful clerk was indeed exceptinal, as finding peple wh are bth friendly and helpful isn't easy．Three years passed．The clerk had almst frgtten the thing when he received a letter frm the elderly man．It recalled that strmy night, when he ffered his kind help t the elderly cuple．In the envelpe, there was a rund-trip ticket t New Yrk, and a letter asking the yung man t pay them a visit．The yung man decided t set ut immediately．[悬念3]
注意：续写词数应为150左右。“D yu still remember my prmise years ag？” the elderly man said t the yung man．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Yu must be jking，” the yung man said．_______________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、理清文章大意关键：Wh: a yung man and an ld cupleWhere: in a small htelWhen: n a rainy nightWhat: The ld cuple wanted t sleep in the htel fr the night．Hw: The yung man prvided his wn rm fr the cuple t live in．大意：文章讲述了一位年轻人在一个雨夜把自己的房间提供给一对老夫妇的故事。
二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1 思考：这对老夫妇是什么来头？悬念2思考：老人是在开玩笑吗？如果是许诺，他会信守诺言吗？悬念3思考：年轻人见到老人之后会发生什么事情？
三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①年轻人还记得那天晚上的事情吗？ ②老人是否会解释一下那天晚上的承诺？ 段首句2思考：①老人对年轻人的话会怎样回复？ ②新建的宾馆在哪里？③年轻人真的会成为宾馆的经理吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1：重提诺言→惊讶→解释Paragraph 2：难以置信→诚恳邀请→成功
“D yu still remember my prmise years ag？” the elderly man said t the yung man．The yung man was puzzled and remembered nthing f what the elderly man had said years befre．He just lked at the elderly man in surprise, shaking his head．“Well，” the elderly man went n．“I prmised t build a htel fr yu when I left yur htel．Yu are s kind and s helpful．I'm sure yu will turn ut t be a gd bss in the future．I have firm trust in yu．
“Yu must be jking，” the yung man said．“I'm serius，” said the elderly man with a smile arund his muth．He then pinted t a great new building there．“That，” said the elderly man．“Is the htel I have just built fr yu．I hpe yu can take charge f it．” Thus, the yung clerk became the first manager f the htel．But he had never expected the turn f events that wuld lead him t becme the manager f ne f the wrld's mst famus htels．
1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①shaking his head作状语，映衬出了人物心理。②Yu are s kind and s helpful两个s连用，加强了说话者的语气。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①文章使用了in surprise, turn ut, pint t, take charge f等高级词汇。②what the elderly man had said years befre这个宾语从句的使用是一个增分点。③that wuld lead him ...是定语从句。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As I sat n the bus waiting t arrive at schl, the sun shining, I just sat there full f excitement ready t enjy the first day f spring．At last, the bus stpped and I started my day．The whle day I was waiting fr ne thing, nn break．As the day passed by, I heard the bell ring and everyne rushed ut f the dr．I hurried and ate lunch just t get utside．
As sn as I was ut, my clse friend, Riley called me ver t play basketball．We all started playing and time flew by as we heard the timekeeper yell, “10 mre minutes．” Frm that pint n, the game sped up．Scre after scre, the cmpetitin prcess was mre intense．I passed it t my teammate, Austin, and he dished it back as I pulled up a sht．I felt as if the wrld arund me were barely mving, and all I cncentrated n was the ball ging t the hp (篮筐)．Nt knwing I was pushed back hard, I hit the grund．A huge pain entered my left
ankle．I wanted t scream, but I didn't, hearing the peple arund me shut fr help．I just lay there as Riley came ver t pick me up and Austin fetched a wheelchair frm the schl clinic．Bth f them helped me sit n the wheelchair．It seemed like the whle schl circled arund me as I was being pushed away．
The mment we entered the clinic where I always felt nervus, I didn't think my ankle hurt as badly as it did just nw, s I said, “I'm kay．” Then they had t send me back t class withut any treatment．The rest f the day I felt my ankle swelling (肿) up and I thught f hw stupid I was t say that my ankle didn't hurt in the clinic．“I shuld have gne hme，” I thught t myself as I was thrwn thrugh this terrible pain．After schl, I wrried hw t g back hme．
注意：续写词数应为150 左右。Just then I fund Riley cme in with an ice pack in his hand．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As we went ut，we were surprised t find Austin hlding sme medicinal il．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Just then I fund Riley cme in with an ice pack in his hand．Frm his lk, I culd easily read his cncern, which instantly brught tears t my eyes．When asked if my ankles were swllen, his vice was clearly filled with wrry and anxiety．I ndded helplessly, my eyes glued t my aching ankle．Handing me the ice pack, he tld me it culd help relieve the pain and reduce swelling at the early stage．S mved was I that I extended my heartfelt gratitude t him．He just smiled, saying that we were gd friends and ffering t send me hme．