浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的朋友李越面对即将到来的考试，感到学习压力很大，不知如何排解，写信求助于你，请你用英语写一封信给她，提出一些合理的建议，内容包括：

1.正确对待考试；

2.正常休息；

3.其他建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Yue,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li-Hua.

2．假定你是李华，你的好友Steven即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 提供建议；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意事项：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假定你是高中生李华，看到许多文化遗产正遭受各种破坏，请给UNESCO世界文化遗产中心的负责人John写一封关于如何保护全球文化遗产的建议信。内容包括：

1．教育保护文物；

2．倡导文明旅游；

3．筹集资金维护。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4．第一节：应用文写作（满分15分）

假定你是李华，在英国朋友Alex的帮助下，你的英语有所进步。但是目前你在英语写作方面遇到一些困难，请给Alex写封邮件，内容包括：

1.感谢帮助；

2.说明困难；

3.寻求建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

5．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris打算今年要来体验一下中国文化，他来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.表示欢迎；

2.你的建议和理由；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是李华，你的好友Mike用花呗购物成瘾，这给他的生活和学习带来了困扰。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:

1.过度消费的危害;

2.提出合理的建议。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:蚂蚁花呗Credit Pay

7．假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到很大影响。他焦虑万分。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。

要点如下：

1. 知悉问题；

2. 个人建议；

3. 表达希望。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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8．Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信，仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信，给出分析并提出合理建议。

回信应包括以下要点：

1. 定期与父母交流。2. 尽量避免与他们争执。3。其他你认为可行的途径。

注意：1. 可适当增加细节。2. 词数：120左右。

9．假定你是新华中学高三年级二班的学生李华，你校的英文版校园网最近正在征求改进意见。请给你校的网站负责人写一封信，提出你的建议。内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.你的建议；

3.你的期待。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假如你是李华，下个月即将参加你校举行的英语演讲比赛。得知你的美国网友Frank参加了“国际中学生演讲比赛”，并获得了一等奖。请你给他写封信，要点如下：

1.表示祝贺；

2.讨教参赛经验；

3.请他帮你的演讲稿提出建议。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Frank,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．One possible version,

Dear Li Yue,

 I am sorry to hear that you are under such great pressure due to the approaching examination. I'd like to offter some suggestions.

 Firstly, it's important to have a posstive attitude towards exams. To some extent, it helps figure out your problems. Moreover, you'd better kick your habit of staying up late and try to keep good hours.Lastly, why not turn to your teachers,friends and classmates for help when things don't work out as you expected?

Just relax and believe in yourself. I am firmly convinced that you can make it.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友李越写一封信，给对方提出一些考试前应对压力的合理建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

由于：due to→as a consequence of

重要的：important→significant/essential

问题：problem→issue

此外：Moreover→Additionally

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, it's important to have a posstive attitude towards exams. To some extent, it helps figure out your problems.

拓展句：Firstly, it's important to have a posstive attitude towards exams, which to some extent helps figure out your problems.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, why not turn to your teachers,friends and classmates for help when things don't work out as you expected? (运用了why not开头表示建议的句型和时间状语从句)

[高分句型2]I am firmly convinced that you can make it.（运用了被动语态和宾语从句）

2．Dear Steven,

I'm overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city's Chinese speech contest for overseas students. Congratulations! And I am here willing to offer some relevant suggestions.

First, you can seek Chinese teachers' professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy. Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the application of gestures. Additionally, staying self-assured is what it takes to guarantee your performance and bring out the best in you.

I genuinely hope that your unremitting effort will pay off ultimately.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛的好友Steven回信，提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

忙于：be engaged in→be occupied with

愿意做某事：be willing to do sth.→would like to do sth.

提供：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.

努力：effort→struggle

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First, you can seek Chinese teachers' professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy.

拓展句：First, you can seek Chinese teachers' professional guidance so that you can reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I'm overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city's Chinese speech contest for overseas students.（that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the application of gestures.（which引导非限制性定语从句）

3．Dear Mr.John,

As much of the cultural heritage is being destroyed nowadays, I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to protect it.

To begin with, it is important to educate people on the value of safeguarding historic and cultural relics. Secondly, we must also call on people to visit cultural heritage in a friendly way to reduce the damage caused by tourism. Finally, more money is expected to raise for protection so that people can appreciate the cultural heritage better and promote understanding among all of them.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给UNESCO世界文化遗产中心的负责人John写一封关于如何保护全球文化遗产的建议信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1．教育保护文物；

2．倡导文明旅游；

3．筹集资金维护。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

offer some suggestions on；is important to；call on；cultural heritage；reduce the damage；be expected to；raise for；appreciate the cultural heritage

第三步：连词成句

1. As much of the cultural heritage is being destroyed nowadays, I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to protect it.

2. To begin with, it is important to educate people on the value of safeguarding historic and cultural relics.

3. Secondly, we must also call on people to visit cultural heritage in a friendly way to reduce the damage caused by tourism.

4. Finally, more money is expected to raise for protection so that people can appreciate the cultural heritage better and promote understanding among all of them.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, Secondly, Finally

2.表转折对比关系：so that

3.表因果关系As

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]：To begin with, it is important to educate people on the value of safeguarding historic and cultural relics.这句话运用了不定式作主语，it作形式主语。

[高分句型2]：Secondly, we must also call on people to visit cultural heritage in a friendly way to reduce the damage caused by tourism.这句话运用了过去分词作定语的结构。

[高分句型3]：Finally, more money is expected to raise for protection so that people can appreciate the cultural heritage better and promote understanding among all of them.这句话运用了so that引导的目的状语从句。

4．Dear Alex,

 How is everything going? I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English.

English writing is really a big challenge for me at present. First of all, my vocabulary is not large, which makes it impossible for me to choose right and authentic words and phrases. Besides, English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one.

 I would be grateful if you could give me some detailed suggestions.

   Looking forward to your reply.

 Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾经帮助他学习英语的外国朋友Alex写封邮件，去请教他帮助自己解决在英语写作方面遇到的困难。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分总法

总分总法就是开篇先总结一下，然后开始叙述自己的主要内容，最后再以总结的形式结尾。

要求：

1.感谢帮助；

2.说明困难；

3.寻求建议。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

express my gratitude to you；a big challenge；choose right and authentic words and phrases；give me some detailed suggestions；looking forward to your reply.

第三步：连词成句

1.I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English.

2.My vocabulary is not large, which makes it impossible for me to choose right and authentic words and phrases.

3. English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one.

4. I would be grateful if you could give me some detailed suggestions.

5. Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致及时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,

2.表并列补充关系：Besides

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, my vocabulary is not large, which makes it impossible for me to choose right and authentic words and phrases. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Besides, English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one.（这里是一个定语从句，省略了关系词which或that）

[高分句型3] I would be grateful if you could give me some detailed suggestions.（if引导的条件状语从句）

5．Dear Chris,

I’m delighted to learn that you are coming to China for a visit. And I’m writing to recommend some historic sites that may interest you.

As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down. The first city that you can’t miss is Beijing, which is the capital city of China. There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors. In addition, the city of Xi’an will never fail to attract you with its world-famous historic heritage of the Terracotta Army. Of course, other cities such as Shanghai and Nanjing are also good choices for you.

I sincerely hope that you will have a good time in China and I am expecting to see you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Chris写封邮件，给他一些体验一下中国文化的建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.表示欢迎；

2.你的建议和理由；

3.表达祝愿。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to; a number of; pass down; know about; in addition; fail to; such as; have a good time; expect to do

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m delighted to learn that you are coming to China for a visit.

2. As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down.

3. There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors.

4. In addition, the city of Xi’an will never fail to attract you with its world-famous historic heritage of the Terracotta Army.

5. Of course, other cities such as Shanghai and Nanjing are also good choices for you.

6. I sincerely hope that you will have a good time in China and I am expecting to see you soon.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down.这句话运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型2] There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors. 这句话运用了关系代词which和关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型3] I sincerely hope that you will have a good time in China and I am expecting to see you soon. 这句话运用了宾语从句。

6．Dear Mike,

Learning that recently you’ re bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.

Honestly, I totally disapprove of overspending. Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus. If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.

I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Mike写一封邮件，表达对于过度消费的看法和提出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.过度消费的危害；

2.提出合理的建议。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

 bother,addiction to,purchase,heavy financial burden,offer some suggestions, disapprove of,drive sb. to do,distract our attention,budget reasonably,devote myself to study,take my suggestions into careful consideration

第三步：连词成句

1.Learning that recently you’ re bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.

2.I totally disapprove of overspending.

3.Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus.

4.If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.

5.I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus.（运用了倒装和非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]

If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.（运用了虚拟语气）

7．Dear John，

     I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．I know you worry about it very much. Therefore, I’m writing to give you some advice．

     Firstly，you should limit the time you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other meaningful things. Secondly，it is suggested that you form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly. What’s more，taking exercise for about half an hour every day will build up your body .

I sincerely hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes!

Yours,

Lihua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求关于笔友John沉迷于电脑游戏而感到焦虑提出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法

第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写信的原因；第二部分是支持段，提出具体的建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望建议对John有用。

要求：

1. 说明写信的原因：得知John 沉迷于电脑游戏而感到焦虑，对他提出建议；

2. 提出具体的建议：

①限制玩游戏的时间，关注其他有意义的事情；

②养成按时作息的生活习惯；

③每天锻炼半小时增强体质。

3. 希望建议对对方有用。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be addicted to；have an influence on；worry about；give sb. some advice；limit the time；spend time in doing…；play computer games；pay more attention to；form a habit of doing…；get up；go to bed；take exercise；build up one’s body；get rid of  

第三步：连词成句

(1) I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．

(2) I know you worry about it very much.

(3) I’m writing to give you some advice．

 (4) You should limit the time you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other meaningful things.

(5) It is suggested that you form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.

（6）Taking exercise for about half an hour every day will build up your body.

（7）I sincerely hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序：firstly…secondly

2.表递进关系：what is more

【点睛】[高分句型1]I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．（which引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2]It is beneficial to you to form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.（it作形式主语）

8．Dear Li Hua,

I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents. Maybe it is what we call “the generation gap” .

As for my advice, first, don’t hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, avoid quarreling with your parents. It is quite natural for parents to expect much from their children. You should convince them that you have tried your best to live up to their expectations.

If you treat your parents with respect and love, I am sure you will get on well with each other.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Brad

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求关于李华和父母交流有困难提出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法

第一部分是文章的开头段，说明李华的问题很普遍；第二部分是支持段，提出具体的建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望对方能和父母好好相处。

要求：

1. 说明李华的问题很普遍，这就是所谓的“代沟”

2. 提出具体的建议

①定期与父母交流

②避免和父母争吵，让父母相信你已经尽力去达到他们的期望

③以尊重和爱的态度对待父母

3. 希望对方能和父母好好相处

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

feel honored to do；trust；not alone；have trouble doing；communicate with；the generation gap；hide one’s feelings；make it a routine to do；share thoughts with sb.；avoid doing；quarrel with；expect much from sb.；try one’s best；live up to one’s expectations；treat sb. with；get on well with

第三步：连词成句

(1) I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.

(2) I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents.

(3) It is what we call “the generation gap” .

(4) Don’t hide your feelings.

(5) You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents.

(6) Avoid quarreling with your parents.

(7) It is quite natural for parents to expect much from their children.

(8) You should convince them that you have tried your best to live up to their expectations.

(9) If you treat your parents with respect and love, I am sure you will get on well with each other.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序： First, Second

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）

【点睛】[高分句型1]Maybe it is what we call “the generation gap” . （what引导表语从句）

[高分句型2]It is quite natural for parents to expect much from their children.（it作形式主语）

[高分句型3]If you treat your parents with respect and love, I am sure you will get on well with each other.（if引导的条件状语从句）

9．Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a student of Class Two, Grade Three. I’m writing to offer my suggestions on the improvement of

our English website.

I think it is advisable that more photos about campus life should be provided to make it more attractive. Besides, I hope the online news can be updated more often to keep us informed of what’s going on around the world. Also, a new column Reading Salon will be welcomed so that we can exchange reviews of the books we’ve read.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求关于英文版校园网提出改进建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法

第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写信的目的；第二部分是支持段，提出你的具体的建议；第三部分是结尾段，期待对方考虑你的建议。

要求：

1. 说明写信的目的：关于英文版校园网提出改进建议

2. 提出你的具体的建议

①增加校园生活图片，使网站更吸引人

②加快网站新闻的更新频率

③增加“读书沙龙”栏目，学生可以交流看书的评论

3. 期待对方考虑你的建议

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

offer suggestions；advisable；campus life；provide；make … attractive；update；keep sb. informed of；exchange reviews；consider  

第三步：连词成句

(1)I’m Li Hua, a student of Class Two, Grade Three.

(2)I’m writing to offer my suggestions on the improvement of our English website.

(3) It is advisable that more photos about campus life should be provided to make it more attractive.

(4) The online news can be updated more often to keep us informed of what’s going on around the world.

 (5) A new column Reading Salon will be welcomed.

(6) We can exchange reviews of the books we’ve read.

(7) I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表递进关系：besides，also

2.表因果关系：so that

【点睛】[高分句型1]It is advisable that more photos about campus life should be provided to make it more attractive.（it作形式主语和形式宾语）

[高分句型2]A new column Reading Salon will be welcomed so that we can exchange reviews of the books we’ve read.

（so that引导的结果状语从句）

10．Dear Frank,

Learning that you have won the first place in the International Students’ Speech Contest, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your success. It’s great that your years of hard work has paid off.

I’m going to take part in an English Speech Contest next month. While English has always been one of my best subjects, I have no experience in how to deliver an English speech, which worries me a lot. I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to share me with your competition experience and help me with my speech draft.

Congratulations again! And I would appreciate a response at your early convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Frank写信，祝贺他获得第一名并请他给自己的英语演讲稿一点建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.表示祝贺;

2.讨教参赛经验;

3.请他帮你的演讲稿提出建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

win the first place; offer one's sincere congratulations on ; pay off; take part in; have no experience in; share with

第三步：连词成句

1. Learning that you have won the first place in the International Students’ Speech Contest, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your success.

2. It’s great that your years of hard work has paid off.

3. I’m going to take part in an English Speech Contest next month.

4.While English has always been one of my best subjects, I have no experience in how to deliver an English speech, which worries me a lot.

5. I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to share me with your competition experience and help me with my speech draft.

6. And I would appreciate a response at your early convenience.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s great that your years of hard work has paid off.(运用了it作形式主语)

[高分句型2]While English has always been one of my best subjects, I have no experience in how to deliver an English speech, which worries me a lot.(运用了while引导让步状语从句)