专题02：名校名卷满分作文精选-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

专题02：名校名卷满分作文精选-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号

一、材料作文

1．（2023·四川成都·树德中学校考模拟预测）假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东，为了配合环保教育主题活动，请根据下面所给提示，用英语写一 封倡议书，内容包括：

1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施；

2. 你的希望。

注意：1.注意文章的整体连贯性；

2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 100词左右。

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Wang Dong

【答案】参考范文：

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it’s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last but not the least, we’d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.

In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner! Thank you!

Wang Dong

【详解】[整体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文；

②时态：采用“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，围绕环保话题展开。

[写作步骤]

第一步：阐述环保措施和美化城市的措施；

第二步：表达自己的希望。

[亮点词汇]

①For example比如

②Last but not the least最后一点，但同等重要的是

③try one’best to do尝试做某事

[高分句型]

In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!（条件状语从句）

2．（四川省成都市田家炳中学2022学年期末）每个人在人生旅途中总会遇到过困难，遭受挫折。在你遇到那些困难和挫折时，是否也有那么一个人曾经启发你、引领你笑着面对困境，努力战胜困难。请根据表格提示内容，选择其中一个对象（老师，同学，父母或者其他人）写出你们之间的故事。

要求：1. 包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；2. 书写规范、工整，条理清晰；

3. 文中不得出现真实人名、地名和校名等；

4. 词数：100 左右。首句供参考。

There is always something unforgettable in our middle school life.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

There is always something unforgettable in our middle school life. Looking back on my past life, I’ll never forget my friend Tom who always encourages me when I want to give up.

One day on a hot afternoon, we were going to have a PE test, which I was not good at. When the test started, I was already out of energy. So I ran much more slowly than my classmates. Just at the moment, I heard Tom said, “Come on! You can do it. Never give up.” Suddenly I felt the warmth from the bottom of my heart. I started to try my best to follow him. At last, I passed the test.

Without Tom’s encouragement, I couldn’t do it successfully. And I have learned that we should keep working hard and never give up when meeting difficulties.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；

③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点，行文要连贯、条理要清晰，无语法错误，以第一人称为主。

［写作步骤］

第一步，开篇点题；

第二步，围绕要点进行介绍，具体包括遇到的困难、他/她是如何帮助你等方面；

第三步，阐述自己从这次经历中学习的东西。

［亮点词汇］

①look back on 回顾

②give up 放弃

③try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事

［高分句型］

①Looking back on my past life, I’ll never forget my friend Tom who always encourages me when I want to give up. （who引导的定语从句）

②One day on a hot afternoon, we were going to have a PE test, which I was not good at. （which引导的非限定性定语从句）

③And I have learned that we should keep working hard and never give up when meeting difficulties. （that引导的宾语从句）

3．（2023·四川成都·成都七中校考模拟预测）四川海外华侨华人遍布世界上许多国家，他们情系家乡，热心支持家乡的教育发展。一直以来，他们扶助家乡发展教育，捐资办学，捐赠大批现代教学设备，还捐资设立各类教学基金会，促进了家乡的教育事业的蓬勃发展。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

要 点：

1. 简介四川华侨华人；

2. 华侨华人扶助家乡发展教育所起的作用(至少2点)；

3. 你对华侨华人的评价。  

要 求：

1. 内容必须包括所有要点；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

提示词：overseas Chinese 华侨华人  enthusiastically 热情地  construction 建设 teaching fund 教学基金

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【答案】例文

There are many overseas Chinese in Sichuan, who live in many countries and areas. They love their hometown and enthusiastically support the educational development.

Their donation is helpful to the construction of the school and the improvement of school conditions. Modern teaching equipment has changed the old teaching methods and the ways to learn, and improved the efficiency of teaching and learning. Setting up teaching fund has given great activity of teachers and students, and encouraged them to do better in everything.

Overseas Chinese have made great contributions to the education of their hometown. They are great! They are the pride of Chinese people! People in their hometown will never forget them.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，简介四川华侨华人；

第二步，介绍华侨华人扶助家乡发展教育所起的作用；

第三步，最后表达你对华侨华人的评价。   

[亮点词汇]

①be helpful to对……有帮助

②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事

③make contribution to为……作出贡献

[高分句型]

There are many overseas Chinese in Sichuan, who live in many countries and areas.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．（2022春·四川成都外国语实验学校校考期中）习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人，我们学校正在开展 “做一名新时代的合格中学生”活动，假如你是学生会的李杨，向全校同学写一篇倡议书。

提示：1.爱祖国，守诚信，待人友好。

2.爱学习，多运动，爱自然。

3.自由发挥（至少2条）

I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union.We’re having an activity of being a good student.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union.We’re having an activity of being a good student. First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. In addition, it’s our duty to study hard and try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework. Come on! I believe we can make it. Thanks for your listening.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明身份以及说明学校正在开展的活动；

第二步，根据提示，从几个方面陈述如何做一名合格的中学生并做相应补充；

第三步，号召大家并表示感谢。

[亮点词汇]

①First of all首先

②be friendly to sb对某人友好

③get on well with sb和某人友好相处

④get into the habit of养成……习惯

[高分句型]

①In addition, it’s our duty to study hard and try our best to achieve our dreams.（it固定句型）

②Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them.（so引导原因状语从句）

5．（2022春·四川成都市第二中学校校考期中）减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。请你根据下面提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

1. 帮助父母做家务，多和父母交流；

2. 多做运动，保持身体健康；

3. 多阅读，更好的了解世界；

4. 亲近自然，放松自己；

5. ……(你自己的建议)。

注意：

(1) 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；

(2) 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

(3) 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。

How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?

Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?

Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?

First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love and we can have more time to communicate with them. Second, doing more sports is good for our health. I like playing basketball, I can play it with my classmates after school. Third, we will know more about the world by reading. Fourth, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.

In my opinion, we can take part in some social activities as volunteers to help those who need help.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作提示题目已经给出，所以要围绕提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步：开篇点题，并引出下文；

第二步：按照写作提示写出应如何利用我们的空闲时间；

第三步：写出自己的建议。

[亮点词汇]

①communicate with sb和某人沟通

②in my opinion依我看

③get close to接近

④take part in参加

[高分句型]

①First…Second…Third…Fourth…（这些顺序词的使用使文章层次鲜明，条理清晰）

②Fourth, it is a good chance or us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.（句型it is....for sb to do sth）

6．（2022春·四川成都市树德实验中学校考期中）中学生常常因为和朋友相处的问题让自己烦恼。学校杂志想请大家以“How I get on well with my friends”为题，讲述自己和朋友之间发生的一件难忘的往事，并为大家分享从往事中得出的相处之道，再给出自己其他的相处建议。

要求:

1. 要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥；

2. 时态运用恰当，至少用到两种以上时态；

3. 针对主题另外给出至少两条建议；

4. 字数100字以上，字迹工整，卷面干净。

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【答案】例文：

How I get on well with my friends

Friends are important in our life. Over our lifetime, they may influence us more than anyone else we will meet.

I remember one thing happened between my friend Mary and me. Before the final exam, I was too nervous, so I didn’t prepare for the exam well. During the exams, I wanted to copy Mary’s answer. But she refused, and she tried to cover her paper. After exams, she communicated with me and told me how important the honest was. Finally, I realized my fault and said sorry to her.

From this experience, I think honest is so important. When you find your friends make some mistakes, you should correct them in time. And we should also help our friends in need. As an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍朋友的重要性；

第二步，分享自己和朋友之间发生的一件事；

第三步，发表自己对于如何与朋友和睦相处的建议。

[亮点词汇]

①between…and在……和……之间

②prepare for为……做准备

③try to do sth尽力做某事

④communicate with sb与某人沟通

[高分句型]

①After exams, she communicated with me and told me how important the honest was.（how引导的宾语从句）

②When you find your friends make some mistakes, you should correct them in time.（when引导时间状语从句）

7．（2022春·四川成都双流中学校考期中）随着双减政策的实施，一些学校开始实行课后延时辅导（overtime tutoring），每天晚一个小时放学。假如你是Tom，请结合下面的信息谈谈你对该项措施的看法并说明理由。

要求：

1、文章必须包含所有信息，语句通顺意思连贯，可适当发挥。

2、词数100词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。To meet the teaching needs, some schools begin organizing overtime tutoring for students._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

To meet the teaching needs, some schools begin organizing overtime tutoring for students. Different people have different ideas.

Some parents think it is good for children’s study. Because teachers can tutor their children. Others think it is unnecessary. Because it makes children go home late and may be dangerous.

In my opinion, I think it is good. First, we can do our homework at school. If we come across some difficult problems, we can ask the teachers for help instead of leaving the problem till the next day. Second, our school will hold some entertainment activities regularly to promote the communication between teachers and students. Not just homework and tutoring.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，要求结合提示信息谈谈你对课后延时辅导的看法并说明理由，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍支持课后延时辅导的家长的看法和理由；

第二步，介绍不支持课后延时辅导的家长的看法和理由；

第三步，介绍自己的看法和理由。

[亮点词汇]

①be good for对……有好处

②In my opinion在我看来

③come across遇到

[高分句型]

①Some parents think it is good for children’s study.（省略that的宾语从句）

②If we come across some difficult problems, we can ask the teachers for help instead of leaving the problem till the next day.（if引导的条件状语从句）

二、电子邮件

8．（2023·四川外国语学校考）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Vicky在网上看到了你校“爱心环保俱乐部”的信息，他对此很感兴趣。你作为这个俱乐部的发起人，根据以下要点用英语回复一封电子邮件，向他介绍俱乐部的爱心善举以及丰硕收获。

(1)俱乐部成员在每周四下午收集废品；

(2)我们鼓励全校师生把废品分类，如：塑料瓶、易拉罐、废纸等；

(3)我们卖掉废品,并用这些钱资助贫困地区的学生；

(4)三年来，倶乐部坚持扶贫工程，已经帮扶近百名学生；

(5)我的观点……

参考词汇：把……分类sort；易拉罐can；扶贫工程poverty reduction projects

要求：(1)词数：80-100个。

(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear Vicky,

I’m glad to introduce our Love & Recycling Club to you. All our club members _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hope this will be helpful to you!

Yours truly

Li Hua

【答案】参考范文：

Dear Vicky,

I’m glad to introduce our Love & Recycling Club to you. All our club memberscollect waste every Thursday afternoon. We encourage teachers and students in our school to sort waste products, such as plastic bottles, cans, waste paper and so on. We sell waste and use the money to help students in poor areas. Over the past three years, the club keeps supporting the poverty reduction projects. So far, it has helped nearly a hundred students.

I think it’s meaningful for us to raise money for the poor students for areas. I hope more people will join our club to help more people in need of help.

Hope this will be helpful to you!

Yours truly

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。按照提示材料，给笔友Vicky回复一封信来介绍俱乐部的爱心善举以及丰硕收获。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍俱乐部的爱心善举及丰硕收获；第二段介绍自己的观点；最后一段表达能希望帮到对方。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

三、书信作文

9．（2022春·四川成都石室联合中学校考期中）假如你是Ma Huan，你的表弟 Mingming下学期将进入初中，他想向你了解你的初中生活，请你给他写一封信介绍你的学校和日常生活，内容须包括以下要点：

1. 你的日常生活（至少两点）；

2. 你加入的学校社团及原因；

3. 你上下学的方式、距离及花费时间；

4. 学校的规章制度及看法（至少两点）。

注意：

1. 作文必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；

2. 词数：100左右。

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【答案】例文：

Dear Mingming,

I’m glad to tell you something about my junior school life.

I always get up early every day. My home is close to school so that I can go to school on foot. It takes me 15 minutes to get to school. What’s more, we have 7 classes on weekdays and I like English and science best. After school, I first finish my homework in the classroom and then play table tennis with my classmates.

There are many interesting clubs in my school, such as sports club, cooking club, music club and so on. I join in the sports club because I love table tennis.

However, there are some rules at school. For example, we should wear school uniform and we can’t eat in the classroom. The rules are strict but they can help us develop good habits.

I hope it will help you get to know junior school life better.

Yours,

Ma Huan

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”

③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍你的学校和日常生活，可适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出话题，表示要介绍自己的初中生活；

第二步，介绍自己的日常生活以及上下学的方式、距离及花费时间；

第三步，加入的学校社团及原因；

第四步，介绍学校的规章制度及对制度的看法；

第五步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①on foot步行

②play table tennis打乒乓球

[高分句型]

①My home is close to school so that I can go to school on foot.(so that引导的目的状语从句)

②The rules are strict but they can help us develop good habits.(but连接的并列句)

10．（2022春·四川成都·七年级四川省成都市七中育才学校校考期中）假如你是来自南非的Laura，现就读于成都七中育才学校。你的朋友Lisa想了解你在成都的学习及生活情况，请根据以下信息给她写一封信，内容包括：

要求：1.书信应包含方框中的所有信息，可适当发挥；

2.注意衔接过渡自然

3.词数：100左右，书信格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,How’s it going?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Laura

【答案】例文

Dear Lisa,

How’s it going? In your last letter, you said that you wanted to learn more about my life. Now I want to share my life with you.

My home is 2 kilometers away from my school. I usually walk to school, because I think it is good for health and environment. It takes me twenty minutes to get to school. There are many rules in my school. Don’t be late for school. We must eat in the dining room. I think these rules are strict but useful. I like music club best, because I like playing the piano.

Now it is 9:15 p.m.. It is raining outside. My father is watching TV in the living room. My mother is washing clothes in the bathroom. I am doing my homework in my room.

What about your life? Look forward to your reply.

Laura

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍自己的上学方式，时间等，介绍校规以及喜欢的社团；

第二步，介绍家里人正在做的事情。

[亮点词汇]

①be good for对……有好处

②be late for school上学迟到

③like…best最喜欢

[高分句型]

①I usually walk to school, because I think it is good for health and environment（because引导原因状语从句）

②There are many rules in my school.（there be句型）