【备战2024年高考】英语 （全国通用版）2023年全国乙卷英语作文全方位透析（开放式作文：学生怎样获得一个新技能）试卷

学生怎样获得一个新技能？

--2023全国乙卷开放式作文分析

近年的英语高考书面表达经常出现开放式作文，只是开放程度有别。一般而言都会有一定的相关信息提示，但有的只给出极少的内容提示，甚至仅给出一个话题，而不给出具体内容，是完全建立在作者对话题的理解基础之上，让其自由组织内容的全开放式写作。开放式作文是高考英语书面表达的重要考查点，考生们必须了解该类型作文的基本特点和写作要求。

基本格式：

开放式作文一般需分三段，第一段简单陈述话题或主题。离开了一定的背景呈现，文章就如无头苍蝇，没有明确的内容和方向。主体段落应明确、客观表达自己的观点。虽然开放式作文没有限制观点，但个人观点不能太脱离大众和主流思想，不然会被认为是奇葩主张。但无论是何种观点一定要能自圆其说。说理应该清晰流畅，最好能有一定的表示程序或顺序的过渡词语，如firstly/initially, above all, first of all, secondly/then/ and then, besides, additionally, finally/last but not least/last 等，将文章有机串联起来，才能达到较好的统一性和完整性。最后，文章可呼应前文，总结全文。

常用句型：

1. Recently we did a survey about whether... or not. 最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。

2. It has been... years since... was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood. 自从……成立以来已经……年了，它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。

3. In my spare time, I often read the newspaper which covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.

在业余时间，我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事，还报道时事的报纸。

4. By reading the newspaper, not only do I... but also I...

通过阅读报纸,我不仅……而且我……

5. I do expect.., can have a promising future.

我确实希望……有一个光明的未来。

6. It is reported that......is reported to do/ be...

报道……

7.I’m shocked/amazed/surprised to hear that...

听到……我感到很震惊。

8.To our.......happened/occurred/took place...

使我们……，发生……

9.As to/As for/With regard to..., I think/ figure/deem that...

关于……，我认为……

10.Views/ldeas on... vary from person to person.

视图/理念……因人而异。

11.Speaking of/Talking about/ considering... I hold the belief that... From my perspective/angle,

说到/谈到/考虑到……我认为……从我的角度来看，

12.In my opinion/From my point of view,... From the picture/table/chart,we can see/find/ spot...

在我看来/从我的角度来看，……从图片/表格/图表中，我们可以看到/发现/发现……

13.What....tells us is that.../What I can see/find/spot from... is that...

……告诉我们是……/ 我能从……发现是……

14.The case/incident/sample/...tells us that...

此案/事件/样本/…告诉我们……

15.Incident/Simple as it is, there’s/ are...behind it.

只有当/如果……我们能防止这样的事情再次发生吗?

高考典例：

（2023全国乙卷）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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【思路梳理】

(一) 审题：确定体裁、人称和时态。

该书面表达任务是开放性作文；正文人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时为主。

(二) 确定文章结构、列出写作要点。

此投稿正文可以分为三段。

第一段：点明投稿的目的。

第二段：增加细节，一项新技能的经历以及体验和感受。

第三段：总结表达自己的感想和祝愿。

(三) 捕捉相关词汇、激活储备句型。 

先声夺人开头句——点明目的

1.June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.

2.Recently, we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn English beyond the classroom. The results are as follows.

引人入胜篇中句——介绍基本情况

1.It goes without saying that Oceans play a critical role in the world.

2.Not only do they provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development.

3.Additionally, oceans are the lungs ofour planet, providing mostofthe oxygen we breathe.

画龙点睛结尾句——总结感想和祝福

1.As high school students, it's our responsibility to protect them.

2.First of all, do what we can to make a difference. For example, stop throwing garbage into oceans. In addition, call on people aroundus to take action, too. I believe we will have cleaner oceans.

【参考范文】

When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.

I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.

Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.

【名师点评】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句，That was the first time I watched a live musical performance.。分词短语allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.做状语，过去分词短语held in my school 作contest的后置定语。本句还使用了when 引导的时间状语从句和although引导的让步状语从句。并且使用了一些固定词组，如take up, in the beginning, even though；等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

高级词汇积累

①opportunity n. 机会

②demoralize v.使沮丧

③satisfied adj. 满意的：

④leisure adj. 满意的：

高分句型点睛

【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)

【写作回顾】

在写作前一定要仔细审题，确定投稿的文章介绍什么。审题时确定文章体裁、人称、时态和框架结构。在研读内容要点时要注意挖掘所给信息。问问自己要“我”写什么？怎样才能不让自己的作文内容流于表面，将内容要点进行拓展。其次怎么写？平时积累的功能语句在这篇写作中要做出适当的调整，不能完全照搬照抄。开头和结尾要呼应，突出写作的中心。在写作过程中语言上要注意语言的简练，在简练的语言中运用具体词汇来表达具体内容。在100词左右的文章中将各种句型和语法现象恰当地运用。最后注意句与句之间以及段落之间的逻辑关系。在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序遣词造句，然后将零散的句子组成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。

【变式训练】

A．

（2023·河北保定·河北省唐县第一中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你校英语角上个月举办了为期一个月的关于二十四节气(24 solar terms)的系列讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇短文报道此事，内容包括：

1．活动的目的；

2．活动的内容；

3．活动的反响。

注意：

1．写作词数应为80左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Series of Lectures on the 24 Solar Terms

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【参考答案】                                                                             

 A Series of Lectures on the 24 Solar Terms

To make lovers of Chinese traditional culture have a deep understanding of the 24 solar terms, the English corner in our school hosted a series of lectures last month.

English teachers in our school gave eight splendid lectures from 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm every Thursday and Friday. The lectures covered a fund of knowledge, including their historical origins, climate changes and farming activities during each solar term and customs in different provinces.

Students thought highly of the lectures, from which they learned a lot. They realized Chinese traditional culture was attractive. They wish there will be more lectures about it.

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B

（2023春·广东惠州·高三统考期末）为了迎接世界读书日，学校英语社计划以“Reading For Fun”为主题组织一场读书活动，请你写一份英文倡议书。内容包括：

1. 活动目的；

2. 活动内容；

3. 发出倡议。

参考词汇：World Book Day世界读书日

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear fellows,

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English Club

April 20

【答案】

Dear fellows,

In order to celebrate the upcoming World Book Day, an interesting reading campaign will be launched. Not only does the activity stimulate our creativity and shape our character, but it can also enrich our lives in a unique way.

The following are activities involved in this reading campaign. As scheduled, reading clubs are organized in groups for a shared topic in the library every Wednesday afternoon. Participants are welcome to discuss figures in the book, who are the source of motivation to help them beat the odds and create miracles. In addition, every participant is required to submit a reading report within given time to enhance their critical thinking ability and writing capability.

All in all, by immersing ourselves in the charm of books, this activity definitely offers endless fun to us. My dear fellows, please join us as soon as possible!

English Club

April 20

C

（2023·四川·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将以“保护野生动物”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.野生动物的现状；

2.保护野生动物的重要性；

3.保护野生动物的措施。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】范文

As is known to us, some wild animals are in serious trouble nowadays, whose habitats are being destroyed. To make it worse, the population of some animals has crashed sharply due to many factors, like climate change, disasters as well as human activities.

However, it’s of significance for us to protect wild animals because they are not only essential part of the living environment where humans live in, but also important natural resources.

Therefore, it’s high time that immediate action should be taken to work out the issue. On the one hand, our government should make laws and regulations to protect them. On the other hand, nature reserves should be set up to make sure they have a safe habitat. The last but not least, the public awareness of protecting the wild animals should be further improved.

D

（2023·河北石家庄·正定一中校考模拟预测）上周你校组织了“捐赠旧书”的主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.活动的目的；

2.活动的主要内容；

3.活动反响。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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【答案】One possible version:

Last week, our school organized an activity themed “donating old books”, which was intended to encourage students to make the best use of old books.

Thanks to the participation of a majority of students, a large number of old books were collected and then donated to a school in a small village, which showed deep and sincere gratitude for our generous act.

The activity turned out to be a great success. Almost all the participants spoke highly of the activity because they thought it raised their awareness of cherishing books and spreading kindness.

E

（2023·河南开封·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语报在征集题目为“Community Service”的短文，请你写一篇英文短文投稿。内容包括：

1. 你的经历；

2. 你的感受。

注意：1. 词数应为100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Community Service

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【答案】One possible version:

Community Service

Community service is a good way to help others. I volunteer my free time a lot so that I can make my community a better place.

Each month, I put in many hours doing different kinds of service. I often help with tutoring children after school, and collecting school supplies to donate every week. Sometimes, I pick up trash along many main roads, or help plant trees in gardens. Last week, I visited residents of a retirement center and helped deliver meals to senior citizens with other volunteers.

Community service or volunteerism enables us to acquire life skills and knowledge as well as provides a service to those who need it most. I believe we can live in harmony in the community through our efforts.