高考英语小作文全解全析专题10 2022年乙卷

这是一份高考英语小作文全解全析专题10 2022年乙卷，共8页。试卷主要包含了学习活动状况描述 2等内容，欢迎下载使用。

真题原文
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beynd the Classrm为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述 2.简单评论 3.你的建议
注 意 ：1.词数100左右 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
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Yurs,
Li Hua
真题解析
本篇书面表达为应用文写作中的命题作文，主题为 Learning English Beynd the Classrm，要求根据调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
就内容而言，这也是一篇小议论文。中心内容恰好是新课标要求的体现，设置的是更加贴近真实生活的英语交际任务情境，增强试题的开放性和灵活性。考生可根据内容要点提示，并且结合自身经历进行写作，这样写出的文章更具说服力。
就考查形式而言，2022年全国乙卷的高考英语书面表达进一步优化了应用文写作的考查形式，更新了试题的呈现形式。所以，本篇书面表达不再是传统的信件写作，而是综合性的文体，融合了图表作文、议论文和建议，看似简单，实则不易。
在写作过程中，为了紧扣题目要求，考生在写作之前，首先要圈出题目要求中的关键词，根据题目要求的关键词构思作文的大致思路，列出提纲。然后，根据提纲组织语言，完成写作。在段落上，为了更好地体现内容的承接、递进或转折关系，不妨在段首加上表示相应关系的关联词。
建议采用列提纲的写作方法:
第一段：写作背景(引出话题);
第二段：图片要点+拓展句(占比);
第三段：总结句。
写作小贴士：
审时态：以一般现在时为主。
审人称：以第一人称、第三人称为主。
审要点：题目要求的内容要点齐全；准确运用语法结构和词汇；保持上下文的连贯性。
范文赏析1
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
There are many things we can d t learn English well. Our schl's English newspaper discussed and investigated hw students learn English beynd the classrm. The results f the survey are shwn in the bar chart. The students wh depend n brwsing English learning websites and reading English bks t learn English are the least, accunting fr just12% and 18%, respectively, while as high as 65% f the students prefer listening t English sngs. Besides, 50% f the students are fnd f watching English mvies when learning English.
In my view, this is a wrrying phenmenn.There is n dubt that what benefits students mst is reading English bks, fr nly by reading English bks can students gain a deeper
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。我们学校的英文报对学生在课堂之外学习英语的情况进行了讨论与调查。调查结果如柱形图所示。依靠浏览英语学习网站和阅读英语书籍来学习英语的学生最少，分别只占12%和18%；而多达65%的学生更乐意去听英语歌曲。此外，50%的学生喜欢在学习语的时候看英语电影。
在我看来，这是一个令人担忧的现象。毫无疑问，对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍，只有这样，学生才能对英语这门语言
understanding f English as a language.
Therefre, students are suppsed t spare mre time fr listening t music t much.
有更深刻的理解。
因此，学生应该抽出更多时间进行英语阅读，而不是过度地看电影或听音乐。
亮点词汇
brwse 翻阅，浏览(信息)
respectively 分别地
be fnd f 喜爱
benefit 使受益
be suppsed t d sth.应该做某事
rather than 而不是
范文赏析2
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
There are many things we can d t learn English well. Accrding t a recent survey carried ut by ur schl's English newspaper abut English learning status beynd the classrm, we knw that appraches t learning English vary frm persn t persn. The majrity f students learn English by listening t English sngs, accunting fr 65%, fllwed by 50% f the students wh learn English by watching English mvies. Cmpared with the abve tw appraches, reading English bks r brwsing English learning websites make up n mre than 18% and 12%, respectively.
What can be seen clearly is that in cmparisn with reading in which mental effrt is needed, students prefer visual and auditry activities, such as listening t music and watching mvies, which seem t be mre enjyable and relaxing.
As a high schl student, I'm in favr f watching mvies as the best way t learn English beynd the classrm. By watching mvies, nt nly can we be expsed t the native English envirnment, which is especially beneficial t ur spken English, but we can als have a gd pprtunity t learn abut freign cultures withut ging
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。根据我们学校的英文报最近进行一项关于课堂之外英语学习状况的调查，我们了解到学习英语的方法因人而异。大多数学生通过听英语歌曲学习英语，占比65%；其次，50%的学通过看英语电影学习英语。与上述两种途径相比，阅读英语书籍和浏览英学习网站的比例分别只占18%和12%。
我们可以清楚地看到，与需要花费脑力的阅读相比，学生们更喜欢视和听觉活动，比如听音乐和看电影，这似乎更令人愉快和放松。
作为一个高中生，我赞成把看电影作为课堂之外学习英语的最佳方式。通过看电影，我们不仅可以置身于以英语为母语的环境--这对英语 abrad. We shuld make gd use f these ways t learn English.
口语是格外有益的，而且可以在不出国的情况下，有一个了解外国文化的好机我们应该好好利用这些方式来学习英语。
亮点词汇
carry ut 执行;进行
in cmparisn with 与……形成对比
apprach t ding sth. 做某事的方法
enjyable 有乐趣的;令人愉快的
vary frm persn t persn因人而异
in favr f赞成
the majrity f大多数
cmpared with与…相比较
make up 占;组成
be expsed t 面临，接触到
n mre than 只不过，仅仅
be beneficial t 有益于
范文赏析3
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
There are many things we can d t learn English well. Accrding t a recent survey cnducted by ur schl's English newspaper abut English learning status utside the classrm, we knw that the percentage f students wh chse t learn English by listening t English sngs and watching English mvies reaches 65% and 50%,respectively. Hwever, thse wh chse t read English bks and brwse English learning websites accunt fr nly18% and 12%
Based n this phenmenn, it is easily fund that listening t English sngs and watching English mvies are mre attractive t students than reading English bks and brwsing English learning websites. This may be because students can get mre pleasure and relaxatin frm listening t English sngs and watching English mvies.
As far as I'm cncerned, whatever methd suits us best is a
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。根据我们学校的英文报最近进行的一项关于课堂之外英语学习状况的调查，我们知道了选择通过听英语歌曲和看英语电影学习英语的学生占比分别达到了65%和50%。然而，选择阅读英语书籍和浏览英语学习网站的学生只占18%和12%。
基于这一现象，我们不难发现，相比阅读英语书籍、浏览英语学习网站，听英语歌曲和看英语电影对学生更具吸引力。这可能是因为学生能够从听英语歌曲和看英语电影中获得更多的乐趣、感到更加放松
在我看来，无论选择什么方法，
gd chice. Hwever, l recmmend that mre imprtance shuld be attached t students self-discipline when having entertaining English activities beynd the classrm. Only in this way can students cultivate a psitive attitude t learning English.
最适合我们的就是好的。但是，我建议学生在进行娱乐性的课堂之外的英语活动时，更加重视自律性。只有这样学生才能培养出学习英语的积极态度。
亮点词汇
percentage 百分比
based n 基于
be attractive t对…有吸引力
suit 适合
a gd chice 一个好的选择
recmmend 建议
attach imprtance t 重视
范文赏析4
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
There are many things we can d t learn English well. Different peple have different pinins n this tpic. Recently we have had a heated discussin n hw t learn English successfully beynd the classrm . The details are as fllws.
As is clearly shwn in the chart, the majrity f students, as many as 65% acquire English by listening t English sngs, which enables them t have a gd cmmand f English . As many as 50% f the students attain English knwledge via watching English films, cmpared with 12% f the students wh btain English knwledge by searching fr useful English learning websites. Hwever, 18% f them ften read riginal English bks t expand their vcabulary and imprve their reading skills.
With the purpse f enhancing ur English learning effectively, frequently reading freign materials is required a lt; making every effrt t talk with native speakers is abslutely a
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。对此，不同的人有不同的观点。最近，我们就如何在课堂之外学好英语进行了热烈的讨论。详情如下。
如图表所示，大多数学生通过听英文歌曲来学习英语，占比高达65%.这使他们能够很好地掌握英语。高达 50% 的学生通过观看英语电影获得英语知识，相比之下，12%的学生通过检索有用的英语学习网站获得英语知识。然而，只有 18%的学生经常阅读英文原著，以扩大词汇量，提高阅读能力。
为了有效地提高我们的英语学习水平，经常阅读外国资料是非常有必要的;尽可能与以英语为母语的人交流无疑是个好主意。众所周知，无论选择什么方法，最适合我们
gd idea. As is knwn t us all, any way that suits us best is a gd chice. S the right chice is the wise chice.
的就是好的。所以，合适的选择就是明智的选择。
亮点词汇
pinin 观点
heated 激烈的
the majrity f 大多数
have a gd cmmand f很好地掌握
attain 获得
riginal 原始的
expand 扩大
enhance 提高
as is knwn t us all 众所周知
suit 适合
范文赏析5
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
There are many things we can d t learn English well. Recently, we have carried ut a questinnaire n ways learning English beynd the classrm.
We can see frm the bar chart that there are mainly fur appraches, amng which listening t English music and watching English mvies take up the largest prprtin, cmpared with reading English bks which makes up 18% and brwsing English learning websites making up 12%. The statistics shw that students have a psitive degree f attitude tward entertaining English activities carried ut beynd the classrm. The chart als indicates that, cmpared t reading, students prefer visual and auditry activities, such as watching mvies and listening t music.
In shrt, the apprach beynd the classrm is ne f the ways t address the challenge f students’ becming interested in fun ways. It is als prpsed that teachers use mre activities
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。最近，我们进行了一项关于课外英语学习方式的问卷调查。
我们从柱状图可以看出，主要有四种方式，其中听英语歌曲和看英电影所占比例最大，相比之下，阅读英语书籍占 18%，浏览英语学习网占12%。统计数据表明，学生对课堂之外的娱乐性英语活动有着积极的度。该图表还表明，与阅读相比，学生更喜欢视觉和听觉活动，如看电和听音乐。
简而言之，课堂之外的方法是解决学生对有趣的方式产生兴趣这一批的方法之一。同时，建议教师在课堂之外使用更多的活动来鼓励学生形习英语的积极态度。
beynd the classrm t encurage students t develp a psitive attitude in learning English .
亮点词汇
questinnaire 问卷调查
indicate 显示
apprach 方法
visual视觉的
take up 占据
auditry 听觉的
statistics 统计数据
in shrt 总之;简而言之
psitive 积极的
encurage 鼓励
范文赏析6
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
There are many things we can d t learn English well. Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smart phnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm in varius ways.
It can be easy t see frm the chart that the percentage f students wh chse t listen t English sngs and watch English mvies is 65% and 50% respectively. Hwever, thse chsing t read English bks and brwse English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.
As far as I'm cncerned, it is a disturbing trend. Fr students, what will be mst beneficial t their learning is reading English bks. Because f their lack f self-discipline, they're mre easily addicted t chatting r playing games nline. lt's urgent fr students themselves t imprve their self-discipline.
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。如今，随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及，越来越多的学生选择以各种各样的方式进行课堂之外的英语学习。
从图表不难看出，选择听英文歌曲和看英文电影的学生比例分别为65%和50%。然而，选择阅读英语书籍和浏览英语学习网站的学生仅占18%和12%。
就我而言，这是一个令人不安的趋势。对学生来说，对他们的学习最有益的是阅读英语书籍。由于他们缺乏自律性，他们更容易沉迷于网上聊天或玩游戏。让学生们提高自律性，迫在眉睫。