专题08短文改错2023年高考英语三模试题分项汇编（全国通用）（原卷版）

专题08  短文改错

(原卷版)

目录

1. 2023届甘肃省武威市凉州区三模诊断试题
2. 2023届广西壮族自治区贵港市三模试题
3. 2023届广西壮族自治区河池市三模试题
4. 2023届河南省开封市三模试题
5. 2023届河南省新乡市高三三模试题
6. 2023届江西省景德镇市高三三模试题
7. 2023届内蒙古赤峰市八校高三试题
8. 2023届陕西省安康市高三三模试题
9. 2023届陕西省咸阳市高三三模试题
10. 2023届陕西省榆林市高三三模试题
11. 2023届四川省成都市第三次诊断试题
12. 2023届四川省大数据精准教学联盟三联试题
13. 2023届四川省德阳市高三三诊试题
14. 2023届四川省宜宾市高三三诊试题
15. 2023届新疆维乌鲁木齐市三模试题

1.【2023届甘肃省武威市凉州区三模诊断试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Karl,

How’s everything going? I’m writing to share you a brilliant thing.

I win the first prize in the Music Star Festival to held by my school last week. The song I sang was the Red Sun by David Lee. I chose a song because of the inspiration it took me. Every time I enjoy it I feel something warmth flowing in my heart. I can’t emphasize the importance of others’ encouragement too much. Not only can they make me happy, but also can encourage me to keep moving. When I were under pressure, I choose to listen to the song and catch my breathe.

I do hope you also like the song. Do you have any songs that encourage you? Looking forward to you early reply.

Yours,

Jack

2.【2023届广西壮族自治区贵港市三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

An activity themed “Student Talent Show" was held last week, thus attracted many students to participate. The activity was lasted from Monday to Saturday, during which time students with special talents signed up, prepared but competed well. The final competition fell on Saturday afternoon, when all the teens and child showed their great talents. Some presented her amazing singing voices when others showed their incredible dancing skills. What impressed us most was the one who danced from a rap music while playing a tongue twister. The activity had impact on everyone. It’ s entire believed that such an event will not only improve students’ ability but also promotes their love of life.

3.【2023届广西壮族自治区河池市三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Many a person amaze us in our lives. One of the more impressive for me is my cousin, who graduated from a key university majoring in Computer Science. She once said, “My dream is to become an expert at computer.” Unlucky, a serious illness resulted his disability, so he moved around with two stick. To earn his life, he set up a small computer shop years ago. Then he taught himself what to repair computers by reading e-books as well as paper books and watch teaching videos. Now my cousin has been become a famous disabled computer expert.

4.【2023届河南省开封市三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’m more than willing to tell you anything about my hometown. I live in Pingyao, a county in Shanxi Province, what attracts a large number of tourists from all over the world in every year. The ancient city of Pingyao has described as an exceptional well-preserved example of a traditional Chinese historical and cultural city. Its well-preserved city walls are one of the city’s most impressive structure.

I hope you can come here one day. Then you can walk around a city, taste the local food, or learn about its history and culture. I’m sure you will be impressing by it and enjoy myself.

5.【2023届河南省新乡市高三三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Success rarely happen overnight. It is perseverance that makes failure the mother of success. I used to struggle with my math. However hard I tried, little progresses was made. I was about to give up while my math teacher came to my assistance. She told me the value of perseverance and encouraged me keep going. I took her advice and changed her strategy. At the same time, when I had difficulty solved problems, I would ask my teacher for help. It worked at the last and my grades gradual improved. This experience tells me that life is a journey what requires continuous efforts. Only by constant efforts could we eventually obtain success.

6.【2023届江西省景德镇市高三三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Our class had a heating debate on chemical agriculture and organic agriculture last week.

It is obvious that using chemical fertilizers have many disadvantages. For instance, the chemicals staying inside the crops can lead to cancer or other illness. However, the vegetables grow so fast that it contain little nutrition.

The reasons that organic foods are becoming increasing popular are as follows. The first one is that people attach great importance health. Secondly, natural fertilizers make vegetables and fruit taste and nutritious. What’s more, the produce grows in clean water and never uses pesticides.

In my opinion, health is wealth but it is wise to choose organic food.

7.【2023届内蒙古赤峰市八校高三试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Two years ago, the COVID-19 pandemic broke off in my city. Locking down in the school, we received great help and support from our teachers and medical workers. After entering the university, due to the repeatedly outbreaks, we were not allowed leave the campus freely. Although we missed out on lots of experiences, but we tried to have fun in our own way. We held a event called “Free Hug”, which aimed to show encourage to strangers on campus. I wear a mask and hugged many people that day. I were exhausted after standing for hours, but I knew their hearts were closer to each other.

8.【2023届陕西省安康市高三三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In China, good family spirits, passing down from one generation to other, have a strong influence on their child. Up till now, my grandfather and father always stressed the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence. Most importantly, they often set good examples to me. And thus I always follow which they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a help when others are in need. Beside, I am positive all the time but never stop chasing my goal whenever I come across difficulties. Thanks for those good family spirits, both my life and study goes smoothly.

9.【2023届陕西省咸阳市高三三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today is Women’s Day. Our school organized an activity what required students to do four things for their mothers. After hearing the news, I immediately took action. First, I made a well-designed card expressed my deep love for my mom. When I gave it to him, she said it was the most precious gift she have ever received. In return for, I kissed her on all cheeks and whispered that she was the best mother in the world. After supper, I voluntarily washed all the dish and cleaned a table. I also gave her a back massage ease her tiredness. My mother was deep moved, not only by what I did but also by seeing how much I had grown up.

10.【2023届陕西省榆林市高三三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dad and I go to my grandparents’ home last weekend. Besides visited my grandparents, we wanted to help them to have the broadband network fixing. Dad asked the communication company to do it in the advance. A technician came on time and finished his work rapid. Then it was my turn. I just taught my grandparents what to use their smart phones step by step. Soon we learned to read news, shop online or do something else. They showed much interest in video chat, which they thought was the most useful functions. Now, I usually chat my grandparents online.

11.【2023届四川省成都市第三次诊断试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When discussing cross-cultural differences in a work context, people usually talk with issues, like values and beliefs, which have impact on their working relationships. Cross- cultural difficulties often arise unless individuals make assumptions regarding how similar another people are to them. Although much in common exist between members, but it’s not wise to assume all people have the same beliefs or priorities. For example, in East Asia, there was a tendency to keep relations harmonious by avoiding mentioning problem. In North America, on the other hand, people prefer getting to the point fastly and directly. However, such an approach may make someone embarrassing personally or publicly.

12.【2023届四川省大数据精准教学联盟三联试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Have you thought about traveling to China? Plan a trip to China with family takes on a different meaning. It can be such an eye opener which you will get a new picture of China.

Our trip with my family to China started last year. We were impressed by the rich culture and beautiful scenery. Apart from that, we were all witnessed the impressed changes of this land. We ride one of the fastest trains in the world and it took only 5 minutes to get the airport in Shanghai. Most interesting, we paid by mobile phones and were amazed at the huge conveniences brought by this “new” technology. It was the unique experience we’d never forget.

13.【2023届四川省德阳市高三三诊试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

This year marks the 50th anniversary of my school. Small as it is in area, but it is the only key high school in my hometown. It is popular to students and parents for its high-quality teaching and some remarkable achievement.

All-round education and a strong sense of responsibility are reflecting in our campus culture. We students are required to obey our school rules and motivated to creative. Our school attach great significance to our independent learning, what accounts for our success. Besides, they are also encouraged to think outside the box. Honest speaking, I am proud of be a member of it.

14.【2023届四川省宜宾市高三三诊试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am applying a volunteer position for the games. Personally, I consider me a qualified candidate from the follow three aspects. Firstly, as a sports fan, my sports talents let me to fit in any volunteer position. Secondly, my fluently English will enable me to well understand the needs of sportsmen than others, and thus offer timely help. Thirdly, my voluntary experiences have not only strengthened my team spirit, but also equip me with practical skills and knowledges.

I keep passion for sports, but I hope to make a contribution to this world sports event. I would appreciate it when I am offered this opportunity. I have attached my resume and look forward to an interview.

15.【2023届新疆维乌鲁木齐市三模试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (⋀)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, we conducted an survey on what measures high school students take them to live a green life. Here are the results.

65% of the students lead a green lifestyle by walking, cycling or take public transportation. 40% of them recycle waste with an active manner. The number of the students saving electricity and water account for 35%. However, only 16% of the students chose to buy eco-friendly products. One possible reason is the products are expensive. Also, 8% of the students take other measure, like using reusable drinking cups.

In my opinion, living a green life is easy said than done, and one small step at a time can make a big difference.