专题01：十年中考作文真题解读-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

专题01：十年中考作文真题解读-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号

一、看图作文

1．（2022·四川成都·统考中考真题）越来越多的人将阅读作为一种生活习惯。假如你是李欣，你校校园电视台英语栏目正在征集以阅读为主题的视频，请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。

1. ___ways___     2. ___family___

注意：

1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；

2. 须全面反映图文信息；

3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4. 词数80—100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. More and more people have a reading habit. So do I. I like reading very much. Because I think it can open up a new world for me. I can also learn more from it.

I like reading books in the school library. There are different kinds of books in it. When travelling, I enjoy reading on the plane to kill time. Now we not only read paper books, but also read e-books. I prefer to read paper books. Because spending too much time on screen is bad for my eyes. Our family all like reading books, especially my grandfather. He likes reading books about travelling. Among the books, I like history books best. Because I can learn more about Chinese culture. I always read books at least half an hour before bedtime.

So if you like reading, take action from now on.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。围绕“阅读”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段讲述阅读的重要性；第二段介绍自己的阅读习惯；最后一段呼吁人们现在就开始阅读。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2．（2015·四川成都·中考真题）书面表达

请根据以下交通事故因素（factors）统计图表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents” 为题，用英语写一篇简短的分析报告，向学校英语报投 稿。

注意：

1. 报告需逐条陈述下面 pie chart 和 bar chart (柱状图) 中呈现的主 要内容。（至少 5 点）

2. 提出你对交通安全总的看法。（至少 2 点）

3. 词数：100 词左右，所给标题不计入总词数。

【答案】One possible version：

Major Causes of Traffic Accidents

Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to analyze the major causes. The following are two reports:

According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors:85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, it’s quite clear that the first one is holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%.

In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!

【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给图表作文，根据图表显示介绍交通安全事故发生的因素以及自己的观点。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There are……， it is important for sb to do sth, it’s quite clear that……, everyone should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意要切题，思路清晰。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了交通安全事故频发，接下来介绍两个表格，表格一：驾驶员因素 85%，交通因素 5%，环境因素 10%。，表格二：超速 50%，酒驾 15%，疲劳驾驶 25%，不系安全带 25%。最后表达自己的观点：要有交通安全意识，要遵守交通规则。此处as a result, in my opinion, keep in mind, at the same time, try one’s best to do sth,  the+形容词比较级， the +形容词比较级等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

【考点定位】：图表作文。

3．（2017·四川成都·中考真题）假如你是班长，今天是你班的英语活动日，你将带领同学们骑车去Happy Park。请按照下面的图示用英语写一篇发言稿，在入园前向同学们介绍园区设施（facilities）的位置及游园注意事项，并希望同学们遵守规则，玩得开心。

注意：1、短文应包括要求的所有信息。

2、发言稿的格式完整。

3、短文应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样。

4、发言稿中不能出现个人和学校的真实信息。

5、词数：100左右。

【答案】Hello, boys and girls! May I have your attention, please? Today we choose to rise to this beautiful place--Happy Park to celebrate our English Day! Before entering the park, there are some specific details we must know first.

To begin with, we need to be clear about the location of the facilities. After entering the park, we can see a big grassland in front of you .On the left side is a food store where you can buy some food.And on the right side stand a toilet. A beautiful swimming pool lies behind the grassland,where the water is clean enough for you to swim. What’s more, you should keep the following rules in mind. First, you must park your bikes on each side of the gate. Second, you can neither pick flowers in the park, nor play football on the grassland.

That’s all. Thank you for your listening and have a good day.

【详解】这是一篇看图的发言稿，向同学们介绍Happy Park景区设施（facilities）的位置及游园注意事项，并希望同学们遵守规则，玩得开心。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we are going to……，there are……，we need to……，On the left side is……，we must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们将要去Happy Park庆祝英语活动日，接下来介绍同学们应注意的事项和应遵守的规则，最后祝大家玩得愉快。此处by bike, in order to, need to, pay attention, to start with, in front of, on the right side, keep the rules, neither… nor…, thanks for等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

二、材料作文

4．（2021·四川成都·统考中考真题）你校英文校刊就“过度养育”（Overparenting）这一现象开辟专栏，展开讨论。请以“Overparenting: Yes or No”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。

要求：

1. 简述该现象；

2. 陈述图表中不同观点及理由；

3. 表述你的观点及两点理由（须与图中不同）。

注意：

1. 请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；

2. 须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；

3. 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；

4. 词数：100 左右。

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【答案】例文

Overparenting: Yes or No

Overparenting is more and more popular nowadays. Some parents always do everything for their children because they think children are busy with their schoolwork. While other parents prefer letting their children do things by themselves and solve problems on their own.

As for children, some of them think parents’ help is good for them and they can get good results with parents’ help. But others think they also lose chances to challenge themselves.

In my opinion, I think parents should give their children more chances to challenge themselves and they should learn more knowledge not only in study but also in life to improve themselves. Then, they can take good care of themselves and have the courage and confidence to face the difficulties in the future.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Overparenting: Yes or No”为题，结合图片和提示要点进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三和第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家长对于“过度养育”的观点；第二段介绍孩子对于“过度养育”的观点；第三段表明自己的观点。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

5．（2019·四川成都·中考真题）假如你叫Ann，你的中国朋友小华发来email请教如何利用词典学习英语。请参考截图及注释，根据提示回一封email。要点如下：

1. 根据示例，概括介绍词条构成；

2. 如何用词典解决词汇学习中的问题（至少两点）；

3. 介绍词典对英语学习的好处（至少两点）。

( taken from an English- Chinese dictionary )

注意：l. 截图内容仅供参考，可以引用，不能照抄；

2. 文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；

3. 词数：100左右。

【答案】Dear Xiaohua,

Glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English. Here are some of my thoughts.

Words in a dictionary are called entries. Each entry has five sections, such as pronunciation, part of speech, definition, usage and word group. Of course, sometimes the same word has different parts of speech and definitions.

Using dictionaries can solve problems in vocabulary learning. When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning. A dictionary is of great benefit to English learning. First of all, it can help us understand the meaning of words accurately. Secondly, it can enrich our knowledge and exercise our thinking. Finally, it can help us learn to express our ideas.

I hope it's helpful to you.

Yours

Ann

【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to use a dictionary, such as, to learn English, part of speech, word family, of course, different parts of, with the help of a dictionary, not only…but also, find out, first of all, help sb. do, learn to do等。而You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English./ When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning./ I hope it's helpful to you等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．（2016·四川成都·中考真题）根据下面的“熊猫基地一日游”公告，用英语写一篇短文，向某旅游信息专栏投稿。注意：

1. 短文应包括公告内的所有信息；

2. 根据短文内容，拟一个恰当的标题；

3. 短文应结构完整，语句连贯，句式多样。不得逐条翻译；

4. 词数：100词左右。

参考词汇：the Panda Research Base熊猫研究基地

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【答案】例文：

The One-day Visit to the Panda Research Base

A visitor can enjoy a whole wonderful day in the Panda Base with one ticket. The prices are different according to ages. The price for an adult is 50 yuan. However, a senior aged over 60 or a kid from 6 to 12 years old only needs to pay half the price. Besides, kids under 6 are free to visit.  Also, parking is free. The ticket is only available for one day.

It opens from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. seven days a week. Visitors can come all year round except the Lantern Festival.

Welcome to the Panda Base and have fun!

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于应用文，题目要求是介绍熊猫研究基地一日游的情况，要包括公告内的所有信息，并做到结构完整，语句通顺，句式多样；要根据短文内容，拟一个恰当的标题；100词左右。

2. 写法指导：写作时，人称采用第三人称，时态使用一般现在时。首先，根据题干中“熊猫研究基地一日游”给文章拟一个标题；接着，向人们详细介绍熊猫研究基地一日游的所有信息，要注意不能遗漏要点。最后发出号召，欢迎来熊猫基地参观。写作时，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语，句式要多样；同时要注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

三、话题作文

7．（2014·四川成都·中考真题）你即将升入高中，面临寄宿(a boarding school) 和走读(a day school)

两类学校的选择。请你以 “A boarding school or a day school?” 为标题，

写一篇 80-120 词的短文，内容须包括：

1. 读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点；

2. 读走读学校的利和弊各一点；

3. 你的选择和理由(理由不得与上述两点内容重复)。

注意：1. 短文必须包括所有要点；

2. 可根据内容要点适当添加有关细节，使行文连贯；

3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。

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【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle school,and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school.Both kinds of schools have their advantages and disadvantages.

If we choose a boarding school,we will save more time to study.However ,we may have less time staying with our family.If we choose a day school,parents can know more of our studies.At the same time,computer games may take a bad influnce on us.

As for me,I prefer a boarding school.We should concentrate on our study to get good grades in high school.

【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:graduate from从……毕业；take an influence on对……产生影响；concentrate on集中注意力于……；连词and、if和as等的使用是本文看起来更加条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文

8．（2012·四川成都·中考真题）英语课上，我们时常进行小组活动。但如何能让这种活动帮助我们把英语学得更好?现在，请根据以下要点，以“How Can Group Activities Help Us Study English Better?”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

 1) 活动的任务及完成方式要明确；

 2)小组内要有不同的角色分工、要合作；

 3)教师的必要帮助；

 4)活动结果要在班上分享。

注意：1)短文题目已经给出，不计入总词数(80～100词)；

 2)短文必须包括提示，要点和恰当的结尾；

 3)文中不得出现师生的真实姓名及所在学校的名称。

参考词汇：

cooperate vi.合作 role n.角色 share vt.分享

How Can Group Activities Help Us Study English Better?

【答案】One possible version:

How Can Group Activities Help Us Study English Better?

In English class, we often have group activities. But how can the activities help us study English Better? First, we must make it clear what the task is for each group and how it should be done. Second, each group member must play a different role and the whole group should cooperate well. At the same time, teachers should offer necessary help to each group during activities. Finally, the activity results must be shared in class because they are our achievements.

In this way, we will probably study English better.

【详解】一、审题

本篇作文考查体裁为说明文，要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈小组活动如何帮助我们把英语学得更好。

二、列举写作要点

1. 活动的任务及完成方式要明确；

2. 小组内要有不同的角色分工、要合作；

3. 教师的必要帮助；

4. 活动结果要在班上分享。

三、列出重点短语及句型

First, Second, Finally, at the same time, make… clear, play a role, offer…to, in class, in this way

四、讲稿

9．（2020·四川成都·统考中考真题）假设复课后你将在英语课上交流新冠肺炎(COVID-19)的防护措施、居家隔离期间的生活方式和抗击疫情给你的启示（至少两点)，请根据以下两幅图示写一篇英语演讲稿。

要求：

1. 请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；

2. 写作内容需包含两幅图示中的主要信息。

注意：

1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；

2. 词数:100左右。

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【答案】例文：

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua and I’m very glad to make a speech here.

In order to fight against the COVID-19, I spent a long time staying at home. I must be patient at home, or I will be a patient. I had to wash my hands frequently with soap to make my hands clean. When I had to go outside, I must wear a mask and obey social distancing, which helped to prevent the spread of the virus. Besides, I exercised a lot to keep healthy.

In my opinion, for our health, we shouldn’t touch our mouths, eyes or noses with dirty hands. What’s more, we should do some sports to improve our health.

Thanks for your listening.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求完成英语演讲稿，根据题目中的信息并结合图示内容完成即可。

2.例文点评：短文采用四段式结构，第一段是问候，表明作者很高兴做演讲；第二段讲述了作者在疫情期间的防护措施和生活方式；第三段讲述了作者的启示；第四段结尾，向听众表示感谢。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be glad to do sth.；in order to do sth.；sb. spend time doing sth.；keep healthy；in one’s opinion；what’s more；do some sports。

句型：I must wear a mask and obey social distancing, which helped to prevent the spread of the virus. which引导的非限制性定语从句；In my opinion, for our health, we shouldn’t touch our mouths, eyes or noses with dirty hands. 情态动词should的否定形式shouldn’t，表示提建议。

五、日记

10．（2018·四川成都·中考真题）书面表达

假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。

注意：1.日记应包含图中所有信息

2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受

3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样

4词数:100左右。

参考词汇:城堡 castle螃蟹crab

【答案】Sunny Sunday,

April 29(th)

Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.

What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.

【详解】假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。根据图片提示，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。