黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练:邀请信
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1.假定你是李华,为全面迎接开学你市将邀请钟南山院士参加有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座。请写信通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.主讲人简介;3.时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。
参考词汇:COVID-19新型冠状病毒;anti-epidemic防疫
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好。
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2.假定你是李华,你校将举办一场中国传统文化体验活动,请写封邮件,邀请留学生Sophia参加,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.活动内容;
3.可以带朋友来体验.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.假如你是星光中学高二李华,请给在你校学习汉语的英国朋友Leslie写一封信,告诉他为了提高学生的阅读兴趣你校将举办“朗读者”活动,希望他一起参加,邮件的内容包括:
1. 介绍朗读者活动相关内容(如:时间,地点,参加者等);
2. 活动的要求(如:依次朗读,在朗读亭里朗读不超过3分钟,内容积极向上)。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:“朗读者”:The Reader;朗读亭:the Reading Pavilion
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4.假定你是李华,你校为了推广中华经典文学,计划举办一场唐诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国唐诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生Peter一同参加此次比赛。内容包括:
1. 比赛举办的目的;
2. 比赛的时间和规则;
3. 你邀请的理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours
LiHua
5.假定你是李华, 学校计划组织学生参观大庆市新建成的主题为“中国智造(Intelligent Manufacturing in China)”的科技馆,请你给你的外教Tim写一封邮件邀请他一同参观,内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 计划参观的内容;
3. 表达期待;
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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6.假如你是高二学生李华,你们班同学打算本周日去太阳岛游玩,请你给外教Chris写一封email,邀请他参加此次活动。请包括以下内容:
1. 介绍活动的相关信息(时间、集合地点、交通工具等);
2. 携带物品(午餐、相机、雨伞等)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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We’re looking forward to seeing you and hope you will enjoy the trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假定你是李华,正作为交换生在伦敦一所学校学习。你的好友Eric邀请你在校文化节上表演一段中国民族舞蹈或唱一首民歌。请给他回一封信,内容包括:
1.感谢邀请;
2.介绍将表演的节目;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.你校将组织一次主题为“热爱劳动,从我做起”的英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)。假设你是学生会主席李华, 请给你们的外籍教师Mr. White写封书面邀请函,请他来做评委 (judge)。内容主要包括:
1. 时间与地点:2019年7月15日下午2点到5点学校会议大厅;
2. 参赛选手:10位同学;
3. 联系人:李华(电话13545209988)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 已给出的词,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. White,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Owen(欧文)正在中国学汉语,请你给他写一封邀请信,邀请他参加你校主办的“书香校园网络读书周”活动来帮助他提高汉语水平。
内容要点:
1.发出邀请;
2.活动安排(读书周的时间,形式,内容);
3.期待回复。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加内容,以使行文连贯。
提示词:书香校园网络读书周Shuxiang Campus Network Reading Week
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10.请写一封信邀请你的英语外教Smith一同前往参观国际非物质文化遗产博览园the International Intangible Cultural Park。内容如下:1.时间安排:11月10日8点校门口集合乘大巴前往,下午3点返回。2.活动内容:随导游参观;中午野餐(自备)要求:100字以上
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1.Dear Johnny,
How are you doing these days? In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic. So I’m writing to tell you something about it.
As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.
I believe covid-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生邀请目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加为全面迎接开学而举行的钟南山院士有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.主讲人简介;3.时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表在线演讲:give an online speech→deliver an online speech
实现:achieve→realize
鉴于、考虑到:in view of→in consideration of
当然:surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic.
拓展句:Our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic, whose purpose is to welcome the opening of the new semester.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe covid-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future. (运用了that(已省)引导宾语从句)
2.Dear Sophia,
Knowing you’re a Chinese culture lover , I’m writing to invite you to take part in an activity to be held by our school next Monday.
The activity, whose theme is “Experiencing Chinese Traditional Culture”, is scheduled to start at 8 o'clock , lasting 3 hours. There will be various activities ranging from Chinese paintings to paper-cutting Not only will you admire some works made by us students as well as some famous artists, but you will also see some artists creating works on the spot, which will surely leave a deep impression on you . You can ask some of your friends to go along with you. I believe you’ll have a good time then .
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邀请信。假定你是李华,你校将举办一场中国传统文化体验活动,请写封邮件,邀请留学生Sophia参加。需阐明写信的目的,关于活动的相关信息要详细。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
结构:总分法
要求:
1.时间;
2.活动内容;
3.可以带朋友来体验.
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
culture lover ;take part in;Experiencing Chinese Traditional Culture ;schedule;various; range from;last;Chinese paintings;paper-cutting;admire ;create;impression;
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to take part in an activity.
2. The activity is scheduled to start at 8 o’clock , lasting 3 hours.
3. There will be various activities Chinese paintings to paper-cutting.
4. Not only will you admire some works made by us students as well as some famous artists, but you will also see some artists creating works on the spot.
5. which will surely leave a deep impression on you.
6. I believe you’ll have a good time then .
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand…
4.表因果关系:Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
第五步:润色修改。
【点睛】这篇范文内容完整,条理清晰,语言准确,行文流畅。使用了高级句式如:The activity, whose theme is “Experiencing Chinese Traditional Culture”, is scheduled to start at 8 o'clock , lasting 3 hours.这句话使用了whose引导的定语从句作插入语;Not only will you admire some works made by us students as well as some famous artists, but you will also see some artists creating works on the spot.这句话使用了倒装句式,为文章增添了色彩。同时还运用了较多的高档词汇如:culture lover ;schedule;various; range from;last;等。
3.Dear Leslie,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to invite you to join in the Reader Activity, which is aimed to promote our interest in reading and also enjoys great popularity across China at the moment.
The activity will be held in front of our school library. It will start at 8 o'clock next Sunday morning and last three hours. Any student in our school who is keen on reading can try out for it. What I intend to stress is that each participant is supposed to read aloud in turn in the Reading Pavilion and that they should limit their performance to 3 minutes. What’s more, the selected reading material, ranging from essays to poetry, ought to be positive and inspiring.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是星光中学高二李华,请给在你校学习汉语的英国朋友Leslie写一封信,告诉他为了提高学生的阅读兴趣你校将举办“朗读者”活动,希望他一起参加,邮件的内容包括:1. 介绍朗读者活动相关内容(如:时间,地点,参加者等);2. 活动的要求(如:依次朗读,在朗读亭里朗读不超过3分钟,内容积极向上)。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事);join in(加入);be aimed to do sth.(旨在做某事);promote(促进);in front of(在……前面);last(持续);be keen on(喜爱);try out for(参加选拔);intend to(打算……);be supposed to(应该);performance(表演)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m writing to invite you to join in the Reader Activity, which is aimed to promote our interest in reading and also enjoys great popularity across China at the moment.运用非限制性定语从句;What I intend to stress is that each participant is supposed to read aloud in turn in the Reading Pavilion and that they should limit their performance to 3 minutes.运用主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
4.Dear Peter,
How is everything going recently? Here is a piece of good news for you. In order to promote Chinese classic literature, our school is going to hold an English translation competition of Tang poetry. Knowing that you are very interested in Tang poetry, I would like to invite you to participate in this competition, which is scheduled to be held in the school auditorium at 9:00 a.m. next Friday. The contestants are required to translate five random Tang poems accurately, and the most important thing is to reflect the artistic conception of the poems. I believe that with your understanding of Tang poetry, you will certainly have a good performance in the competition!
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封邀请信:假定你是李华,你校为了推广中华经典文学,计划举办一场唐诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国唐诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生Peter一同参加此次比赛。内容包括:1. 比赛举办的目的;2. 比赛的时间和规则;3. 你邀请的理由。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; promote(推广),Chinese classic literature(中华经典文学),English translation competition of Tang poetry(唐诗英语翻译大赛),invite(邀请), accurately(准确地),random(随机的),reflect(反映),artistic conception(意境)及understanding(理解)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有be interested in(对……感兴趣),in order to(为了),invite sb to do(邀请某人做某事),be scheduled to do(定于、被安排),be required to do(被要求做某事)以及have a good performance(取得优异的表现),而且还使用了非谓语动词和非限定性定语从句“Knowing that you are very interested in Tang poetry, I would like to invite you to participate in this competition, which is scheduled to be held in the school auditorium at 9:00 a.m.”,宾语从句“I believe that with your understanding of Tang poetry, you will certainly have a good performance in the competition!”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
5.Dear Tim,
With a new science and technology museum whose theme is “Intelligent Manufacturing in China” built in our city recently, our school plans to organize a visit for us students. Knowing that you are rather interested in modern science and technology, I am writing to invite you to go there with us.
As scheduled,we will gather at the school gate this Saturday morning and take the bus at around 8: 00 a.m. Since the museum is newly built, various kinds of most advanced technological and scientific innovations are exhibited. I have heard a model of a solar car as well as a 3D room is on display. Moreover, the visitors will not only have a chance to experience the amazing speed of 5G networks but also get a better understanding of the AI equipment.
Would you please let me know whether you can go to the museum with us or not? Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文写作。要求写一封邀请邮件。
【详解】第1步∶根据提示可知,本篇为一封邀请邮件﹔学校计划组织学生参观大庆市新建成的主题为“中国智造”的科技馆,要求你给外教Tim写一封邮件邀请他一同参观,并向他介绍活动的活动时间、地点,计划参观的内容等,并表达期待。
第2步∶根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如: science and technology museum(科技馆), organize a visit(组织一次参观),exhibit(展览),experience the amazing speed of 5G networks(体验5G网络惊人的速度),AI equipment(AI设备), 等等。
第3步∶根据提示及关键词(组)连词成句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步∶连句成文,可使用连词对文章进行润色,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,要按照题目要求进行内容安排,采用三段式的结构,全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,要点齐全。在内容上,文章提到了有中国核心技术的5G网络和AI技术,该细节增添精当,可以丰富整个参观活动的内容,也提升了民族自豪感。另外,在语言使用上,全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力,文中使用高级句子,如With a new science and technology museum whose theme is “Intelligent Manufacturing in China” built in our city recently, our school plans to organize a visit for us students.该句使用了一个whose引导的定语从句;Knowing that you are rather interested in modern science and technology, I am writing to…使用了现在分词短语作状语;Would you please let me know whether you can go to the museum with us or not?使用了宾语从句;等等。
6.Dear Chris,
It is with the greatest of pleasure that I write to invite you to join our class to go to the Sun Island for the outing this Sunday. We will depart at 8 am at the school gate and the return is arranged at 5 pm. We will take a bus directly to our destination.
I recommend taking your camera with you to capture the beautiful scenes of nature. What’s more, an umbrella or rainproof jacket would most likely be needed since a short shower has been forecast.
We’re looking forward to seeing you and hope you will enjoy the trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是高二学生李华,你们班同学打算本周日去太阳岛游玩,请你给外教Chris写一封email,邀请他参加此次活动。请包括以下内容:1. 介绍活动的相关信息(时间、集合地点、交通工具等);2. 携带物品(午餐、相机、雨伞等)。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):invite (邀请);depart (出发);arrange(安排);destination(目的地)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I recommend taking your camera with you to capture the beautiful scenes of nature.非谓语动词的运用;What’s more, an umbrella or rainproof jacket would most likely be needed since a short shower has been forecast.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
7.Dear Eric,
I’m more than delighted to receive your email, in which you invite me to the school cultural festival. It will be a great pleasure for me to join such a wonderful event. As a music lover, I am particularly fascinated with Chinese folk songs and I would like to sing one during the festival, which will give the audience a glimpse of the unique traditional music in China. Folk songs, inspired by everyday life in various local cultures, feature simple language and convey emotions and feelings vividly.
It’s my sincere hope that the cultural festival will be a great success. I’m looking forward to joining you and enjoying fantastic performances together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇写作为一篇应用文写作。对好友Eric的邀请表示感谢,同时介绍自己的表演节目。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
要求:
1.感谢邀请;
2.介绍将表演的节目;
3.表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 (重点单词和短语)
be delighted to; a glimpse of; various; feature; vividly; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m more than delighted to receive your email, in which you invite me to the school cultural festival.
2. I am particularly fascinated with Chinese folk songs and I would like to sing one during the festival, which will give the audience a glimpse of the unique traditional music in China.
3. Folk songs, inspired by everyday life in various local cultures, feature simple language and convey emotions and feelings vividly.
4. I’m looking forward to joining you and enjoying fantastic performances together.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:and then, finally, in the end, at last
2.表并列补充关系:what’s more, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition, as well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:however, on the contrary, but, although, in spite of+n/doing, on the one hand… on the other hand…
4.表因果关系:because, as, so, thus, therefore, as a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和非谓语动词,如:I’m more than delighted to receive your email, in which you invite me to the school cultural festival.文章一开头就使用了定语从句,能够吸引读者的眼球。此外I am particularly fascinated with Chinese folk songs and I would like to sing one during the festival, which will give the audience a glimpse of the unique traditional music in China.也使用了定语从句。Folk songs, inspired by everyday life in various local cultures, feature simple language and convey emotions and feelings vividly.这句话则使用了非谓语动词,更加展示了语言的运用能力。固定搭配运用了如be delighted to; a glimpse of; various; feature; vividly; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
8.Dear Mr. White,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of our School. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school meeting hall on June 15th.
As scheduled, the speech will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “love labor, start from me”. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 13945209988 if you have any questions.
We would appreciate it if you could join us. And I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,你校将组织一次主题为“热爱劳动,从我做起”的英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)。假设你是学生会主席李华, 请给你们的外籍教师Mr. White写封书面邀请函,请他来做评委 (judge)。内容主要包括:1. 时间与地点:2019年7月15日下午2点到5点学校会议大厅;2. 参赛选手:10位同学;3. 联系人:李华(电话13545209988)。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):judge (评委);English speech contest (英语演讲比赛);last for (持续);convenient (方便)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school meeting hall on June 15th.非谓语动词的运用;We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
9.Dear Owen,
I know you are a Chinese lover and are working hard to improve your Chinese level. Now there is an activity of “Shuxiang Campus Network Reading Week”. I sincerely invite you to participate in this activity.
The Reading Week is from July 20 to July 26 on the internet. The content of the Reading Week is to read books about the history of Chinese civilization, which can help students understand the greatness of ancient civilization and cultivate good moral character and sound personality.
You can do as follows. Firstly, sign up at Reading Week.com. Then, choose the book you like. What’s more, we can exchange thoughts at anytime. I really hope you can make great progress.
I would really appreciate it if you could reply as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邀请信,邀请英国朋友Owen参加“书香校园网络读书周”活动。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.发出邀请
2.介绍相关情况
1)活动安排。(arrangement)
2)期待回复。(expectation)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
work hard; participate in; Chinese civilization; as follows; sign up; make progress; appreciate; as soon as possible
第三步:连词成句
1. I know you are a Chinese lover and are working hard to improve your Chinese level.
2. I sincerely invite you to participate in this activity.
3. The content of the Reading Week is to read books about the history of Chinese civilization,
4. You can do as follows.
5. Firstly, sign up at Reading Week.com.
6. I really hope you can make great progress.
7. I would really appreciate it if you could reply as soon as possible.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:The content of the Reading Week is to read books about the history of Chinese civilization, which can help students understand the greatness of ancient civilization and cultivate good moral character and sound personality.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;也使用了一些固定词组,如participate in; make progress; as soon as possible等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
10.Dear Smith,
To have a better understanding of what we learnt about cultural heritage in English class,we have arranged a visit to the International Intangible Cultural Park in the suburbs of Chengdu.Therefore,I wonder if you are interested to go with us,during which we can have a feast of amazing Chinese culture.
As has been planned,we will gather and set off/out at the school gate by coach at 8:00,November 10 and return at 15:00.Upon our arrival,a guide will introduce us those remarkable pasts in different aspects of people’s life when showing us around the park.At lunchtime,we’ll be enjoying our picnic prepared in advance on the grass,chatting and having fun.
We would feel greatly honored and pleased if you could accept the invitation.I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邀请信,告知外教活动安排。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
要求:1. 集合时间和地点安排
2. 活动内容
1) 随导游参观;
2)中午野餐(自备)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
have a better understanding of; cultural heritage; have a feast of; remarkable; in advance; impact; at one’s convenience.;
第三步:连词成句
1. To have a better understanding of what we learnt about cultural heritage in English class,
2. Therefore, I wonder if you are interested to go with us, during which we can have a feast of amazing Chinese culture.
3. Upon our arrival, a guide will introduce us those remarkable pasts in different aspects of people’s life when showing us around the park.
4. we’ll be enjoying our picnic prepared in advance on the grass, chatting and having fun.
5. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和非谓语动词,如:To have a better understanding of what we learnt about cultural heritage in English class, we have arranged a visit to the International Intangible Cultural Park in the suburbs of Chengdu.这句话运用了非谓语动词to do表示目的,同时也包含了宾语从句。I wonder if you are interested to go with us, during which we can have a feast of amazing Chinese culture.运用了宾语从句和非限制性定语从句,定语从句修饰前面整个句子。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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