浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共14页。
建议信1．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris下学期将作为交换生到你校学习，现向你询问两国日常生活中一些肢体语言的异同。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 告知一些常见肢体语言的异同；3. 建议其它学习途径。注意：1.词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2．假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括：1. 说明比赛要求；2. 请他推荐英文诗；3. 请教朗诵技巧。注意：写作词数应为80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，与你同班的英国交换生Jeff觉得自己写的汉字特别难看，向你求助。请写一封信帮助他，内容包括：1.安慰对方；2.改进书写的建议；注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的e-mail了解到他最近因为一次考试不及格而烦恼，请根据以下内容给Mike写一封回信，要点如下：1.宽慰；2.给予改进学习的建议（查找失败原因，向老师求助）；3.邀请周末去打篮球。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Tom 来信说，他的室友到处乱扔东西，跟他大吵了一架，现在关系很僵，他很苦恼，向你求助，请你给他写信。 内容包括：1.安慰对方； 2.你的建议 注意：1.80 词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使文章完整提示： quarrel v.n. 吵架，争吵 Dear Tom , __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua6．假定你是校学生会主席，你校决定邀请浙江大学著名美籍教授Smith先生来你校举办环保知识讲座。请你用英语写一份书面通知。要点如下：1. 时间：6月24日下午3点至5点；地点：报告厅 2. 主要内容：分析全球气候变暖的原因, 后果以及应对措施等。 3. 要求：带笔记按时参加。注意：1. 词数80左右2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter将要到你校学习，请给他写一封信，内容包括：1.表示欢迎：2.提出建议（关注气候差异，准备日常汉语等）；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David准备组织一个“人文中国”(Cultural China)的活动，写信向你求助。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.推荐中国书法艺术；2.提供活动建议。参考词汇:书法calligraphy注意:1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，你的加拿大网友James因玩手机浪费了过多的闲暇时间，给你发来邮件求助。请你根据如下要点，给他回一封邮件：1.愿意帮助；2.指出危害；3.给出建议。Dear James,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua10．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris发来一封邮件说他所在的英国城市将举办主题为“携手汉语，筑 梦未来”的汉语演讲比赛。他打算报名参加，但信心不足。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.表示鼓励；2.相关建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：携手汉语，筑梦未来 Learning Chinese, Creating Brighter Future___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________              1．Dear Peter,Welcome to join us! Since you want to learn about Chinese body language in our daily life, let me tell you some.Like Britons, we usually greet others by nodding, smiling or shaking hands. But different from your culture, Chinese people tend to stay closer to each other. In class, students are supposed to sit straight and raise their hands if they have questions.It's hard to list all the things I want you to know, so I downloaded an article introducing the topic. I suggest you reading it before coming to China.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Chris，介绍日常生活中一些肢体语言的异同。【详解】1.词汇积累想要：would like to→want to通常：generally→usually困难的：difficult→hard应该：should→be supposed to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：But different from your culture, Chinese people tend to stay closer to each other.拓展句：But Chinese people tend to stay closer to each other, which is different from your culture.【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you want to learn about Chinese body language in our daily life, let me tell you some. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2] Like Britons, we usually greet others by nodding, smiling or shaking hands. (运用了动名词作宾语)2．Dear George,   I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend. I’m eager to have a try. It’s required that theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to read the poem. So would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poem to choose? Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance.   I’d appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教George写封邮件求助，请他推荐英文诗和朗读技巧。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→contest选手：competitor→contestant建议：suggestion→advice此外：in addition→besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend. I’m eager to have a try.拓展句：Since our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend, I’m eager to have a try.【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. (运用了what引导主语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] It’s required that theme should be about nature. (运用了it作形式主语)3．Dear Jeff,I’m extremely sorry to learn that you are in a difficult situation and you are upset about how to improve your handwriting. There are a few techniques you can use to make your handwriting more smooth and graceful.To begin with, I think it's important that the models you imitate are not only written beautifully but correctly and neatly. You can also join the calligraphy club in our school, which is intended for foreign calligraphy lovers. With the help of teachers with advanced skills, you will definitely improve your handwriting swiftly. Handwriting is never an easy task, but takes painstaking efforts and patience. I believe you’ll make great progress sooner or later.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生请写一封信帮助与你同班的英国交换生Jeff，为他解答如何提高汉字书写。【详解】1.    词汇积累沮丧的：sad →upset提高：enhance →improve首先：Firstly →To begin with参加：participate in →join2.句式拓展简单句变为复合句原句：With the help of teachers with advanced skills, you will definitely improve your handwriting swiftly.拓展句：It is with the help of a highly skilled teacher that your handwriting is sure to improve rapidly.【点睛】[高分句型1] You can also join the calligraphy club in our school, which is intended for foreign calligraphy lovers.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2] I’m extremely sorry to learn that you are in a difficult situation and you are upset about how to improve your handwriting.这句话运用了宾语从句。4．Dear Mike,I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun. Hoping everything will be fine with you. Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给考试失利的朋友Mike写一封信安慰一下他，并给予建议，邀请他打篮球。【详解】词汇量积累保证：promise→guarantee同时：at the same time→meanwhile足够的：enough→adequate玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun句式拓展原句：But nobody can win all the time. I have to remind you it. 拓展句：But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time.【点睛】[高分句型1] To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. （运用了不定式做目的状语，且运用了what引导的宾语从句）[高分句型2] Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，且运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构）5．Dear Tom,I’m sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your roommate because of your roommate’ behavior that he often throw things everywhere. Seeing your problem, I feel worried and I have some advice for you. Firstly, in my opinion, communication plays an important part in our life. You can tell him what you think about his behavior, and I believe he will realize his mistake. Secondly, you can discuss with him on how to deal with the problem, and you can help him to put his things in order.Looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Tom写封信，就他跟乱扔东西的室友吵架一事安慰对方并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累担心：anxious→worried 争吵：argument→quarrel建议：suggestion→advice在我看来：as I see it→in my opinion2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：You can tell him what you think about his behavior, and I believe he will realize his mistake.拓展句：You can tell him what you think about his behavior, which can make him realize his mistake.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your roommate because of your roommate’ behavior that he often throw things everywhere. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)[高分句型2] Seeing your problem, I feel worried and I have some advice for you. (运用了现在分词作状语)6．NoticeA lecture about environmental protection will be given by Mr. Smith, a famous American professor from Zhejiang University, from 3 to 5 on the afternoon of June 24 in the school lecture hall. During the lecture, he'll first analyze the factors that cause global warming and the harmful effects that it has on us. Then he'll introduce several major measures to deal with this problem as well as giving us some advice on what we students can do. Anyone needs to be there on time and be ready to take notes.Students Union【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校决定邀请浙江大学著名美籍教授Smith先生来学校举办环保知识讲座，要求考生用英语写一份书面通知。【详解】1.词汇积累讲座：lecture→speech影响：effect→influence建议：advice→suggestion有害的：harmful→detrimental2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：A lecture about environmental protection will be given by Mr. Smith, a famous American professor from Zhejiang University, from 3 to 5 on the afternoon of June 24 in the school lecture hall.拓展句：A lecture about environmental protection will be given by Mr. Smith, who is a famous American professor from Zhejiang University, from 3 to 5 on the afternoon of June 24 in the school lecture hall.【点睛】[高分句型1] A lecture about environmental protection will be given by Mr. Smith, a famous American professor from Zhejiang University, from 3 to 5 on the afternoon of June 24 in the school lecture hall. (运用了a famous American professor from Zhejiang University作同位语)[高分句型2] During the lecture, he'll first analyze the factors that cause global warming and the harmful effects that it has on us. (运用了that引导的定语从句)7．Dear Peter,        I’m very glad to learn that you’re coming to study in our school. Being your friend, I’d like to express my warmest welcome and offer some advice.        Considering the weather difference between our two countries, please be sure to bring proper clothes. Besides, to make it easier to communicate with the teachers and native students, you’d better know about some daily expressions and cultures in China in advance.       I sincerely hope that you would enjoy yourself and acquire a great deal of knowledge in our school. I’m looking forward to your arrival.                                                                                                                                                                                                                   yours,                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友 Peter写封信，对他要到你校学习表示欢迎、提出建议（关注气候差异，准备日常汉语等）并表达祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累了解：know→learn建议：suggestion→advice携带：carry→bring玩得高兴：have fun= enjoy oneself2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, to make it easier to communicate with the teachers and native students, you’d better know about some daily expressions and cultures in China in advance.拓展句：Besides, you’d better know about some daily expressions and cultures in China in advance, which will make it easier for you to communicate with the teachers and native students.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m very glad to learn that you’re coming to study in our school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Besides, to make it easier to communicate with the teachers and native students, you’d better know about some daily expressions and cultures in China in advance. (运用了不定式作目的状语)8．Dear David,Hearing that you’re planning to hold an activity called Cultural China, I’m writing to recommend Chinese calligraphy and offer some relevant suggestions.Chinese calligraphy is a traditional art of Chinese characters writing, which has developed into various categories over the centuries. Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, reflecting Chinese people’s wisdom. To hold the activity, it is advisable to provide authentic works, thus enabling students to have a vivid appreciation. Besides, preparations like purchasing writing brushes, ink and paper can be made to let students have a try and post their own works online.I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友 David回信，向他推荐中国书法艺术，并对其准备组织的“人文中国”(Cultural China)的活动提供活动建议。【详解】1.词汇积累提供相关建议：give related advice→offer some relevant suggestions种类：kind→category明智的：wise→advisable对……有帮助：be helpful to …→be of help to ….2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句原句：To hold the activity, it is advisable to provide authentic works, thus enabling students to have a vivid appreciation.拓展句：In order to hold the activity, you’d better provide authentic works so that students can have a more intuitive feeling.【点睛】[高分句型1] Chinese calligraphy is a traditional art of Chinese characters writing, which has developed into various categories over the centuries. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Hearing that you’re planning to hold an activity called Cultural China, I’m writing to recommend Chinese calligraphy and offer some relevant suggestions. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)9．Dear James,I’m sorry to hear that playing with the phone takes up most of your leisure time. I’m eager to help you out of trouble.Spending much time on phones has a great deal of harm. Obviously, your eyesight may fail. Besides, phones will distract your attention and your academic performance will suffer. There’s indeed something you can do to get rid of this problem. Why not try something meaningful in your spare time? You can read some books that are intended for you or join in some volunteer work. It’s also a good idea to work out for physical fitness or hang out with your friends.I do hope my suggestions can help you get back on track.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大网友James写封邮件，指出过度玩手机的危害并给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累空闲时间：spare time→leisure time许多：a lot of→a great deal of加入：take part in→join in建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Spending much time on phones has a great deal of harm. Obviously, your eyesight may fail.拓展句：Spending much time on phones has a great deal of harm, which may cause your eyesight fail.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that playing with the phone takes up most of your leisure time. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Spending much time on phones has a great deal of harm. (运用了动名词作主语)10．Dear Chris,Having known you are interested in the Chinese speech contest “Learning Chinese, Creating Brighter Future” to be held in your city, I’m glad to offer some help.Actually, there’s no need to worry about the result because improving your Chinese matters more. Here are my suggestions. First, you should be well prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely, which might help ease nervousness. Besides, it is advisable to watch Chinese speech videos online so that you can get the hang of Chinese speech skills.Wish you every success in the contest!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Chris写封邮件，鼓励他参加主题为“携手汉语，筑 梦未来”的汉语演讲比赛并给出相关建议和表达祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→contest建议：advice→suggestion高兴的：happy→glad另外：in addition=besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Having known you are interested in the Chinese speech contest “Learning Chinese, Creating Brighter Future” to be held in your city, I’m glad to offer some help.拓展句：Since I have known you are interested in the Chinese speech contest “Learning Chinese, Creating Brighter Future” to be held in your city, I’m glad to offer some help.【点睛】[高分句型1] Having known you are interested in the Chinese speech contest “Learning Chinese, Creating Brighter Future” to be held in your city, I’m glad to offer some help. (运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2] Actually, there’s no need to worry about the result because improving your Chinese matters more. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)